Following are a number of back-translations as well as a sample translation for translators of 1 Samuel 18:9:
Kupsabiny: “From that day onwards, Saul began to blackstomach (be envious towards) David.” (Source: Kupsabiny Back Translation)
Newari: “From that day, Saul started to feel jealous of David.” (Source: Newari Back Translation)
Hiligaynon: “So from that-time-on Saul would-watch David carefully because he (was) jealous of him.” (Source: Hiligaynon Back Translation)
English: “From that time, Saul watched David very closely because he was suspicious that David would try to become king.” (Source: Translation for Translators)
And translates the Hebrew verb traditionally rendered in English “and it came to pass” (see page 19).
Saul eyed David: this verb appears only here in the Old Testament and means “to eye or treat with suspicion.” La Bible Pléiade renders this “Saul saw David with an evil eye.” Contemporary English Version translates the meaning more dynamically: “Saul never again trusted David.” Klein may also be helpful: “Saul watched David suspiciously from that time forward.”
Quoted with permission from Omanson, Roger L. and Ellington, John E. A Handbook on the First and Second Books of Samuel, Volume 1. (UBS Helps for Translators). New York: UBS, 2001. For this and other handbooks for translators see here .
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