addressing God

Translators of different languages have found different ways with what kind of formality God is addressed.

Like many languages (but unlike Greek or Hebrew or modern English), Tuvan uses a formal vs. informal 2nd person pronoun (a familiar vs. a respectful “you”). Unlike other languages that have this feature, however, the translators of the Tuvan Bible have attempted to be very consistent in using the different forms of address in every case a 2nd person pronoun has to be used in the translation of the biblical text.

As Voinov shows in Pronominal Theology in Translating the Gospels (in: The Bible Translator 2002, p. 210ff. ), the choice to use either of the pronouns many times involved theological judgment. While the formal pronoun can signal personal distance or a social/power distance between the speaker and addressee, the informal pronoun can indicate familiarity or social/power equality between speaker and addressee.

In these verses, in which humans address God, the informal, familiar pronoun is used that communicates closeness.

Voinov notes that “in the Tuvan Bible, God is only addressed with the informal pronoun. No exceptions. An interesting thing about this is that I’ve heard new Tuvan believers praying with the formal form to God until they are corrected by other Christians who tell them that God is close to us so we should address him with the informal pronoun. As a result, the informal pronoun is the only one that is used in praying to God among the Tuvan church.”

In Gbaya, “a superior, whether father, uncle, or older brother, mother, aunt, or older sister, president, governor, or chief, is never addressed in the singular unless the speaker intends a deliberate insult. When addressing the superior face to face, the second person plural pronoun ɛ́nɛ́ or ‘you (pl.)’ is used, similar to the French usage of vous.

Accordingly, the translators of the current version of the Gbaya Bible chose to use the plural ɛ́nɛ́ to address God. There are a few exceptions. In Psalms 86:8, 97:9, and 138:1, God is addressed alongside other “gods,” and here the third person pronoun o is used to avoid confusion about who is being addressed. In several New Testament passages (Matthew 21:23, 26:68, 27:40, Mark 11:28, Luke 20:2, 23:37, as well as in Jesus’ interaction with Pilate and Jesus’ interaction with the Samaritan woman at the well) the less courteous form for Jesus is used to indicate ignorance of his position or mocking.” (Source Philip Noss)

In the most recent Manchu translation of 1835 (a revision of an earlier edition from 1822), God is never addressed with a pronoun but with “father” (ama /ᠠᠮᠠ) instead. Chengcheng Liu (in this post on the Cambridge Centre for Chinese Theology blog ) explains: “In Manchu tradition, as in Chinese etiquette, second-person pronouns could be considered disrespectful when speaking to superiors or spiritual beings. Manchu Shamanist prayers avoided si [‘you’] and sini [‘your’] for this very reason. To use them for God would be, in Lipovzoff’s [one of the two translators] words, ‘the most uncouth and indecent way to speak to the Almighty — as if He were a servant or slave.’ There was also a grammatical problem. In Manchu, si and sini could refer to both singular and plural subjects. For a faith that insisted on the singularity of God, this was potentially confusing. By contrast, repeating ama removed any ambiguity.”

In Dutch, Afrikaans, Gronings, and Western Frisian translations, God is always addressed with the formal pronoun.

See also formal pronoun: disciples addressing Jesus, female second person singular pronoun in Psalms.

complete verse (Habakkuk 1:3)

Following are a number of back-translations as well as a sample translation for translators of Habakkuk 1:3:

  • Kupsabiny: “Why do you leave/allow me to see such evil? Oh yes, why can you endure sin like this? Calamity and chaos has surrounded me. People argue with one another and are fighting repeatedly.” (Source: Kupsabiny Back Translation)
  • Newari: “Why do you make me look at injustice?
    Why do you tolerate wrongdoing?
    Only destruction and violence are before me.
    There also is strife and conflict all around.” (Source: Newari Back Translation)
  • Hiligaynon: “Why do you (sing.) show me this wickedness? Just everywhere I can-see the killing-of-one-another, hurting-one-another, fighting-one-another and disputing/arguing-with-one-another.” (Source: Hiligaynon Back Translation)
  • Kankanaey: “Why do you (sing.) cause- me -to-experience many hardships and permit evil to be-happening? Constantly I-am-able-to-see people who cause-to-be-pitied and hardship their companions. In all places there are those-who-oppose-each-other and quarrel/fight-together.” (Source: Kankanaey Back Translation)
  • English: “In this vision I will be talking about things that will happen in the future.
    Now is not the time when those things will happen,
    but they certainly will happen,
    and when they occur, they will occur quickly,
    and they will not be delayed.
    Now you want those things to happen immediately, but they are not happening.
    But wait patiently for them to happen!” (Source: Translation for Translators)

Honorary "rare" construct denoting God ("look")

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Like a number of other East Asian languages, Japanese uses a complex system of honorifics, i.e. a system where a number of different levels of politeness are expressed in language via words, word forms or grammatical constructs. These can range from addressing someone or referring to someone with contempt (very informal) to expressing the highest level of reference (as used in addressing or referring to God) or any number of levels in-between.

One way Japanese shows different degree of politeness is through the usage of an honorific construction where the morpheme rare (られ) is affixed on the verb as shown here in the widely-used Japanese Shinkaiyaku (新改訳) Bible of 2017. This is particularly done with verbs that have God as the agent to show a deep sense of reverence. Here, nagameteo-rare-ru (眺めておられる) or “look” is used.

(Source: S. E. Doi, see also S. E. Doi in Journal of Translation, 18/2022, p. 37ff. )

Translation commentary on Habakkuk 1:3

The first half of the verse has the form of a double question in Revised Standard Version. Good News Translation turns it into two separate sentences. As in verse 2, the question form is an indirect way for Habakkuk to make his complaint against God. Again, it should be retained in translation if possible.

Why dost thou make me see wrongs and look upon trouble?: first of all, it must be noted that the word translated wrongs in Revised Standard Version is translated “trouble” in Good News Translation, and the word translated trouble in Revised Standard Version is translated “wrongdoing” in Good News Translation. This may make it appear that Good News Translation has reversed the order of the first two clauses, but in fact this is not the case. Several other modern English versions also prefer to use “wrong” or “wrongdoing” in the second clause rather than the first (New English Bible, New International Version, New Jerusalem Bible). The words make me see are causative in sense; the prophet is boldly blaming God for the problems in his situation. Good News Translation expresses this more naturally as “Why do you make me see such trouble?” This means not just to look at the troubles of other people, but to experience trouble oneself. The sentence may also be phrased as “Why do you make me meet with such trouble?” or “Why do you make me receive trouble like this?” or even “Why do you bring such trouble upon me?” Wrongs is rendered as “ruin” (New American Bible), “misery” (New English Bible), “injustice” (Jerusalem Bible, New International Version), or “iniquity” (New Jerusalem Bible).

The rest of the sentence, and look upon trouble, is ambiguous in Revised Standard Version. The obvious interpretation in English is that Why dost thou make from the first clause is to be repeated in the second. This would give the meaning “Why do you make me look upon trouble?” However, this is wrong, and the Hebrew actually means “Why do you look upon trouble?” The prophet implies that the LORD is watching without taking any action to put things right. This meaning is expressed more clearly in Good News Translation, “How can you stand to look on such wrongdoing” (American edition) or “How can you endure to look on such wrongdoing” (British edition). Compare New International Version “Why do you tolerate wrong?” In many languages it will be necessary to show who is the subject of “wrongdoing.” Therefore other ways of rendering this clause are “Why do you tolerate people doing such evil things?” or “When you see people doing such evil things, why do you not pay attention (or, take action)?”

The terms Destruction and violence often go together (compare Jer 6.7; 20.8; Ezek 45.9; Amos 3.10). Here the prophet says that they are “all around me” (Good News Translation).

The last part of the verse has another pair of nouns, strife and contention, which balance Destruction and violence. Good News Translation translates these in modern terms as “there is fighting and quarreling everywhere.”

In some languages it will be necessary to use verbs to express the meaning of the second part of the verse. One may say “All around me people are attacking and oppressing others. Everywhere people are fighting and quarreling.”

Quoted with permission from Clark, David J. & Hatton, Howard A. A Handbook on the Book of Habakkuk. (UBS Helps for Translators). New York: UBS, 1989. For this and other handbooks for translators see here .

SIL Translator’s Notes on Habakkuk 1:3

1:3a Why do You make me see iniquity?

Why do you (sing.) force me to see ⌊all these⌋ evil deeds?
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Why ⌊do you allow their⌋ sinful actions, so I must continue to suffer from them?
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Why do you only make me look at the sins ⌊of people and do nothing about it⌋ ?
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I ⌊do not want to ⌋ see wicked acts ⌊towards others any longer⌋ .

1:3b Why do You tolerate wrongdoing?

When you (sing.) see the evil ⌊that people⌋ do, ⌊why do you not do anything⌋ ?
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Why do you ⌊not stop people who are⌋ doing evil things?
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⌊You should act when⌋ you see evil things that someone is doing.

1:3c Destruction and violence are before me.

Everywhere I see/experience destruction and violent oppression.
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People do cruel things and there is violence everywhere. (Easy English Bible)
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All around me ⌊people are⌋ harming and attacking ⌊each other⌋ with cruelty.

1:3d Strife is ongoing, and conflict abounds.

There are so many fights and quarrels ⌊all around⌋ .
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⌊Everywhere I see how they love to⌋ argue and struggle ⌊with each other⌋ .
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⌊They do not stop⌋ acting like enemies toward each other.

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Commentaire sur la traduction de Habaquq 1.3

Comme dans le verset précédent, il y a deux questions rhétoriques, mais elles se présentent ici sous la forme d’un chiasme. Cette structure met en valeur la vive émotion du prophète. Les deux mots malfaisance (אָוֶן ʾâwèn) et oppression (עָמָל ʿâmâl) se renforcent. Et dans la deuxième ligne, il y a un nouveau cas d’ellipse :
CH1 Pourquoi me fais-tu voir
CH2 malfaisance ?
CH2 Et oppression
CH1 regardes/tolères-tu ?

Dans la première ligne, le prophète demande à Dieu pourquoi lui, Habaquq, doit subir le mal, et dans la deuxième, pourquoi Dieu tolère l’oppression de l’ennemi. Comme plus haut, ces questions expriment les plaintes du prophète. Habaquq constate que partout il y a de la violence et du mal, mais Dieu ne semble pas réagir. Ici, encore, les traducteurs devraient examiner si ces formes interrogatives conviennent ou s’il vaut mieux utiliser des affirmations.

Pourquoi me fais-tu voir la malfaisance : le mot Pourquoi existe dans toutes les langues du monde, de sorte qu’il ne devrait pas poser de problème pour le traducteur. Mais s’il a le choix entre plusieurs possibilités, le traducteur tiendra compte du cadre poétique de ce message, ainsi que de son ton émotif. Dans la bouche d’Habaquq ici, Pourquoi évoque une plainte amère.

me fais-tu voir est, comme en hébreu, une forme causative du verbe voir. Le pronom tu se rapporte à Dieu, et me à Habaquq lui-même. Il est difficile de savoir si voir veut dire ici « voir de ses propres yeux » ou « subir lui-même » des maux et en être affligé. Habaquq n’est certainement pas le seul à voir des injustices qui sautent aux yeux de tout le monde, des Israélites en particulier.

malfaisance (hébreu : אָוֶן ʾâwèn) est rendu dans d’autres versions par « injustice » (Bible en français courant, La Bible du Semeur, Contemporary English Version) ou par « mal » (Parole de Vie, Nouvelle Bible Segond, NVS). La Bible de Jérusalem et Osty-Trinquet proposent « iniquité ». Le traducteur pourra trouver un terme générique pour le mal ou la méchanceté. Dans la ligne suivante, oppression est parallèle à malfaisance.

acceptes-tu le spectacle : le Pourquoi de la première ligne est sous-entendu ici. La Bible en français courant propose « Comment peux-tu… ». Dans beaucoup de langues, il sera bon de répéter « pourquoi » : « pourquoi acceptes-tu… »

acceptes-tu le spectacle rend un seul verbe hébreu qui signifie « regarder », sans doute au sens d’accepter, de « supporter », ou de « tolérer ». Il s’agit de regarder sans intervenir. Le mot spectacle ne se trouve pas en hébreu et il ne doit donc pas être repris dans la traduction.

tu : le texte massorétique (ver TMver*) a un verbe à la 2e personne du singulier (tu), rendu ainsi par la Traduction œcuménique de la Bible et la Bible de Jérusalem : « pourquoi regardes-tu l’oppression ? » Mais, en se basant sur le parallélisme, certains proposent « pourquoi dois-je regarder le méfait » (Osty-Trinquet). Cette interprétation correspond à celle attestée par des versions anciennes comme la Syriaque et le Targoum, de même que par la La Bible Pléiade et plusieurs versions anglaises. Mais d’autres versions suivent l’hébreu : « Pourquoi regardes-tu notre misère sans réagir ? » (Parole de Vie) ; « Peux-tu rester indifférent à nos tourments ? » (La Bible du Semeur). On pourrait aussi dire « Comment peux-tu tolérer l’oppression ? »

oppression : le même terme est utilisé en Deut 26.7 à propos des mauvais traitements subis par les Israélites. La Bible en français courant parle de « malheur ». On pourrait aussi parler de « tourments ». Les deux mots malfaisance et oppression apparaissent fréquemment ensemble (És 10.1 ; Ps 7.15). La version en anglais Contemporary English Version les combine en disant « injustice terrible ». Les traducteurs sont libres de suivre cet exemple si la langue cible ne dispose pas de deux termes. Néanmoins, on peut trouver dans la majorité de langues deux mots, dont l’un désigne le mal en général, et l’autre, la pratique concrète du mal.

Certaines versions réduisent ces deux questions en une seule, mais, si c’est possible, il vaut mieux garder la structure poétique telle quelle. Beaucoup de langues favorisent de telles répétitions, car elles permettent d’accentuer les thèmes d’un poème. Pour le début de ce verset, on pourrait donc dire :
Pourquoi me forces-tu à regarder le mal ?
Comment peux-tu (toi-même) supporter l’injustice ?

La suite du verset contient deux affirmations parallèles, avec plusieurs synonymes du terme clé violence. Littéralement, le texte hébreu dit :
Et ravage et violence (sont) en face de moi.
Et c’est dispute et conflit qui s’élèvent.

En face de moi ou « devant moi » est placé en hébreu à la fin de la première ligne et non au début (voir Traduction œcuménique de la Bible, Bible en français courant, Parole de Vie). La Bible en français courant propose « Autour de moi », et la Parole de Vie « Partout autour de moi ». La Bible de Jérusalem utilise une expression à l’actif : « Je ne vois que… », ce qui est une autre possibilité.

il n’y a que ravage et violence est littéralement « ravage et violence (en face de moi) », sans le verbe « être » ni une expression comme il y a. Dans la majorité des langues, il va falloir insérer une telle expression.

ravage et violence : en hébreu, les deux termes forment une paire de mots qui se complètent. Pour ravage, on peut dire « dévastation » ou « pillage ». Pour violence, voir Habaquq 1.2.

lorsqu’il y a procès, l’invective l’emporte : le mot rendu par procès (רִיב rîv) peut se référer à une « dispute » (Bible de Jérusalem) ou à des « querelles » (Nouvelle Bible Segond). Il est de la même racine que le verbe qui signifie « porter plainte contre quelqu’un », « accuser au tribunal », d’où lorsqu’il y a procès. On pourra utiliser une expression spécifique, ou plus générale : « lorsqu’il y a conflit » ou « désaccord ».

l’invective l’emporte veut dire que lorsqu’il y a des conflits, il n’y a pas de solution paisible. invective est rendu dans d’autres versions par « dispute » (Nouvelle Bible Segond) ou « querelles » (Bible en français courant).

L’expression l’emporter est littéralement « lever », « s’élever » (Nouvelle Bible Segond). Il n’y a pas pronom complément d’objet en hébreu. Il faudra trouver le verbe qui convient dans ce contexte. On pourrait même dire « les querelles éclatent partout ».

L’ensemble du verset pourrait être :
Pourquoi me fais-tu regarder le mal ?
Et comment peux-tu, toi, tolérer l’injustice ?
La destruction et la violence sont devant mes yeux,
Et partout il n’y a que disputes et querelles.

Source: Ellington, John; Margot, Jean-Claude & Zogbo, Lynell. Habaquq – Manuel de traduction – Commentaire linguistique et exégétique de la Bible. Alliance biblique universelle, 2013.