complete verse (Ecclesiastes 10:2)

Following are a number of back-translations as well as a sample translation for translators of Ecclesiastes 10:2:

  • Kupsabiny: “A wise person is guarded/protected by his wisdom, but a fool is destroyed by his foolishness.” (Source: Kupsabiny Back Translation)
  • Newari: “The heart of a wise man goes on a straight road,
    but the heart of fool goes on a crooked road.” (Source: Newari Back Translation)
  • Hiligaynon: “A wise man wants to do good, but a foolish man wants to do bad.” (Source: Hiligaynon Back Translation)
  • English: “If people think sensibly, it will lead them to do what is right;
    if they think foolishly, it causes them to do what is wrong.” (Source: Translation for Translators)

Translation commentary on Ecclesiastes 10:2

This balanced saying contrasts the wise person with the fool. It could be an independent saying typical of those found in Proverbs (see a similar contrasting saying in 7.4). It argues for the superiority of wisdom, the theme of 9.17. But it also serves a discourse purpose, introducing “the fool” as the subject of the following verse.

A wise man’s heart: we have lots of evidence of Qoheleth’s use of the term heart as “mind” (see, for instance, 7.25; 8.9), or “will.”

Toward the right: the noun clause that forms this first half of the verse is followed by a prepositional phrase, literally “to his right.” Qoheleth’s use of right and left should not be confused with modern social and political terms, which have meanings like “conservative” and “radical.” The right has the sense of what is correct, the place of authority and honor, of moral uprightness. In many cultures around the world, the word right has exactly this sense, so no adjustment will have to be made. A verb needs to be provided, however, and Revised Standard Version suggests inclines, meaning that the person’s mind guides or directs him in that direction. In languages where right does not have the same sense as in the Biblical culture, a substitute can be made: “The thoughts of a person push him to do the correct [or moral, or honorable, or right] thing.” Good News Translation offers a good English translation: “It is natural for the wise to do the right thing.”

But a fool’s heart toward the left: the opposite situation applies to the fool. Left in the Old Testament carries a value judgment also. It speaks of what is wrong, misguided, and weak. Again, in many cultural settings this word will have exactly the same meaning as in Hebrew, so no adjustment will be necessary. Alternatively we can say with Good News Translation “It is natural … for fools to do the wrong thing,” or as Jerusalem Bible, “the fool’s heart leads him astray.”

We have already noted that this proverb is perfectly balanced in Hebrew:
heart of the wise to the right [of him]

and
heart of the fool to the left [of him]

The translator should attempt to imitate this proverb-like style in a way that is natural.

Quoted with permission from Ogden, Graham S. and Zogbo, Lynell. A Handbook on the Book of Ecclesiates. (UBS Helps for Translators). New York: UBS, 1997. For this and other handbooks for translators see here .

SIL Translator’s Notes on Ecclesiastes 10:2

10:2a A wise man’s heart inclines to the right,

The hearts of wise people lead them on the right path. (New International Reader’s Version)
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It is natural for the wise to do the right thing (Good News Translation)

10:2b but the heart of a fool to the left.

But the hearts of foolish people take them down the wrong path. (New International Reader’s Version)
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and for fools to do the wrong thing. (Good News Translation)

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Commentaire sur la traduction de l'Ecclésiaste 10.2

Dans ce dicton très bref et sans verbe, Qohéleth met en contraste le sage et l’insensé. L’hébreu dit litt. « (le) cœur du sage [va] vers la droite et (le) cœur de l’insensé [va] vers la gauche ». En hébreu le cœur désigne dans ce contexte la volonté et l’intellect d’une personne. La Traduction œcuménique de la Bible et la Bible en français courant préfèrent parler de l’esprit du sage, et la Parole de Vie du « sage » tout court. Les traducteurs devraient décider ce qui convient le mieux dans leur langue. Pour sage et insensé, voir Introduction au commentaire de traduction de l’Ecclésiaste.

Certaines versions insèrent un verbe comme incliner, « diriger » ou « aller à » : L’esprit du sage va… D’autres insèrent aussi un pronom renvoyant à la personne : « Le cœur du sage l’incline à sa droite… »

Dans l’Ancien Testament, les notions de « droite » et de « gauche » sont souvent utilisées d’une manière figurée. Comme dans beaucoup de cultures, la droite représente ce qui est correct et juste, c’est-à-dire, le bon côté, tandis que la gauche représente ce qui est faible ou malsain, le « mauvais côté » (La Bible du Semeur). Les traducteurs devraient décider si une traduction littérale est compréhensible, ou s’il faut chercher des expressions idiomatiques. Si ce langage figuré n’est pas compris, on pourrait suivre la Parole de Vie qui dit, « Le sage raisonne bien, le sot comprend tout de travers ».

Source: Zogbo, Lynell. L’Ecclésiaste – Manuel de traduction – Commentaire linguistique et exégétique de la Bible. Alliance biblique universelle, 2021.