Japanese benefactives (sonaete)

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Like a number of other East Asian languages, Japanese uses a complex system of honorifics, i.e. a system where a number of different levels of politeness are expressed in language via words, word forms or grammatical constructs. These can range from addressing someone or referring to someone with contempt (very informal) to expressing the highest level of reference (as used in addressing or referring to God) or any number of levels in-between. One way Japanese shows different degree of politeness is through the choice of a benefactive construction as shown here in the widely-used Japanese Shinkaiyaku (新改訳) Bible of 2017.

Here, sonaete (備えて) or “provide/prepare” is used in combination with kudasaru (くださる), a respectful form of the benefactive kureru (くれる). A benefactive reflects the good will of the giver or the gratitude of a recipient of the favor. To convey this connotation, English translation needs to employ a phrase such as “for me (my sake)” or “for you (your sake).” (Source: S. E. Doi, see also S. E. Doi in Journal of Translation, 18/2022, p. 37ff. )

Translation commentary on Ephesians 2:10

The verse begins “for we are his artifact.” The Greek noun (from the verb “to do, make”) occurs elsewhere in the New Testament only in Romans 1.20. Revised Standard Version “workmanship” and Twentieth Century New Testament, New English Bible “handiwork” are perhaps a bit unwieldy; Jerusalem Bible “work of art” seems a bit affected. Good News Translation God has made us what we are (similarly Moffatt and others) seems better than “he has made us” (Goodspeed), since the thought is not the original act of creation but God’s saving work, the new creation in Christ Jesus. In order to emphasize that what we are refers to this new relationship to God in view of salvation, it may be important to translate this clause as “what we now are.”

The participle that follows in Greek, “having been created,” translates the verb “to create” (see Mark 13.19; Rom 1.25; Col 1.16 where it is used of the creation of the world); the participle defines “what God has made”: “we were created in Christ Jesus” (see also the verb in 2.15; 4.24). The prepositional phrase “in Christ Jesus” can be taken to indicate the instrument, the means (so, presumably, the translations that have simply “in”: Revised Standard Version, New English Bible, and others; more definitely “through,” Barclay); but it may also indicate, as Good News Translation has it, in our union with Christ Jesus (also Twentieth Century New Testament, Goodspeed, and others).

In a number of languages it is important to relate the phrase in our union with Christ Jesus somewhat more specifically to the main part of the clause. It may be possible to do this by using some such introductory or transitional phrase as “by our being” or “since we are,” for example, “by our being joined with Christ Jesus, God has created us….”

Since the emphasis upon has created us is in relation to the new life that the believers are supposed to live, it may be useful to say “he has now made us over for a life of good deeds.”

For a life of good deeds translates the Greek “for good deeds”: these are the actions which Christians are to perform. These works are the consequence of salvation, not the basis for it. The expression may be rendered by “in order to do good to people throughout our life.”

He has already prepared: the Greek verb “to prepare ahead of time” (elsewhere only Rom 9.23) cannot be weakened to mean “he intended, designed,” as some want to do, who argue that not even God can “prepare” good works ahead of time, since they do not exist until they are performed, and the performance is a human action, not God’s action. Following such logic, some (for example, Abbott) take the unexpressed object of the verb “he prepared ahead of time” to be “us”; so New English Bible “the good deeds for which God has designed us.” This seems most unlikely, however, and it is better to take “the good works” as the object of “he prepared ahead of time.” The writer’s exaggerated style of expression cannot always be made to fit the bounds of human logic.

Which he has already prepared may be expressed as “for which he has already prepared things” or “he has already made things ready for us to do these good deeds.” An emphatic statement may be used: “He has created us to do those good deeds which he had already prepared for us to do.”

For us to do translates “for us to walk in them” (for the verb “to walk” see 2.2). This is the new way of life, opposed to the old way of life described in verse 2.

Quoted with permission from Bratcher, Robert C. and Nida, Eugene A. A Handbook on Paul’s Letter to the Ephesians. (UBS Handbook Series). New York: UBS, 1982. For this and other handbooks for translators see here .

SIL Translator’s Notes on Ephesians 2:10

2:10a

For: The Greek conjunction that the Berean Standard Bible translates as For here introduces the basis or reason for the previous statement in 2:9. Paul clearly states again that this grace and salvation are not from us or out of any good thing we have done.

Here is another way to translate this word:

Because,

we are God’s workmanship: The expression we are God’s workmanship means that God made us what we now are. This refers to God spiritually remaking us when we became Christians. By saying this Paul again emphasizes that our salvation is all God’s work, and not ours.

Here are some other ways to translate this expression:

God has made us what we are (Good News Translation)
-or-
we are God’s masterpiece (New Living Translation (2004))

2:10b

created in Christ Jesus: When God saved us, he remade or recreated us. We are a new creation. See translation advice in the following note.

in Christ Jesus: God gave us this new life by uniting us with Christ Jesus. See how you translated in Christ Jesus in 1:1d and 2:6b and in Christ in 1:3b, 1:9b, and 1:12a.

Here are some other ways to translate this phrase:

In Christ Jesus, God made us… (New Century Version)
-or-
God made us ⌊new people⌋ through Christ Jesus
-or-
God made us new people because we are in Christ Jesus

to do good works: The Greek phrase that the Berean Standard Bible translates as to do good works is literally “walk in good works.” Here the word works means deeds. So the phrase to do good works means that believers should be doing good behaviors or doing good deeds as a normal part of their lives.

Here are some other ways to translate this phrase:

for a life of good deeds (Good News Translation)
-or-
so we can do the good things (New Living Translation (2004))
-or-
in order that we would behave in good ways

2:10c

which God prepared in advance as our way of life: This clause means that before God recreated us, he had already planned what good deeds he wanted us to do.

in advance: The phrase in advance refers to the time before God saved us. If it is not clear in your translation what this refers to, you can supply this information. For example:

Even before he saved us, God had already planned for us to do these good works.

as our way of life: The Greek phrase that the Berean Standard Bible translates as as our way of life is literally “that we should walk in them” (as in the Revised Standard Version). The Greek word for “walk” is a figure of speech that refers to our daily actions and our behavior.

Here are some other ways to translate this phrase:

for us to live doing good deeds
-or-
for us to behave in good ways

For another reference to “walk,” see the note on 2:2a.

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