“Good sense wins favor”: “Sense” translates the same word used in 12.8 and is qualified here by “Good”. “Good sense” is the equivalent of intelligence or sound judgment in decision-making. In 1 Sam 25.3 Abigail, the wife of Nabal (“fool”), is described in Hebrew by this expression. “Wins favor”, literally “gives grace,” means that such a person is favorably or positively regarded by others, or, as Contemporary English Version says, “praised.”
“But the way of the faithless is their ruin”: As the Revised Standard Version note shows, the Hebrew text has “enduring” in place of “their ruin”. It is difficult, if not impossible, to obtain a meaningful sentence from the Hebrew of this line, which is literally “the way of the treacherous is eternal.” It is also not possible to obtain a contrast between the two lines as the Hebrew text stands. “The way” refers to the conduct or behavior of the “faithless”, that is, the wicked. For “faithless” refer to “treacherous” in verse 2 since it is the same word in Hebrew. “Is their ruin” is based on the Septuagint and is followed by Good News Translation, New English Bible/Revised English Bible, and Contemporary English Version. On the other hand Hebrew Old Testament Text Project rates the Hebrew text as “B” and recommends translating the second line “The way of the wicked is hard.” Some versions that follow Hebrew Old Testament Text Project are New Jerusalem Bible “but the way of the treacherous is hard” and New International Version “but the way of the unfaithful is hard” (in its note New International Version has the alternative “unfaithful does not endure”). New Jewish Publication Society Version has “harsh” in its footnote. Translators may follow either the Hebrew Old Testament Text Project model or that of Revised Standard Version and Good News Translation.
Quoted with permission from Reyburn, William D. and Fry, Euan McG. A Handbook on Proverbs. (UBS Helps for Translators). New York: UBS, 2000. For this and other handbooks for translators see here .

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