SIL Translator’s Notes on Revelation 21:2

21:2a

I saw the holy city, the new Jerusalem:
The new Jerusalem is the holy city because it belongs to God and God will live there. Here the word holy indicates that the city is dedicated for God’s use. Only his people will live there. Nothing evil will live there. Other ways to translate this phrase are:

I saw the City set apart ⌊for God⌋ , which is the new Jerusalem
-or-
I saw God’s ⌊special⌋ City. This is the new Jerusalem

coming down out of heaven from God: This phrase tells the reader more about the holy city. In some languages a literal translation would wrongly indicate that there are other holy cities and only this one was coming down out of heaven from God. If that is true in your language, translate this phrase so that it tells more about the Holy City. One way to do that is to start a new sentence here. For example:

The city came down from God in heaven.

heaven: Here the word heaven refers to the place where God lives.

21:2b

prepared as a bride adorned for her husband: This phrase symbolically compares the new Jerusalem to a woman about to be married. Like a bride makes herself ready for the wedding, so the new Jerusalem is ready to marry.

In some languages it is more natural to translate 21:2b as a separate sentence. For example:

It was prepared like a bride dressed for her husband. (New Century Version)

prepared: Here the word prepared means “was made ready.” The city was ready in the way that a bride is ready to meet her husband. For example:

dressed like a bride ready for her husband (God’s Word)
-or-
like a bride dressed in her wedding gown and ready to meet her husband. (Contemporary English Version)

The clause is passive. Some languages must use an active clause. For example:

⌊others/they⌋ made her ready

bride: This word refers to a woman who is about to marry.

adorned: The Greek word that the Berean Standard Bible literally translates as adorned refers to wearing a beautiful dress and jewelry. Other ways to translate this phrase are:

beautifully dressed (New International Version)
-or-
made beautiful

her husband: Here the word husband refers to the man about to marry his bride.

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SIL Translator’s Notes on Revelation 22:7

Paragraph 22:7

22:7a–b

“Behold, I am coming soon. Blessed is the one who keeps the words of prophecy in this book.”: The Greek does not say who spoke these words. There are several interpretations:

(1) Jesus spoke the words in 22:7a–b. For example:

“Listen!” says Jesus. “I am coming soon! Happy are those who obey the prophetic words in this book!” (Good News Translation)

(2) The angel also spoke the words in 22:7a and John wrote the words in 22:7b. For example:

6c to show his servants what must soon take place. 7a And behold, I am coming soon.” 7b Blessed is he who keeps the words of the prophecy of this book. (Revised Standard Version)

(3) The angel also spoke the words in 22:7a–b. For example:

6c to show his servants the things that must happen soon. 7a I’m coming soon! 7b Blessed is the one who follows the words of the prophecy in this book.” (God’s Word)

It is recommended that you follow interpretation (1).

The Greek and the Berean Standard Bible do not introduce the new speaker. In some languages a literal translation would wrongly indicate that the angel spoke these words. If that is true in your language, you may want to:

• Indicate who spoke in your translation. For example:

⌊Jesus said,⌋ “Behold, I am coming soon! Blessed is he who keeps the words of the prophecy in this book.”

• Explain who spoke in a footnote. An example footnote is:

Jesus probably said this.

22:7a

Behold: This word means “look.” The word emphasizes or calls attention to the words that follow. It is not a command to look at something. Other ways to translate this word are:

Look (New Living Translation (2004))
-or-
Listen (Good News Translation)
-or-
Indeed/Hey

I am coming soon: This clause refers to Jesus returning to his people on earth. The Greek word that the Berean Standard Bible translates as soon can also mean “without delay” or “quickly.” Other ways to translate this clause are:

I am coming quickly (New American Standard Bible)
-or-
I am coming without delay

See how you translated this clause in 3:11.

22:7b

Blessed: The Greek word that the Berean Standard Bible translates as Blessed describes a person who is in a good situation. In the Bible, the good situation results from God showing favor/kindness to the person. Other ways to translate this word are:

Favored
-or-
How good it is
-or-
In a good/desirable position ⌊in God’s eyes⌋
-or-
Shown kindness ⌊by God⌋

See how you translated this word in 1:3 or 20:6.

keeps the words of prophecy in this book: Here, the word keeps refers to following what was said and valuing it. Believers follow the words of this book and value it. Other ways to translate this clause are:

values the words of the prophecy in this book
-or-
obey the prophetic words in this book (Good News Translation)

prophecy: The word prophecy refers to a message that God gives to someone. The message may include a vision, as in Ezekiel 1 and Daniel 8. A prophecy may reveal something about past events, current events, or future events. The prophet speaks the prophecy to the people or writes it for their use.

See how you translated this word in 1:3 or 19:10.

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SIL Translator’s Notes on Revelation 1:13

1:13a

among: This word indicates that the lampstands were positioned on either side of Jesus. Some lampstands may have been in front of Jesus and some may have been behind him. It is implied that Jesus was standing. For example:

⌊standing⌋ in the middle/midst of

One like the Son of Man: The phrase the Son of Man is based on the Hebrew idiom that refers to someone who has the characteristics of a man. So here it means “a human being.” John probably implies a connection to Daniel 7:13. There, Daniel saw someone who looked like a person (rather than an angel or other kind of being) coming on the clouds. Daniel said he was “like a son of man.” This phrase probably implies three things:

(a) This person was the Christ. This whole phrase is similar to the phrase in Daniel 7:13. Many Jews in Jesus’ time understood that Daniel 7:13–14 described the Christ. John probably wanted to remind his readers of those verses in Daniel.

(b) This person was Jesus. The phrase the Son of Man is similar to the phrase “the Son of Man” that Jesus often used for himself.

(c) This person looked like a human being. In Hebrew the phrase Son of means “someone having the characteristics of.” John saw a being who looked like a person, but with the differences described in 1:14–16.

Some ways to translate this phrase are:

• Translate literally. You may want to translate literally if you translated “the Son of Man” literally in the Gospels. You may then want to explain the meaning of the phrase in a footnote. An example footnote is:

The saying “someone like a son of man” would remind believers of those words in Daniel 7:13–14. This saying would also remind them of Jesus’ title for himself: “the Son of Man.”

Keep the word Man general rather than referring to an unknown man; that is, do not say or imply “a son of a man” or “a son of the man.”

Note: Some languages do not have the word “the” or “a,” but the meaning is understood from context. But without a “the” or “a,” there is no clear way to translate the difference between “the Son of Man” and “a son of man.” If that is true in your language, you should translate as indicated below.

• Translate according to meaning (c) above. Some examples are:

there was what looked like a human being (Good News Translation)
-or-
a figure like a man (Revised English Bible)

You may want to include a footnote to explain the literal words. An example footnote is:

Literally: “someone like a son of man.” This saying would remind believers of those words in Daniel 7:13–14. This saying would also remind them of Jesus’ title for himself: “the Son of Man.” But here John is only indicating that he saw someone who looked somewhat like a human being, and this person’s appearance in 1:13–16 and his words in 1:17–20 indicate that he is Jesus.

If you do not have “the” and “a” in your language, you may want a different footnote. For example:

Literally: “someone like son of man.” This saying is a Hebrew idiom that means “someone who looks like a human being.” It would remind believers of those words in Daniel 7:13–14. Jesus used these words as a title for himself: “the Son of Man.” But here John is only indicating that he saw someone who looked somewhat like a human being, and this person’s appearance in 1:13–16 and his words in 1:17–20 indicate that he is Jesus.

Note: You should not translate this phrase as “someone like the Son of Man.” Translating that way indicates that the person whom John saw was not Jesus but someone like him. But 1:18 shows that this phrase does refer to Jesus.

like the Son of Man: This phrase is a quote from Daniel 7:13. If you usually footnote the location of quotes from the Old Testament, you may want to do so here.

1:13b

dressed in: This phrase indicates that Jesus was wearing the robe. Other ways to translate this phrase are:

clothed with (Revised Standard Version)
-or-
wearing (Good News Translation)

a long robe: This phrase refers to a long loose garment which covers the body from the shoulders down to the feet. A robe also has loose sleeves covering the arms.

In some languages people are not familiar with robes. If that is true in your language, you may want to:

• Use a descriptive phrase. For example:

long ⌊flowing⌋ clothes
-or-

⌊one-piece⌋ full-length clothes

• Use the major language word. If people are not familiar with this word, you may want to explain it in a footnote. An example footnote is:

A robe is a long, loose garment which covers the body from the shoulders down to the feet. A robe also has loose sleeves covering the arms.

1:13c

a golden sash around His chest: The Greek word that the Berean Standard Bible translates as sash refers to a wrapping that was usually worn around the waist. But the phrase His chest indicates that the sash went around Jesus’ body at chest height.

The sash was made of gold. It was probably a cloth made of gold thread. Other ways to translate this phrase are:

he wore a wide golden belt around his chest (NET Bible)
-or-
a gold band around his chest (Good News Translation)
-or-
a gold cloth was wrapped around his chest (Contemporary English Version)

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SIL Translator’s Notes on Revelation 2:26

Paragraph 2:26–29

2:26–28

These verses contain promises that God will reward anyone who overcomes. Several English versions therefore use plural rather than singular forms throughout these verses: “To those who overcome….” If you use plural forms, you should remember that 2:27a–b contains a quotation from the Old Testament. At that time God spoke to one person, the king. You should not translate the quotation in a way that indicates that the original promise was addressed to many people.

2:26a

And to the one who overcomes and continues in My work until the end: These words are emphasized by being in front of the phrase “I will give” (2:26b). If you have a natural way in your language to emphasize these words, you may want to do so. For example:

To him who conquers and does the deeds I want him to do until the end, I will give
-or-
To those who win the victory I will give (New Century Version)

In some languages it is not natural to emphasize these words in this way. For example:

I will give to him who overcomes and does my will until the end

overcomes: The word overcomes means “triumphs” or “obtains/wins victory.” Here the word refers to having success over sin, evil, and pressure to turn away from Jesus. Translate this phrase as you did in 2:17.

continues in My work: This phrase refers to doing the works/deeds that Jesus commands believers to do. Other ways to translate this phrase are:

who obey me (New Living Translation (2004))
-or-
follows my commands

until the end: This phrase probably has the same meaning as “until I come” in 2:25. It refers to the end of the present age, when Jesus returns. In some languages it is necessary to include the implied information. For example:

to the end ⌊of the age⌋

2:26b

I will give authority over the nations: The word authority refers to the right and power to control or rule over someone or something. Jesus will enable faithful believers to rule the nations. Other ways to translate this are:

I will give authority to rule the nations
-or-
I will cause them to rule over the nations

the nations: The phrase the nations in the Old Testament refers to all non-Jewish peoples. Here it refers generally to countries and people who are not part of God’s people. It can also refer to groups of people grouped by language or culture.

General Comment on 2:26a–b

2:26a states to whom the promise was made. 2:26b is the main part of the clause. In some languages it is more natural to put the main part of the clause first. For example:

26b I will give power over the nations 26a to everyone who wins the victory and keeps on obeying me until the end. (Contemporary English Version)

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SIL Translator’s Notes on Revelation 4:7

4:7a

The first living creature was like a lion: This first creature looked like a lion.

a lion: A lion is a large, fierce, four-legged animal. They weigh about 200 kilograms (450 pounds) and are about 2 meters (6.5 feet) in length. They prey upon and eat other animals, sometimes animals bigger than themselves. The male lion has a mane of hair on the head and neck. The female lion does not have a mane.

If lions are not known in your area, you may want to:

• Use the major language word. If people are not familiar with this word, explain it in a footnote. An example footnote is:

A lion is a large, fierce, four-legged animal. A lion weighs about 200 kilograms and is about two meters in length.

• Use the major language word and add a descriptive phrase. For example:

⌊a large, fierce animal called⌋ a lion

4:7b

the second like a calf: This second creature looked like a calf. The word “creature” is implied from 4:7a, but it is not repeated here.

second: The word second refers to the next item after the first one. If counted, this item would be counted as number two. Other ways to translate this word are:

the one after the first
-or-
another

a calf: A calf is the offspring of cattle or oxen. Mature oxen weigh about 800 kilograms (1,800 pounds) and are about 2.4 meters (8 feet) in length. They eat grass.

The Greek word that the Berean Standard Bible translates as calf can also refer to full-grown cattle. For example, the New International Version says:

an ox

A calf would not have horns. It is not clear here whether a young or mature ox is meant.

If calves (the plural of calf) are not known in your area, you may want to:

• Use the major language word. If people are not familiar with this word, explain it in a footnote. An example footnote is:

A calf is a young cow (female) or bull (male). Cows and bulls are large, domesticated/tame four-legged animals. They weigh about 800 kilograms and are about 2.4 meters in length when they are full grown.

• Use the major language word and add a descriptive phrase. For example:

⌊a large animal called⌋ a calf

4:7c

the third had a face like a man: The face of the third creature looked like a human being. The rest of the third creature is not described. The word “creature” is implied from 4:7a, but it is not repeated here.

third: This refers to the next item after the second one. If counted, this item would be counted as number three. Other ways to translate this word are:

the one after the other two
-or-
the one after the two of them
-or-
another ⌊beside the other two⌋

4:7d

the fourth was like an eagle in flight: This fourth creature looked like an eagle that was flying. The word “creature” is implied from 4:7a, but it is not repeated.

fourth: The word fourth refers to the next item after three other things. If counted, this item would be counted as number four. Here it refers to the last of four living creatures. Other ways to translate this word here are:

the one after the other three
-or-
the one after the three of them
-or-
last

an eagle in flight: An eagle is a large, sometimes aggressive bird. They weigh about 5 kilograms (11 pounds) and are about 1 meter (3 feet) in length. They eat meat.

If eagles are not known in your area, you may want to:

• Use the major language word. If people are not familiar with this word, explain it in a footnote. An example footnote is:

An eagle is a large, meat-eating bird. It weighs about 5 kilograms and is about one meter in length.

• Use the major language word and add a descriptive phrase. For example:

⌊a large bird called⌋ an eagle flying

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SIL Translator’s Notes on Revelation 6:14

6:14a

receded like a scroll being rolled up: The Greek words are literally “split apart, like a scroll rolling up.” This would be like an opened scroll splitting in the middle and the two ends rolling themselves up away from each other. For example:

The sky was split apart like a scroll when it is rolled up (New American Standard Bible)
-or-
The sky was split apart like a scroll being rolled up (NET Bible)
-or-
the sky split-in-two and rolled-up like a rolled-up paper which is opened-up and divided-in-two and rolls-up again
-or-
The sky was rolled up like a scroll (New Living Translation (2004))

a scroll: A scroll was a long piece of paper or parchment used for writing a long document. A person unrolled it to read it and then rolled it up to put it away. The paper or parchment was normally rolled up, so it would often roll up by itself if a person did not hold it open.

In some languages people are not familiar with scrolls. If that is true in your language, you may want to use something similar in shape to a scroll. For example:

paper
-or-
a mat

being rolled up: This clause is passive. Some languages must use an active clause. Since this is a figure of speech, it is not important who rolled up the scroll.

In some languages an active clause must be used. For example:

⌊that someone⌋ rolls up

6:14b

every mountain and island was moved from its place: The Greek word that the Berean Standard Bible translates as moved can also mean “removed” or “shaken.” It is not clear if this verse corresponds to 16:20 (“fled” and “no mountain could be found”) or not. Other ways to translate this are:

every mountain and island was dislodged from its place (Revised English Bible)
-or-
every mountain and island was removed from its place (New International Version, English Standard Version)
-or-
all the mountains and islands were shaken from their places (New Jerusalem Bible)

every mountain and island was moved: This clause is passive. Some languages must use an active clause. God caused the earthquakes that moved the mountains and islands, or he commanded someone to move them. For example:

⌊earthquakes⌋ moved every mountain and island
-or-

⌊God caused⌋ every mountain and island to move from their place

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SIL Translator’s Notes on Revelation 9:2

9:2a

opened the pit of the Abyss: The Greek clause is literally “he opened the shaft of the Abyss.” The New International Version shortens the clause, as is natural in English. In some languages it is more natural to translate the whole Greek clause. For example:

he opened the shaft of the Abyss

9:2b

smoke rose out of it like the smoke of a great furnace: This clause compares the smoke coming from the Abyss to smoke that comes from a great furnace.

In some languages it is not natural to repeat the word smoke. For example:

smoke poured out as though from a huge furnace (New Living Translation (2004))

like the smoke of a great furnace: A furnace is an enclosure heated by a big fire. A furnace often has a smokestack above that takes the smoke far above it. This simile refers to lots of thick black smoke rising quickly.

In some languages people are not familiar with furnaces. If that is true in your language, you may want to:

• Use a simile for something in your area that produces a lot of black smoke that rises quickly. For example:

like the smoke from a house fire

• Describe the meaning of the simile. For example:

much thick, ⌊black,⌋ smoke rising quickly

9:2c

and the sun and the air were darkened by the smoke from the pit: This clause is passive. Some languages must use an active clause. For example:

The smoke from the Abyss darkened the sun and sky
-or-
the sun and the air turned dark because of the smoke (Contemporary English Version)

the air: The Berean Standard Bible translates the Greek phrase here literally as the air. The smoke probably went everywhere in the air: low to the ground and high in the sky and in between, as well. Other ways to translate this word are:

sky (New International Version)
-or-
atmosphere

darkened: The word darkened here indicates that the smoke greatly reduced the amount of light. Here the word probably does not indicate that the sun and sky were completely dark.

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SIL Translator’s Notes on Revelation 11:3

11:3a

And: The Greek conjunction here probably introduces more information. Some English versions translate the Greek conjunction as “and.” Other English versions do not translate the conjunction and allow the context to imply this connection.

There is some contrast here with the ungodly people trampling the holy city. In some languages it is more natural to indicate this contrast. For example:

But (New Jerusalem Bible)

I will empower: The Greek word the Berean Standard Bible translates as I will empower is literally “I will give.” Berean Standard Bible supplies the word empower because the context implies either “power” or “authority” will be given. What the witnesses will be able to do is told in 11:3b. For example:

grant authority (English Standard Version)

witnesses: The noun “witness” refers to a person who tells what he has seen, heard, or come to know. Here the witnesses tell others what God told them. The Greek word may refer to two men or to a man and a woman. It probably does not refer to two women. Other ways to translate this word are:

testifiers
-or-
people who speaks about what they knows
-or-
those who report/explain

See how you translated this word in 1:5 or 3:14.

11:3b

prophesy: The word prophesy refers to speaking to people a message that God gives to him. These messages are called “prophecies” and reveal things that God wants people to know at that time. Other ways to translate this word are:

speak God’s message
-or-
proclaim God’s revelation

See how you translated this word in 10:11.

1,260: The Greek phrase uses number words: “one-thousand two-hundred sixty.” There are several ways to translate this meaning:

• Use number words. For example:

one thousand two hundred sixty
-or-
one thousand and/plus two hundred and/plus sixty

• Use numerals as the Berean Standard Bible does.

Use number words or phrase for “thousand” and “hundred” from the major language. For example:

one tausen two handet six tens
-or-
one tausen and two handets and six tens

clothed in sackcloth: The word sackcloth refers to a rough cloth. The threads of the cloth are thick and made of hair. People often wore clothing made of sackcloth when they mourned someone who died.

In some languages people are not familiar with sackcloth. If that is true in your language, you may want to explain it in your translation. For example:

wearing mourning clothes
-or-
they will be dressed in rough cloth to show their sadness (New Century Version)
-or-
dressed in clothing of rough cloth ⌊as a sign of grief⌋

See how you translated this word at 6:12.

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