The now commonly-used German expression Fallstrick for “snare,” but today only used in German in the sense to cause someone to stumble (“jemandem einen Fallstick legen”), was first coined in 1534 in the German Bible translation by Martin Luther. (Source: Günther 2017, p. 65)
For other idioms or terms in German that were coined by Bible translation, see here.
The Hebrew, Ge’ez, and Greek that is typically translated as “sin” in English has a wide variety of translations.
The Greek ἁμαρτάνω (hamartanō) carries the original verbatim meaning of “miss the mark” and likewise, many translations contain the “connotation of moral responsibility.”
Loma: “leaving the road” (which “implies a definite standard, the transgression of which is sin”)
Navajo (Dinė): “that which is off to the side” (source for this and above: Bratcher / Nida)
Toraja-Sa’dan: kasalan, originally meaning “transgression of a religious or moral rule” and in the context of the Bible “transgression of God’s commandments” (source: H. van der Veen in The Bible Translator 1950, p. 21ff. )
Bariai: “bad behavior” (source: Bariai Back Translation)
Sandawe: “miss the mark” (like the original meaning of the Greek term) (source for this and above: Ursula Wiesemann in Holzhausen / Riderer 2010, p. 36ff., 43)
Nias: horö, originally a term primarily used for sexual sin. (Source: Hummel / Telaumbanua 2007, p. 256)
In Shipibo-Conibo the term is hocha. Nida (1952, p. 149) tells the story of its choosing: “In some instances a native expression for sin includes many connotations, and its full meaning must be completely understood before one ever attempts to use it. This was true, for example, of the term hocha first proposed by Shipibo-Conibo natives as an equivalent for ‘sin.’ The term seemed quite all right until one day the translator heard a girl say after having broken a little pottery jar that she was guilty of ‘hocha.’ Breaking such a little jar scarcely seemed to be sin. However, the Shipibos insisted that hocha was really sin, and they explained more fully the meaning of the word. It could be used of breaking a jar, but only if the jar belonged to someone else. Hocha was nothing more nor less than destroying the possessions of another, but the meaning did not stop with purely material possessions. In their belief God owns the world and all that is in it. Anyone who destroys the work and plan of God is guilty of hocha. Hence the murderer is of all men most guilty of hocha, for he has destroyed God’s most important possession in the world, namely, man. Any destructive and malevolent spirit is hocha, for it is antagonistic and harmful to God’s creation. Rather than being a feeble word for some accidental event, this word for sin turned out to be exceedingly rich in meaning and laid a foundation for the full presentation of the redemptive act of God.”
Martin Ehrensvärd, one of the translators for the DanishBibelen 2020, comments on the translation of this term: “We would explain terms, such that e.g. sin often became ‘doing what God does not want’ or ‘breaking God’s law’, ‘letting God down’, ‘disrespecting God’, ‘doing evil’, ‘acting stupidly’, ‘becoming guilty’. Now why couldn’t we just use the word sin? Well, sin in contemporary Danish, outside of the church, is mostly used about things such as delicious but unhealthy foods. Exquisite cakes and chocolates are what a sin is today.” (Source: Ehrensvärd in HIPHIL Novum 8/2023, p. 81ff. )
Following are a number of back-translations as well as a sample translation for translators of Exodus 23:33:
Kupsabiny: “Don’t ever accept to live together with those people. When/If you accept their words/customs, they will throw you into evil and make you sin against me. If you kneel to/worship their things, you have entered into a trap which is not very small (it is very big).’” (Source: Kupsabiny Back Translation)
Newari: “Do not let them live in your country otherwise they will cause you to sin against me, and surely if you worship their gods, you will trap in their net.” (Source: Newari Back Translation)
Hiligaynon: “[You (plur.)] do- not -let them live in your (plur.) land for they might (be) the (ones to) cause/urge/[lit. push] you (plur.) to sin against me. If you (plur.) worship their little-gods/false-gods, certainly this will-be a trap/snare for you (plur.).’” (Source: Hiligaynon Back Translation)
Bariai: “And don’t allow them to be living in your (pl.) land either. Lest they pull you so that you do bad deeds against me, For if you lift up their gods’ names, then this practice will destroy you as [if] you got stuck up into a spring-trap.’” (Source: Bariai Back Translation)
Opo: “They must not (imp.) country your live, in order that they not you make you (sing., imp.) sin in front of me. Because, if you will do thing for gods their, it will trap you.»” (Source: Opo Back Translation)
English: “Do not allow those people to live in your land, in order that they do not cause you to sin against me. If you worship their gods, you will not be able to escape from worshiping them and sinning against me, just like someone caught in a trap is unable to escape.’” (Source: Translation for Translators)
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Like a number of other East Asian languages, Japanese uses a complex system of honorifics, i.e. a system where a number of different levels of politeness are expressed in language via words, word forms or grammatical constructs. These can range from addressing someone or referring to someone with contempt (very informal) to expressing the highest level of reference (as used in addressing or referring to God) or any number of levels in-between.
One way Japanese shows different degree of politeness is through the choice of a first person singular and plural pronoun (“I” and “we” and its various forms) as shown here in the widely-used Japanese Shinkaiyaku (新改訳) Bible of 2017. The most commonly used watashi/watakushi (私) is typically used when the speaker is humble and asking for help. In these verses, where God / Jesus is referring to himself, watashi is also used but instead of the kanji writing system (私) the syllabary hiragana (わたし) is used to distinguish God from others.
They shall not dwell in your land uses the same word as “dwellers,” translated as “inhabitants” in verse 31. Since They were already there, New Jewish Publication Society’s Tanakh has “They shall not remain in your land.” Good News Translation changes the They to “those people” and changes the verb to a command in the second person, “Do not let those people live in your country” (similarly New International Version). This brings out the idea of a command, which is suggested by the shortened form of the verb in Hebrew. Your land uses the singular your but refers to all the Israelites.
Lest they make you sin against me is literally “or else they will cause you [singular] to sin to me.” Lest is used in the same way in verse 29. It can also mean “because” (Translator’s Old Testament). Good News Translation has “If you do,” carrying over the change to second person in the first clause. As in 10.16, the word for sin has the basic meaning of “missing the mark.” (See the comment on chataʾ at 20.20.)
For if you serve their gods means, as Good News Translation puts it, “If you worship their gods,” as in verse 24. It will surely be a snare to you is literally “it will be for you [singular] for a trap.” Moffatt and An American Translation take the word snare to mean “endanger,” but this loses the figure of speech. Good News Translation considers it to be “a fatal trap,” but this may be too strong an expression. The meaning is that the people would be caught, or trapped, into continuing to worship the gods of these other nations, thereby sinning against Yahweh.
The four clauses of this verse, a-b-c-d, may be rearranged as a-d-c-b and read something like this: “Do not let those people live in your land; if you do, they will trap you into worshiping their gods, and in that way they will cause you to sin against me.” This is similar to what Revised English Bible does: “They must not stay in your land, for fear they make you sin against me by ensnaring you into the worship of their gods” (similarly Contemporary English Version). Snare may also be expressed in verb form as “lure” or “entice”; for example, “They will entice you into worshiping their gods.”
Quoted with permission from Osborn, Noel D. and Hatton, Howard A. A Handbook on Exodus. (UBS Helps for Translators). New York: UBS, 1999. For this and other handbooks for translators see here .
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