complete verse (Ecclesiastes 3:22)

Following are a number of back-translations as well as a sample translation for translators of Ecclesiastes 3:22:

  • Kupsabiny: “So/therefore, I have come to know that it is very good for a person to enjoy/benefit from what he has worked hard for, since that is his. There is no way a person can know what is going to happen after he has died.” (Source: Kupsabiny Back Translation)
  • Newari: “Since it is like that, I have concluded that there is nothing better for a man than to rejoice in his work, for this is the work he is to do. For who is there able to show him what will happen later on?” (Source: Newari Back Translation)
  • Hiligaynon: “So I have-realized that the best/[lit. most good] (thing) a man can do is to take-pleasure of what he had-labored/toiled-for, for that is surely for him. No one can-tell a man what will-happen after he dies.” (Source: Hiligaynon Back Translation)
  • English: “So I concluded that the best thing for us people to do is to be happy about the work that we do, because that is what God has given to us. I say that because no one of us knows what happens to us after we die.” (Source: Translation for Translators)

Translation commentary on Ecclesiastes 3:22

Left without any way to test what happens to the human spirit after death, Qoheleth now offers advice that he thinks appropriate under the circumstances. We meet for the third time the call to enjoyment (see also 2.24; 3.12).

As this verse ends a major section, it may be possible to mark this important conclusion by special discourse markers. Revised Standard Version goes in this direction with the conjunction So. Bible en français courant uses a conclusive “Then.” If it seems natural in the translator’s language, this verse can be treated as a separate paragraph. In many languages, however, its position as the last verse in the chapter may serve to show that it is an important concluding remark.

So I saw that frequently introduces Qoheleth’s conclusions based on what he has observed. Since there is no way he can answer questions about what happens after death, Qoheleth gives the most positive advice possible.

There is nothing better than that a man should enjoy his work means that there is nothing more rewarding than enjoying what God gives. Whereas in other examples of the theme of enjoyment there is reference to “eating,” “drinking,” and “working,” here there is only the one word work, of finding pleasure in everything a person does. Because of the very broad meaning of the word “do,” it is probable that here it includes all the other activities normally listed in the calls to enjoyment rather than merely describing a person’s job of work or “labor.”

The singular a man should be rendered by a term that applies to either male or female, such as “a person,” “a human,” or the plural “people” or “human beings.”

For that is his lot presents the basic conclusion that this is what God has proposed for us. The singular pronoun that following the plural “works” suggests that the pronoun refers not to “works” but to the task of enjoying what we do (as in 2.24-25). This fact can be made clear in translation. What Revised Standard Version translates as lot requires comment, as the actual text has the word “portion.” A “lot” means an assigned task, whereas “portion” indicates that enjoyment is actually our reward when we do what God asks of us. This understanding links this saying with the other “better” sayings, in which God provides enjoyment. For this reason Good News Translation “There is nothing else we can do” and its footnoted possibilities are not appropriate models.

In some languages, especially in Africa, the literal idea of “portion” (of food) is often extended to mean other nonphysical benefits. Thus a more literal translation here may be very effective.

One possible translation is:

• So I concluded that the best thing people can do is to enjoy their work. Enjoyment is our reward.

Who can bring him to see what will be after him?: this clause, like the one before it, begins with the particle ki. It probably is intended as a second justification for the advice about enjoyment. Again we note that the rhetorical question is really a negative statement that nobody can tell what happens after death. The phrase what will be after him has two possible meanings: one is what happens to the individual after passing from this world; the other is what happens here on earth after a person departs from it. In this context it is probably the first meaning that is intended. We may translate it “for nobody can demonstrate what happens to us after we die” or “because no one is able to show people what happens after death.” The Good News Translation model is also acceptable.

Quoted with permission from Ogden, Graham S. and Zogbo, Lynell. A Handbook on the Book of Ecclesiates. (UBS Helps for Translators). New York: UBS, 1997. For this and other handbooks for translators see here .

SIL Translator’s Notes on Ecclesiastes 3:22

3:22a I have seen that there is nothing better for a man than to enjoy his work,

So I realized that there is nothing better for people to do than to be satisfied with their work.
-or-
So a person should enjoy their work. I saw that thereʼs nothing better for them to do than that,

3:22b because that is his lot.

⌊I say that⌋ because that ⌊satisfaction⌋ is their reward ⌊for working⌋ .
-or-
because that is all they have.

3:22c For who can bring him to see what will come after him?

After all, who can show them what will happen after they are gone? (New International Reader’s Version) ⌊Nobody can.⌋
-or-

⌊No one⌋ can show them what will happen ⌊to them⌋ after ⌊they die⌋ .

3:22a-c (Reordered)

So I realized that people should enjoy the work that they do. That is the best thing for us to do. It is what God has provided for us. I think that is best, because nobody can show us what will finally happen to us. (EEB)
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Who can bring them to see what will happen ⌊to them⌋ after they die? ⌊Nobody can.⌋ Therefore I saw that there is nothing better for people than to enjoy their work, because that is what God gave them.

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Commentaire sur la traduction de l'Ecclésiaste 3.22

En guise de conclusion à cette section, encore une fois Qohéleth fait son « appel à la réjouissance ». Qohéleth se concentre ici sur la joie des fruits de son travail.

Le texte dit, litt. « et j’ai vu » au perfectif, mais certaines versions préfèrent le présent, Je vois (Traduction œcuménique de la Bible, Parole de Vie, Bible de Jérusalem).

qu’il n’y a rien de mieux pour l’homme que de jouir de ses œuvres est litt. « il n’y a pas de bon plus que il se réjouit הָאָדָם hâʾâdâm dans ses œuvres ». Le terme clé טוֹב ṭôv, « bon », réapparaît encore une fois. Voir Ecc 3.12. Alors que dans la référence il s’agit d’un appel général à la réjouissance ici il s’agit spécifiquement des œuvres. Pour ce dernier, voir Ecc 1.14 ; Ecc 2.4, etc.

car telle est sa part : l’hébreu dit litt. « car cela sa portion ». Pour part, voir Ecc 2.10.

Qui en effet l’emmènera voir ce qui sera après lui ? : Qohéleth pose encore une autre question rhétorique, cette fois-ci avec beaucoup d’ironie. En effet, après la mort, personne ne ramènera le défunt dans ce monde pour constater ce qui s’est passé avec ce qu’il a laissé derrière lui. Le texte hébreu dit litt. « car qui le fera venir pour voir cela ? ». Le premier mot, כִּי kî, pourra être rendu par « car » ou par une expression comme en effet (Parole de Vie). Dans certaines langues, les traducteurs jugeront bien s’il faudra changer la question en affirmation forte, par exemple, « personne ne l’emmènera voir ce qui arrivera après lui. » (Bible en français courant).

emmènera rend le causatif du verbe « venir ». Le sens est que personne ne « fera revenir » (La Bible du Semeur, Nouvelle Bible Segond) quelqu’un de la mort.

voir ce qui sera après lui est litt. « pour voir dans quoi qu’il sera après lui ». Dans beaucoup de langues, on utilisera un verbe comme « se passer » ou « arriver ». Les traducteurs parleront soit des humains au pluriel (Parole de Vie), soit de l’être humain au singulier (Bible en français courant). La Parole de Vie donne un bon modèle : « Je le vois, donc, le seul bonheur des humains, c’est de profiter de leurs activités. En effet, personne ne les emmènera voir ce qui arrivera après eux ».

4.1-3

Qohéleth continue sa réflexion sur la vie, se concentrant dans cette section sur l’injustice dans le monde. La division du texte est bien démarquée par une introduction assez longue, litt. « et je me suis retourné et j’ai vu… » On pourrait commencer un nouveau paragraphe ou une nouvelle strophe ici. Certaines versions y insèrent un sous-titre, comme la Traduction œcuménique de la Bible qui dit « Le sort des opprimés ». Mais d’autres laissent couler le texte, considérant que cette section fait partie de la discussion précédente.

Ce passage est marqué par beaucoup de répétition :
• · la racine עשׁק ʿšq, « opprimer » figure trois fois,
• · la phrase « il n’y a pas de consolateur » figure deux fois,
• · il y a de nombreuses constructions doubles : « les morts qui sont déjà morts », « les vivants qui vivent encore », « les choses faites qui ont été faites ».

Tout ceci exprime l’émotion forte ressentie par l’auteur. Ce ne sont pas toutes les langues qui apprécieront une telle répétition, mais les traducteurs devraient essayer de rendre le ton de détresse et de désespoir dans ces lignes.

Source: Zogbo, Lynell. L’Ecclésiaste – Manuel de traduction – Commentaire linguistique et exégétique de la Bible. Alliance biblique universelle, 2021.