Translation commentary on Romans 8:35

Even though Paul uses a simple future in this verse (“will separate”), his meaning is best conveyed in translation by who, then, can separate us?

Although some manuscripts read “the love of God,” most translators follow the manuscripts which read the love of Christ, and this is recommended by the UBS Greek text. It is clear that the genitive expression the love of Christ means “Christ’s love for us.”

The initial question, Who, then, can separate us from the love of Christ?, may be made a statement, namely, “No one can separate us from Christ’s love for us,” “No one can remove us from Christ’s love for us,” or “No one can keep Christ’s love from reaching us.” In some instances rather figurative expressions are employed for the idea of being separated from Christ’s love—for example, “Who can take us out of the hand of Christ who loves us?” or “Who can tear us away from Christ’s heart toward us?” There is, however, a difficulty involved in introducing this question by “who,” since what follows are events, not persons. Therefore it may be necessary to translate: “What can separate us from Christ’s love?”

The first word in the list that Paul uses is a very general term and is best translated by the English word trouble (so An American Translation*); “affliction” of many translations implies something totally different to the English reader. The second of these terms is almost synonymous in meaning with the first, and perhaps is best rendered by such words as hardship (so also New English Bible) or “difficulties.” In 2.9 these two terms are rendered in the Good News Translation as suffering and pain. A number of translations take Paul’s word “famine” in a more general sense of hunger (New English Bible, An American Translation*, New American Bible; Jerusalem Bible “lacking food”; Phillips “lack of … food”). Also the word “nakedness” is often given a more general sense (Good News Translation poverty; Phillips “lack of clothes”; Jerusalem Bible “lacking … clothes”; An American Translation* “destitution”). The last word that Paul uses is literally “sword,” but in the present context it has the meaning of death, specifically a violent death. Persecution and danger, the third and sixth words in the list, are not difficult, though it should be pointed out that persecution does not necessarily imply official action and is perhaps best taken in a more general frame of reference. Danger is, of course, also a general term describing any sort of threat to one’s life.

The principal difficulty in rendering the second portion of verse 35 is that terms for trouble, hardship, persecution, hunger, poverty, danger, death are often verbs or phrases which involve verb expressions. These are obviously not things but events. The possibility expressed by a question with the auxiliary can implies a condition, and therefore one may translate the second sentence of verse 35 thus: “If we are in trouble, if we suffer hardships, if people persecute us, if we have nothing to eat, if we have nothing to wear, if people threaten us, or even if we are killed, does this mean that Christ’s love does not hold us?” The same sentence may, of course, be changed into a statement—for example, “Nothing can separate us from Christ’s love; not even if we are in trouble, or if we suffer, or if people persecute us,” etc.

Quoted with permission from Newman, Barclay M. and Nida, Eugene A. A Handbook on Paul’s Letter to the Romans. (UBS Handbook Series). New York: UBS, 1973. For this and other handbooks for translators see here .

SIL Translator’s Notes on Romans 8:35

Paragraph 8:35–39

8:35a

Who shall separate us from the love of Christ?: This is a rhetorical question. It emphasizes that no one or no situation will be able to separate believers from the love that Christ has for them. Translate this clause with that meaning. Here are some ways:

• As a rhetorical question. For example:

What will separate us from the love of Christ? (New American Bible, Revised Edition)
-or-
Who…can separate us from the love of Christ? (Good News Translation)

• As a statement. For example:

No one/thing will/can separate us from the love of Christ.

Who: In Greek, the word translated Who can refer to either people or things. Paul listed seven things below, some of which are caused by people. In some languages “what” would be the general question word to use here, as in the New American Bible, Revised Edition above.

shall: In Greek this is the normal future. This word means “will” here.

separate us from the love of Christ: Here the word separate is used figuratively. It indicates that something prevents Christ from loving us or makes that love ineffective. Some languages cannot use the word separate when referring to love. If that is true in your language, translate the correct meaning. For example:

separate us from Christ ⌊and⌋ his love
-or-
make Christ stop loving us
-or-
block Christ’s love to us

us: In the Greek, this word is emphasized by being before the verb. Some languages can do that kind of emphasis.

the love of Christ: This refers to Christ loving us. Here it does not refer to us loving him.

8:35b–c

Shall trouble or distress or persecution or famine or nakedness or danger or sword?: In the Greek, there is no verb in this question, but Shall is implied from 8:35a. For a natural English question this implied word must be explicit here.

This is a rhetorical question. It emphasizes that trouble or distress or persecution or famine or nakedness or danger or sword will not separate us from the love of Christ. Translate this clause with that meaning. Here are some ways:

• As a rhetorical question. For example:

Will anguish, or distress, or persecution, or famine, or nakedness, or peril, or the sword? (New American Bible, Revised Edition)
-or-
Can trouble, or distress, or persecution, or famine, or nakedness, or danger, or sword ⌊separate us from his love⌋ ?

• As a statement. For example:

Trouble, or distress, or persecution, or famine, or nakedness, or danger, or sword will/can ⌊not separate us⌋ ⌊from the love of Christ⌋.

8:35b

trouble: The Greek word here refers to any kind of trouble or suffering. In some languages the plural would be more natural. Here are other ways to translate this word:

tribulation (English Standard Version)
-or-
hardships (New Jerusalem Bible)
-or-
difficulty

distress: This refers to bad situations or circumstances which cause stress to the people in them. Here are other ways to translate this word:

stressful/difficult times/things
-or-
terrible situations/circumstances

See how you translated this word in 2:9.

persecution: Here this word refers to people causing trouble or suffering for a believer because he or she follows Jesus. Here are other ways to translate this word:

people harming us ⌊because we believe⌋ ⌊in Jesus⌋
-or-
pains because of our(inc) faith
-or-
they cause us who believe to suffer

8:35c

famine: This word refers to an extreme shortage of food. During a famine, people die from a lack of food. Here are other ways to translate this word:

starvation
-or-
hunger (New Century Version)

nakedness: The Greek word can refer to wearing no clothes at all, but here probably refers to not having enough clothes to wear, or having only ragged clothes to wear. For example:

lack of…clothing (New Jerusalem Bible)

danger: This word refers to circumstances that may cause harm or death. Here are other ways to translate this word:

peril (Revised Standard Version)
-or-
if we are harmed or killed
-or-
life threatening situations

sword: Here this is a figure of speech. It refers to violent death, for example, by murder, war or execution. In some languages this figure of speech will not be clear. If that is true in your language, translate the meaning clearly. For example:

violent death (God’s Word)
-or-

⌊killing by⌋ sword

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Commentaire sur la traduction de la lettre aux Romains 8.35

Cette question peut, comme les autres, être transformée en une affirmation, par exemple « Personne ne peut nous séparer de l’amour du Christ ».

Qui nous séparera de l’amour du Christ ? : bien que Paul utilise le futur (séparera), l’emphase est aussi sur le présent, « Qui peut (alors) nous séparer… » (Bible en français courant, Parole de Vie, Good News Bible). Le verbe séparer est celui utilisé lorsque Jésus dit (Matt 16.9) « ce que Dieu a uni, l’homme ne doit point le séparer ». Pour parler de séparer, on pourrait aussi dire « enlever de la main », « nous arracher/priver de l’amour du Christ ». Dans certaines langues, il sera nécessaire de changer de perspective : « l’amour du Christ nous abandonne-t-il ? »

Nous renvoie à Paul et à tout chrétien. On pourrait aussi dire « de l’amour que le Christ a pour nous ».

Bien que le mot Qui renvoie à une personne, certains diront « Qu’est-ce qui peut… » ou, sous la forme d’une affirmation, « Rien ne peut… »

amour du Christ : bien que certains manuscrits aient « l’amour de Dieu », l’amour du Christ est mieux attesté et beaucoup plus probable. Cette construction signifie « l’amour que le Christ a pour nous ».

La détresse, l’angoisse, la persécution, la faim, le dénuement, le danger, le glaive : Paul cite une liste de choses qui pourraient affecter le chrétien et le convaincre que Dieu n’est pas à ses côtés. Les traducteurs devraient chercher à bien formuler la phrase, soit en proposant une phrase générale qui mentionne chacun des éléments (« Est-ce que x, y, z …peut nous séparer ? »), soit en disant chaque fois, « est-ce que la détresse peut nous séparer ? Est-ce que l’angoisse peut nous séparer ? » et ainsi de suite. Un autre problème pour les traducteurs est en rapport à la liste des noms abstraits. Si la langue n’a pas de tels noms, on sera obligé d’utiliser des expressions verbales, par exemple, « est-ce que le fait de souffrir, d’être persécuté, d’avoir faim… peut nous séparer de l’amour du Christ ? ».

Le mot grec pour détresse est θλῖψις thlipsis, le même qu’en Rom 2.9 et Rom 5.3. Au pluriel, « détresses » a une valeur générale rendue parfois par « malheur » (Parole de Vie) ou « tribulation » (Bible de Jérusalem). Certains diront « épreuve », « tribulation », « affliction » (Osty-Trinquet). Il s’agit d’une « peine profonde ».

l’angoisse (στενοχωρία stenochôria) est presque synonyme du mot détresse. Il figure également en Rom 2.9 et pourrait être rendu par une expression comme « les difficultés », « les épreuves » ou « l’inquiétude » (Parole de Vie).

la persécution renvoie à toute forme d’opposition dont les chrétiens sont les victimes. Si la langue cible n’a pas d’équivalent, on pourrait dire « la souffrance venant des autres » (Parole de Vie).

la faim : bien que le terme grec puisse signifier « famine » (par exemple en Act 7.11), les versions françaises le rendent ici par faim, dont un équivalent serait parfois « le manque de nourriture ».

le dénuement : le mot grec correspondant signifie littéralement « la nudité » (Bible de Jérusalem, Osty-Trinquet), comme en Apoc 3.18. Mais il a sans doute un sens plus général dans notre verset, par exemple dénuement (Traduction œcuménique de la Bible, Segond Révisée, Nouvelle Bible Segond), « privations » (Bible en français courant), « misère » (La Bible du Semeur), « pauvreté » (Parole de Vie, Good News Bible).

le danger est également un terme à valeur générale, désignant tout ce qui peut constituer une menace pour la vie de quelqu’un.

le glaive ou « l’épée » (Segond Révisée, Nouvelle Bible Segond, La Bible du Semeur) n’évoque pas une arme proprement dite, mais la mort en général (Bible en français courant, Parole de Vie, Good News Bible) et dans ce cas, une mort violente.

Lorsqu’une langue cible n’a pas un inventaire de tels noms abstraits, le verset peut être restructuré, en disant, par exemple, « Si nous sommes dans la détresse, si nous souffrons de difficultés, si des gens nous persécutent, si nous n’avons rien à manger, si nous n’avons pas de quoi nous vêtir, si des gens nous menacent, ou même si nous sommes mis à mort, cela signifie-t-il que nous sommes séparés de l’amour du Christ ? » La même phrase peut être aussi exprimée à l’affirmatif, par exemple « Rien ne peut nous séparer de l’amour du Christ, même si nous sommes dans la détresse, si nous souffrons de difficultés, ou si des gens nous persécutent… »

Source: Margot, Jean-Claude & Zogbo, Lynell. La lettre aux Romains – Manuel de traduction – Commentaire linguistique et exégétique de la Bible. Alliance biblique universelle, 2021.