Translation commentary on Ephesians 1:6

Without a break the text continues: “for the praise of the glory of his (God’s) grace” (Hdb|fig:Table_EPH1-3.jpg). A variation of this is found also in verses 12a, 14c. This is the final result of God’s salvation through Christ: his people will praise him. The expression Let us praise is not a request for permission but a kind of exhortation and is equivalent in many languages to an expression of obligation, for example, “we should praise” or “we must praise.”

The word “glory” is used in the Bible to describe the manifestation of God’s presence with his people, his saving presence, his redemptive power. It is usually described in terms of a brilliant light (see Exo 16.10; 1 Kgs 8.10-11; Ezek 10.3-4; Col 1.11).

In the New Testament the word grace refers to God’s uncaused, unmerited, unconditioned love (see 1.2).

The phrase “the glory of his grace” can be taken to mean “the glorious manifestation/revelation of his unmerited love” (compare Twentieth Century New Testament “the glorious manifestation of his loving-kindness”). But it is possible also to take the phrase as meaning his glorious grace (Revised Standard Version, Good News Translation, and others).

In a number of languages grace must be expressed as an event and as such is normally a verb phrase such as “showed kindness” or “showed goodness to” or “was good to because of his love” or “loved and was good to”; but it may then be difficult to introduce the qualifying word glorious. This can sometimes be done by a phrase, for example, “the wonderful way in which he showed kindness to us.”

The free gift he gave us translates a verb which is used only here and in Luke 1.28 in the New Testament, and which means “to give generously.” Good News Translation has the free gift he gave us, since it seems more natural to speak of “a gift” as the object of the verb “to give” rather than “his grace.” Most translations, however, find nothing unnatural in this.

In order to express the concept of “generous giving” involved in the Greek verb, one can emphasize either (1) the attitude of the giver by such terms as “generous” or “free” or (2) the abundance of the gift as “so much.” Accordingly, “which he generously gave us” may be expressed as “which he gave us because of his good heart.” But if one wishes the emphasis to be upon the abundance of the gift, he may say “which he gave us so abundantly” or “… to such a great extent.”

In his dear Son: it was by means of Jesus Christ, God’s dear Son (see Mark 1.11, the heavenly voice at the baptism of Jesus), that God manifested his grace to mankind. The Greek uses the perfect passive participle of the verb “to love” (see Revised Standard Version “the Beloved”); here only is this participle used of Christ in the New Testament. The phrase “in the beloved” may be rendered as “by means of what was done by his Son whom he loves.” In some instances, means is expressed by a term or phrase which indicates the possibility of something happening or existing. Therefore, “in the beloved” may be rendered as “God’s dear Son made this possible.”

It would seem that the way in which Good News Translation has restructured the various items in verses 5-6 is fairly apparent and needs no further comment.

Quoted with permission from Bratcher, Robert C. and Nida, Eugene A. A Handbook on Paul’s Letter to the Ephesians. (UBS Handbook Series). New York: UBS, 1982. For this and other handbooks for translators see here .

Commentaire sur la traduction de la lettre aux Éphésiens 1.6

à la louange de sa gloire : sans interruption, la longue phrase grecque continue. Le résultat final de l’action par laquelle Dieu nous sauve par le Christ est que son peuple le louera, lui et ses bienfaits. Des tournures semblables se trouvent au verset 12a et à 14c. La Bible en français courant et la Parole de Vie proposent un impératif pluriel « Louons … Dieu » et chacun introduit une conjonction pour marquer une sorte de conclusion : « Louons donc Dieu… » (Bible en français courant), « Alors chantons la gloire de Dieu ».

sa gloire : le mot gloire s’emploie dans la Bible pour décrire la manifestation divine devant le peuple, la présence par laquelle Dieu le sauve. Souvent elle est décrite en tant que lumière éblouissante (voir Ex 16.10 ; 1 Rois 8.10-11 ; Ézék 10.3-4 ; Col 1.11).

et de sa grâce : en grec le peuple est appelé à louer « la gloire de sa grâce ». La Traduction œcuménique de la Bible, en mettant et entre les deux propositions semble indiquer que la louange a deux objets : la gloire … et … la grâce. La Bible de Jérusalem et la Nouvelle Bible Segond traduisent le grec plus littéralement, sans et, avec « à la louange de gloire de sa grâce » et « afin de célébrer la gloire de sa grâce » respectivement. La Bible en français courant et la Parole de Vie rendent explicite en quoi consiste le lien entre gloire et grâce par le moyen de la préposition « pour » : « Alors chantons la gloire de Dieu pour la grandeur de ses bienfaits ! » (Parole de Vie). Autres possibilités seront « Louons Dieu pour la manifestation glorieuse de sa grâce », « …pour la révélation de sa grâce glorieuse ». La Bible en français courant évite le mot gloire pour parler du « don magnifique ».

Pour grâce, voir Éph. 1.2. Dans ce contexte, il n’est plus question d’une salutation fixe. Ici il s’agit, comme ailleurs dans le NT, de l’amour ou la faveur de Dieu, un amour non mérité, offert volontairement et sans condition. Paul qualifie cette grâce : dont il nous a comblés en son Bien-aimé.

dont il nous a comblés : Paul utilise une expression très forte, basée, paraîtil, sur une structure hébraïque : « sa grâce par laquelle il nous a gratifiés » où le complément d’objet direct et le verbe proviennent de la même racine grecque χάρις charis (grâce). Ceci souligne que Dieu nous fait ce don de salut « généreusement » (Bible en français courant, Parole de Vie), et aussi que ce don est lui-même très grand (l’implication de la Traduction œcuménique de la Bible et de la Nouvelle Bible Segond). Dans certaines langues « remplis (complètement) » pourrait convenir ici.

en son Bien-aimé, qui, bien-entendu, est le Fils de Dieu, Jésus-Christ. En Marc 1.11 la voix du Père appelle Jésus, son Fils bien-aimé. L’expression en son Bien-aimé rappelle aussi « en Christ » et « en lui » dans Éph. 1.3. Les traducteurs pourraient opter pour la même tournure de phrase utilisée à cet endroit : « en union avec… » Cependant ici l’expression peut avoir une nuance instrumentale : c’est par le moyen de Christ, à travers Christ, que Dieu a manifesté sa grâce aux humains. Bien-aimé est une forme de la racine ἀγάπη agapê. Dans certaines langues on va rendre explicite : « son fils bien-aimé » (Bible en français courant). S’il n’y a pas de mot pour Bien-aimé, on pourrait dire : « par le moyen de son Fils qu’il aime ». Les traducteurs peuvent également traduire l’expression littéralement, laissant ainsi entrevoir que le « don magnifique » est en quelque sorte Christ lui-même. Le grec ne fait pas de distinction entre les lettres minuscules et majuscules. Il vaut mieux rendre le texte sans ajouter cette distinction.

Source: Zogbo, Lynell. La lettre aux Éphésiens – Manuel de traduction – Commentaire linguistique et exégétique de la Bible. Alliance biblique universelle, 2011.

SIL Translator’s Notes on Ephesians 1:6

1:6a

to the praise of His glorious grace: The phrase to the praise of His glorious grace tells us the purpose of all that God has done: he chose us and made us his children “in order that we should praise him for his grace.” Similar phrases are in 1:12b and 1:14c.

His glorious grace: The Greek word that the Berean Standard Bible translates as glorious means “wonderful” or “very great.” See also glory, Meaning 4, in the Glossary for more information.

Here are some other ways to translate this phrase:

his wonderful grace
-or-
the greatness of his grace
-or-
his important grace

grace: The Greek word that the Berean Standard Bible translates as grace means “showing kindness or generosity to someone who does not deserve it.”

Here are some other ways to translate this word:

kindness (God’s Word)
-or-
gracious/generous help

See grace, Meaning 2, in the Glossary for more information.

1:6b

freely given: The phrase freely given is a single Greek verb meaning “to give generously.” In other words, God showed us a great amount of kindness, and he did not make us earn his kindness. Instead, he showed us his kindness generously, abundantly and freely.

Here are some other ways to translate this phrase:

he has poured out on us (New Living Translation (2004))
-or-
he has generously/abundantly given to us

in the Beloved One: The phrase in the Beloved One refers to Jesus whom God loves. It is through Jesus, by means of what he has done for us, that God gives us his grace. Be careful that the way you translate this does not imply that there are others whom he does not love.

Here are some other ways to translate in the Beloved One include:

his dearly loved Son (New Living Translation (2004))
-or-
in Christ, the One he loves (New Century Version)

Beloved: See how you translated “love” in 1:4c. See love, Meaning 1 in the Glossary for more information.

General Comment on 1:6a–b

In some languages it may be more natural to reverse the order of 1:6a–b. For example:

6b God was very kind to us because of the Son he dearly loves, 6a and so we should praise God. (Contemporary English Version)
-or-
God has graciously helped us by means of his beloved ⌊Son’s actions⌋, and so we should praise God for that help

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