urge slaves to be submissive to their masters

The Greek that is translated as “urge slaves to be submissive to their masters” in English is translated in Sayula Popoluca as “exhort servants to obey their owners” and in Tenango Otomi as tell those who are workers to obey what their masters tell them.” (Source: John Beekman & Harwood Hess in Notes on Translation, March 1963, p. 1ff.)

complete verse (Titus 2:9)

Following are a number of back-translations of Titus 2:9:

  • Uma: “As for slaves, teach them to submit to their nobles in all ways, and to always do the will of their nobles. They should not answer back/argue,” (Source: Uma Back Translation)
  • Yakan: “Teach/instruct the slaves/servants that they ought to obey/follow all their masters commands and they should please their masters. They ought not to contradict/talk back to their masters.” (Source: Yakan Back Translation)
  • Western Bukidnon Manobo: “Teach the believers who are servants that they should obey the commands of their masters so that their masters might be pleased with their works. They must not be rebellious,” (Source: Western Bukidnon Manobo Back Translation)
  • Kankanaey: “As for the slaves moreover, advise them to submit-themselves-to (lit. cause-themselves-to-be-ruled-by) their masters in all that they do in order that their masters will be satisfied with them. They shouldn’t answer-back-to/argue-with them” (Source: Kankanaey Back Translation)
  • Tagbanwa: “Teach the slaves who are believers that it’s necessary that they are obedient to their masters, and that they persevere to be pleasing to their master in their serving, not answering-back.” (Source: Tagbanwa Back Translation)
  • Tenango Otomi: “Tell those who are workers to obey their bosses when they give orders. They are not to answer back. They are to live so that their lives will be looked well upon.” (Source: Tenango Otomi Back Translation)

servant / slave

While the Greek term doulos in the New Testament and ‘ebed in the Old Testament refer to slightly different concepts (unlike in New Testament Judea in Old Testament Israel and Judah, Hebrew servants/slaves were required to be released after six years of labor and, regardless of when they started their servitude, all Hebrew servants were to be automatically freed during the year of Jubilee), translation issues are somewhat similar.

Joel Baden (2025, p. 65ff.) says this about the Hebrew term used in the Old Testament / Hebrew Bible:

“The English words ‘servant’ and ‘slave’ have decidedly different connotations. ‘Servant’ has the sense of ‘employee.’ ‘Slave,’ by contrast, carries with it the ideas of an owned and controlled body, of violence and dishonor. The connotation of ‘servant’ can verge on the positive; ‘slave’ is predominantly negative. How a reader of the Bible understands the identity of a character or the relationship between one character and another or the world of ancient Israel depends significantly on whether the word ‘servant’ or ‘slave’ is used. In Hebrew, however, there is but one word underlying every occurrence of ‘servant’ and ‘slave’ in our modern translations. The distinction between the two exists only on the level of interpretation.

“It is not a matter of mere nomenclature. Take the story of Genesis 24, in which Abraham sends his servant off to find a wife for Isaac. The servant — though the main character of the passage — has no name and is identified only by his title, which he even uses to introduce himself: ‘I am Abraham’s servant,’ he says (Genesis 24:34, Jewish Publication Society). This is often read as a warm story about a devoted servant — usually imagined to be relatively old — who carries out the elderly patriarch’s final wishes. How does it change, how do we reimagine it, when we read all thirteen mentions of Abraham’s servant as, in fact, Abraham’s slave? We know Abraham has slaves: His ‘servant’ even says so in this very chapter in the very next verse: ‘The Lord has greatly blessed my master, and he has become rich: he has given him sheep and cattle, silver and gold, male and female slaves, camels and asses’ (24:35, JPS). Yet generations of translators, interpreters, and readers have failed to connect the slaves (the property with which God has blessed Abraham) and the servant — the slave who is the protagonist of this same story.

“When slaves are turned into servants, the Bible itself is changed. Our revulsion at the institution of slavery is kept at a distance from the biblical text that stands as our religious heritage. The Bible is protected, albeit from itself. Slavery is minimized, or worse: The King James Version, notably, does not translate ‘ebed as ‘slave’ a single time. The result? Some KJV readers have denied that there is any slavery in the Bible whatsoever. Yet the word ‘ebed appears around 800 times in the Bible. That’s 800 moments when a slave, and the existence of slavery in ancient Israel and the biblical text, has been erased.

“The social role that we associate with the term ‘servant’ didn’t exist in ancient Israel. Slaves, however, did. Israel knew what it was to be a slave, and Israel knew, too, what it was to own a slave. And thus Israel uses the language and metaphor of slavery again and again to express the basic notions of obedience, of power disparity, of bodily control and the absence of agency. Samuel says to Yahweh upon being called, ‘Speak, Lord, for your servant is listening’ (1 Samuel 3:9, JPS). ‘Let my lord go ahead of his servant,’ Jacob says to Esau in Genesis 33:14 (JPS). Rendered as ‘servant’ in every translation, this is a sort of formally obsequious, self-abnegating speech. While literal slavery is not at stake in these sorts of expressions, the metaphorical reference to the relative status of slave and master is lost when it is translated as ‘servant.’

“So, too, when those figures who are the ‘ebed to a king are referred to as ‘courtiers,’ ‘officials,’ ‘attendants,’ ‘soldiers,’ ‘subjects,’ ‘envoys,’ ‘ministers,’ or even sometimes simply ‘men,’ of the king. These are all translations of the same word, and the instinct to specify their distinctive roles in the royal court is understandable. Yet in doing so, translations obscure the actual language with the connotations that it presents: subordination, threat of violence to one’s person, absolute control over will and agency. And so, too, when it is not a human king but God to whom one is said to be ‘ebed. In the book of Joshua, God states, ‘My servant Moses is dead’ (1:2, JPS) — we are relatively comfortable with the idea of serving God but perhaps less so with the idea of being God’s slave. Yet the qualities of obedience, subservience, and loyalty — and the implicit threat of punishment for the lack thereof — are part of this picture as well. One might point to the way this language is picked up in the New Testament in the phrase ‘slave of Christ’ in 1 Corinthians 7:22.

“If ‘servants’ and ‘slaves’ are not understood to be equivalent — and in modern English it is safe to say that they are not — then every time that the word ‘ebed appears, a choice has to be made by the translator. The diminishment of the very word ‘slave’ in English translations of the Hebrew Bible results in the diminishment of the idea and reality of slavery in the Bible and in the world that produced it. Though there is no debate to be had about whether there was slavery in the Bible and in ancient Israel, a lay reader of the text in translation might well wonder.

“Our ears, and eyes, have become accustomed to seeing the word ‘servant’ in the Bible. ‘Slave’ often sounds wrong, inapt, almost harsh. Yet it is just this discomfort that signals how important the change is. Whenever we encounter the word ‘servant’ in our English translations, we should be obliged to ask why it says ‘servant’ and not ‘slave’ — and what difference it would make to our reading of the text as an individual, as a community, and as a culture if we were instead to read ‘slave.’”

Ruden (2021, p. lviii) says this about the Greek term in the New Testament:

“In Judea, servitude was sui generis and could be complicated, and accordingly the Greek vocabulary in scripture is varied. But there appears to be no basis for sugarcoating the word meaning a chattel slave in nearly all Greek literature, doulos. It is unlikely that the internationally oriented authors of the Gospels didn’t mean what their peers meant by the word — ‘slave.’ Also, the English word ‘servant’ is too vague for the array of servitors (including trusted house slaves and personal attendants), military and administrative subordinates, and ritual helpers the Greek of the Gospels distinguishes.”

Some English New Testament translations (Ruden 2021, Hart 2017, The Orthodox New Testament 2004) have consistently used slave for the Greek doulos but no Old Testament translation consistently translates ‘ebed with only one term.

In a number of leading German translations, including the Catholic Einheitsübersetzung (1980 / 2016) and the Protestant Elberfelder Bibel (1871 / 2006), BasisBibel (2021), as well as the translation by Luther (all editions) use the term Knecht throughout. Knecht is an old-fashioned term for a low-class, often agricultural servant with little or no social mobility, a position that is somewhat located between Diener (“servant”) and Sklave (“slave”). The only times these versions specifically don’t use Knecht is where slavery is specifically in the focus (such as Leviticus 25:44 or Philemon 1:16).

Translation commentary on Titus 2:9

Bid is not in the Greek text, which simply contains the infinitive form for “to be submissive.” However, a verb is needed in order to signal that these are still instructions to Titus and not direct admonitions to slaves. Translations therefore supply what they believe to be the appropriate verb; for example, “teach” (New International Version), “tell” (New Revised Standard Version); compare Phillips “Slaves should be told.” Good News Translation avoids the problem by using a third-person imperative form, “Slaves are to submit….”

For slaves see discussion on “slavery” in 1 Tim 6.1. Submissive also occurs in Titus 2.5 of this chapter, for which see discussion there. The Greek here can be either passive (so New International Version “be subject”) or more likely middle, hence reflexive (so Good News Translation “to submit themselves”).

For masters see 1 Tim 6.1 and 6.2.

To give satisfaction is literally “to be pleasing” (compare Good News Translation “to please”). As in verses 6-7, in every respect (literally “in everything”) can go either with the verb “to submit,” as the UBS Greek text has it (compare New American Bible, Revised “under the control of their masters in all respects,” also Translator’s New Testament, New Jerusalem Bible “obedient to their masters in everything,” Revised English Bible “respect their masters’ authority in everything”), or with “to be pleasing” (in addition to Good News Translation, also Phillips “to give them satisfactory service in every way,” Jerusalem Bible “always do what they want”). It is of course possible to relate “submit” to “please,” with submission being a specific way of pleasing (compare Contemporary English Version “please their owners by obeying them in everything”).

Refractory translates a verb that means “to speak against someone,” “to talk in opposition to someone,” “to answer back.” It would be very difficult for slaves to keep their peace, especially when they feel they are being treated unjustly by cruel and harsh masters.

Quoted with permission from Arichea, Daniel C. and Hatton, Howard A. A Handbook on Paul’s Letter to Titus. (UBS Handbook Series). New York: UBS, 1995. For this and other handbooks for translators see here .

Commentaire sur la traduction de Tite 2.9

2.9-10

Après les instructions diverses offertes à Tite, Paul vient à un nouveau groupe au sein de l’Église, les esclaves. En effet, l’esclavage était une pratique courante pendant l’époque de Paul. Vu le volume de textes consacrés aux esclaves et aux maîtres d’esclaves dans le NT (1 Tim 6.1-2 ; Éph 6.5-8 ; Col 3.22-25 ; 1 Pi 2.18-21), il est clair que ces deux groupes étaient membres dans les mêmes communautés chrétiennes, certains esclaves servant des maîtres croyants ou non croyants et vice versa. Ici Paul offre des conseils, semble-t-il aux esclaves qui auraient des maîtres non chrétiens. Leur conduite serait donc importante face aux non-croyants. Ce passage diffère de ceux en Éphésiens et Colossiens, car rien n’est dit ici sur des devoirs des maîtres envers leurs esclaves.
Bien qu’il ne s’agisse que de deux versets, beaucoup de versions présentent une nouvelle section ici. La Traduction œcuménique de la Bible dit simplement « Les esclaves » mais on pourrait dire « Comment les esclaves chrétiens devraient se comporter ».

Que les esclaves soient soumis à leurs maîtres en toutes choses : Paul commence cette nouvelle section (ou paragraphe) presque sans transition. Dans la traduction, on pourrait dire, « Quant aux esclaves, ils devraient se soumettre… ». On pourrait aussi adopter le style proposé en Tite 1.2, « Dis aux esclaves d’obéir à leurs maîtres ».

Pour esclaves : voir 1 Tim 6.1.

Pour soient soumis, voir Tite 1.5 où le même verbe est utilisé pour parler de l’attitude de la femme envers son mari.

Pour maîtres, voir 1 Tim 6.1-2.

Comme en Tite 1.7, les mots en toutes choses peuvent se rapporter, soit à ce qui précède, soit à ce qui suit. La majorité des versions adoptent la première option. Par exemple, la Parole de Vie dit « Il faut que les esclaves obéissent à leurs maîtres en toutes choses ». La même expression reviendra à la fin du Tite 2.10, où son sens est très clair.

qu’ils se rendent agréables est litt. « être agréables ». Le même langage est employé à plusieurs endroits dans le contexte de plaire à Dieu. Voir Rom 12.1 ; 14.18 ; 2 Cor 5.9 ; Éph 5.10 ; Phil 4.18 ; Col 3.20 ; Hébr 13.21. La Parole de Vie offre un bon modèle : « Ils doivent chercher à leur plaire », c’est-à-dire, plaire à leurs maîtres. L’idée est que les esclaves doivent chercher à leur rendre service ou « donner satisfaction ».

en évitant de les contredire rend un participe, « ne pas les contredisant ». Le verbe veut dire litt. « contre-parler ». La Parole de Vie dit « en évitant de se disputer avec eux ». Voir Tite 1.9.

Source: Zogbo, Lynell & Ellingworth, Paul La lettre à Tite – Manuel de traduction – Commentaire linguistique et exégétique de la Bible. Alliance biblique universelle, 2021.