Translation commentary on 2 Esdras 16:22

For many of those who live on the earth shall perish by famine; and those who survive the famine shall die by the sword: The connector For may be omitted (so Good News Bible, Contemporary English Version). Good News Bible provides a good model for this verse. Another possible one is:

• Many people on earth will starve to death, and those who survive will die in war.

Quoted with permission from Bullard, Roger A. and Hatton, Howard A. A Handbook on 1-2 Esdras. (UBS Helps for Translators). Miami: UBS, 2019. For this and other handbooks for translators see here.