Translation commentary on 1 Timothy 5:3

The word for Honor is used here to mean showing reverential respect and sympathy, but this has been interpreted to include caring and providing for material needs. While this is supported by the context (see especially verse 16), it is perhaps best to take Honor in its narrower sense, that is, as showing an attitude of respect, but which then results in caring concern; in other words, respecting the widows in a practical way. Perhaps one may translate “Do good for the widows…,” or “Pay attention to (or, Take care of) the needs of the widows…,” or even “Show respect for the widows by paying attention to their needs.”

Widows who are real widows is literally “widows who really are widows,” that is, widows who have no means of material support other than the Christian community. This is certainly the reason for the Good News Translation rendering “widows who really are all alone,” with “alone” interpreted not primarily in a physical sense (that is living alone) but in the sense that these widows have no family members or relatives to support them materially and therefore are completely dependent on the community for their material needs. Another way of expressing this sentence is “widows who have no one to support them,” “widows who have no family members alive,” or “any widow who is really needy.”

An alternative translation model for this verse is:
• Show respect to the widows who have no family members alive to support them. Do this by paying attention to their needs.

Quoted with permission from Arichea, Daniel C. and Hatton, Howard A. A Handbook on Paul’s First Letter to Timothy. (UBS Handbook Series). New York: UBS, 1995. For this and other handbooks for translators see here .

Translation commentary on 1 Timothy 6:16

This verse continues the thought of verse 15 and mentions other attributes of God: he is the only one who is immortal, he dwells in light, he is invisible, he deserves to be honored and to reign. The word for immortality appears only here and 1 Cor 15.53-54in the whole New Testament. However, the adjective “immortal” is found in 1.17, and although a different word is used there, these two terms are closely related in terms of meaning. To be immortal is to be beyond the power of death, to live on forever and never experience death.

The word unapproachable appears only here in the whole New Testament. The idea of God revealing himself by means of an intense and dazzling light that no human eye can stand is found in many places in the Old Testament, particularly during the time of the Exodus (see, for example, Exo 24.15-17). The purpose of the light is to make people unable to see the very face of God. Unapproachable light may then be alternatively expressed as “the light that prevents people from seeing God.”

The last attribute mentioned is that of being invisible (see 1.17) and once again reflects a theme that is prevalent in the Old Testament: God is so holy that no human being can see God and live (see, for example, Exo 33.20 “I will not let you see my face, because no one can see me and stay alive” [TEV]). An alternative translation for the first part of this verse is “He alone lives forever. He lives in light which prevents people from seeing him. In fact no one has ever seen him, nor will anyone ever see him.”

The conclusion of the hymn is an appropriate expression of praise, ascribing to God honor and eternal dominion. For honor see 1.17. The usual word used to form a pair with honor is “glory,” and so it is in 1.17 and other parts of the New Testament. Here, however, “glory” has been substituted by dominion (Good News Translation “power”), perhaps to connect this expression of praise with the theme of God’s sovereign power that is prevalent in the whole hymn. The word for dominion is sometimes translated “strength” or “power” in other parts of the New Testament; it includes the elements of rule and sovereignty.

For eternal see 1.16. The idea of God ruling forever is also a prevalent Old Testament theme (see, for example, Exo 15.18; Psa 146.10; Lam 5.19). In the New Testament eternal rule is ascribed to Jesus Christ (see, for example, Luke 1.33; Rev 11.15). For Amen see 1.17. An alternative translation model for the final sentence is “May people praise God and may he rule powerfully forever.”

Quoted with permission from Arichea, Daniel C. and Hatton, Howard A. A Handbook on Paul’s First Letter to Timothy. (UBS Handbook Series). New York: UBS, 1995. For this and other handbooks for translators see here .

Translation commentary on 1 Timothy 1:8

The mention of law in the previous verse leads to a discussion of the nature and function of the law within the Christian community.

In the Greek, verses 8-11 consist of one sentence; this is reflected in many translations, as, for example, Revised Standard Version. In New Revised Standard Version, however, these four verses are restructured into two sentences, with verse 8 forming one sentence and verses 9-11 another. In Good News Translation, on the other hand, this long sentence has been broken up into three sentences: verse 8, verses 9-10, and verse 11. In Contemporary English Version there are five sentences: verse 8, verse 9a, verse 9b, verse 10a, and verses 10b-11. Translators always need to remember that they are not bound by the sentence divisions in the original text or in various modern translations. What is of primary importance is to enable the intended audience to understand the message of the passage, and the sentence structure must serve this purpose.

The expression we know occurs only here in the Pastoral Letters; in the other letters, particularly those of Paul, it is used to introduce a principle that is generally accepted and acknowledged within the Christian community (see, for example, Rom 2.2; 3.19; 6.6; and others). We should be translated inclusively, since it refers to all Christians, including both the author and the recipient of the letter. In the present context the statement is about the goodness of the law when it is used properly. Law is used in the same way as in the previous verse (verse 7). Good translates a term that usually refers to pleasant outward appearance, hence “beautiful.” Here, however, the focus is on the character of the law as a valid guide for conduct that is morally and ethically acceptable. So one may also translate this first clause as “We know that what God’s law says is correct (or, valid).” In languages that cannot talk about a law “speaking,” one may translate “We [inclusive] know that what is written in God’s law (or, the Law) is good” or “We [inclusive] know that the words in God’s law are good.”

Any one may include everybody, but it has direct reference to those who are teachers of the law (see verse 7). In some languages it may be more appropriate to change any one into a plural form, hence “people,” and say “if people use the Law in the proper way.” In languages that do not use the passive, the active form if any one uses will be more natural. However, in some other languages it may be more natural to use a passive construction here; for example, “if it [the Law] is used lawfully,” “if it is used as it should be used” (compare Good News Translation), or “… in the right way” (Contemporary English Version).

Lawfully refers to the correct and proper use and application of the law. In the Greek text there is a play on the words law and lawfully (nomosnomimōs); this can be retained in translation as long as there is a natural way of doing it in the receptor language and, more importantly, if the meaning matches that of the Greek text. The clause “if any one uses it lawfully” may be also expressed as “if a person uses it as it should be used” or “if people use it correctly.”

Quoted with permission from Arichea, Daniel C. and Hatton, Howard A. A Handbook on Paul’s First Letter to Timothy. (UBS Handbook Series). New York: UBS, 1995. For this and other handbooks for translators see here .

Translation commentary on 1 Timothy 3:13

Two benefits or rewards of those deacons who serve well are mentioned in this verse: they gain a good standing for themselves and great confidence in the faith. A good standing is literally “a step,” used here as a figure with three possible meanings: (1) promotion to a higher rank, that is, to that of a bishop; (2) influence, reputation, and esteem within the believing community; and (3) standing before God. Once again a literal translation would be ambiguous; if the ambiguity is resolved, it should probably be done in favor of the second alternative, although a combination of the second and third alternatives is possible. Alternative translation models are: “gain a good reputation,” “gain much face,” or “are highly esteemed by their fellow Christians and by God.”

Faith here is to be taken as trust in and commitment to Christ Jesus. The word for confidence is also the word that is often translated “boldness.” This gives rise to three possible interpretations: (1) boldness to speak about their faith in Christ Jesus (as in Good News Translation); (2) greater assurance and confidence in their faith (as in New International Version “great assurance in their faith in Christ Jesus”); and (3) the confidence that others will have in them because of their faith (for example, Contemporary English Version “and will be highly respected for their faith in Christ Jesus”). If (1) is followed by a translator, one may also express this as “and they are able to speak confidently about how they believe in Christ Jesus.” But if (2) is chosen, one may express this as “and they continue to believe in Christ Jesus very confidently.” If, however, (3) is chosen, one may also translate “and other people will highly respect them for their strong trust in Christ Jesus.” All three options are possible, but since the word for confidence is used elsewhere in relation to proclaiming one’s faith, the first option seems more appropriate in this case.

Quoted with permission from Arichea, Daniel C. and Hatton, Howard A. A Handbook on Paul’s First Letter to Timothy. (UBS Handbook Series). New York: UBS, 1995. For this and other handbooks for translators see here .

Translation commentary on 1 Timothy 5:16

After dealing with the problem of the younger widows, Paul now returns to the subject of caring for real widows. This verse goes back to the ideas mentioned in verses 4 and 8, except that it now focuses on the female members of the family. Any believing woman translates the feminine form of the word “faithful” or “believing,” hence a woman who has put her trust in Jesus Christ; so Good News Translation “any Christian woman.” As the UBS Greek New Testament shows, there is a textual problem here. In addition to the adopted reading in the text, there are two other readings, namely, “any believing man” and “any believing man or woman.” While there is a considerable degree of doubt over which is the best reading, it seems that from the evidence believing woman is to be preferred, and many modern translations have opted for this textual reading. It is of course logical for women to be in charge of the care of other women in their own household.

Relatives who are widows is literally widows, but the context clearly shows that these would be widows within the Christian woman’s household, and this information has been made explicit in Revised Standard Version (compare Good News Translation “widows in her family”).

Assist is the same verb used in verse 10 (there translated “relieved”), for which see discussion there.

The purpose of providing the needs of widowed members of the family is to relieve the church of the burden of supporting these widows and enable it to support widows who are really in need. In many languages let the church not be burdened will be translated as “not cause the other Christians to be burdened,” or in languages that do not use the passive voice, “not cause the other Christians to have to bear this obligation,” or “This will mean that the other Christians won’t have to bear that burden.” Burdened translates the imperative mood of a verb that means “to be burdened,” that is, to be troubled and loaded by burdensome obligations. The imperative mood can here be rendered as a command; many translations choose to depict this part of the verse as a result of the previous part; that is, supporting widowed relatives results in not putting additional burdens on the church and enabling the church to support widows who otherwise would not have any other source of support. For real widows see 1 Tim. 5.3.

Quoted with permission from Arichea, Daniel C. and Hatton, Howard A. A Handbook on Paul’s First Letter to Timothy. (UBS Handbook Series). New York: UBS, 1995. For this and other handbooks for translators see here .

Translation commentary on 1 Timothy 1:20

Among them another way to express this phrase is “Two of them are” (Contemporary English Version).

Two names are mentioned as examples of those who advocate wrong teachings. Hymenaeus appears also in 2 Tim 2.17; if the two references are identical, then we have an example of what Hymenaeus taught, namely, that the resurrection is a past event (2 Tim 2.18). The name Alexander, on the other hand, appears in 2 Tim 4.14; he is identified as one who did Paul great harm, but there is no reference to any specific act that he did or doctrine that he advocated. There is also a reference to Alexander in Acts 19.33. Other than these references, these two names are not mentioned anywhere else in the New Testament, except for Mark 15.21 and Acts 4.6. Are these the same people, then? It is very hard to be sure. All we can be certain about is that they were known within the Christian community and were perhaps leaders in the church, either deacons or more probably elders. Other than that, we cannot say anything else. But fortunately for translators, it is not necessary to come to any conclusion on the identity of these people; what is important is to transliterate their names properly according to the requirements of the receptor language.

As punishment for what they have done, Paul has delivered these two people to Satan. The expression used here also appears in 1 Cor 5.5 to describe the punishment of the Corinthian sinner; the difference is that in 1 Corinthians the sinner is being handed over to Satan for the destruction of his body, so that his spirit may be saved, whereas here the focus is on disciplining the false teachers. The primary question to ask is: what is involved in handing someone over to Satan? Does the expression mean excommunication from the church or infliction of physical harm? Or perhaps a combination of both? Does this expression have the same meaning as in 1 Cor 5.5? Many commentators favor the first of these possibilities, namely, that this refers to being expelled (excommunicated) from the Christian community. Since the false teachers are outside the realm of the church, they are, so to speak, within the realm of Satan and, like Job, would be subject to the pain and suffering that Satan inflicts.

One notes, however, that the handing over to Satan has a corrective and remedial function: it is to educate these false teachers and help them to get rid of their habit of blaspheming. For blaspheme see discussion on 1.13. In the present context the focus seems to be on falsely claiming to have power and authority from God; this is shown by the fact that they are teaching their own doctrines as God’s truth. By doing this they are actually misrepresenting God and opposing God (compare Contemporary English Version, “so they will learn not to oppose God”). Implicit in the verse is that, once these false teachers repent of their wrong doing, they could be reinstated as members in good standing of the Christian community. Since it is not clear exactly what delivered to Satan means, translators are urged to use a more ambiguous translation such as Good News Translation‘s “whom I have punished by handing them over to the power of Satan.” In cultures where Christianity is only a recent phenomenon, a suitable term for Satan or the Devil may not yet have been agreed upon by the Christian community. Translators in concurrence with the churches should carefully select a term that adequately translates the biblical idea of “Devil” or Satan. If a community chooses to use the name Satan, as in this context, it will be helpful to have an item in the glossary explaining who Satan is.

That they may learn not to blaspheme may also be rendered as “that they may learn to stop opposing God,” or “this will teach them to stop misrepresenting God,” or “that they may learn to stop claiming to have God’s authority when in fact they don’t.”

An alternative translation model for this verse is:
• Two of these are Hymenaeus and Alexander. I have let Satan have power over them. This will teach them to stop teaching things that are against God’s truth.

Quoted with permission from Arichea, Daniel C. and Hatton, Howard A. A Handbook on Paul’s First Letter to Timothy. (UBS Handbook Series). New York: UBS, 1995. For this and other handbooks for translators see here .

Translation commentary on 1 Timothy 4:9

This is the third of the “faithful sayings”; the formula here is exactly the same as in 1.15. It is difficult to be certain as to what saying is being referred to. There are at least two possibilities:
(1) It refers back to verse 8, namely, the value of spiritual exercise. This seems to be the position reflected in Good News Translation (so also Barclay [Barclay] “This is a saying which you can believe and accept absolutely”; Phillips “There is no doubt about this at all, and Christians should remember it”).
(2) It refers forward to verse 10 or a part of it. This position is difficult to maintain because verse 10 begins with the connective “For” or “Because.” However, those who take this position restructure verse 10 in such a way as to avoid the problem. New English Bible, for instance, translates verse 10 as a proverbial saying by transforming the first clause that begins with “For” into a complete statement: “Here are words you may trust, words that merit full acceptance: ‘With this before us we labor and struggle, because we have set our hope on the living God who is the Savior of all men….’ ” New International Version, on the other hand, takes the “For” clause as a parenthetical statement and identifies the second half of verse 10 as the faithful saying: “This is a trustworthy saying that deserves full acceptance (and for this we labor and strive), that we have put our hope in the living God, who is the Savior of all men, and especially of those who believe.”

Translators are urged by this Handbook to follow interpretation (1) and refer back to verse 8.

An alternative translation model for this verse is:
• The words I have just quoted are true. You should accept them completely and believe them.

Quoted with permission from Arichea, Daniel C. and Hatton, Howard A. A Handbook on Paul’s First Letter to Timothy. (UBS Handbook Series). New York: UBS, 1995. For this and other handbooks for translators see here .

Translation commentary on 1 Timothy 6:4 – 6:5

These next two verses describe in detail the conduct of the false teachers and the results of such conduct within the Christian community. These are set out as consequences of teaching false doctrines; that is, anyone who teaches unsound doctrine will have a life characterized by the negative traits mentioned in these two verses.

What is of special concern to translators is that verses 3-5 form one long conditional sentence, with the condition mentioned in verse 3 and the results mentioned in verses 4 and 5. This long sentence may need to be restructured into two or more shorter sentences, depending on the requirements of the receptor language and the intended audience. For this purpose Good News Translation serves as a good model. A further concern is how to render the consequences. One possibility is to retain the conditional structure of the text, that is, the structure “if … then….” One other possibility is to take the consequences as actual descriptions of the false teachers; to depict this properly, however, the conditional structure of the sentence can be substituted with a simple statement that is more fitted for describing something; for example, “Anyone who … is….” If, however, a translator follows the second alternative model at the end of verse 3, a new sentence may be started at the beginning of verse 4; for example, “People who do such things are proud” or “These false teachers are…”

The first consequence is that the false teacher is puffed up with conceit. This translates one Greek word that also appears in 3.6, for which see discussion there. The false teachers are pictured as proud, arrogant, conceited, which must really describe anyone who dares to teach something different from that which Christ himself has taught and revealed. This phrase may also be rendered as “has a heart filled up with pride.”

Secondly, the false teacher knows nothing; that is, he is ignorant (compare New English Bible “a pompous ignoramus,” Phillips “conceited idiot”). The Greek word for know includes the element of understanding; in this case a person who knows nothing is a person who doesn’t understand anything (see New International Version “understands nothing”), and in some languages that will be a natural translation model. Contemporary English Version‘s model “but they don’t really know a thing” is also a helpful one.

Thirdly, the false teacher has a morbid craving for controversy and for disputes about words. Has a morbid craving translates a Greek word that means to have an “unhealthy desire” (Good News Translation) for something. The noun form of the verb refers to sickness in general, which indicates that this unhealthy craving is an ailment of some kind. Other ways to express this are “have a strong unnatural craving (or, desire) to…” or “have a heart which desires wrongly (or, unnaturally) to….” However, in some languages it will be possible to say something like “Their minds (or, hearts) are sick, and they are always wanting to….” Controversy translates a Greek word that refers to forcefully expressing differences of opinion but without interest in seeking for a solution; hence “disputes,” “debates,” “questionings.” Disputes about words on the other hand translates a Greek word that refers to arguing or quarreling about the meaning and use of words; it is used only here and in 2 Tim 2.14. These two terms are obviously related in meaning and may even be put together in translation (for example, Good News Translation “argue and quarrel about words,” New English Bible “mere verbal questions and quibbles”). Another way of expressing controversy and disputes about words is “argue and quarrel with other people about the meaning of words.”

Such useless arguments and quibbling about words give rise to negative conditions within the community; five of these are mentioned. Some translators will find it helpful to begin a new sentence here and say, for example, “Such arguments produce (or, cause)…,” and in some languages it will be necessary to move the phrase among men who to the beginning of this new sentence and say “Such arguments cause certain people who are depraved in mind to….”

Envy is the eager desire to have or attain what belongs to another, and other possible translation models are “be jealous of other people’s abilities” or “desire to have what other people have.” Dissension refers to the act of separating from one another or creating divisions and schisms and thus undermining the unity of any group. So one may also translate “to divide into groups” or “have continual disagreements with others.” Slander is literally “blasphemies,” the verb form of which is used in 1.20. Here, however, the stress of the word is on the horizontal rather than the vertical dimension, that is, it focuses on harsh, evil, and abusive language directed primarily to other people rather than to God. The plural, moreover, focuses on both the frequency of these insults and the number of those who participate in such actions. Another way of expressing slander is “continually say evil things about others.” Suspicions translates a word that refers to forming an opinion based on very scanty evidence, and thus falling into the danger of regarding something false as true. Suspicions are bad in themselves, but here their negative nature is heightened by describing them as base or “evil.” Wrangling translates a word that refers to “constant” and continuous arguing; the plural form (compare Good News Translation “arguments”) accents both the frequency and the constancy of these arguments. Contemporary English Version has “nasty quarrels.” The word occurs only here in the New Testament.

These continuous and violent disputes come from men (better, “people”) who are depraved in mind, bereft of the truth, and who think that godliness is a means of becoming rich. Men translates the generic word for human beings, hence Good News Translation “people.” Depraved translates a perfect passive participle of the verb that means “to ruin,” “to destroy completely.” In a moral or ethical sense, the verb means to cause someone to become morally corrupt, hence “to pervert.” A third meaning of the verb is “to waste away,” to become so weak and incapacitated that the mind can no longer function properly. Most translations take the second of these alternatives (that is, moral corruption), although the third is also possible (see, for example, Good News Translation “whose minds do not function”). If translators take this second meaning, other ways to express depraved in mind are “whose minds are completely corrupt (or, depraved)” or “whose minds are totally wicked (or, evil).” Bereft translates another perfect passive participle, this time from a verb that means to deprive someone of something, sometimes by deception (so “to defraud”) or by some other means. The focus of the translation may be on the resulting state that is the absence of something (hence Good News Translation “who no longer have the truth”; compare New English Bible “have lost grip of the truth”), or on the means by which someone is deprived of something (hence New International Version “who have been robbed of the truth”). For truth see 2.4 and 2.7.

The third thing mentioned about these people is that they think of godliness as a means of material gain. For godliness see comments on “godly” in 2.2 and on “our religion” in 3.16. Means of gain translates a Greek word that means “financial gain” or “profit.” Perhaps the focus here is not on the amount or quantity of wealth involved, but rather on the means used in procuring this wealth. This means that godliness or “religion” (Good News Translation) is not really their main concern but is only being used as a means to achieve their main goal of financial gain. Another way of expressing imagining that godliness is a means of gain is “thinking that being a Christian is a way to become rich.”

A final matter that needs to be discussed is the identity of these people. Some commentators identify the people mentioned in verse 5 with the false teachers, hence with “any one” in verse 3; the activities of these people have resulted in envy, dissension, slander and base suspicions among the members of the Christian community. A second possibility is to identify these people with members of the Christian community who are influenced in a negative way by the false teachers. This means that the people who use religion for personal gain are the same people who display the negative attitudes of envy, dissension, slander and evil suspicions; they are the same people whose minds have become corrupt and who no longer have the truth. The description of the false teachers would be limited to verses 3 and 4a. This second alternative seems closer to the grammatical structure of the text. It should be noted, however, that the first alternative is the choice of many modern commentaries and does not present translators with difficult translation problems.

An alternative translation model for these two verses is:
• People like this have hearts full of pride and don’t understand anything. They have sick minds so that they want to argue and quarrel with others about the meanings of words. This incessant arguing about words causes certain people who have perverted minds (or, hearts) to be jealous of them, say evil about them, and separate into groups. Their minds become full of evil suspicions, and they argue constantly with others. Such people think that they will become rich as a result of becoming Christians.

Quoted with permission from Arichea, Daniel C. and Hatton, Howard A. A Handbook on Paul’s First Letter to Timothy. (UBS Handbook Series). New York: UBS, 1995. For this and other handbooks for translators see here .