Following are a number of back-translations as well as a sample translation for translators of Daniel 11:9:
Kupsabiny: “Then/Later, the king of the north shall attack and fight the king of the south, but the war will be too hard for him to the extent that he will retreat to his country.” (Source: Kupsabiny Back Translation)
Newari: “Later the king of the north will come to attack the country of the king of the south. Soon he will return to his own country.” (Source: Newari Back Translation)
Hiligaynon: “But later-on, the king in the north will-attack him, but this king in the north will-be-defeated and will-go-home to his place.” (Source: Hiligaynon Back Translation)
English: “Then the army of the King of Syria will invade Egypt, but they will soon return to Syria.” (Source: Translation for Translators)
According to Anne Garber Kompaoré (in Le Sycomore 3/2009, p. 34ff. ), there are 4 ways to identify cardinal directions:
1. celestial bodies, especially the sun and certain stars
2. geographical landmarks, for example a mountain, sea, or river (depending on its position or the direction in which the water flows) etc.
3. climatic phenomena, such as the wind and the direction from which rain comes
4. bodily reference points, especially front, back, left, and right, in relation to celestial bodies or geographical landmarks
Following are examples of how these are practically implemented by various languages: (click or tap here to see the rest of this insight)
Celestial Bodies
East and west are often translated by the rising and the setting of the sun (note that the origin of English and other Indo-European languages is “dawn” for “east” and “evening” [i.e. sun-down] for “west”):
Maan: “where the sun comes up” and “where the sun goes down” (source: Don Slager)
Kankanaey: “from the coming-out of the sun “and “going-away of the sun” (source: Kankanaey back-translation)
Northern Emberá: “from where the sun comes up” and “from where the sun falls” (source: Charles Mortensen)
Ejamat “the side where the sun comes from” and “the side where it sets” (source: David Frank in this blog post )
Tzeltal: “where the sun pours-out” (west) (source: Reiling / Swellengrebel)
Northern Ngbandi: “the sun behind the chief’s house” (east — the chief lives traditionally at the eastern side of the village, therefore he does not get the sunlight into his eyes) and “under the sun” (west)
Northwestern Dinka: “earth behind” (east — the place behind the earth, i.e. the area where the sun rises)
Jula: “salt village” (north — because salt comes from the north, from the Sahara Desert) and “kola village” (south — since kola comes from the coastal region to the south) (source: Garber Kompaoré)
Matumbi: “toward the beach” (East) (the coast is in the eastern direction in Matumbi-speaking areas), “north” and “south” can be defined as above or below another place (Source: Pioneer Bible Translators, project-specific notes in Paratext)
Acoli: “right” (of the local White Nile) (north) and “left” (of the White Nile) (south)
Zande: “interior (dry) land” (east); “place-inside-country” (north / south) — Zande, like a number of other languages, including Matengo and Hehe, traditionally only has three cardinal directions.
Belanda Bor: “lower place” (north) and “higher place” (south)
Turkana: “(up)stream” (north) and (down)stream (south)
Mono (DRC): “water place” (south) (source for this and five above: Mietzner / Pasch)
Climatic Phenomena
Shilluk: “opening westwind” (north) and “opening eastwind” (south)
Swahili used to have six directions. In reducing them to four, kusini and kaskazini which used to refer to south-west and north east respectively (the directions from where the two monsoons blow) have become the terms for “south” and north.” (source for this and one above: Mietzner / Pasch)
Bodily Reference Points
Nuer / Burun: “face” and “sun face” respectively (both: east)
Kalenjin: “eye sun” (east) (this and the one above indicate that the sun is “facing” the spectator from its position in the east:
Shilluk: doesn’t use a fixed position of the speaker, instead it has “eye sun morning” for east and “eye sun evening” for west
Mono (DRC): “foot-sun” (east — the start of the sun’s journey)
Burun: “sun leg” (west — the end of the sun’s journey)
Bari: “back” (north — when people are facing south, north is at their back) (source for this and above: Mietzner / Pasch)
Northern Emberá “the looking [left] hand” (north) and “the real [right] hand” (south) (source: Charles Mortensen)
Morelos Nahuatl: “from above” (north) and “from below” (south) (source: Viola Waterhouse in Notes on Translation August 1966, p. 86ff.)
When all four directions are mentioned, translators tend to avoid listing the four, sometimes verbose terms, and chose solutions like “all directions” (such as in Maan or Manya (source: Don Slager). Yakan has “from the four corners of the earth” (source: Yakan back-translation) and Western Bukidnon Manobo “from the four directions here on the earth” (source: Western Bukidnon Manobo back-translation).
The Hebrew text that gives instructions where to place items in the tabernacle with the help of cardinal directions (north and south) had to be approached in the Bambam translation specific to spacial concepts of that culture. Phil Campbell explains: “There are no words in Bambam for north and south. In Exodus 26:35, God instructs that the table is to be placed on the north side and the lamp on the south side inside the tabernacle. The team wants to use right and left to tell where the lamp and table are located. In many languages we would say that the table is on the right and the lampstand is on the left based on the view of someone entering the tabernacle. However, that is not how Bambam people view it. They view the placement of things and rooms in a building according to the orientation of someone standing inside the building facing the front of the building. So that means the table is on the left side and the lampstand is on the right side.”
Then: depending on how the end of the previous verse is structured, it may be possible to drop the transition word here. But if a new sentence is started here, it may begin with “After that….”
The latter: this clearly refers to the “king of the north,” or the king of Syria, and this should probably be made clear in the translation.
The two expressions come into the realm and shall return into his own land are rather neutral in meaning. Historical documents make no mention of a corresponding Syrian invasion into Egypt. Furthermore the neutral vocabulary of this verse does not necessarily mean that there was hostile intent. It is therefore impossible for us to know with certainty what the purpose of this visit may have been: military revenge as Good News Translation indicates, or political negotiation. Nor is it clear whether it was a success or a failure. Therefore it may be better to leave the translation as neutral as possible. Bible en français courant provides a model for this type of rendering: “the king of the north will go into the kingdom of the south and then return to his own country.” Since it is highly unlikely that the king went alone, it may be misleading in some languages to use the verbs “go” and “return” without giving any further information. It may be necessary to choose a plural subject like “the king and his men.” It should be noted, however, that most modern English versions use the loaded term “invade,” implying hostile military action (New International Version, New Jerusalem Bible, New Jerusalem Bible, Revised English Bible, New American Bible, An American Translation, and Moffatt, in addition to Good News Translation). New English Bible carries the same meaning with “overrun” and “retreat.” If this interpretation is followed, an explanatory footnote may be given, stating that this is not necessarily the only possible interpretation.
The subject of the phrase shall return into his own land can theoretically refer either to the king of the north or the king of the south. But it is more probable that the king of the north (Syria) is intended.
Quoted with permission from Péter-Contesse, René & Ellington, John. A Handbook on Daniel. (UBS Helps for Translators). New York: UBS, 1994. For this and other handbooks for translators see here .
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