complete verse (Ecclesiastes 11:5)

Following are a number of back-translations as well as a sample translation for translators of Ecclesiastes 11:5:

  • Kupsabiny: “Just like a person does not know the path of the wind or how a child is formed in the stomach of his mother, so he also does not know the works of God who created everything.” (Source: Kupsabiny Back Translation)
  • Newari: “Just as you are not able to know where the wind goes
    nor how a child is created in the womb of a mother,
    in just the same way, the work of God’s hand, the creator of everything
    you are not able to understand either.” (Source: Newari Back Translation)
  • Hiligaynon: “As you (sing.) do- not -know how the life of a child starts in the womb of his/her mother, you (sing.) will also not understand what God is-doing who does all things.” (Source: Hiligaynon Back Translation)

Translation commentary on Ecclesiastes 11:5

After stating an obvious truth that some things can be discovered by human experience, Qoheleth goes on then to illustrate the second theme, that other aspects of nature remain hidden to us. This is even more true with regard to what God does. We note the repetition of the verb do not know.

The basic structure of the verse is a form of parallelism in which the second half builds on the thought of the first half: “Just as you do not know…, so also you do not know….”

As you do not know introduces the great miracle of life, whose origin is hidden from human understanding even though we participate fully in it. As means “Just as” or “In the same way that….” You do not know is a participle form in Hebrew and so describes our state of not knowing.

How the spirit comes to the bones in the womb of a woman with child: this clause is especially difficult because its structure is complex and one of the key terms ruach (rendered in Revised Standard Version as spirit) is ambiguous. The first problem is to discover which of the three meanings of ruach is intended here; it can mean “spirit,” “breath,” or “wind.” Those taking “wind” as the meaning see two illustrations rather than one. Note, for example, New International Version and Jerusalem Bible, which take this approach:
“As you do not know the path of the wind or how the body is formed in a mother’s womb…” (New International Version).
“Just as you do not know the way of the wind or the mysteries of a woman with child…” (Jerusalem Bible).

However, if we take the meaning to be “breath” or “spirit,” there is only one illustration: how a baby in the womb “is quickened” or “made alive.” This is the interpretation of Revised Standard Version, Good News Translation, and New Jerusalem Bible.

To the bones in the womb of a woman with child: bones refers more widely to the entire human body. Here it describes the child forming in its mother’s womb.

Revised Standard Version has resolved one of the difficulties of the structure of the clause by inserting the verb comes: you do not know how the spirit comes to the bones …. New Jerusalem Bible says “you do not know how the lifebreath passes into the limbs within the womb.” Both translations give the impression that something is made alive, and so serve as good models for translation. A general translation like Good News Translation “how new life begins” or Bible en français courant “how life is formed” are good solutions. We can also mention the baby or child, “how a baby comes to life,” or “how life comes to a child….”

In the womb of a woman with child is the obvious meaning of the phrase, which in Hebrew is literally “in the womb of one who is full.” It can be translated more simply as “in a [pregnant] woman’s womb.” The translator must be careful, however, in translating such terms. In many cultures it is not proper to refer directly to the womb. Other expressions can be used if this is the case; for example, “in the stomach of the mother” or “inside its mother.”

Translation may be as follows:

• Just as you are unaware of how life comes to a child in its mother’s womb….

• Just as you do not know how life enters a child in the womb….

So you do not know introduces the main affirmation of the sentence. The introductory so marks the relationship between the two parts of the saying. You do not know is an imperfect verb in Hebrew, with the possible sense that we can never know. We may observe what God does, but we shall never fully comprehend it. Thus not know points to what we cannot properly or fully understand; it does not mean we can know nothing at all.

The work of God is the object of the verb not know and is a phrase met before in 3.11 and 8.17. See comments in both places. The phrase can be expressed verbally rather than as a noun phrase, if that is more natural in the translator’s language.

Who makes everything: on the translation of everything see comments on 10.19. Two possible meanings are “everything” or “both.” The latter would direct attention back to the two elements mentioned in the first half of the verse, namely, “the breath of life” and “the work of God.” Makes can be given as “creates” or “does.” Good News Translation suggests a general theological principle, “God made everything.” Actually the relative clause describes God, so it can be expressed as “who is the creator of all.” The placement of this clause in translation will depend on the stylistic preferences of the language. Most languages will probably prefer placing it, as in Hebrew, at the end of the verse. But in some languages it may be more effective to place it before the main verb of the clause: “So you do not understand the work that God does. He is the one who creates everything.” In other languages a resumptive pronoun puts special emphasis on God’s creative powers. This is what Bible en français courant does: “… even less can you understand how God works, he who makes everything.”

A suggested translation is:

• … so [also] you cannot fully understand the work of God, who creates both [or, who is the creator of everything].

The strength of this statement may be made more forceful in some languages by expressing the sentence as a rhetorical question:

• … so how can you understand what God, the creator of all, does?

In Hebrew the two parts of the verse are introduced by comparative conjunctions: “[even] as … so….” The translator should find the most natural way of making the point. In English, for example, we can use “Just as…, so…”; or we can begin with an independent clause containing “even,” as follows:

• You do not even know how life comes to a child in its mother’s womb! So, you cannot possibly understand what God does—he who creates everything!

Using a rhetorical question, we can say:

• You do not know how life comes to a child in its mother’s womb. So, how can you understand what God—who is the creator of everything—does?

Quoted with permission from Ogden, Graham S. and Zogbo, Lynell. A Handbook on the Book of Ecclesiates. (UBS Helps for Translators). New York: UBS, 1997. For this and other handbooks for translators see here .

SIL Translator’s Notes on Ecclesiastes 11:5

11:5a As you do not know the path of the wind, or how the bones are formed in a mother’s womb,

(Revised Standard Version) : As you do not know how the spirit comes to the bones in the womb of a woman with child,

You do not ⌊even⌋ know how ⌊God⌋ puts the life-breath into the baby inside the womb of a pregnant woman.
-or-
You don’t know how the breath of life comes to the child in its mother’s womb.
-or-
No one can explain how life comes to a child in its mother’s womb.

11:5b so you cannot understand the work of God, the Maker of all things.

In the same way, you don’t know what God will do—and he makes everything happen. (English Easy-to-Read Version)
-or-

⌊In the same way⌋ you can’t understand the work of God, the Creator of everything.
-or-
So nobody can explain the things that God does. He is the one who has made everything. (EEB)

11:5a-b (reordered)

God made everything, but you can not understand what he does. ⌊And you can’t⌋ understand either how new life begins in the womb of a pregnant woman.
-or-
God made all things. But you will never understand all that he does. ⌊For example,⌋ you do not know the way ⌊God puts⌋ the life-breath in a baby inside the womb of a pregnant woman.
-or-
You do not even know how life comes to a child in its mother’s womb! So, you cannot possibly understand what God does—he who creates everything!

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Commentaire sur la traduction de l'Ecclésiaste 11.5

Il y a une petite rupture dans le fil d’idées ici et Qohéleth change aussi de style. Au lieu de parler à la troisième personne ( Ecc 11.3), il revient à la deuxième personne du singulier, en s’adressant directement à son auditoire comme en Ecc 11.1. (Voir aussi Ecc 11.6).

Qohéleth présente d’abord deux comparaisons très poétiques, suivies d’une accusation très forte. Dans chacune des propositions le verbe connaître au négatif est attesté ou sous-entendu, litt. :
comme tu NEG connaissant quel chemin du vent
comme …les os dans le ventre pleine
ainsi tu ne connais pas l’œuvre de Dieu qui fait (le) tout

La première proposition est introduite par une conjonction complexe כַּאֲשֶׁר ka-ʾašèr, litt. « de même tu ne connaissant pas quel [est] chemin du vent ». Le sens ici dépend de la lecture du mot רוּחַ roûaḥ, qui en Ecc 11.4 renvoie littéralement au « vent », mais qui pourra aussi avoir le sens de « souffle de vie », un écho clair de la création.

La deuxième comparaison est beaucoup plus spécifique, commençant par la conjonction simple כְּ ke, litt. « comme les os dans le ventre pleine ». Il s’agit comme dit la Traduction œcuménique de la Bible de l’ossification [d’un bébé] dans le ventre d’une femme enceinte.On pourra dire « comment les os sont formés » ou si nécessaire ne parler que de l’enfant : « comment un bébé/un enfant est formé… » L’hébreu parle de « la matrice pleine », ce qui désigne une grossesse, et par extension la femme enceinte. Notons que dans beaucoup de langues, la mention de cette partie du corps serait choquante ou considérée grossière. Les traducteurs devraient chercher à exprimer ces idées d’une manière acceptable et, si possible, poétique dans leur langue.

Avant de continuer la traduction de ce verset, les traducteurs devraient décider s’il s’agit de deux actions différentes ou d’une seule. La La Bible du Semeur par exemple y voit deux actes distincts : « Tu ignores quel est le chemin du vent, et tu ne sais pas comment se forment les os de l’embryon… » D’autres voient une référence au souffle de vie, par exemple, la Nouvelle Bible Segond qui dit « De même que tu ne sais pas comment le souffle ou les os se forment dans le ventre de la femme enceinte… » Tandis que la Bible en français courant y voit un acte, La Nouvelle Français courant y voit deux. Les traducteurs seront obligés de faire un choix d’interprétation ici.

ainsi tu ne peux connaître l’œuvre de Dieu, Lui qui fait toutes choses : la conjonction כָּכָה kâkâh, ainsi, introduit la conclusion de la comparaison. Ce mot joue un rôle important dans le discours et devrait être maintenu. Plusieurs versions disent « de même » (Nouvelle Bible Segond, La Bible du Semeur, Parole de Vie).

tu ne peux connaître reprend l’expression tu ignores « pas à toi connaissant » du Ecc 11.2. Les mots œuvre et fait viennent de la même racine et évoquent la création. Voir Gen 2.4. Pour œuvre de Dieu, voir Ecc 3.11 et Ecc 8.17. Certaines versions proposent « comment Dieu agit » (Bible en français courant, Parole de Vie).

Lui qui fait toutes choses est litt. « qui fait le tout ». Il est clair que « le tout » renvoie à toute la création, y compris le monde et tout ce qui y vit. Plus spécifiquement dans ce contexte, il peut renvoyer à la formation des êtres humains.

Source: Zogbo, Lynell. L’Ecclésiaste – Manuel de traduction – Commentaire linguistique et exégétique de la Bible. Alliance biblique universelle, 2021.