the Hebrew, Ge’ez, and Greek that is translated with “sword” in English is translated in Tepeuxila Cuicatec as “machete that is sharp on two sides,” in Lalana Chinantec as “machete” and in San Mateo del Mar Huave as “knife.” (Source: Viola Waterhouse in Notes on Translation August 1966, p. 86ff.)
The Greek, Hebrew, Aramaic, Ge’ez, and Latin that is translated as “enemy” or “foe” in English is translated in the HausaCommon Language Bible as “friends of front,” i.e., the person standing opposite you in a battle (source: Andy Warren-Rothlin) and in Apinayé as “person next to one” (source: Patricia Ham in Notes on Translation, August 1965, p. 2).
In North Alaskan Inupiatun it is translated with a term that implies that it’s not just someone who hates you, but one who wants to do you harm (Source: Robert Bascom), in Tarok as ukpa ìkum or “companion in war/fighting,” and in Ikwere as nye irno m or “person who hates me” (source for this and one above: Chuck and Karen Tessaro in this newsletter ).
In Cherokee it is either translated as “the one(s) who reprimand(s) you” or “the one(s) feared.” (Source: Bender / Belt 2025, p. 47)
That was why may be rendered “that was the reason.”
Our fathers were handed over to the sword: Our fathers are the “ancestors” mentioned at the end of the previous verse. Were handed over to the sword (by God) means “God let their enemies kill them” (Good News Translation). For sword see 1.12. We may assume the defeat here refers to the actual defeat of Judah by the real Nebuchadnezzar in 587/586 B.C.
To be plundered may be rendered “to have their possessions taken by force” (see 7.26).
They suffered a great catastrophe before our enemies: “A great defeat” (Good News Translation) is a possible translation for a great catastrophe. Before our enemies means “at the hands of our enemies.” It is not the same idiom used in verse 15, where “in the presence/before the face of our enemies” is used.
Quoted with permission from Bullard, Roger A. and Hatton, Howard A. A Handbook on Judith. (UBS Helps for Translators). New York: UBS, 2001. For this and other handbooks for translators see here.
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