addressing God

Translators of different languages have found different ways with what kind of formality God is addressed.

Like many languages (but unlike Greek or Hebrew or modern English), Tuvan uses a formal vs. informal 2nd person pronoun (a familiar vs. a respectful “you”). Unlike other languages that have this feature, however, the translators of the Tuvan Bible have attempted to be very consistent in using the different forms of address in every case a 2nd person pronoun has to be used in the translation of the biblical text.

As Voinov shows in Pronominal Theology in Translating the Gospels (in: The Bible Translator 2002, p. 210ff. ), the choice to use either of the pronouns many times involved theological judgment. While the formal pronoun can signal personal distance or a social/power distance between the speaker and addressee, the informal pronoun can indicate familiarity or social/power equality between speaker and addressee.

In these verses, in which humans address God, the informal, familiar pronoun is used that communicates closeness.

Voinov notes that “in the Tuvan Bible, God is only addressed with the informal pronoun. No exceptions. An interesting thing about this is that I’ve heard new Tuvan believers praying with the formal form to God until they are corrected by other Christians who tell them that God is close to us so we should address him with the informal pronoun. As a result, the informal pronoun is the only one that is used in praying to God among the Tuvan church.”

In Gbaya, “a superior, whether father, uncle, or older brother, mother, aunt, or older sister, president, governor, or chief, is never addressed in the singular unless the speaker intends a deliberate insult. When addressing the superior face to face, the second person plural pronoun ɛ́nɛ́ or ‘you (pl.)’ is used, similar to the French usage of vous.

Accordingly, the translators of the current version of the Gbaya Bible chose to use the plural ɛ́nɛ́ to address God. There are a few exceptions. In Psalms 86:8, 97:9, and 138:1, God is addressed alongside other “gods,” and here the third person pronoun o is used to avoid confusion about who is being addressed. In several New Testament passages (Matthew 21:23, 26:68, 27:40, Mark 11:28, Luke 20:2, 23:37, as well as in Jesus’ interaction with Pilate and Jesus’ interaction with the Samaritan woman at the well) the less courteous form for Jesus is used to indicate ignorance of his position or mocking.” (Source Philip Noss)

In the most recent Manchu translation of 1835 (a revision of an earlier edition from 1822), God is never addressed with a pronoun but with “father” (ama /ᠠᠮᠠ) instead. Chengcheng Liu (in this post on the Cambridge Centre for Chinese Theology blog ) explains: “In Manchu tradition, as in Chinese etiquette, second-person pronouns could be considered disrespectful when speaking to superiors or spiritual beings. Manchu Shamanist prayers avoided si [‘you’] and sini [‘your’] for this very reason. To use them for God would be, in Lipovzoff’s [one of the two translators] words, ‘the most uncouth and indecent way to speak to the Almighty — as if He were a servant or slave.’ There was also a grammatical problem. In Manchu, si and sini could refer to both singular and plural subjects. For a faith that insisted on the singularity of God, this was potentially confusing. By contrast, repeating ama removed any ambiguity.”

In Dutch, Afrikaans, Gronings, and Western Frisian translations, God is always addressed with the formal pronoun.

See also formal pronoun: disciples addressing Jesus, female second person singular pronoun in Psalms.

righteous, righteousness

The Greek, Hebrew, Ge’ez, and Latin terms that are translated in English mostly as “righteous” or “righteousness” (see below for a discussion of the English translation) are most commonly expressed with concept of “straightness,” though this may be expressed in a number of ways. (Click or tap here to see the details)

Following is a list of (back-) translations of various languages:

  • Bambara, Southern Bobo Madaré, Chokwe (ululi), Amganad Ifugao, Chol, Eastern Maninkakan, Toraja-Sa’dan, Pamona, Batak Toba, Bilua, Tiv: “be straight”
  • Laka: “follow the straight way” or “to straight-straight” (a reduplicated form for emphasis)
  • Sayula Popoluca: “walk straight”
  • Highland Puebla Nahuatl, Kekchí, Muna: “have a straight heart”
  • Kipsigis: “do the truth”
  • Mezquital Otomi: “do according to the truth”
  • Huautla Mazatec: “have truth”
  • Yine: “fulfill what one should do”
  • Indonesian: “be true”
  • Navajo (Dinė): “do just so”
  • Anuak: “do as it should be”
  • Mossi: “have a white stomach” (see also happiness / joy)
  • Paasaal: “white heart” (source: Fabian N. Dapila in The Bible Translator 2024, p. 415ff.)
  • San Mateo del Mar Huave: “completely good” (the translation does not imply sinless perfection)
  • Nuer: “way of right” (“there is a complex concept of “right” vs. ‘left’ in Nuer where ‘right’ indicates that which is masculine, strong, good, and moral, and ‘left’ denotes what is feminine, weak, and sinful (a strictly masculine viewpoint!) The ‘way of right’ is therefore righteousness, but of course women may also attain this way, for the opposition is more classificatory than descriptive.”) (This and all above from Bratcher / Nida except for Bilua: Carl Gross; Tiv: Rob Koops; Muna: René van den Berg)
  • Central Subanen: “wise-good” (source: Robert Brichoux in OPTAT 1988/2, p. 80ff. )
  • Xicotepec De Juárez Totonac: “live well”
  • Mezquital Otomi: “goodness before the face of God” (source for this and one above: Viola Waterhouse in Notes on Translation August 1966, p. 86ff.)
  • Eastern Huasteca Nahuatl: “the result of heart-straightening” (source: Nida 1947, p. 224)
  • Eastern Highland Otomi: “entirely good” (when referred to God), “do good” or “not be a debtor as God sees one” (when referred to people)
  • Carib: “level”
  • Tzotzil: “straight-hearted”
  • Ojitlán Chinantec: “right and straight”
  • Yatzachi Zapotec: “walk straight” (source for this and four previous: John Beekman in Notes on Translation November 1964, p. 1-22)
  • Makonde: “doing what God wants” (in a context of us doing) and “be good in God’s eyes” (in the context of being made righteous by God) (note that justify / justification is translated as “to be made good in the eyes of God.” (source: Pioneer Bible Translators, project-specific notes in Paratext)
  • Aari: The Pauline word for “righteous” is generally rendered by “makes one without sin” in the Aari, sometimes “before God” is added for clarity. (Source: Loren Bliese)
  • North Alaskan Inupiatun: “having sin taken away” (Source: Nida 1952, p. 144)
  • Nyamwezi: wa lole: “just” or “someone who follows the law of God” (source: Pioneer Bible Translators, project-specific translation notes in Paratext)
  • Venda: “nothing wrong, OK” (Source: J.A. van Roy in The Bible Translator 1972, p. 418ff. )
  • Ekari: maakodo bokouto or “enormous truth” (the same word that is also used for “truth“; bokouto — “enormous” — is being used as an attribute for abstract nouns to denote that they are of God [see also here]; source: Marion Doble in The Bible Translator 1963, p. 37ff. ).
  • Guhu-Samane: pobi or “right” (also: “right (side),” “(legal) right,” “straightness,” “correction,” “south,” “possession,” “pertinence,” “kingdom,” “fame,” “information,” or “speech” — “According to [Guhu-Samane] thinking there is a common core of meaning among all these glosses. Even from an English point of view the first five can be seen to be closely related, simply because of their similarity in English. However, from that point the nuances of meaning are not so apparent. They relate in some such a fashion as this: As one faces the morning sun, south lies to the right hand (as north lies to the left); then at one’s right hand are his possessions and whatever pertains to him; thus, a rich man’s many possessions and scope of power and influence is his kingdom; so, the rich and other important people encounter fame; and all of this spreads as information and forms most of the framework of the people’s speech.”) (Source: Ernest Richert in Notes on Translation 1964, p. 11ff.)
  • Haroti (Hadauti): “blameless in God’s eyes” (source: Vikram Mukka in Christianity Today )
  • German New Testament translation by Berger / Nord (publ. 1999): Gerechtheit, a neologism to differentiate it from the commonly-used Gerechtigkeit which can mean “justice” but is more often used in modern German as “fairness” (Berger / Nord especially use Gerechtheit in Letter to the Romans) or Gerechtestun, also a neologism, meaning “righteous deeds” (especially in Letter to the Ephesians)
  • “did what he should” (Eastern Highland Otomi)
  • “a clear man, good [man]” (Mairasi) (source: Enggavoter 2004)
  • Cherokee: “with heart” (source: Bender / Belt 2025, p. 29)

The English translation of righteousness, especially in the New Testament is questioned by Nicholas Wolterstorff (2008, p. 110ff.) (Click or tap here to see the details)

Those who approach the New Testament solely through English translations face a serious linguistic obstacle to apprehending what these writings say about justice. In most English translations, the word “justice” occurs relatively infrequently. It is no surprise, then, that most English-speaking people think the New Testament does not say much about justice; the Bibles they read do not say much about justice. English translations are in this way different from translations into Latin, French, Spanish, German, Dutch — and for all I know, most languages.

The basic issue is well known among translators and commentators. Plato’s Republic, as we all know, is about justice. The Greek noun in Plato’s text that is standardly translated as “justice” is dikaiosunē (δικαιοσύνη); the adjective standardly translated as “just” is dikaios (δίκαιος). This same dik-stem occurs around three hundred times in the New Testament, in a wide variety of grammatical variants.

To the person who comes to English translations of the New Testament fresh from reading and translating classical Greek, it comes as a surprise to discover that though some of those occurrences are translated with grammatical variants on our word “just,” the great bulk of dik-stem words are translated with grammatical variants on our word “right.” The noun, for example, is usually translated as “righteousness,” not as “justice.” In English we have the word “just” and its grammatical variants coming horn the Latin iustitia, and the word “right” and its grammatical variants coining from the Old English recht. Almost all our translators have decided to translate the great bulk of dik-stem words in the New Testament with grammatical variants on the latter — just the opposite of the decision made by most translators of classical Greek.

I will give just two examples of the point. The fourth of the beatitudes of Jesus, as recorded in the fifth chapter of Matthew, reads, in the New Revised Standard Version, “Blessed are those who hunger and thirst for righteousness, for they will be filled.” The word translated as “righteousness” is dikaiosunē. And the eighth beatitude, in the same translation, reads “Blessed are those who are persecuted for righteousness’ sake, for theirs is the kingdom of heaven.” The Greek word translated as “righteousness” is dikaiosunē. Apparently, the translators were not struck by the oddity of someone being persecuted because he is righteous. My own reading of human affairs is that righteous people are either admired or ignored, not persecuted; people who pursue justice are the ones who get in trouble.

It goes almost without saying that the meaning and connotations of “righteousness” are very different in present-day idiomatic English from those of “justice.” “Righteousness” names primarily if not exclusively a certain trait of personal character. (…) The word in present-day idiomatic English carries a negative connotation. In everyday speech one seldom any more describes someone as righteous; if one does, the suggestion is that he is self-righteous. “Justice,” by contrast, refers to an interpersonal situation; justice is present when persons are related to each other in a certain way. There is, indeed, a long tradition of philosophical and theological discussion on the virtue of justice. But that use of the term has almost dropped out of idiomatic English; we do not often speak any more of a person as just. And in any case, the concept of the virtue of justice presupposes the concept of those social relationships that are just.

So when the New Testament writers speak of dikaiosunē, are they speaking of righteousness or of justice? Is Jesus blessing those who hunger and thirst for righteousness or those who hunger and thirst for justice?

A thought that comes to mind is that the word changed meaning between Plato and the New Testament. Had Jesus’ words been uttered in Plato’s time and place, they would have been understood as blessing those who hunger and thirst for the social condition of justice. In Jesus’ time and place, they would have been understood as blessing (hose who hunger and thirst for righteousness — that is, for personal moral rectitude.

Between the Hebrew Bible and the Greek New Testament there came the Septuagint translation of the Hebrew Bible into Greek. (…) One of the challenges facing the Septuagint translators was how to catch, in the Greek of their day, the combination of mishpat (מִשְׁפָּט) with tsedeq (צֶ֫דֶק). Tsedeq that we find so often in the Old Testament, standardly translated into English as justice and righteousness. The solution they settled on was to translate tsedeq as dikaiosunē, and to use a term whose home use was in legal situations, namely, krisis (κρίσις), to translate mishpat. Mishpat and tsedeq became krisis and dikaiosunē. For the most part, this is also how they translated the Hebrew words even when they were not explicitly paired with each other: mishpat (justice) becomes krisis, tsedeq (righteousness) becomes dikaiosunē. The pattern is not entirely consistent, however; every now and then, when mishpat is not paired off with tsedeq, it is translated with dikaiosunē or some other dik-stem word (e.g., 1 Kings 3:28, Proverbs 17:23, Isaiah 61:8).

I think the conclusion that those of us who are not specialists in Hellenistic Greek should draw from this somewhat bewildering array of data is that, in the linguistic circles of the New Testament writers, dikaiosunē did not refer definitively either to the character trait of righteousness (shorn of its negative connotations) or to the social condition of justice, but was ambiguous as between those two. If dikaiosunē had referred decisively in Hellenistic Greek to righteousness rather than to justice, why would the Septuagint translators sometimes use it to translate mishpat, why would Catholic translators [into the 1980s] usually translate it as “justice,” and why would all English translators sometimes translate it as “justice”? (All earlier Latin-based Catholic translations, the New American Bible and the Jerusalem Bible, both of which appeared in the early 1970s have most occurrences of dik-stem words translated with variants on “just.” In subsequent revisions of the New American Bible, and in the New Jerusalem Bible, these translations have been altered to translations along the lines of righteousness. Other translations that use a form of justice or “doing right / rightness” include the British New English Bible [1970] and Revised English Bible [1989] and some newer translations such as by Hart [2017], Ruden [2021] or McKnight [2023]).

Conversely, if it referred decisively to justice, why would the Septuagint translators usually not use it to translate mishpat, and why would almost all translators sometimes translate it as “righteousness”? Context will have to determine whether, in a given case, it is best translated as “justice” or as “righteousness” — or as something else instead; and if context does not determine, then it would be best, if possible, to preserve the ambiguity and use some such ambiguous expression as “what is right” or “the right thing.”

Let me make one final observation about translation. When one takes in hand a list of all the occurrences of dik-stem words in the Greek New Testament, and then opens up almost any English translation of the New Testament and reads in one sitting all the translations of these words, a certain pattern emerges: unless the notion of legal judgment is so prominent in the context as virtually to force a translation in terms of justice, the translators will prefer to speak of righteousness.

See also respectable, righteous, righteous (person), devout, and She is more in the right(eous) than I.

complete verse (Habakkuk 1:13)

Following are a number of back-translations as well as a sample translation for translators of Habakkuk 1:13:

  • Kupsabiny: “You are very righteous who sees every sin and are not happy with evil even a little. Oh yes, what is wrong with you when you see these sinners destroying good people and you keep quiet?” (Source: Kupsabiny Back Translation)
  • Newari: “Your eyes are most pure to see evil,
    And you cannot look on wrongdoing.
    But now why are you looking on treacherous people?
    Why do you remain silent though the wicked
    swallow up people more righteous than they are?” (Source: Newari Back Translation)
  • Hiligaynon: “Because you (are) righteous, you (sing.) can- not -bear to-look at evil and trouble. But why do- you (sing.) just -don’t-mind/allow-to-do-whatever the traitors who (are) from-Babylon? Why do- you(do) -let them destroy the people who (are) not more wicked when compared to them?” (Source: Hiligaynon Back Translation)
  • Kankanaey: “You (sing.) are holy and you (sing.) are not able-to-tolerate constantly-seeing those who-are-doing evil. But if that is so, why perhaps are you (sing.) ignoring/letting-alone these betrayers who hardship people that are more righteous than they?’” (Source: Kankanaey Back Translation)
  • English: “But the Commander of the armies of angels has declared that everything that is built by people who do things like that will be destroyed by fire;
    they will have worked hard uselessly.” (Source: Translation for Translators)

Honorary "rare" construct denoting God ("keeping silence")

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Like a number of other East Asian languages, Japanese uses a complex system of honorifics, i.e. a system where a number of different levels of politeness are expressed in language via words, word forms or grammatical constructs. These can range from addressing someone or referring to someone with contempt (very informal) to expressing the highest level of reference (as used in addressing or referring to God) or any number of levels in-between.

One way Japanese shows different degree of politeness is through the usage of an honorific construction where the morpheme rare (られ) is affixed on the verb as shown here in the widely-used Japanese Shinkaiyaku (新改訳) Bible of 2017. This is particularly done with verbs that have God as the agent to show a deep sense of reverence. Here, damatteo-rare-ru (黙っておられる) or “keeping silence” is used.

(Source: S. E. Doi, see also S. E. Doi in Journal of Translation, 18/2022, p. 37ff. )

Translation commentary on Habakkuk 1:13

In Hebrew the verse as a whole is a statement followed by two questions. Revised Standard Version follows this order, but Good News Translation changes it so as to put the statement between the two questions. This avoids long relative clauses which would be awkward in many languages.

The first half of the verse makes a statement in two parallel clauses, Thou … art of purer eyes than to behold evil and canst not look on wrong. Thou … art of purer eyes is a figure of speech called a metonym, in which the eyes stand for the whole person in the act of looking. Habakkuk says that the LORD’s character is so pure that he cannot bear to behold evil. The prophet then repeats essentially the same idea in nonfigurative language in the second line, and canst not look on wrong. Good News Translation retains the parallelism but expands the second part to make the implied subject clear: “Your eyes are too holy to look at evil, and you cannot stand the sight of people doing wrong.” Although the Hebrew word for purer is not the same root as the word for “holy” in the previous verse, this is a development of the same idea and forms the background to the questions which follow. Note that these questions are not really rhetorical questions, since Habakkuk is looking for an answer to them in 2.1-4. Therefore they should be translated as questions and not turned into statements. Compare comments on verse 2. In some languages it may not be possible to talk about eyes being “pure” or “sinless.” In such cases translators may render this clause as “you are pure (or, sinless), and so you cannot look at evil….”

In why dost thou look on faithless men, the verb look, as in verse 3, implies “look on, without taking action.” Good News Translation makes this a little clearer by saying “How can you stand these treacherous, evil men?” One may expand this line by saying “How can you watch what these treacherous and evil men do without punishing them?” The word “treacherous” means “untrustworthy” or “that cannot be trusted.” In certain languages this meaning can be expressed idiomatically; for example, “men one cannot place one’s heart in.”

The last two lines make the same point in an expanded form and ask why God is silent when the wicked swallows up the man more righteous than he. Here the wicked refers of course to the Babylonians. In many languages it will be necessary to identify the wicked and say “So why are you silent while these wicked Babylonians destroy…?” The word swallows up is a metaphor which Good News Translation translates in nonfigurative language as “destroy.” In languages where the meaning of the metaphor will be clear, translators should keep it. The word righteous refers to nations other than the Babylonians, but especially to Judah. Habakkuk has already admitted that his own people have done wrong and need to be punished. When he calls them righteous here, he means “less wicked than their enemies,” not righteous in an absolute sense. In many languages the word used for “righteous” always has this absolute sense. In such cases it will be more appropriate to translate “… while the Babylonians destroy people who are less wicked than they are?” or “… destroy people who do less evil than they do?”

Quoted with permission from Clark, David J. & Hatton, Howard A. A Handbook on the Book of Habakkuk. (UBS Helps for Translators). New York: UBS, 1989. For this and other handbooks for translators see here .

SIL Translator’s Notes on Habakkuk 1:13

1:13a Your eyes are too pure to look upon evil,

You (sing.) are pure/holy, and you cannot ⌊endure⌋ looking at what is evil.
-or-
There is no sin in you, and you cannot accept ⌊anything that is⌋ evil.

1:13b and You cannot tolerate wrongdoing.

You (sing.) cannot look at sins and do nothing about it.
-or-
When ⌊people⌋ act wickedly, you always punish them.
-or-
You cannot ignore the evil things ⌊that people do, but you always judge and punish people for their sins⌋ .

1:13c So why do You tolerate the faithless?

Why then do you (sing.) look at people who betray others and do nothing about it?
-or-
Why do you leave people who cannot be trusted ⌊without punishment⌋ ?
-or-
You should punish people when you see them betraying/deceiving others!

1:13d Why are You silent while the wicked swallow up those more righteous than themselves?

The question here expresses a complaint of the prophet.

Why do you (sing.) do nothing when these wicked ⌊Chaldeans/Babylonians⌋ destroy/kill those who are better than they?
-or-
Why do you not react when these evil ⌊Chaldeans/Babylonians⌋ oppress/conquer ⌊other nations⌋ who are less wicked/evil than they are?
-or-
You should respond when ⌊we (excl.) cry to you⌋ about ⌊the Chaldeans/Babylonians⌋ ! They do evil things against the people who obey you more than they do.

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Commentaire sur la traduction de Habaquq 1.13

Ce verset rappelle les propos au début du livre, par exemple, Habaquq 1.3). Le début du verset comporte deux affirmations : l’une positive et l’autre négative. Celles-ci sont suivies de deux questions rhétoriques qui, une fois de plus, expriment le désarroi du prophète. Malgré ce style si typique en hébreu, le traducteur peut, s’il le juge nécessaire, intervertir certaines propositions. Par exemple, il sera possible de poser tout d’abord la première question, puis de la faire suivre des deux affirmations pour enfin poser la dernière question.

Tu as les yeux trop purs pour voir le mal est littéralement « pur des yeux pour voir le mal ». Il n’y a pas de pronom personnel dans cette première ligne en hébreu, mais se basant sur la ligne qui suit (tu ne peux pas accepter … l’oppression), la quasi-totalité des versions françaises y introduisent tu ou « tes », se référant à Dieu : « Tes yeux sont (bien) trop purs… » (Bible de Jérusalem, La Bible du Semeur). Il s’agit ici d’une métonymie, un procédé stylistique où une partie d’une chose évoque le tout du même élément. Ainsi les yeux de Dieu désigne Dieu lui-même. Le traducteur devra donc décider s’il veut garder l’anthropomorphisme, en parlant des « yeux de Dieu », ou s’il dit tout simplement « Dieu ».

purs (hébreu : טָהוֹר ṭâhôr) n’est pas le même mot que celui rendu par saint en Habaquq 1.12 (hébreu :קָדוֹשׁ qâdôš). Ce terme peut s’appliquer à des personnes, à des animaux ou à des instruments qui sont rituellement purs. C’est le mot qui décrit aussi « l’or pur ». Dans ce contexte, c’est Dieu qui est pur : il n’y a aucun mal en lui. L’adverbe d’intensité trop ne se trouve pas en hébreu et ne devrait pas figurer dans la traduction.

pour voir le mal : avec la référence aux yeux, le verbe voir semble avoir son sens général. Mais en fait, Dieu peut voir tout ce qui existe dans le monde, y compris le mal. Le sens est en fait qu’il ne peut pas « tolérer » ou « admettre » le mal, car il est pur.

mal : le terme hébreu רַע raʿ se rapporte au péché ou à des torts. La Nouvelle Bible Segond propose « Tes yeux sont trop purs pour voir ce qui est mauvais ».

tu ne peux accepter le spectacle de l’oppression : le prophète reprend la même idée qu’à la ligne précédente, mais sous une forme négative. Cette alternance positif-négatif est très courante dans la poésie hébraïque. Ici la deuxième ligne présente une déclaration plus directe que la première, littéralement, « et regarder vers le méfait, tu ne peux pas ». La conjonction וְ we introduit cette précision et peut être rendue dans la traduction.

tu ne peux : le verbe hébreu est à la 2e personne du singulier (« tu ne peux pas »), et il introduit le verbe « regarder », qui est à l’infinitif. peux rend le verbe « être capable de », dans le sens de « supporter ». Ici, Dieu est en fait capable de « regarder », mais il n’admet pas l’oppression.

accepter le spectacle… : en hébreu, c’est le même verbe « regarder » qu’en Habaquq 1.3, « regardes-tu » (Nouvelle Bible Segond). Ce verbe n’a pas de connotation négative proprement dite, puisqu’il est utilisé dans le récit de la Genèse lorsque Dieu dit à Abram : « Contemple le ciel ». Dans le présent contexte, on sent quand même cette connotation : « comment acceptes-tu de voir… »

Le mot l’oppression, en hébreu עָמָל ʿâmâl, se trouve également en Habaquq 1.3. Il peut se rapporter au labeur ou au travail physique (Eccl 2.11), mais aussi à toutes sortes de peines (Ps 73.16) ou d’oppressions (voir És 10.1). C’est ce dernier sens qui semble en vue ici.

La Parole de Vie offre un bon modèle pour cette première partie du verset :
Tu as les yeux trop purs
pour regarder le mal,
tu ne peux pas accepter
de voir le malheur.

pourquoi donc acceptes-tu le spectacle des traîtres… ? : cette question renforce ce qui est dit dans les lignes précédentes, en utilisant un vocabulaire semblable. Pour pourquoi, voir Habaquq 1.3. Une formulation possible serait « Comment peux-tu regarder le mal commis par des gens trompeurs (sans les punir) ? »

acceptes-tu le spectacle des traîtres est littéralement : « regardes-tu les trahissant ». Le verbe hébreu acceptes-tu le spectacle est le même que dans la ligne précédente. Il est bon de garder cette répétition, si c’est possible. Le mot spectacle fait partie d’une expression idiomatique en français, mais il n’a pas d’équivalent direct en hébreu et ne doit pas figurer dans la traduction.

traîtres : le verbe trahir se réfère à tous ceux qui sont coupables d’infidélité, que ce soit entre époux, entre amis, ou à l’égard de Dieu. Tout comme le mot rendu par oppression, ce verbe se trouve aussi en Ps 73.16. Le texte ne donne pas de détails concernant ces traîtres. La Parole de Vie propose « ceux qui trompent les autres ». Il s’agit de gens qui ne sont pas dignes de confiance, c’est-à-dire, « des trompeurs ».

gardes-tu le silence : cette proposition comporte une ellipse. Dans la majorité des langues, il faudra répéter le mot interrogatif : « Pourquoi gardes-tu le silence… ? » En hébreu, garder le silence est un seul verbe, que l’on pourrait rendre par « Pourquoi ne dis-tu rien… ? », ou « pourquoi ne protestes-tu pas quand… ? »

quand un méchant engloutit plus juste que lui ? : la paire de mots méchant–juste est très fréquente dans l’AT. Souvent ces deux mots ne se réfèrent pas aux actes bons ou mauvais, mais à l’attitude de chaque personne par rapport à Dieu. Les méchants sont ceux qui se détournent de Dieu, tandis que les justes sont ceux qui lui obéissent. Ainsi le méchant (רָשָׁע râšâʿ) contraste avec le juste (צַדִּיק çaddîq). Les traducteurs devraient utiliser les mêmes termes que ceux employés ailleurs dans l’AT.

Ici méchant s’applique aux Babyloniens. On pourra dire « les gens méchants ».

engloutit : le verbe hébreu signifie « avaler », comme lorsque quelqu’un avale un fruit (És 28.4). Mais il est utilisé ici au sens figuré, lorsqu’un homme « avale », c’est-à-dire « détruit » un autre (Bible en français courant, Parole de Vie). Dans de nombreuses langues, cette métaphore est bien connue ou sera facilement comprise. Dans plusieurs langues africaines ce serait « l’homme méchant mange l’homme juste », avec le même sens.

juste traduit le même mot qu’en Habaquq 1.4. Lorsqu’une personne est juste, cela ne veut pas dire qu’elle n’a jamais rien fait de mal, mais qu’elle met sa confiance en Dieu. Habaquq pense certainement à son peuple, même s’il sait que ce peuple a mal agi et mérite d’être puni.

Habaquq exprime cette injustice générale : dans le monde, le méchant l’emporte sur le juste. Mais il pense à une situation précise. Il serait donc possible de dire « Pourquoi ne dis-tu rien quand ces méchants Babyloniens engloutissent … ? »

La Parole de Vie offre un bon modèle pour cette seconde partie du verset :
Pourtant, tu regardes sans rien dire
ceux qui trompent les autres.
Quand les gens mauvais détruisent
ceux qui sont plus justes qu’eux,
tu ne dis rien.

Source: Ellington, John; Margot, Jean-Claude & Zogbo, Lynell. Habaquq – Manuel de traduction – Commentaire linguistique et exégétique de la Bible. Alliance biblique universelle, 2013.