The Hebrew, Aramaic, Greek, Ge’ez, and Latin that is translated as “army” in English is translated in Chichewa as “group of warriors.” (Source: Mawu a Mulungu mu Chichewa Chalero Back Translation)
cardinal directions
The cardinal directions “east” and “west” are easy to translate into Maan here since the language uses “where the sun comes up” and “where the sun goes down.” For “north” the translator had “facing toward the sun rising to the left,” and for “south” she had “facing toward the sun rising to the right.” So the listener had to think hard before knowing what direction was in view when translating “to the north and south, to the east and west.” So, in case all four directions are mentioned, it was shortened by saying simply “all directions.” Manya uses a similar nomenclature for the cardinal directions. (Source: Don Slager)
Likewise, Yakan has “from the four corners of the earth” (source: Yakan back-translation) or Western Bukidnon Manobo “from the four directions here on the earth” (source: Western Bukidnon Manobo back-translation).
Kankanaey is “from the coming-out and the going-away of the sun and the north and the south” (source: Kankanaey back-translation), Northern Emberá “from where the sun comes up, from where it falls, from the looking [left] hand, from the real [right] hand” (source: Charles Mortensen), Amele “from the direction of the sun going up, from the direction of the sun going down, from the north and from the south” (source: John Roberts), Ejamat “look up to see the side where the sun comes from, and the side where it sets, and look on your right side, and on your left” (source: David Frank in this blog post ).
In Lamba, only umutulesuŵa, “where the sun rises” and imbonsi, “where the sun sets” were available as cardinal directions that were not tied to the local area of language speakers (“north” is kumausi — “to the Aushi country” — and “south” kumalenje — “to the Lenje country”). So “north” and “south” were introduced as loanwords, nofu and saufu respectively. The whole phrase is kunofu nakusaufu nakumutulesuŵa nakumbonsi. (Source C. M. Doke in The Bible Translator 1958, p. 57ff. )
“West” is translated in Tzeltal as “where the sun pours-out” and in Kele as “down-river” (source: Reiling / Swellengrebel).
In Morelos Nahuatl, “north” is translated as “from above” and “south” as “from below.” (Source: Viola Waterhouse in Notes on Translation August 1966, p. 86ff.)
In Matumbi cardinal directions are defined as in relation to another place. “East” for instance typically is “toward the beach” since the coast is in the eastern direction in Matumbi-speaking areas. “North” and “south” can be defined as above or below another place. (Source: Pioneer Bible Translators, project-specific notes in Paratext)
The Hebrew text that gives instructions where to place items in the tabernacle with the help of cardinal directions (north and south) had to be approached in the Bambam translation specific to spacial concepts of that culture.
Phil Campbell explains: “There are no words in Bambam for north and south. In Exodus 26:35, God instructs that the table is to be placed on the north side and the lamp on the south side inside the tabernacle. The team wants to use right and left to tell where the lamp and table are located. In many languages we would say that the table is on the right and the lampstand is on the left based on the view of someone entering the tabernacle. However, that is not how Bambam people view it. They view the placement of things and rooms in a building according to the orientation of someone standing inside the building facing the front of the building. So that means the table is on the left side and the lampstand is on the right side.”
See also cardinal directions / left and right and people of the East.
Translation commentary on Judith 7:18
The sons of Esau and the sons of Ammon: The sons of Ammon would be the remaining Ammonite soldiers, so we may translate “The Edomite soldiers and the rest of the Ammonite soldiers.”
Encamped in the hill country opposite Dothan may be rendered “set up their tents in the mountains opposite the town of Dothan.”
Toward Acraba, which is near Chusi beside the brook Mochmur: Since the two towns Acraba and Chusi as well as the Mochmur River are unknown (for conjectures see Moore’s notes), the military situation here is not clear, and translators can only translate what is set before them. Again, one might refer to the map on page 157 of k The Macmillan Bible Atlask*. It is intelligently done and is the only map one is apt to find of these movements.
Supply trains refers to the carts used to carry their supplies (food, weapons, and so on). Good News Translation simply has “equipment,” and in many languages that will be sufficient.
The remainder of verse 18 has the same purpose as verses 2-3. Before the shift is made into the town of Bethulia, we are given a bird’s-eye view of the immense forces arrayed against the little place. There is no new information here, only a reinforcement of what has already been told.
An alternative translation model for this verse is:
• The Edomite soldiers and the rest of the Ammonite soldiers set up their tents in the mountains opposite the town of Dothan. They also sent some soldiers southeast toward Acraba, which lies near the town of Chusi beside the Mochmur River. The rest of the Assyrian soldiers set up their tents in the valley. There were so many soldiers that their tents and their supplies covered the whole countryside.
Quoted with permission from Bullard, Roger A. and Hatton, Howard A. A Handbook on Judith. (UBS Helps for Translators). New York: UBS, 2001. For this and other handbooks for translators see here.

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