complete verse (Numbers 7:78)

Following are a number of back-translations as well as a sample translation for translators of Numbers 7:78:

  • Kupsabiny: “On the twelfth day Ahira son of Enan from the clan of Naphtali also brought his which were like those.” (Source: Kupsabiny Back Translation)
  • Newari: “On the twelfth day, Ahira son of Enan, leader of the tribe off Naphtali brought his offering.” (Source: Newari Back Translation)
  • Hiligaynon: “These were-particularly the-(ones-who) brought their offerings:
    On the first day, Nashon child of Aminadad, the leader/[lit. head] of the tribe of Juda.
    On the second day, Netanel child of Zuar, the leader/[lit. head] of the tribe of Issachar.
    On the third day, Eliab child of Helon, the leader/[lit. head] of the tribe of Zebulun.
    On the fourth day, Elizur child of Shedeur, the leader/[lit. head] of the tribe of Reuben.
    On the fifth day, Shelumiel child of Zurishadai, the leader/[lit. head] of the tribe of Simeon.
    On the sixth day, Eliasaph child of Deuel, the leader/[lit. head] of the tribe of Gad.
    On the seventh day, Elishama child of Amihud, the leader/[lit. head] of the tribe of Efraim.
    On the eighth day, Gamaliel child of Pedazur, the leader/[lit. head] of the tribe of Manase.
    On the ninth day, Abidan child of Gideoni, the leader/[lit. head] of the tribe of Benjamin.
    On the tenth day, Ahiezer child of Amishadai, the leader/[lit. head] of the tribe of Dan.
    On the eleventh day, Pagiel child of Ocran, the leader/[lit. head] of the tribe of Asher.
    And on the twelfth day Ahira child of Enan, the leader/[lit. head] of the tribe of Naftali.
    Each one of them brought these offerings: one silver big-plate that weigh about one and one half kilogram, and one silver bowl that weigh about 800 grams according to the weighing-scale of the priests. Each one of them they filled with a good/fine kind of flour that was-mixed with oil for the gift offering. Each one of them also brought one golden small-cup that weigh about 120 grams that was filled with incense; one young bull, one male sheep, and one young male sheep which is one year old as a burnt offering; one male goat as an offering for becoming-clean; and two oxen/cow, five male sheep, five male goats, and five young male sheep/lambs which is one year old as an offering for a good relation.” (Source: Hiligaynon Back Translation)
  • English: “These are the gifts that each of the leaders brought:
    —a silver dish that weighed more than three pounds/1.5 kg., and a silver bowl that weighed almost two pounds/800 grams, both of which were full of good flour and mixed with olive oil to be offerings of grain; they both were weighed using the standard scales;
    —a small gold dish that weighed four ounces/14 grams, filled with incense;
    —a young bull, a full-grown ram, and a one-year-old ram, to be sacrifices to be completely burned on the altar;
    —a goat to be sacrificed to enable me to forgive the people for the sins they have committed;
    —and two bulls, five full-grown rams, five male goats, and five rams that were one-year-old, to be sacrifices to maintain the people’s fellowship with Yahweh.
    This was the order in which the leaders brought their gifts:
    on the first day, Nahshon, son of Amminadab from the tribe of Judah brought his gifts;
    on the next/second day, Nethanel, son of Zuar, from the tribe of Issachar;
    on the next/third day, Eliab, son of Helon, from the tribe of Zebulun;
    on the next/fourth day, Elizur, son of Shedeur, from the tribe of Reuben;
    on the next/fifth day, Shelumiel, son of Jurishhaddai, from the tribe of Simeon;
    on the next/sixth day, Eliasaph, son of Deuel, from the tribe of Gad;
    on the next/seventh day, Elishama, son of Ammihud, from the tribe of Ephraim;
    on the next/eighth day, Gamaliel, son of Pedahzur, from the tribe of Manasseh;
    on the next/ninth day, Abidan, son of Gideoni, from the tribe of Benjamin;
    on the next/tenth day, Ahiezer, son of Ammishaddai, from the tribe of Dan;
    on the next/eleventh day, Pagiel, son of Acran, from the tribe of Asher;
    on the next/twelfth day, Ahira, son of Enam, from the tribe of Naphtali.” (Source: Translation for Translators)

Translation commentary on Numbers 7:78 - 7:83

On the twelfth day Ahira the son of Enan, the leader of the men of Naphtali …: Verses 78-83 are almost identical to verses 12-17 (see the comments there). For Ahira the son of Enan, the leader of the men of Naphtali, see 1.15.

It is clear that Revised Standard Version and Good News Translation have translated verses 12-83 very differently. Revised Standard Version follows closely the arrangement of the Hebrew text. The detailed repetition in the Hebrew may well have served to emphasize how amazingly rich and generous these gifts of the Israelites were for twelve consecutive days. (It is left implied whether or not the offerings were sacrificed immediately every day.) More importantly, this text falls in line with the theology of worship that is expressed in such ritual and commemorative texts in the books of Exodus, Leviticus, and Numbers. They underscore the fellowship that was to prevail between the LORD and his covenant people of Israel. This worship was a communal religious exercise that promoted the unity and harmony of the people among themselves and between this chosen nation and their ever-present God.

This text belongs to the ancient Near Eastern genre of temple accounts, or archives, which listed standard quantities and items in parallel columns. It has been suggested that verses 12-88 match in many respects the list layout of quantities and items as found in ancient Near Eastern cuneiform tablets and inscriptions (so Levine, pages 259-266). As we have noted, the Hebrew employs fewer verbs as the text progresses. This feature fits with such a list structure.

On the face of it, Good News Translation may seem to be an easier model to follow than Revised Standard Version. Good News Translation actually displays a list (of days, tribes and leaders) and this perhaps shows something of the background to the structure of chapter 7. However, the disadvantage is that Good News Translation separates the leaders’ names from the items that they offered. This does not correspond with the list structure in the ancient cuneiform tablets, in which items and persons who offered them are kept together: they are mentioned in one set of parallel columns. The Hebrew text and Revised Standard Version keep the items and leaders together as well. The repetitive sequence may have carried some liturgical significance too as this passage was later recalled in worshipful remembrance of the LORD’s establishment of a place of meeting and worship in the very midst of his chosen people.

In conclusion we recommend that translators follow the textual arrangement of the Hebrew text and Revised Standard Version. However, Revised Standard Version occasionally uses verbs where the Hebrew does not, thus changing the text from a list with enumerations into a more narrative-sounding text. We have already commented on this when it occurs in Revised Standard Version. Where the target language allows, translators should avoid this. Rather, a translation along the lines of Revised Standard Version should be displayed more in accordance with the style of an administrative list (see the model above for verses 24-29). This will also make the translation easier to read when it is printed out on the page. The stereotyped, repetitive nature of the original text should be preserved in translation because in this case, the form calls attention to its function as an official record or list.

Quoted with permission from de Regt, Lénart J. and Wendland, Ernst R. A Handbook on Numbers. (UBS Helps for Translators). Miami: UBS, 2016. For this and other handbooks for translators see here .