Translation commentary on Revelation 3:12

He who conquers: see the comments at 2.7. Here, unlike the translation of this phrase in the other letters, Good News Translation has the singular because of the actions that follow. The plural can be used, with the addition of “each one of them” to the verb phrase I will write on. New Revised Standard Version uses the second person singular, “If you conquer…”; but this can be taken to mean the angel of the church instead of the members of the church. It is more likely that the third person is intended here. Other ways of rendering this are “the one (or, person) who conquers,” “whoever conquers,” and so on.

I will make him a pillar in the temple of my God: the common meaning of pillar is a stone or wooden post that supports a building. Here, however, as the following clause makes clear, the meaning is that this is an important part of the building, one that is put solidly in place and will last as long as the temple of my God, which is the eternal kingdom of God. The word used to translate temple should be quite generic, indicating a building used for worship; nothing so specific as “church,” or “cathedral,” or “synagogue” should be used. For the possessive my God see the comment at 3.2. In this context God does not belong to the speaker, Christ, but Christ serves God.

Never shall he go out of it: the pillar is solidly, permanently, eternally, a part of the temple of God. Nothing, no one, can remove it. The meaning may be expressed in a positive manner, “and he will always remain there,” or else retain the negative, “he will never have to leave it.”

In what follows, the Greek text can be understood to mean that the pillar is the object of the action of writing: “I will write on the pillar” (so New Jerusalem Bible). But it seems more likely that it is the person, or persons, who is referred to as a pillar (so most translations).

For the names written on “those who conquer,” see the similar statements in 14.1; 22.4. Here the name of my God indicates that this person belongs to the God of the glorified Christ; the name of the city of my God means that person is a citizen of the eternal city, the new Jerusalem which comes down from my God out of heaven (see 21.2, 10). Instead of comes down it is better to translate “will (soon) come down.” Some languages, like English, have two words, “sky” and “heaven,” to translate the one Greek noun that covers both. In a passage like this, “sky” would not be a faithful translation of the Greek, inasmuch as the emphasis on the passage is that the new Jerusalem owes its existence to God, who dwells in heaven (see also 4.1). The last name, my own new name, is not easy to identify. Perhaps it refers to the name “The Word of God” (19.12-13), or the name “King of kings and Lord of lords” (19.16), or “the Lamb” (5.6), which appears fifty times in this book.

An alternative translation model for this verse is:

• I will make the person who conquers the powers of evil an important post in the big house for worshiping God whom I serve. This person will never have to leave there. I will write on him the name of my God and the name New Jerusalem, which is the name of the city of my God, which will come down from God out of heaven. I will also write on him my own new name.

Quoted with permission from Bratcher, Robert G. and Hatton, Howard A. A Handbook on The Revelation to John. (UBS Handbook Series). New York: UBS, 1993. For this and other handbooks for translators see here .

SIL Translator’s Notes on Revelation 3:12

3:12a

The one who overcomes I will make: The phrase The one who overcomes is emphasized by being first in the clause. Jesus will cause/make this person to become like a pillar. If you have a natural way in your language to emphasize the phrase The one who overcomes, you may want to do so. For example:

He who conquers, I will make him (Revised Standard Version)

In some languages it is not natural to have the phrase The one who overcomes first in the clause. For example:

I will make him who overcomes

The one who overcomes: The word overcomes means “triumphs” or “obtains/wins victory.” Translate this phrase as you translated it in 3:5. Notice that the word one is the object, not the subject, of the main verb “make.”

a pillar in the temple of My God: This phrase probably refers symbolically to being in the presence of God.

In some languages a literal translation would not have the correct meaning. If that is true in your language, you may want to:

Explain the meaning in your translation. For example:

I will make him ⌊to be like⌋ a pillar in the temple of My God.
-or-
I will cause him ⌊to be always in my God’s presence like⌋ a pillar in His temple.

Translate literally and explain its meaning in a footnote. An example footnote is:

The overcomer/victor is like “a pillar in the temple of my God” because he will always be in God’s presence.

pillar: The word pillar refers to a column/post that supports a building or roof.

Pillars were made from stacked stone blocks, so they were strong for a very long time.

temple: The word temple refers to a building where God or another deity is believed to be present in a special way. People worship there.

3:12b

and he will never again leave it: This clause continues to use the symbol of a temple to represent the presence of God. Jesus indicated that the faithful believer would never need to leave God’s presence. Other ways to translate this clause are:

he will never depart from it (NET Bible)
-or-
he will always remain there

3:12c

Upon him I will write the name of My God: This clause is a figure of speech which indicates that the one who overcomes sin belongs to God.

In some languages a literal translation would not clearly indicate or imply that the overcomer belongs to God. If that is true in your language, you may want to:

Explain the meaning in your translation. For example:

I will write on him the name of my God ⌊to mark/show that he belongs to God
-or-
I will write on him the name of my God ⌊to mark/show that God is his Lord/Master

Translate literally and explain its meaning in a footnote. An example footnote is:

Jesus will write the name of God on the one who overcomes. The name shows that he or she belongs to God.

3:12d

and the name of the city of My God (the new Jerusalem: Jesus said that he will also write the name of the new Jerusalem on any believer who overcomes. This name indicates that the one who overcomes is a citizen of the new Jerusalem. He belongs to this city and has a right to live there.

In some languages a literal translation would not indicate or imply the correct meaning. If that is true in your language, you may want to:

Explain the meaning in your translation. For example:

I will mark him as a citizen of the city of my God, the new Jerusalem

Translate literally and explain its meaning in a footnote. An example footnote is:

This indicates that the one who overcomes belongs to the new Jerusalem. He has the right to live there as a citizen.

the city of My God (the new Jerusalem: The phrases the city of My God and the new Jerusalem refer to the same thing. They both refer to the heavenly city described in Revelation 21:1–22:5. In some languages the connection must be made clear in a different way. For example:

the name of the city of my God, [which is] new Jerusalem (King James Version)
-or-
the name of his city. It is the new Jerusalem (Contemporary English Version)

3:12e–f

that comes down out of heaven from My God: This clause tells the reader more about the new Jerusalem. In some languages a literal translation would wrongly indicate that there are other new Jerusalems and only this one comes out of heaven. If that is true in your language, translate this clause so that it tells more about the new Jerusalem. One way to do that is to start a new sentence here. For example:

It is coming down out of heaven from my God.

comes: The Berean Standard Bible, like the Greek, uses the present tense here. This present tense refers generally to the fact that at some time the city will descend. Revelation 21 describes the new Jerusalem descending to the new earth after God judges all people (Rev 20).

In some languages it is more natural to use the future tense here. For example:

will come (Good News Translation)

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