10Now you, mortal, say to the house of Israel: Thus you have said: “Our transgressions and our sins weigh upon us, and we waste away because of them; how then can we live?”
Many languages distinguish between inclusive and exclusive first-person plural pronouns (“we”). (Click or tap here to see more details)
The inclusive “we” specifically includes the addressee (“you and I and possibly others”), while the exclusive “we” specifically excludes the addressee (“he/she/they and I, but not you”). This grammatical distinction is called “clusivity.” While Semitic languages such as Hebrew or most Indo-European languages such as Greek or English do not make that distinction, translators of languages with that distinction have to make a choice every time they encounter “we” or a form thereof (in English: “we,” “our,” or “us”).
For this verse, the Jarai and the Adamawa Fulfulde translation both use the exclusive pronoun, excluding the Lord.
The Hebrew, Ge’ez, and Greek that is typically translated as “sin” in English has a wide variety of translations.
The Greek ἁμαρτάνω (hamartanō) carries the original verbatim meaning of “miss the mark” and likewise, many translations contain the “connotation of moral responsibility.”
Loma: “leaving the road” (which “implies a definite standard, the transgression of which is sin”)
Navajo (Dinė): “that which is off to the side” (source for this and above: Bratcher / Nida)
Toraja-Sa’dan: kasalan, originally meaning “transgression of a religious or moral rule” and in the context of the Bible “transgression of God’s commandments” (source: H. van der Veen in The Bible Translator 1950, p. 21ff. )
Bariai: “bad behavior” (source: Bariai Back Translation)
Sandawe: “miss the mark” (like the original meaning of the Greek term) (source for this and above: Ursula Wiesemann in Holzhausen / Riderer 2010, p. 36ff., 43)
Nias: horö, originally a term primarily used for sexual sin. (Source: Hummel / Telaumbanua 2007, p. 256)
In Shipibo-Conibo the term is hocha. Nida (1952, p. 149) tells the story of its choosing: “In some instances a native expression for sin includes many connotations, and its full meaning must be completely understood before one ever attempts to use it. This was true, for example, of the term hocha first proposed by Shipibo-Conibo natives as an equivalent for ‘sin.’ The term seemed quite all right until one day the translator heard a girl say after having broken a little pottery jar that she was guilty of ‘hocha.’ Breaking such a little jar scarcely seemed to be sin. However, the Shipibos insisted that hocha was really sin, and they explained more fully the meaning of the word. It could be used of breaking a jar, but only if the jar belonged to someone else. Hocha was nothing more nor less than destroying the possessions of another, but the meaning did not stop with purely material possessions. In their belief God owns the world and all that is in it. Anyone who destroys the work and plan of God is guilty of hocha. Hence the murderer is of all men most guilty of hocha, for he has destroyed God’s most important possession in the world, namely, man. Any destructive and malevolent spirit is hocha, for it is antagonistic and harmful to God’s creation. Rather than being a feeble word for some accidental event, this word for sin turned out to be exceedingly rich in meaning and laid a foundation for the full presentation of the redemptive act of God.”
Martin Ehrensvärd, one of the translators for the DanishBibelen 2020, comments on the translation of this term: “We would explain terms, such that e.g. sin often became ‘doing what God does not want’ or ‘breaking God’s law’, ‘letting God down’, ‘disrespecting God’, ‘doing evil’, ‘acting stupidly’, ‘becoming guilty’. Now why couldn’t we just use the word sin? Well, sin in contemporary Danish, outside of the church, is mostly used about things such as delicious but unhealthy foods. Exquisite cakes and chocolates are what a sin is today.” (Source: Ehrensvärd in HIPHIL Novum 8/2023, p. 81ff. )
Following are a number of back-translations as well as a sample translation for translators of Ezekiel 33:10:
Kupsabiny: “Ezekiel, go and tell the people of Israel: You are saying, ‘Our sins and rebellion have become too heavy for us. How can we stay alive/be well?’” (Source: Kupsabiny Back Translation)
Hiligaynon: “‘Man, the people of Israel complain that they could not bear the punishment of their sins. They became-weak now and they are about to die now as-it-is-said because of this.” (Source: Hiligaynon Back Translation)
English: “You human, say to the Israeli people, ‘This is what you all are saying: ‘The guilt that we have for disobeying God’s laws and sinning is like a heavy weight on us, and it is hurting us, and we are slowly dying. So what can we do to continue to remain alive?’’” (Source: Translation for Translators)
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Like a number of other East Asian languages, Japanese uses a complex system of honorifics, i.e. a system where a number of different levels of politeness are expressed in language via words, word forms or grammatical constructs. These can range from addressing someone or referring to someone with contempt (very informal) to expressing the highest level of reference (as used in addressing or referring to God) or any number of levels in-between.
One way Japanese shows different degree of politeness is through the choice of a formal plural suffix to the second person pronoun (“you” and its various forms) as shown here in the widely-used Japanese Shinkaiyaku (新改訳) Bible of 2017. In these verses, anata-gata (あなたがた) is used, combining the second person pronoun anata and the plural suffix -gata to create a formal plural pronoun (“you” [plural] in English).
Since Good News Translation places a heading before this verse, it begins with the quote frame “The LORD spoke to me” (similarly Contemporary English Version) to remind the reader that God is speaking to Ezekiel. Other languages may find this addition helpful.
And you, son of man, say to the house of Israel: For son of man, see Ezek 33.2; for the house of Israel, see Ezek 33.7.
Thus have you said: The Hebrew pronoun for you is plural since it refers to the Israelites. This quote frame introduces what they were saying (compare the proverb in 18.2). It may be rendered “You are saying” (New International Reader’s Version, New Living Translation).
Our transgressions and our sins are upon us: The Hebrew word for transgressions refers to turning away from the straight way (see 14.11); the word for sins refers to the mistakes that come from missing the mark (see 3.19). Our transgressions and our sins are upon us means their sins are weighing them down like a heavy burden, making life hard for them. New International Reader’s Version has “Our sins and the wrong things we have done weigh us down,” and New Living Translation says simply “Our sins are heavy upon us.” New Century Version translates “Surely our law-breaking and sins are hurting us.” “Surely” renders the Hebrew word ki, which is an emphatic particle here.
And we waste away because of them: Although the Hebrew verb rendered waste away usually refers to “rotting” flesh (compare English Standard Version “rot away”; see the comments on 4.17), here it is used figuratively for the emotional state of the Israelites. They are suffering great stress and distress because of their sins, and this was probably affecting their physical health as well. A good rendering for this clause is “We are greatly distressed because of our sins.”
How then can we live?: The people are so distressed that they have given up hope. Jerusalem Bible and New Jerusalem Bible say “How are we to go on living?” New Living Translation, New American Bible, and New Jewish Publication Society’s Tanakh have “How can we survive?” This is a rhetorical question, expecting the answer “No,” so translators may use a strong statement, such as “We cannot survive!”
There are three levels of quotation in this verse. In many languages it will be better to have only one or two levels. Good News Translation reduces them to two by saying “ ‘Mortal man,’ he said, ‘repeat to the Israelites what they are saying: “We are burdened with our sins and the wrongs we have done. We are wasting away. How can we live?” ’ ” Contemporary English Version has only one level as follows: “Ezekiel, son of man, the people of Israel are complaining that the punishment for their sins is more than they can stand. They have lost all hope for survival, and they blame me.”
Quoted with permission from Gross, Carl & Stine, Philip C. A Handbook on Ezekiel. (UBS Helps for Translators). Miami: UBS, 2016. For this and other handbooks for translators see here .
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