The Hebrew, Greek, and Ge’ez that is translated as “uncircumcised” in English is translated in Klao as “ungodly.” (Source: Don Slager)
See also stiff-necked / uncircumcised and uncircumcised.
וְעָרֵ֣ל ׀ זָכָ֗ר אֲשֶׁ֤ר לֹֽא־יִמּוֹל֙ אֶת־בְּשַׂ֣ר עָרְלָת֔וֹ וְנִכְרְתָ֛ה הַנֶּ֥פֶשׁ הַהִ֖וא מֵעַמֶּ֑יהָ אֶת־בְּרִיתִ֖י הֵפַֽר׃ ס
14Any uncircumcised male who is not circumcised in the flesh of his foreskin shall be cut off from his people; he has broken my covenant.”
The Hebrew, Greek, and Ge’ez that is translated as “uncircumcised” in English is translated in Klao as “ungodly.” (Source: Don Slager)
See also stiff-necked / uncircumcised and uncircumcised.
The Hebrew, Greek, Ge’ez, and Latin that are translated as “covenant” in English are translated in a variety of ways. Here are some (back-) translations:
“Right from the start we witness the influence of the Septuagint on the earliest expressions of the Christian faith. In the New Testament, Jesus speaks of his blood being a kaine diatheke, a ‘new covenant.’ The covenant is elucidated in Hebrews 8:8-12 and other texts, but it was preserved in the words of Jesus with this language in Luke 22:20 when at the Last Supper Jesus said, ‘This cup that is poured out for you is the new covenant in my blood.’ Jesus’s blood was to provide the grounds for the ‘new covenant,’ in contrast to the old one his disciples knew from the Jewish scriptures (e.g., Jeremiah 31:31-34). Thus, the earliest Christians accepted the Jewish Scriptures as prophecies about Jesus and in time began to call the collection the ‘Old Testament’ and the writings about Jesus and early Christianity the ‘New Testament,’ since ‘testament’ was another word for ‘covenant.’ The covenant promises of God (berith in Hebrew) were translated in the Septuagint with the word diatheke. In classical Greek diatheke had meant ‘last will, testament,’ but in the Septuagint it is the chosen equivalent for God’s covenant with his people. The author of Hebrews plays on the double meaning, and when Luke records Jesus’ announcement at the Last Supper that his blood was instituting a ‘new covenant,’ or a ‘new testament,’ he is using the language in an explicit contrast with the old covenant, found in the Jewish scriptures. Soon, the writings that would eventually be chosen to make up the texts about the life and teachings of Jesus and the earliest expression of the Christian faith would be called the New Testament. This very distinction between the Old and New Testaments is based on the Septuagint’s language.”
See also establish (covenant) and covenant (book).
Learn more on Bible Odyssey: Covenant in the Hebrew Bible .
The Hebrew and Greek terms that are translated as “circumcise” or “circumcision” in English (originally meaning of English term: “to cut around”) are (back-) translated in various ways:
Learn more on Bible Odyssey: Circumcision .
Following are a number of back-translations as well as a sample translation for translators of Genesis 17:14:
Like a number of other East Asian languages, Japanese uses a complex system of honorifics, i.e. a system where a number of different levels of politeness are expressed in language via words, word forms or grammatical constructs. These can range from addressing someone or referring to someone with contempt (very informal) to expressing the highest level of reference (as used in addressing or referring to God) or any number of levels in-between.
One way Japanese shows different degree of politeness is through the choice of a first person singular and plural pronoun (“I” and “we” and its various forms) as shown here in the widely-used Japanese Shinkaiyaku (新改訳) Bible of 2017. The most commonly used watashi/watakushi (私) is typically used when the speaker is humble and asking for help. In these verses, where God / Jesus is referring to himself, watashi is also used but instead of the kanji writing system (私) the syllabary hiragana (わたし) is used to distinguish God from others.
(Source: S. E. Doi, see also S. E. Doi in Journal of Translation, 18/2022, p. 37ff. )
See also pronoun for “God”.
Verse 14, which concludes God’s third speech to Abraham, is a warning of punishment. Some languages may need to mark the opening of verse 14 by a special term that will tell the reader that a warning is now to be read.
Any uncircumcised male who is not circumcised in the flesh of his foreskin: the wording is in legal style and hence highly redundant. Many translations will need to simplify this by saying something similar to Good News Translation: “Any male who is not circumcised….” In languages that cannot use the passive here, the most common approach is “If they do not cut [or, circumcise] any male person….”
Shall be cut off from his people: cut off is used commonly in the Old Testament to refer to persons who are excluded or separated from the sacred community. Other examples are Exo 12.15; Lev 7.20-27; Num 9.13. To be cut off is to be condemned to isolation and separated from the people of Israel and the worshiping community. Moffatt translates “outlawed,” which means to be without the protection of the law. In more modern terms it expresses the idea of excommunication.
From his people: people in Hebrew here is plural and is best taken in a more limited sense to refer to a man’s kin or family group, those with whom he recognizes some bond of relationship. The same term is used in 25.8, in which it is said that “Abraham … died … and was gathered to his people.” Good News Translation translates “will no longer be considered one of my people.” This rendering shifts from his people to “my people,” to agree with “my covenant” in the next clause. We may also translate “He will be sent away from his relatives,” “He will be removed from his clan,” or if the passive cannot be used, “His own people will put him out.”
He has broken my covenant: although there is no connecting word in Hebrew or in Revised Standard Version, this clause follows the statement about punishment as the reason for it. Good News Translation expresses this by saying “because….” To break the covenant is to fail to perform the obligations required by God. To break the covenant is the opposite of keeping or obeying the conditions of the covenant, as used in verses 9 and 10. Bible en français courant translates “For not having respected the obligations [duties] of my covenant.” We may also translate, for example, “because you have not performed the duties I required when I made the covenant with you.” Following on from verse 9, some translations say “because he hasn’t kept his side of the promise I am making with you.”
Quoted with permission from Reyburn, William D. and Fry, Euan McG. A Handbook on Genesis. (UBS Helps for Translators). New York: UBS, 1997. For this and other handbooks for translators see here .
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