13David said to his men, “Every man strap on his sword!” And every one of them strapped on his sword; David also strapped on his sword, and about four hundred men went up after David, while two hundred remained with the baggage.
the Hebrew, Ge’ez, and Greek that is translated with “sword” in English is translated in Tepeuxila Cuicatec as “machete that is sharp on two sides,” in Lalana Chinantec as “machete” and in San Mateo del Mar Huave as “knife.” (Source: Viola Waterhouse in Notes on Translation August 1966, p. 86ff.)
Following are a number of back-translations as well as a sample translation for translators of 1 Samuel 25:13:
Kupsabiny: “David told his people that, ‘Let each one properly tighten his sword.’ David also tied himself (prepared). David went with four hundred men and left two hundred men to guard the things in the camp.” (Source: Kupsabiny Back Translation)
Newari: “David said to his men, "Each one take his sword!" They all tied their swords to their waists and David also tied his sword to [his] waist. About 400 men went following David and about 200 men stayed to watch the luggage.” (Source: Newari Back Translation)
Hiligaynon: “Then David said to his men, ‘Fasten-on your (plur.) swords!’ So they fastened-on their swords, and David also did so. About 400 men went with David. 200 stayed-behind to-watch-over the baggage/supplies/cargo.” (Source: Hiligaynon Back Translation)
English: “When David heard that, he told his men, ‘We are going to kill Nabal; fasten your swords!’ So he fastened on his sword and about 400 men fastened on their swords and went with David. There were 200 of his men who stayed with their supplies.” (Source: Translation for Translators)
The direct quotation at the beginning of this verse may be made into indirect discourse if this seems more natural in the receptor language: “David instructed all his men to put on their swords.”
The verb gird/girded, which occurs three times in this verse, is rendered by the less archaic expression “strap/strapped on” in New Revised Standard Version.
After David: the preposition rendered after in Revised Standard Version may be understood to mean that the men went “behind” David as he led the way, or simply that they went “with” him.
Baggage: that is, the military supplies. The same word is translated “armor” in 17.54 and “weapons” in 20.40 and 21.8. Here it probably includes both. See the comments at 10.22.
Quoted with permission from Omanson, Roger L. and Ellington, John E. A Handbook on the First and Second Books of Samuel, Volume 1. (UBS Helps for Translators). New York: UBS, 2001. For this and other handbooks for translators see here .
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