addressing God

Translators of different languages have found different ways with what kind of formality God is addressed.

Like many languages (but unlike Greek or Hebrew or modern English), Tuvan uses a formal vs. informal 2nd person pronoun (a familiar vs. a respectful “you”). Unlike other languages that have this feature, however, the translators of the Tuvan Bible have attempted to be very consistent in using the different forms of address in every case a 2nd person pronoun has to be used in the translation of the biblical text.

As Voinov shows in Pronominal Theology in Translating the Gospels (in: The Bible Translator 2002, p. 210ff. ), the choice to use either of the pronouns many times involved theological judgment. While the formal pronoun can signal personal distance or a social/power distance between the speaker and addressee, the informal pronoun can indicate familiarity or social/power equality between speaker and addressee.

In these verses, in which humans address God, the informal, familiar pronoun is used that communicates closeness.

Voinov notes that “in the Tuvan Bible, God is only addressed with the informal pronoun. No exceptions. An interesting thing about this is that I’ve heard new Tuvan believers praying with the formal form to God until they are corrected by other Christians who tell them that God is close to us so we should address him with the informal pronoun. As a result, the informal pronoun is the only one that is used in praying to God among the Tuvan church.”

In Gbaya, “a superior, whether father, uncle, or older brother, mother, aunt, or older sister, president, governor, or chief, is never addressed in the singular unless the speaker intends a deliberate insult. When addressing the superior face to face, the second person plural pronoun ɛ́nɛ́ or ‘you (pl.)’ is used, similar to the French usage of vous.

Accordingly, the translators of the current version of the Gbaya Bible chose to use the plural ɛ́nɛ́ to address God. There are a few exceptions. In Psalms 86:8, 97:9, and 138:1, God is addressed alongside other “gods,” and here the third person pronoun o is used to avoid confusion about who is being addressed. In several New Testament passages (Matthew 21:23, 26:68, 27:40, Mark 11:28, Luke 20:2, 23:37, as well as in Jesus’ interaction with Pilate and Jesus’ interaction with the Samaritan woman at the well) the less courteous form for Jesus is used to indicate ignorance of his position or mocking.” (Source Philip Noss)

In the most recent Manchu translation of 1835 (a revision of an earlier edition from 1822), God is never addressed with a pronoun but with “father” (ama /ᠠᠮᠠ) instead. Chengcheng Liu (in this post on the Cambridge Centre for Chinese Theology blog ) explains: “In Manchu tradition, as in Chinese etiquette, second-person pronouns could be considered disrespectful when speaking to superiors or spiritual beings. Manchu Shamanist prayers avoided si [‘you’] and sini [‘your’] for this very reason. To use them for God would be, in Lipovzoff’s [one of the two translators] words, ‘the most uncouth and indecent way to speak to the Almighty — as if He were a servant or slave.’ There was also a grammatical problem. In Manchu, si and sini could refer to both singular and plural subjects. For a faith that insisted on the singularity of God, this was potentially confusing. By contrast, repeating ama removed any ambiguity.”

In Dutch, Afrikaans, Gronings, and Western Frisian translations, God is always addressed with the formal pronoun.

See also formal pronoun: disciples addressing Jesus, female second person singular pronoun in Psalms.

complete verse (Jeremiah 18:20)

Following are a number of back-translations as well as a sample translation for translators of Jeremiah 18:20:

  • Kupsabiny: “Is goodness really to be repaid with evil?
    These people have surely dug a hole.
    Remember when I stood before you
    so as to plead with you, God
    and then your anger subsided.” (Source: Kupsabiny Back Translation)
  • Hiligaynon: “What I do for them is good, but they pay-back me evil/bad. They have-dug a pit so-that I will-fall, even-though I took-refuge in you (sing.) and asked-for-pity for them so-that you (sing.) will- not -punish them because of your (sing.) anger against them.” (Source: Hiligaynon Back Translation)
  • English: “I am doing things that are good,
    so it is disgusting that they are paying me back by doing evil things to me.
    It is as though they have dug a pit for me to fall into and die.
    Do not forget that one time I stood in front of you and pleaded for you to help them,
    and I tried to prevent you from punishing them , even though you were very angry with them.” (Source: Translation for Translators)

before / in the sight of / presence of (God) (Japanese honorifics)

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Like a number of other East Asian languages, Japanese uses a complex system of honorifics, i.e. a system where a number of different levels of politeness are expressed in language via words, word forms or grammatical constructs. These can range from addressing someone or referring to someone with contempt (very informal) to expressing the highest level of reference (as used in addressing or referring to God) or any number of levels in-between.

One way to do this is through the usage (or a lack) of an honorific prefix as shown here in the widely-used Japanese Shinkaiyaku (新改訳) Bible of 2017. When the referent is God, the “divine” honorific prefix mi- (御 or み) can be used, as in mi-mae (御前) or “before (God)” in the referenced verses. In some cases in can also be used in reference to being before a king, such as in 1 Samuel 16:16.

(Source: S. E. Doi, see also S. E. Doi in Journal of Translation, 18/2022, p. 37ff. )

See also presence (Japanese honorifics) and before you / to you.

Japanese benefactives (omoiokoshite)

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Like a number of other East Asian languages, Japanese uses a complex system of honorifics, i.e. a system where a number of different levels of politeness are expressed in language via words, word forms or grammatical constructs. These can range from addressing someone or referring to someone with contempt (very informal) to expressing the highest level of reference (as used in addressing or referring to God) or any number of levels in-between.

One way Japanese shows different degree of politeness is through the choice of a benefactive construction as shown here in the widely-used Japanese Shinkaiyaku (新改訳) Bible of 2017. Here, omoiokoshite (思い起こして) or “remember” is used in combination with kudasaru (くださる), a respectful form of the benefactive kureru (くれる). A benefactive reflects the good will of the giver or the gratitude of a recipient of the favor. To convey this connotation, English translation needs to employ a phrase such as “for me (my sake)” or “for you (your sake).”

(Source: S. E. Doi, see also S. E. Doi in Journal of Translation, 18/2022, p. 37ff. )

Japanese benefactives (yamete)

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Like a number of other East Asian languages, Japanese uses a complex system of honorifics, i.e. a system where a number of different levels of politeness are expressed in language via words, word forms or grammatical constructs. These can range from addressing someone or referring to someone with contempt (very informal) to expressing the highest level of reference (as used in addressing or referring to God) or any number of levels in-between. One way Japanese shows different degree of politeness is through the choice of a benefactive construction as shown here in the widely-used Japanese Shinkaiyaku (新改訳) Bible of 2017.

Here, yamete (やめて) or “stop” is used in combination with itadaku (いただく), a humble form of the benefactive morau (もらう). A benefactive reflects the good will of the giver or the gratitude of a recipient of the favor. To convey this connotation, English translation needs to employ a phrase such as “for me (my sake)” or “for you (your sake).” (Source: S. E. Doi, see also S. E. Doi in Journal of Translation, 18/2022, p. 37ff. )

Translation commentary on Jeremiah 18:20

Is evil a recompense for good?: Jeremiah had previously prayed for the LORD to be merciful to his enemies (15.11; 17.16). But in spite of that, they still wish to trap and kill him. Jeremiah asks if this is just. If translators think that it will not be clear to readers why Jeremiah asks this question, they can say “Is evil the payment I will receive for doing good?” The answer to this question is clearly “No,” but the people are doing exactly that. Yet, which begins the next line, emphasizes that contrast. There are various ways languages convey the same sense; for example, “Good should not be repaid with evil, but they are digging a pit for me” and “Is good to be repaid with evil, that they have dug a pit for me?” (Revised English Bible).

They have dug a pit for my life is omitted by some on the assumption that it was brought in from verse 22. However, there is no textual basis for its omission, and Hebrew Old Testament Text Project recommends that it be retained. Pit refers to a pit for trapping animals. Elsewhere the word is used in Psa 57.6; 119.85. Life represents the Hebrew word often translated “soul” (see 17.21). For this line Good News Translation has “they have dug a pit for me to fall in.” New American Bible understands the expression to mean that the people want to kill Jeremiah: “they … dig a pit to take my life.” Die Bibel im heutigen Deutsch does away with the figure: “They wanted me in their power.”

How I stood before thee: See 15.1. This is the posture of prayer (New Jerusalem Bible “how I pleaded before you”). Moffatt translates this and the following line as “men for whom once (remember) I made intercession, pleading in thy presence.”

To speak good for them is generally translated “to speak on their behalf.”

The next line gives the content of Jeremiah’s prayer: to turn away thy wrath from them. Good News Translation expresses this as “so that you would not deal with them in anger.”

Quoted with permission from Newman, Barclay M. and Stine, Philip C. A Handbook on Jeremiah. (UBS Helps for Translators). New York: UBS, 2003. For this and other handbooks for translators see here .