complete verse (Ecclesiastes 12:6)

Following are a number of back-translations as well as a sample translation for translators of Ecclesiastes 12:6:

  • Kupsabiny: “Think of God before the cord breaks
    before the utensil breaks
    when the water pot has not broken
    and before the ritual container has fallen into the water hole.” (Source: Kupsabiny Back Translation)
  • Newari: “Before the silver cord is torn,
    before the golden cup is broken,
    before the clay pitcher at the watering place is shattered,
    and before the rope at the watering place is broken,
    remember God!” (Source: Newari Back Translation)
  • Hiligaynon: “Therefore remember God while you have- not yet -died, while not yet the silver chain is-broken and the gold container is-broken, or while not yet the cord/rope of a small-jar that is used-to-get-water from the well is-broken, and the small-jar is shattered/smashed.” (Source: Hiligaynon Back Translation)

Translation commentary on Ecclesiastes 12:6

Verses 6 and 7 make up the last subunit of the section dealing with “Remembering the Creator.” In previous verses we saw that there is a wide difference of opinion on whether we are dealing with images of old age, of death itself, or of something else. Here there are still difficulties of interpretation. We do not know precisely what the images of broken cords, bowls, pitchers, and wheels refer to. However, verse 7 is very clear: dust goes back to dust and the spirit goes to God. So there can be little doubt that the images of brokenness in verse 6 point to death as well. While in the previous verses we saw many different approaches to translation, here virtually all versions give a more literal rendering.

This verse begins with the third “time before which” phrase. As noted earlier, in many languages it will be necessary to insert the main clause “remember” at several places in this long series of actions. If so, this is an appropriate place for such an insertion.

A series of six phrases describe things that are broken or have come to the end of a useful life. The imagery differs a great deal from what was used in the previous section. Here the attention is focused on cords, pots, pitchers, and pulleys. In every instance something happens to the item so that it can no longer be used. Though the word “water” does not appear in the text, it is obvious from the context that it is no longer available. Qoheleth’s readers or listeners would have been familiar with water as a symbol for life. So here the message is clear: life has come to an end.

Verse 6 contains four parallel lines made up of a conjunction, a verb, and a noun phrase.

This structure helps to convey the emotion of this passage. The verbs in initial position designate actions that occur in an instant (“snap,” “break,” “shatter”), emphasizing the abruptness and the unexpectedness of death. At the same time the slow, repetitive rhythm seems to express the inevitability of death. Translators should see if similar structures will have the same effect in their language. In some languages ideophones may be used to emphasize the swiftness with which these objects are destroyed.

Before the silver cord is snapped: see comments on verse 1 relating to the “before” phrase. A cord or rope made of silver may suggest a necklace, though some commentators speak of a “counterweight” because of the general context of drawing water from a well. Though many languages have a word for “gold,” not all have a term for silver. If this is the case a word like “chain” may be used, which will indicate that the cord is made of metal; alternatively we can simply say “cord of metal.” As noted below, however, the focus is not on what the items are made of, but the fact that they no longer serve their purpose. The verb is snapped is understood differently in some texts that suggest a verb like “cut” and “break.” These other possible meanings are not essentially different from the meaning of the present Hebrew text and so we do not need to spend time discussing this point. The crucial thing to convey is that the cord (or “chain”) breaks.

Or the golden bowl is broken: the Hebrew word may refer to a bowl (1 Kgs 7.41-42) or “reservoir” (Zech 4.2-3); it is a container of some kind. If made from gold it is unlikely that the verb broken is the best translation, because gold is so soft. “Spoiled” or “crushed” may be more appropriate. The key point seems to be that what was once a valuable object is no longer of use. Good News Translation‘s “the golden lamp” assumes that the bowl refers to the bowl-like oil lamps used in those days. However, the images here imply the use of water rather than oil, so translators should not follow the Good News Translation rendering.

These and the following illustrations are clearly figurative in some sense; they refer to everyday items, although made from precious metals, but they speak in an illustrative fashion. The problem is that we do not know what they point to. However, that is less serious a problem here, because the key feature is the verb with its theme of brokenness and loss of usefulness. For this reason we can translate somewhat literally; translators will note that Good News Translation does this also, having no other interpretation in mind. The first two clauses can be rendered straightforwardly as:

• before the silver chain snaps, or the golden bowl is spoiled.

Or the pitcher is broken at the fountain: a pitcher is used to hold a drink that can be poured out for individual people. The difference between a bowl and a pitcher is not the issue here. The pitcher or “water jug,” like the bowl, is smashed. So these two items are parallel in that they both illustrate the theme of brokenness. They lie in pieces alongside the fountain. This latter term describes a place where water bubbles up out of the ground. “Spring” or “water hole” is probably a better term to use. The pitcher was generally left at the spring or well for anyone to use to draw water. Unfortunately it is broken and can no longer be used to draw or hold water. In many cultures today people use nonbreakable containers to draw water, such as plastic buckets, sacks, and so on. Such modern terms should be avoided. The translator should look for a general expression referring to something that can be broken. It may be necessary to use a longer expression such as “the [clay] pot they use for dipping water” to get the meaning across. Here again, however, the emphasis is not on the object itself but on the fact that in a swift moment of time it is spoiled. Translation can be:

• … or the jug smashed alongside the spring.

• … or the jug for drawing water from the spring lies smashed.

Good News Translation changes the order of material at this point. It places this phrase at the end of the verse, presumably because it assumes this phrase is related to the final one. We do not need to make this change, since each of the phrases in these two verses is an independent but parallel example of things that are broken.

Or the wheel broken at the cistern: the Hebrew galgal is thought to be a wheel by Revised Standard Version and New English Bible. Good News Translation suggests “rope at the well.” New American Bible and Jerusalem Bible think it is a “pulley.” The root gll is generally associated with something that rolls (see, for instance, Pro 26.27). We presume it is a pulley or wheel through which the rope and bucket for drawing water runs. A cistern is a man-made storage place for water rather than a naturally occurring thing like a spring. When the pulley holding the rope is broken, the device cannot be used for raising water. In some languages it will be helpful to make this idea explicit. We can say “The pulley [at the well] is broken, and there is no longer any way to draw water from the well.”

The three illustrations here mention the main items (chain, bucket, and pulley) for drawing water; the point is that each is broken and no longer usable. These three illustrations forcefully make the point that, before it is too late, people should make wise decisions that will affect the rest of life. Each illustration is an indirect reference to death. This is the main issue for Qoheleth, and he has reminded readers that death can come at any moment, not necessarily only when a person is old and feeble.

The entire verse can be rendered:

• [Remember your Creator] before the silver chain is snapped and the golden bowl is spoiled, before the jug for drawing water is smashed and the pulley at the well is broken [and there is no way to get water from the well].

Quoted with permission from Ogden, Graham S. and Zogbo, Lynell. A Handbook on the Book of Ecclesiates. (UBS Helps for Translators). New York: UBS, 1997. For this and other handbooks for translators see here .

SIL Translator’s Notes on Ecclesiastes 12:6

12:6a Remember Him before the silver cord is snapped

Remember your Creator before the silver cord of life snaps. (New Living Translation (2004))
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Remember your Creator because soon your life will snap like a silver chain
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⌊Think about God now⌋ before you die.

12:6b and the golden bowl is crushed

And ⌊remember him before your body, which is like⌋ the golden container, is crushed.
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or break like a golden bowl. (New Century Version)
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⌊At that time your body will be useless like⌋ a precious broken dish

12:6c before the pitcher is shattered at the spring

⌊Remember him before⌋ the pitcher is shattered at the fountain.
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You will be like a broken pitcher at a spring, (New Century Version)
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⌊because⌋ you will die suddenly,

12:6d and the wheel is broken at the well,

And ⌊remember him before⌋ the pulley breaks at the cistern.
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or a broken wheel at a well. (New Century Version)
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and all your movements will cease.

12:6a-d (combined)

⌊One day⌋ the silver chain will snap, and the golden dish will fall and break. The water jar will be shattered and the wheel at the well ⌊which you need to draw water from⌋ will break.
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Remember to serve God while you are young, because one day your life will finish. It will be like a silver chain that breaks. ⌊It will be⌋ like a gold bowl that breaks. ⌊It will be⌋ like a water pot at the well that breaks into pieces. ⌊It will be⌋ like a rope at the well that breaks apart. (EEB)

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Commentaire sur la traduction de l'Ecclésiaste 12.6

Qohéleth entame une nouvelle série de métaphores. Bien que certains y voient deux métaphores (les deux premiers vers renvoyant à une lampe selon Whybray), la majorité y voit une seule image : celle d’une source d’eau ou d’un puits, avec les instruments associés pour puiser l’eau. Ceux-ci sont en train de se briser. Selon presque tous les biblistes, ce brisement représente la mort. Effectivement à travers les Écritures Saintes, l’eau et tout ce qui la concerne symbolise la vie. Ce verset montre que l’accès à l’eau n’est plus possible. Encore une fois les traducteurs sont confrontés à un choix : traduire les métaphores telles qu’elles se présentent, en laissant l’interprétation au lecteur (guidé parfois par les notes), ou bien essayer d’exprimer le sens d’une manière plus compréhensible.

Ce verset commence par les mêmes mots qui commencent la liste des métaphores. אֲשֶׁר עַד ʿad ʾašèr, « jusqu’à ce que » (Ecc 12.1, Ecc 12.2). Pour garder le lien, il serait bon d’utiliser la même expression ici. Certains répètent le premier appel, ajoutant ainsi, « Souviens-toi de ton créateur avant que… »

Ce verset présente quatre lignes parallèles :
ne se détache pas… le cordon d’argent
et se casse… le réservoir d’or
et se brise… la cruche auprès de la fontaine
et se casse… la roue à la citerne

Ces images sont un peu étonnantes, car les instruments cités sont en argent et en or, des métaux qui, normalement, ne se cassent pas. L’or et l’argent, ainsi que l’eau symbolisent certainement la valeur précieuse de la vie. Certains commentateurs proposent que ces mots évoquent le cadre royal luxueux où Qohéleth se place.

La particule négative לֹא lôʾ n’apparaît que dans le premier vers en hébreu, mais d’un point de vue linguistique, il est implicite dans ce qui suit. En français, chaque phrase peut comprendre une particule de négation, mais dans d’autres langues, ceci est sous-entendu.

avant que ne se détache le fil argenté : les biblistes ne sont pas d’accord sur le référent du fil argenté. Pour certains c’est la chaîne sur laquelle on pend une lampe ou une corde par laquelle on puise l’eau. Le mot חֶבֶל ḥèvèl, fil, a été certainement choisi par le poète pour exprimer de l’ironie, puisqu’il est homonyme du terme clé הֶבֶל hèvèl, vanité. Le fait que fil soit en argent montre que ce fil est précieux et important. La Bible en français courant rend explicite « le fil d’argent de la vie », mais la majorité des versions rendent le texte tel qu’il se présente en hébreu, laissant au lecteur/auditeur déterminer son sens. Pour argent, voir Ecc 2.8.

Dire que le fil argenté se détache (« se coupe brusquement en deux ») décrit probablement une mort subite et inattendue. Bien que le verbe רתק rḥq, présente un problème textuel (Critique Textuelle de l’Ancien Testament évalue se détacher à un « C ») la majorité opte pour ce sens. On pourrait aussi dire « rompre » (La Bible du Semeur) ou « se couper en deux ».

et que la coupe d’or ne se brise : en poésie hébraïque, la mention de l’argent va de pair avec la mention d’un autre métal précieux, l’or. Voir Ecc 2.8. Qohéleth continue sa liste de métaphores en disant que la coupe se brise. Quant au mot גֻּלָּה goullâh, les biblistes ne sont pas d’accord sur le sens, certains optant pour une sorte de bol (1 Rois 7.41-42), d’autres pour un réservoir (Zach 4.2-3).

ne se brise : le verbe רצץ rçç, apparaît ici et dans le dernier vers du verset, avec le sens de « casser » ou même « écraser ». Ceci gêne les exégètes car ce n’est pas facile de casser ou d’écraser un objet en or. Mais on peut y voir de l’ironie : même les choses les plus précieuses dans ce monde sont éphémères.

que la jarre ne se casse à la fontaine : כַּד kad, la jarre, est certainement une cruche en argile typique dans les récits bibliques. Voir, par exemple, Gen 24.14 et Jug 7.16. Elle est utilisée pour garder de l’eau fraîche mais elle peut aussi être plongée dans l’eau pour recueillir et soulever l’eau. Contrairement aux objets en argent et en or, une jarre se brise facilement. Le verbe שׁבר šbr, casser, n’apparaît qu’ici dans ce livre mais est fréquent dans l’AT, décrivant, par exemple, l’action de briser une porte (Gen 19.9). Le son même du mot, שָּׁבֶר šâvèr évoque cet acte. Les traducteurs devraient chercher un verbe qui convient à ce contexte. Dans certaines langues, dans ce contexte poétique, un idéophone pourrait évoquer cette cassure. Si la langue cible n’a pas plusieurs mots pour se casser, on sera obligé d’utiliser le même verbe plusieurs fois dans ce verset.

la fontaine : ce mot n’apparaît que trois fois dans l’AT, ici et en És 35.7 et 49. Il renvoie certainement à une source d’eau, dont on ignore le type. Néanmoins le mot est en parallèle avec le mot citerne ci-dessous.

et qu’à la citerne la poulie ne se brise : le mot hébreu בּוֹר bôr renvoie à n’importe quelle sorte de citerne ou puits qui se trouve partout au Proche Orient. Ce n’est peut-être pas un hasard si ce mot désigne aussi dans la poésie hébraïque le séjour des morts, le Shéol.

Le mot rendu par poulie est גַּלְגַּל galgal, qui est associé au mouvement de « rouler ». Ainsi il s’agira d’une poulie ou d’une sorte de « roue », un instrument qui aide à faire monter le récipient rempli d’eau. Mais d’autres réfutent cette explication, disant que le système à poulie n’était pas connu en Israël à cette époque. Néanmoins plusieurs versions rendent explicite « [avant que] la poulie [ne] se brise et tombe dans la citerne » ou « [avant que] la poulie [ne] tombe au fond du puits ». On pourrait aussi parler tout simplement de « la corde du puits » (Parole de Vie).

Le verbe se brise se répète. Voir 12.6b.

Ce verset est difficile à cause des métaphores et mots multiples dont on ignore le sens. Ce qui est important, c’est de communiquer le fait que les choses précieuses ainsi que les choses ordinaires finissent toutes par se casser. Ainsi Qohéleth affirme à travers des images poétiques que la fin de chacun est inévitable.

Source: Zogbo, Lynell. L’Ecclésiaste – Manuel de traduction – Commentaire linguistique et exégétique de la Bible. Alliance biblique universelle, 2021.