Following are a number of back-translations as well as a sample translation for translators of Ezekiel 17:10:
Kupsabiny: “It may well be planted but will it be able to grow? Will it not wither when it grows when the wind of East blows on it?’ ’” (Source: Kupsabiny Back Translation)
Hiligaynon: “Even-though it would still be-planted in a different place it will- no-longer -grow. It will- wither -completely when the hot wind will-blow from the east. Yes, it will-wither in its place-where-(it is)-growing.’” (Source: Hiligaynon Back Translation)
English: “Even if that vine is transplanted, it certainly will not continue to grow. When the hot wind from the east blows against it, it will completely wither, there where it was planted! ’ ’” (Source: Translation for Translators)
According to Anne Garber Kompaoré (in Le Sycomore 3/2009, p. 34ff. ), there are 4 ways to identify cardinal directions:
1. celestial bodies, especially the sun and certain stars
2. geographical landmarks, for example a mountain, sea, or river (depending on its position or the direction in which the water flows) etc.
3. climatic phenomena, such as the wind and the direction from which rain comes
4. bodily reference points, especially front, back, left, and right, in relation to celestial bodies or geographical landmarks
Following are examples of how these are practically implemented by various languages: (click or tap here to see the rest of this insight)
Celestial Bodies
East and west are often translated by the rising and the setting of the sun (note that the origin of English and other Indo-European languages is “dawn” for “east” and “evening” [i.e. sun-down] for “west”):
Maan: “where the sun comes up” and “where the sun goes down” (source: Don Slager)
Kankanaey: “from the coming-out of the sun “and “going-away of the sun” (source: Kankanaey back-translation)
Northern Emberá: “from where the sun comes up” and “from where the sun falls” (source: Charles Mortensen)
Ejamat “the side where the sun comes from” and “the side where it sets” (source: David Frank in this blog post )
Tzeltal: “where the sun pours-out” (west) (source: Reiling / Swellengrebel)
Northern Ngbandi: “the sun behind the chief’s house” (east — the chief lives traditionally at the eastern side of the village, therefore he does not get the sunlight into his eyes) and “under the sun” (west)
Northwestern Dinka: “earth behind” (east — the place behind the earth, i.e. the area where the sun rises)
Jula: “salt village” (north — because salt comes from the north, from the Sahara Desert) and “kola village” (south — since kola comes from the coastal region to the south) (source: Garber Kompaoré)
Matumbi: “toward the beach” (East) (the coast is in the eastern direction in Matumbi-speaking areas), “north” and “south” can be defined as above or below another place (Source: Pioneer Bible Translators, project-specific notes in Paratext)
Acoli: “right” (of the local White Nile) (north) and “left” (of the White Nile) (south)
Zande: “interior (dry) land” (east); “place-inside-country” (north / south) — Zande, like a number of other languages, including Matengo and Hehe, traditionally only has three cardinal directions.
Belanda Bor: “lower place” (north) and “higher place” (south)
Turkana: “(up)stream” (north) and (down)stream (south)
Mono (DRC): “water place” (south) (source for this and five above: Mietzner / Pasch)
Climatic Phenomena
Shilluk: “opening westwind” (north) and “opening eastwind” (south)
Swahili used to have six directions. In reducing them to four, kusini and kaskazini which used to refer to south-west and north east respectively (the directions from where the two monsoons blow) have become the terms for “south” and north.” (source for this and one above: Mietzner / Pasch)
Bodily Reference Points
Nuer / Burun: “face” and “sun face” respectively (both: east)
Kalenjin: “eye sun” (east) (this and the one above indicate that the sun is “facing” the spectator from its position in the east:
Shilluk: doesn’t use a fixed position of the speaker, instead it has “eye sun morning” for east and “eye sun evening” for west
Mono (DRC): “foot-sun” (east — the start of the sun’s journey)
Burun: “sun leg” (west — the end of the sun’s journey)
Bari: “back” (north — when people are facing south, north is at their back) (source for this and above: Mietzner / Pasch)
Northern Emberá “the looking [left] hand” (north) and “the real [right] hand” (south) (source: Charles Mortensen)
Morelos Nahuatl: “from above” (north) and “from below” (south) (source: Viola Waterhouse in Notes on Translation August 1966, p. 86ff.)
When all four directions are mentioned, translators tend to avoid listing the four, sometimes verbose terms, and chose solutions like “all directions” (such as in Maan or Manya (source: Don Slager). Yakan has “from the four corners of the earth” (source: Yakan back-translation) and Western Bukidnon Manobo “from the four directions here on the earth” (source: Western Bukidnon Manobo back-translation).
The Hebrew text that gives instructions where to place items in the tabernacle with the help of cardinal directions (north and south) had to be approached in the Bambam translation specific to spacial concepts of that culture. Phil Campbell explains: “There are no words in Bambam for north and south. In Exodus 26:35, God instructs that the table is to be placed on the north side and the lamp on the south side inside the tabernacle. The team wants to use right and left to tell where the lamp and table are located. In many languages we would say that the table is on the right and the lampstand is on the left based on the view of someone entering the tabernacle. However, that is not how Bambam people view it. They view the placement of things and rooms in a building according to the orientation of someone standing inside the building facing the front of the building. So that means the table is on the left side and the lampstand is on the right side.”
Behold, when it is transplanted, will it thrive?: The Hebrew word hinneh rendered Behold (see Ezek 17.7) draws the attention of the hearers back to the question at hand, which is will it thrive? (see Ezek 17.9). Again Revised Standard Version uses the word transplanted, even though the Hebrew says simply “planted” (Good News Translation, King James Version / New King James Version, New American Standard Bible, Jerusalem Bible, New American Bible, Moffatt, Die Bibel im heutigen Deutsch; see the comments on Ezek 17.8). There is no need to assume that this verse suggests that the vine will be moved to another plot of ground. The clause “it is planted” (Good News Translation) simply heightens the force of the question—the vine has been properly planted, so it should grow, but will it? Good News Translation expresses this whole question well, saying “Yes, it is planted, but will it live and grow?” Since this is a rhetorical question, it can also be expressed as a statement by saying “Yes, it is planted, but it will not live and grow.”
Will it not utterly wither when the east wind strikes it…?: The east wind is the sirocco, the hot wind that blows in off the desert, and when it strikes, that is, blows on the vine, the vine will wither completely. Translators for whom the east wind is not a hot wind may say “a very hot wind.” Utterly wither renders a strong expression in Hebrew in which the verb for “wither” is repeated. It may be translated “completely shrivel up and die.” Again, translators in some languages will find it more natural to express this rhetorical question as a statement, as in “When the hot wind from the east blows on it, the vine will shrivel up completely and die.”
Wither away on the bed where it grew: The Hebrew word for wither has already occurred four times in verses 9-10, and now it occurs a fifth time for additional emphasis. Wither away on the bed where it grew is generally understood as another question, but it could also be a concluding statement (so New Jerusalem Bible). Translators may choose either understanding. On the bed where it grew means in the place where it was planted (see Ezek 17.7). This clause emphasizes that the vine will die, despite being planted in good soil where it should have grown very well. New Living Translation says “It will die in the same good soil where it had grown so well.” Translators may also say “It will dry up and die right in the place where it was planted [or, where the eagle planted it]” or “Won’t it dry up and die right in the place where the eagle planted it?”
Quoted with permission from Gross, Carl & Stine, Philip C. A Handbook on Ezekiel. (UBS Helps for Translators). Miami: UBS, 2016. For this and other handbooks for translators see here .
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