Following are a number of back-translations as well as a sample translation for translators of Proverbs 22:11:
Kupsabiny: “If a person loves righteous/straight words and speaks words that soften people, then the king becomes his friend.” (Source: Kupsabiny Back Translation)
Newari: “One whose heart is good and who speaks gently can even be friends with the king.” (Source: Newari Back Translation)
Hiligaynon: “A man who is sincere and gentle in speech will-become a friend of the king.” (Source: Hiligaynon Back Translation)
Kankanaey: “The one whose thoughts are clean and whose words cause-happiness is a friend of the king.” (Source: Kankanaey Back Translation)
English: “If you always act sincerely and always speak kindly, the king will be your friend.” (Source: Translation for Translators)
The structure of this verse is strange, and commentators suggest that the text is defective because it has been “damaged in transmission” (Scott). In contrast with the insulting speech and its consequences referred to in verse 10, this saying commends sincerity and gracious speech. In translating this verse the Hebrew structure “He who. . .” may also be expressed as “Whoever. . .” or “If a person . . . then. . ..”
“He who loves purity of heart”: “Purity of heart” means “integrity,” “pure motives,” or “sincerity.” Most versions either follow Revised Standard Version with “purity of heart” or “whose heart is pure,” or express “He who loves purity of heart” with something like “a person who is sincere.” The Septuagint adds “the Lord” at the beginning of this line, making the line say “The Lord loves a person to be sincere” (Revised English Bible). However, most versions translate the text as we have it in Hebrew; and Hebrew Old Testament Text Project recommends following the Hebrew (a “B” rating).
“And whose speech is gracious, will have the king as his friend”: The first expression in this line is literally “the grace of his lips.” Most versions render this like Revised Standard Version or say something like “and are gracious in speech” (New Revised Standard Version). Contemporary English Version “who . . . speak with kindness” also expresses the sense well. The final expression, “will have the king as his friend” is the main part of the sentence; as the text stands, all of the earlier part of the verse is the (double) subject of this main clause. In some versions the line arrangement is actually changed for the sake of balance; so New Revised Standard Version, for instance, has: “Those who love a pure heart and are gracious in speech will have the king as a friend.”
Quoted with permission from Reyburn, William D. and Fry, Euan McG. A Handbook on Proverbs. (UBS Helps for Translators). New York: UBS, 2000. For this and other handbooks for translators see here .
Some languages do not have a concept of kingship and therefore no immediate equivalent for the Greek, Hebrew, Aramaic, and Latin that is translated as “king” in English. Here are some (back-) translations:
Ninia Yali: “big brother with the uplifted name” (source: Daud Soesilio in Noss 2007, p. 175)
Nyamwezi: mutemi: generic word for ruler, by specifying the city or nation it becomes clear what kind of ruler (source: Pioneer Bible Translators, project-specific translation notes in Paratext)
Ghomála’: Fo (“The word Fo refers to the paramount ruler in the kingdoms of West Cameroon. He holds administrative, political, and religious power over his own people, who are divided into two categories: princes (descendants of royalty) and servants (everyone else).” (Source: Michel Kenmogne in Theologizing in Context: An Example from the Study of a Ghomala’ Christian Hymn))
Faye Edgerton retells how the term in Navajo (Dinė) was determined:
“[This term was] easily expressed in the language of Biblical culture, which had kings and noblemen with their brilliant trappings and their position of honor and praise. But leadership among the Navajos is not accompanied by any such titles or distinctions of dress. Those most respected, especially in earlier days, were their headmen, who were the leaders in raids, and the shaman, who was able to serve the people by appealing for them to the gods, or by exorcising evil spirits. Neither of these made any outward show. Neither held his position by political intrigue or heredity. If the headman failed consistently in raids, he was superceded by a better warrior. If the shaman failed many times in his healing ceremonies, it was considered that he was making mistakes in the chants, or had lost favor with the gods, and another was sought. The term Navajos use for headman is derived from a verb meaning ‘to move the head from side to side as in making an oration.’ The headman must be a good orator, able to move the people to go to war, or to follow him in any important decision. This word is naat’áanii which now means ‘one who rules or bosses.’ It is employed now for a foreman or boss of any kind of labor, as well as for the chairman of the tribal council. So in order to show that the king is not just a common boss but the highest ruler, the word ‘aláahgo, which expresses the superlative degree, was put before naat’áanii, and so ‘aláahgo naat’áanii ‘anyone-more-than-being around-he-moves-his-head-the-one-who’ means ‘the highest ruler.’ Naat’áanii was used for governor as the context usually shows that the person was a ruler of a country or associated with kings.”
This verse describes the character traits that are necessary to be a friend of the king.
11a He who loves a pure heart and gracious lips
11b will have the king for a friend.
The first line describes the character traits. The second line gives the result—the king is his friend.
22:11a
He who loves a pure heart and gracious lips: There are two main ways to interpret this part of the verse:
(1) It refers to a person who loves a pure heart and speaks graciously. For example:
Those who love a pure heart and are gracious in speech (New Revised Standard Version)
(2) It refers to a person who loves a pure heart and also loves gracious speech. For example:
Whoever loves pure thoughts and kind words (New Century Version)
It is recommended that you follow interpretation (1), along with most versions and scholars.
He who loves a pure heart: This clause refers to a person who values sincerity in himself. He wants his own thoughts and motives to be pure, unmixed with anything that is evil. The word pure was last used in 15:26b, where it referred to gracious words. See how you translated the word in that context.
and gracious lips: The second character trait that this person has is that he speaks kindly and persuasively. He speaks in a way that pleases and attracts others.
Some other ways to translate 22:11a are:
If a person values pure thoughts and uses kind words
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Those who truly want to be sincere and who speak in a way that is pleasant to others
22:11b
will have the king for a friend: The result of being sincere and speaking graciously is that even someone as important as the king will be this person’s friend. One way to make this emphasis explicit is:
even the king will be one of his friends
General Comment on 22:11a–b
In some languages, it may be more natural to change the order of the two lines. For example:
The king is the friend of all who are sincere and speak with kindness. (Contemporary English Version)
The Display for 22:11a–b (combined/reordered) uses a rhetorical question along with reordering. This may be a good option for some languages.
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