Translation commentary on Mark 12:10 – 12:11

Exegesis:

oude tēn graphēn tautēn anegnōte; ‘have you not read even this scripture?’: in such a context oude means ‘not even’ (cf. Lagrange ‘at least this scripture?’) rather than ‘not’ (cf. Moffatt). The scripture quoted is Ps. 118.22-23, quoted exactly as the Septuagint translates it.

graphē (only here in singular; in 12.24; 14.49 in plural) ‘writing,’ ‘(passage of) scripture’: the singular refers to a particular passage in the O.T., in accordance with normal use of the word in the N.T.

anaginōskō (cf. 2.25) ‘read.’

lithon (cf. 5.5) ‘stone’: Revised Standard Version ‘the very stone’ carries somewhat more emphasis than the Greek allows; ‘the stone,’ or, at the most, ‘that stone,’ is an accurate translation. The word lithon is in the accusative case, by attraction to the case of the relative pronoun hon ‘which,’ the object of the verb apedokimasan ‘they rejected,’ a construction common in Greek.

apedokimasan (cf. 8.31) ‘they rejected,’ ‘they considered worthless.’

hoi oikodomountes (cf. 12.1) ‘the builders.’

egenēthē eis kephalēn gōnias ‘was the cornerstone,’ ‘became the head of the corner’: egenēthē eis is the literal Septuagint translation of the Hebrew phrase hayah le and means simply ‘was,’ ‘became’ (cf. 10.8).

kephalē gōnias (only here in Mark) is either ‘the cornerstone’ which holds together the walls, or ‘the keystone,’ ‘the capstone’ which is placed above the door. Most translations have ‘cornerstone.’ Revised Standard Version (following American Standard Version) ‘the head of the corner,’ here and elsewhere in the N.T. where the passage is quoted (parallels Mt. 21.42, Lk. 20.17; Acts 4.11, 1 Pet. 2.7), is inconsistent with its translation of the O.T. passage (Ps. 118.22), which appears as ‘chief cornerstone.’ The cognate akrogōniaios, the Septuagint translation in Isa. 28.16, is found in Eph. 2.20 and 1 Pet. 2.6, the Revised Standard Version translation in all three passages being ‘cornerstone.’ If a distinction is to be maintained between kephalē gōnias and akrogōniaios in the N.T., ‘chief cornerstone’ should be used for the former and ‘cornerstone’ for the latter. ‘The head of the corner’ may be virtually meaningless.

para kuriou egeneto hautē ‘this came from the Lord,’ ‘this was the Lord’s doing.’

kuriou ‘of the Lord,’ i.e. ‘of Yahweh,’ ‘of God’ (cf. 1.3).

hautē ‘this’: the feminine gender is due to the Septuagint literal translation of the Hebrew feminine demonstrative zoʾth which is used for the neuter, and means, in this passage, ‘this thing,’ ‘this matter’ (Field gives other Septuagint passages where the same thing occurs). Gould, with little probability, refers hautē to kephalē gōnias ‘cornerstone’ (cf. Lagrange, Swete, Taylor).

thaumastē (only here in Mark) ‘marvelous,’ ‘wonderful.’

en ophthalmois hēmōn ‘in our sight,’ i.e. ‘in our judgment.’

Translation:

For the treatment of a question implying a positive answer, as for example, have you not read this scripture, see 11.17, but in this particular context the problem is somewhat more difficult because of the long direct discourse which follows and which cannot be combined in some languages with the question. Accordingly, one may need to employ certain close equivalents, e.g. ‘Have you read this scripture; I am sure you have’ (which implies the same as the negative form in English which anticipates a positive answer and as such is really a strong affirmative of the statement), or ‘You have read this scripture surely?,’ or ‘Have you not read this scripture – yes?’ (or ‘no,’ depending upon patterns of agreement). Whether the punctuation of the question should be placed at the end of the direct discourse will depend entirely upon the syntactic patterns of the receptor language and the traditional practices.

Scripture may be translated as ‘the writing’ (Yucateco), ‘the sacred writing,’ in which ‘sacred,’ as a kind of classifier, is required in order to indicate the religious nature of the writing (Ngäbere), and ‘this writing of God,’ without implying that God literally wrote out the document (Tzotzil, San Blas Kuna, Eastern Highland Otomi).

Builders may be translated in some languages as ‘house-makers’ (Barrow Eskimo).

Rejected may be objective in the sense of ‘cast aside,’ but the more accurate rendering is a subjective one ‘regarded as worthless’ or ‘thought was not of value’ (or ‘was useless’).

Head of the corner should not be translated literally, unless by some strange coincidence it is a meaningful expression. As noted above, the meaning is either corner stone or cap stone. As the first meaning one may have ‘ear of the house’ (Conob) or ‘the strongest stone in the corner’ (Tzotzil). In other instances, translators have chosen the meaning of cap stone or keystone, and translated this as ‘the top stone’ or ‘the high stone.’ However, an ambiguous expression, which at the same time conveys the significance of the passage, may emphasize the relative importance of the stone, e.g. ‘the most important stone’ (Huastec), ‘surpasses in importance to hold up the house’ (Yaka), ‘most valued stone,’ with the meaning of ‘most useful’ (Eastern Highland Otomi).

Many languages distinguish two words for ‘corner,’ an inside and an outside corner, e.g. Spanish. Here the outside corner is the one involved.

This was the Lord’s doing is a relatively difficult expression to translate literally into other languages, but it may be transformed into a direct construction, ‘the Lord has done this.’

For the use of Lord see 1.3. Despite the fact that this is a reference to Lord as God, it is important to preserve the ambiguity of the N.T. in using a word which is also the common designation of Jesus as Lord.

Marvelous in our eyes must usually be changed to a direct construction, e.g. ‘as we see it we are amazed’ (Navajo) or ‘we see it as a big thing’ (Eastern Highland Otomi). Eyes is only an indirect way of speaking about ‘seeing.’

Quoted with permission from Bratcher, Robert G. and Nida, Eugene A. A Handbook on the Gospel of Mark. (UBS Handbook Series). New York: UBS, 1961. For this and other handbooks for translators see here .

Translation commentary on Mark 12:43

Exegesis:

proskalesamenos (cf. 3.13) ‘calling to him,’ ‘summoning.’

pleion pantōn ebalen tōn ballontōn ‘she put more than all those who are putting’: the strict, literal meaning of the Greek is that she put in more than all others together put in.

pleion ‘more’ is an adverb modifying ebalen ‘she put’: ‘she contributed more.’

Translation:

Called must not be understood as ‘calling out to,’ but as ‘called the attention of’ or ‘told them to note what was happening,’ for no doubt the disciples were grouped close enough to Jesus, so as to have readily heard his statement. (What one must avoid in the translation of call, which occurs so often in the Gospels, is the impression that Jesus was constantly shouting to his disciples like some army sergeant – an impression which has been given by some translations.)

For truly in this type of construction see 8.12.

For the analysis of problems involved in comparative constructions such as more than see 1.7. In this particular context one may say in some languages ‘what this poor widow has put in surpasses all that…,’ or ‘what this poor widow has put in is much, what all the rest have put in … is not much.’

Quoted with permission from Bratcher, Robert G. and Nida, Eugene A. A Handbook on the Gospel of Mark. (UBS Handbook Series). New York: UBS, 1961. For this and other handbooks for translators see here .

Translation commentary on Mark 13:31

Exegesis:

ho ouranos kai hē gē ‘heaven and earth,’ ‘the whole created universe.’

hoi … logoi mou ‘my words’: although in the context this refers to the discourse, it is better literally to translate ‘my words,’ ‘my teachings’ (cf. hoi emoi logoi ‘my words’ in 8.38).

Translation:

Heaven in this context is to be understood as the ‘sky,’ not the abode of God. Hence, one may translate ‘the sky and the earth will come to an end’ (Tzeltal, Copainalá Zoque), or ‘the sky and the earth will exist no more.’

Some translators have interpreted this verse as ‘even though the sky and the earth should pass away, my words would not pass away,’ but though this may be implied, it is not a necessary or recommended rendering.

Depending upon the expression used in the first clause, one may translate the second clause as ‘my words will not come to an end’ or ‘my words will not cease to exist.’ On the other hand, the mere continuation of words may not clearly indicate the meaning of this passage, which denotes the fact that the statements of Jesus will have eternal validity. Accordingly, in some languages one must translate as ‘my words will always have their power’ or ‘my words will never stop being strong’ (in the sense of true, dependable prophecy).

Quoted with permission from Bratcher, Robert G. and Nida, Eugene A. A Handbook on the Gospel of Mark. (UBS Handbook Series). New York: UBS, 1961. For this and other handbooks for translators see here .

Translation commentary on Mark 14:26

Exegesis:

humnēsantes (only here in Mark) ‘having sung a hymn’: at the end of the Jewish Passover, Psalms 115-18 were sung.

to oros tōn elaiōn (cf. 11.1) ‘the Mount of Olives.’

Translation:

Hymn has been translated as ‘prayer song’ in Barrow Eskimo. In other languages it is rendered as ‘song of praise’ or ‘singing of thanks.’

For Mount of Olives see 11.1.

Quoted with permission from Bratcher, Robert G. and Nida, Eugene A. A Handbook on the Gospel of Mark. (UBS Handbook Series). New York: UBS, 1961. For this and other handbooks for translators see here .

Translation commentary on Mark 14:58

Exegesis:

hoti … hoti ‘that … that’: both times the hoti is recitative, introducing direct speech.

katalusō (cf. 13.2) ‘I will tear down,’ ‘I will demolish,’ ‘I will destroy.’ On this saying, cf. further 15.29.

ton naon (15.29, 38) ‘the sanctuary’: it is generally assumed that naos refers to the central area of the Temple, the holy of holies, as distinct from the whole Temple area as such, referred to as the hieron (cf. 11.11).

cheiropoiēton (only here in Mark) ‘hand made,’ ‘built by men,’ i.e. material.

dia triōn hēmerōn (cf. 2.1 di’ hēmerōn) ‘after three days’: cf. the similar phrase meta treis hēmeras (8.31; 9.31; 10.34).

acheiropoiēton (only here in Mark) ‘not made by hand,’ ‘built not by men,’ i.e. spiritual.

oikodomēsō (cf. 12.1) ‘I will build,’ ‘I will construct.’

Translation:

We heard him say must in some languages be shifted to a paratactic construction of two subject-predicate constructions: ‘we heard him; he said.’

For temple see 11.11, but note that in this context the central building is designated. Accordingly, one may often use ‘this house of God,’ ‘this dwelling of God,’ or ‘this place of God,’ since all of these expressions may give rise to a double meaning, including not only the temple itself but Jesus own person.

Made with hands is most often translated as ‘built by men’ or ‘built by men’s hands.’ Hands is a figurative substitute for ‘men.’ Not made with hands may be rendered as a modifying clause, ‘which men will not make.’

Quoted with permission from Bratcher, Robert G. and Nida, Eugene A. A Handbook on the Gospel of Mark. (UBS Handbook Series). New York: UBS, 1961. For this and other handbooks for translators see here .

Translation commentary on Mark 15:19

Exegesis:

The force of the three imperfects etupton, eneptuon, prosekunoun, ‘they were beating,’ ‘they were spitting,’ ‘they were doing homage,’ is that of actions repeated by several soldiers.

tuptō (only here in Mark) ‘strike,’ ‘beat.’

emptuō (cf. 10.34) ‘to spit on.’

proskuneō (cf. 5.6) ‘to worship,’ ‘to reverence,’ ‘to do homage’: here in mockery, as to a king (cf. Gould, Rawlinson).

kalamō (15.36) ‘with a stalk,’ ‘with a reed,’ ‘with a staff.’

tithentes ta gonata (only here in Mark; cf. gonupeteō 1.40; 10.17) ‘bend the knees,’ ‘kneel down’: perhaps the Greek equivalent of the Latin genua ponere.

Translation:

The reed was evidently used as a flail with which to beat Jesus over the head, thus pounding the crown of thorns deeper into his flesh. One may have to translate ‘beat him on the head with a reed’ (or ‘stick’ or ‘staff’) or ‘flailed him on the head….’

The imperfect form of the Greek verbs translated struck, spat, and knelt justify the translation of ‘repeatedly struck … spat … and knelt’ or ‘one after another struck … spat … and knelt.’

Knelt down in homage may require the addition of a qualifier so as not to lead to misinterpretation, e.g. ‘knelt down as though honoring’ or ‘got down on their knees, pretending to show respect.’

Quoted with permission from Bratcher, Robert G. and Nida, Eugene A. A Handbook on the Gospel of Mark. (UBS Handbook Series). New York: UBS, 1961. For this and other handbooks for translators see here .

Translation commentary on Mark 16:4

Exegesis:

anablepsasai (cf. 6.41) ‘looking up’: Lagrange suggests that here the verb means ‘look closely,’ ‘look attentively.’

thēorousin (cf. 15.47) ‘they notice,’ ‘they observe.’

anakekulistai (only here in the N.T.; cf. apokuliō in previous verse) ‘it has been rolled back.’

ēn gar megas sphodra ‘for it was exceedingly large’: this explanatory clause would seem logically to belong to v. 3, explaining the women’s discussion as to who should roll away the stone for them. As it stands, at the end of this verse, it seems to explain why the women noticed it had been rolled away. Several translations circumvent the difficulty by disregarding gar ‘because,’ ‘for,’ a procedure which is not to be recommended.

sphodra (only here in Mark) ‘very much,’ ‘extremely,’ ‘greatly.’

Translation:

The women may have looked at the tomb from some little distance, and hence, because of the size of the stone, they could see that it had been rolled away. This at least provides some basis for the interpretation of gar as ‘for,’ ‘because.’

Was rolled back is not technically a passive, in that the women saw the stone actually being rolled back. What they saw was the state of the stone in a rolled-back position. This means that in some languages one must translate either as a pluperfect passive of process, e.g. ‘had been rolled back’ or as a past state, e.g. ‘was in a rolled-back position.’

Quoted with permission from Bratcher, Robert G. and Nida, Eugene A. A Handbook on the Gospel of Mark. (UBS Handbook Series). New York: UBS, 1961. For this and other handbooks for translators see here .

Translation commentary on Mark 1:10

Text:

Instead of ek ‘out of’ of all modern editions of the Greek text, Textus Receptus has apo ‘from.’

Instead of eis auton ‘into him’ (see Exegesis, below) of the majority of modern editions of the Greek text, Textus Receptus and Souter have ep’ auton ‘upon him.’

Exegesis:

euthus ‘immediately’ occurs some 47 times in Mark. Kilpatrick “Notes on Marcan Usage” concludes that “the evidence suggests that we are dealing not with an adverb of time, but with a connecting particle.” Howard (II, 446) finds the inferential meaning ‘so then’ in 1.21, 23, 29, 30 (cf. also Moulton & Milligan). Revised Standard Version rightly connects euthus ‘immediately’ with the main verb eiden ‘he saw’ and not with the participle anabainon ‘coming up.’

anabainōn (3.13; 4.7, 8, 32; 6.51; 10.32, 33; 15.8) ‘coming up’: the participle is temporal ‘as he was coming up … he saw’; Translator’s New Testament ‘just as he was coming up…’). The subject is Jesus. As Lagrange points out anabainōn ‘coming up’ presumes a previous katabainōn ‘going down.’

ek ‘out of’: not precisely the same as apo ‘from’ in Mt. 3.16. Turner notes that Mark has ek half as often again as apo, in which he sees reflected a “Semitic atmosphere.”

eiden ‘he saw’: the verb itself cannot indicate whether a vision or an objective phenomenon is meant; the verb means simply ‘he saw’ and nothing else. The author doubtlessly means to describe actual happenings. There are two direct objects: tous ouranous … kai to pneuma ‘the heavens … and the Spirit.’

schizomenous tous ouranous ‘the heavens as they were being rent.’

schizō (15.38) ‘rend,’ ‘divide,’ ‘tear’: the verb is used of garments (Isa. 36.22, Lk. 5.36, Jn. 19.24), a veil (Mk. 15.38), a net (Jn. 21.11), rocks (Isa. 48.21, Mt. 27.51), a mountain (Zech. 14.4), wood (Gen. 22.3). The present participle describes the action in progress (cf. Gould). Grammar does not decide whether the participle is middle (‘opening themselves,’ cf. Le Nouveau Testament. Version Synodale, Zürcher Bibel), or passive (‘being opened’): the latter, however, is probably to be preferred. The idea of violence is present in the verb; here is a breach in the firmament which separates the abode of God from earth. Bengel: “is rent open, is said of that which had not previously been open.”

tous ouranous ‘the heavens’: some hold, with Arndt & Gingrich, that the plural hoi ouranoi ‘the heavens’ refers to the abode of God; others see reference to the firmament, the sky (cf. The Modern Speech New Testament). At any rate the Voice comes from heaven, as the abode of God, not just from the sky (cf. Rawlinson on the plurality of heavens and the Voice).

to pneuma (v. 8) is ‘the (Holy) Spirit.’

katabainōn (3.22; 9.9; 13.15; 15.30, 32) eis auton ‘descending upon him.’ The meaning of eis here is debated; in the nature of the case a precise parallel to katabainon eis auton ‘descending into him’ is not to be found (Mt. 3.16 and Lk. 3.22 have epi ‘upon,’ as well as some manuscripts of the Gospel of Mark; cf. Text above). In the Septuagint the phrase katabainein eis ‘descend into’ is often used of ‘descend into Egypt’ (cf. Gen. 12.10; 26.2; 43.15; 46.3; Num. 20.15); ‘descend into Hades’ (Gen. 37.35; Num. 16.30; Job 7.9; 17.16; Ps. 54(55).5; 113.25 (115.17); 138(139).8; Isa. 14.11, 15, 19; Ezek. 31.15, 17; 32.27); ‘descend into the darkness (of death)’ (Tobit 14.10), and of water which descends into the sea (Joshua 3.16). In all these passages the meaning ‘descend into’ is the natural one, generally offering no difficulties.

So far as spirit possession is concerned, the normal way for the LXX to narrate the coming of the Spirit of God upon someone is by the use of the phrase ginesthai epi ‘to come upon’ (cf. Num. 23.7; 24.2; Judges 3.10; 11.29; 1 Sam. 19.9, 20, 23; 2 Chr. 15.1; 20.14), or hallesthai epi, ephallesthai epi ‘to leap upon,’ ‘to overpower’ (cf. Judg. 14.6; 15.14; 1 Sam. 10.6, 10; 11.6; 16.13). Other phrases less frequently used are einai epi ‘to be upon’ (1 Sam. 16.16, 23), piptein epi ‘to fall upon’ (1 Sam. 18.10), anapauein epi ‘to rest upon’ (Is. 11.2) and epelthein epi ‘to come upon’ (Is. 32.15); cf. also dounai epi ‘give upon’ (Is. 42.1).

Closer parallels to the Marcan phrase are to be found in Ezek. 37.5, 6, 14 in which God says, ‘I will put breath in you’ (dōsō pneuma mou eis humas), and 37.10 ‘the breath went into them’ (eisēlthen eis autous to pneuma); in Is. 37.7 the Lord says of the king of Assyria, ‘I will put a spirit in him’ (embalō eis autōn pneuma), while in Eccl. 3.21 the question is asked, ‘Does the spirit of an animal descend into the earth?’ (ei katabainei auto eis tēn gēn).

Attention has been called to Isa. 63.11ff. as a possible background of the Marcan language. In this passage God is spoken of as ho theis en autois to pneuma to hagion ‘he who placed in them the Holy Spirit’ (v. 11), and the statement is further made katebē pneuma para kuriou kai hōdēgēsen autous ‘the Spirit descended from the Lord and guided them’ (v. 14).

These verbal parallels in the Septuagint are sufficient to show, (1) that if Mark had meant to say ‘the Spirit descended upon him’ the preposition epi would have been used (as Mt. 3.16 and Lk. 3.22 have it), and (2) that katabainon eis means ‘descending into’ unless Marcan usage or the context clearly forbids this meaning.

So far as Marcan usage is concerned it is to be noticed that the preposition eis follows verbs of motion with ‘house’ (2.11; 3.20; 5.19), ‘mountain’ (3.13; 9.2; 13.14; 14.26), ‘region’ (7.24; 10.1) and ‘road’ (10.17): wherever the meaning ‘into’ cannot be literally pressed, the meaning ‘to’ or ‘toward’ is to be presumed. More instructive parallels are found in passages in which a person is the object: ‘the word which has been sown in them’ (4.15), ‘something that enters into a man’ (7.15, 18, 19). Passages which deal with spirit possession are particularly pertinent: the spirits of Legion request they be sent into the hogs, and they go into the hogs (5.12, 13), and Jesus commands the spirit to come out of the lad and never more enter into him (9.25). According to Marcan usage, therefore, to pneuma … katabainon eis auton may certainly mean ‘the Spirit descending (to enter) into him.’

The majority of translations render eis ‘upon,’ and Robertson cites examples of eis with the meaning of epi ‘upon’: none of the examples quoted, however, is decisive for this passage. The meaning ‘descending into’ is supported by Arndt & Gingrich who translate ‘come down and enter into him.’ Goodspeed discusses the passage at length and concludes that it means ‘coming down to enter into him’ (cf. also The Modern Speech New Testament, Appendix p. 658: “ ‘into’ i.e. ‘to enter into’ ”).

In the light of all this it seems reasonably clear that Mark does not say that the Spirit came upon Jesus at his baptism as the Spirit of God came upon the Old Testament leaders: rather he says that the Spirit entered into and possessed Jesus, who henceforth acts with the authority and power of God, as God’s Spirit-filled and Spirit-led Son.

hōs peristeran (11.15) ‘as a dove.’ There are two possible meanings: (1) ‘He saw … the Spirit descending like a dove (descends) …’ or (2) ‘He saw … the Spirit, as (though it were) a dove, descending….’ In the first case the figure modifies the mode of descent, and in the second it modifies the Spirit as such, with the meaning ‘in the appearance of’ i.e. ‘in the form of.’ Most English translations are ambiguous, even as the Greek is. Matthew (probably) and Luke (certainly) take the narrative to mean that a dove was to be seen. No significant parallels to the phrase are to be found in the Old Testament or early Jewish literature (cf. Taylor). The natural meaning of eiden … to pneuma hōs peristeran is ‘he saw … the Spirit in appearance as a dove’ (cf. 8.24), and this certainly seems to be the meaning intended here (cf. Lagrange: “it is the Spirit himself who is like a dove”).

Translation:

In order to indicate the force of the Greek word euthus ‘immediately’ as a kind of transitional temporal relator, it is possible to translate, ‘Just as … then he…’ (Balinese) or ‘Then just as … he saw’ (Shipibo-Conibo). On the other hand one may translate ‘and when he came…, right then he saw….’ In any case the force of euthus must be with the second verb, even though a temporal particle may precede the first.

In some languages (e.g. Amganad Ifugao) there are distinct expressions for ‘coming out of a stream’ and ‘coming out from underneath the surface of the water.’ The choice of one or the other expression will be determined by one’s views on the mode of baptism practiced by John. Where, however, it is possible to use a noncommittal term which will not provoke unnecessary controversy this should be employed.

A word which will properly designate the rending of the heavens is not always easy to find, for the Greek term in question does not mean merely that Jesus saw that the heavens were open, but that he saw them being rent open. In the Southern Bobo Madaré language, for example, one must choose between two words for opening: (1) one which designates the way a box is opened (whether with care or violently), and (2) one which characterizes the splitting of a goat skin. The latter term was found to fit this context more satisfactorily.

Despite the fact that the Voice comes from heaven (cf. verse 11) as the abode of God, the heavens of this verse may refer to the sky. In a language in which heaven as God’s abode is clearly distinguished from the sky (e.g. ‘God’s house’ in contrast with ‘the place of the clouds’), it would be important to use the latter in this verse, for one would not wish to give the impression that ‘God’s house’ was being destroyed.

In general there is no difficulty in finding a word for the sky. In Loma (Liberia), for example, it is simply ‘up.’ The more complex problem is discovering some expression which will convey at least some of the meaning of heaven in English. To do this various expressions have been employed, e.g. ‘God’s place’ (Loma (Liberia)), ‘God’s town’ (Yamba), ‘the up above’ (Mossi nyingeri, in contrast with saase ‘the sky’ which is regarded as lower), and ‘the home above’ (San Blas Kuna). (See also Bible Translating, pp. 161, 231).

When an indigenous word for ‘Spirit’ generally indicates a malevolent spirit, it is important that the qualifier ‘Holy’ be added if the context in question is not very plain. Of course, in this particular verse the addition of ‘Holy’ may not be required, because of the connection with ‘heaven’ and the ‘voice’ announcing the sonship of Jesus. However, in verse 12 the addition of ‘Holy’ is essential in many languages, and even in this verse it can in some instances eliminate considerable misunderstanding.

Whether one translates ‘descended upon him’ or ‘descended into him’ (see above) is somewhat related to the treatment of ‘as a dove,’ for if one says that the Spirit had the precise form of a dove (or pigeon) and then that it entered into him, the resultant impression may be confusing and disconcerting to the reader. Where, of course, one can preserve the Greek ambiguity, so that the phrase ‘as a dove’ may refer to either mode of descent or form, the problem can be readily resolved, but this is not a solution to the Matthaean and Lucan expressions. One can, however, eliminate some of the semantic difficulties by making two clauses out of one (in fact, this is often necessary) and translate as ‘the Holy Spirit appeared there like a dove and came down upon him’ (Kpelle). As in this Kpelle rendering the particle ‘as’ must often be expanded into an expression containing a verb, e.g. ‘appeared like.’

Quoted with permission from Bratcher, Robert G. and Nida, Eugene A. A Handbook on the Gospel of Mark. (UBS Handbook Series). New York: UBS, 1961. For this and other handbooks for translators see here .