Following are a number of back-translations as well as a sample translation for translators of Psalm 137:3:
- Chichewa Contempary Chichewa translation, 2002/2016:
“for the people who captured us into slavery requested us that we sing songs.
Our persecutors wanted songs of celebration;
they said, ‘Sing for us one of the songs of Zion!’” (Source: Mawu a Mulungu mu Chichewa Chalero Back Translation)
- Newari:
“Those who had captured us caused us to sing songs,
Those who torment us say,
"Sing a joyful song for us!"
They say "Sing us a song of Zion!"” (Source: Newari Back Translation)
- Hiligaynon:
“The ones (who) captured us (excl.) made- us (excl.) -to-sing.
They commanded us (excl.) to entertain them.
They said, ‘[You (plur.)] sing us (excl.) a song about Zion!’” (Source: Hiligaynon Back Translation)
- Laarim:
“for the people who ruled us asked us that, ‘You sing songs.’
They really wanted our songs of joy,
and said to us, ‘You sing the songs of Zion!’” (Source: Laarim Back Translation)
- Nyakyusa-Ngonde (back-translation into Swahili):
“Kwa maana huko ambao walitushika katika utumwa,
wakataka tuwaimbie nyimbo.
Ambao walitudhihaki wakataka kwamba tuwafurahishe,
wakasema, ‘Tuimbieni wimbo mmoja wa katika Sayuni.’” (Source: Nyakyusa Back Translation)
- English:
“The soldiers who had captured us and taken us to Babylonia told us to sing for them;
they told us to entertain them/make them happy, saying,
‘Sing for us one of the songs that you previously sang in Jerusalem!’” (Source: Translation for Translators)
The Greek, Latin, Ge’ez, and Hebrew that is translated with “joy” or “gladness” in English is translated with various strategies:
- Baoulé: “a song in the stomach” (see also peace (inner peace))
- Bambara: “the spirit is made sweet”
- Kpelle: “sweet heart”
- Tzeltal: “the good taste of one’s heart”
- Uduk: “good to the stomach”
- Mískito: “the liver is wide open” (“happily letting the pleasures flooding in upon it”) (source for this and above: Nida 1952)
- Mairasi: “good liver” (source: Enggavoter 2004)
- Noongar: koort-kwabba-djil or “heart very good” (source: Warda-Kwabba Luke-Ang)
- Chicahuaxtla Triqui: “refreshed heart” (source: Waterhouse / Parrott in Notes on Translation October 1967, p. 1ff.).
- Hausa Common Language Bible: farin ciki or “white stomach.” Other languages that use the same expression include Southern Birifor (pʋpɛl), Dera (popolok awo), Reshe (ɾipo ɾipuhã). (Source: Andy Warren-Rothlin)
See also Seat of the Mind for traditional views of “ways of knowing, thinking, and feeling,” happiness / joy, and exceeding joy.
Many languages distinguish between inclusive and exclusive first-person plural pronouns (“we”). (Click or tap here to see more details)
The inclusive “we” specifically includes the addressee (“you and I and possibly others”), while the exclusive “we” specifically excludes the addressee (“he/she/they and I, but not you”). This grammatical distinction is called “clusivity.” While Semitic languages such as Hebrew or most Indo-European languages such as Greek or English do not make that distinction, translators of languages with that distinction have to make a choice every time they encounter “we” or a form thereof (in English: “we,” “our,” or “us”).
For this verse, the Jarai translation uses the exclusive pronoun. The Adamawa Fulfulde translation also uses the inclusive pronoun at first but then switches to exclusive (“Sing us”).
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