Commentaire sur la traduction de Jonas 4.9

Alors Dieu lui dit : en hébreu le nom « Jonas » figure ici. Dans certaines langues, cette répétition de noms (Dieu… Jonas) indiquera un nouveau paragraphe.

Plusieurs versions ne rendent pas le וְ we au début du verset, mais la Traduction œcuménique de la Bible propose Alors. Dieu pose à Jonas la même question qu’il lui avait déjà posée en Jonas 4.4, en ajoutant une précision : As-tu raison de te fâcher à cause de cette plante ? Jonas est fâché en Jonas 4.1, mais ici il semble plutôt déprimé et amer. Il est déçu car Dieu a permis que la plante qui le protégeait meure.

En Jonas 4.4 Jonas ne donne pas de réponse, mais cette fois-ci il répond en affirmant de manière claire et nette qu’il a raison : « Oui, j’ai raison de me fâcher à mort ». En fait, contrairement à l’hébreu moderne, l’hébreu biblique n’a pas de mot pour « oui ». Alors dans la Bible, si la personne veut donner une réponse affirmative à une question, il la reprend presque mot pour mot. Voir, par exemple, Gen 24.58 ; 27.24 ; 29.6. Ici la répétition marque l’insistance de sa réponse, teintée d’énervement. La Bible en français courant rend bien le ton en disant « J’ai de bonnes raisons d’être… » On pourra aussi dire « J’ai tous les droits de… » Dans beaucoup de langues, il sera bon d’insérer le mot « oui » si ce mot convient dans la langue cible, comme dans Traduction œcuménique de la Bible, La Bible du Semeur, Bible de Jérusalem, Bible en français courant, Parole de Vie.

à mort rend l’hébreu littéralement. Une telle expression existe dans plusieurs langues. Il s’agit d’une tournure superlative, signifiant « extrêmement » : « cela me fâche extrêmement », « je suis dans une colère extrême ». Jonas semble exagérer, mais les traducteurs devraient exprimer le ton et, si possible, retenir cette expression figurée. On pourrait dire « Eh bien, oui ! J’ai de bonnes raisons d’être en colère, au point de vouloir en mourir ! ».

Notez qu’en Jonas 4.1, Jonas est fâché, car il se sent humilié lorsque Ninive est épargné. Ici sa colère est due plutôt au désagrément causé par la mort de la plante.

Source: Péter-Contesse, René & Zogbo, Lynell. Jonas – Manuel de traduction – Commentaire linguistique et exégétique de la Bible. Alliance biblique universelle, 2021.

Translation commentary on Jonah 4:9

God then asks Jonah the same question as in verse 4, but with the addition of about the plant, that is, on account of the disappearance of the plant. On that occasion Jonah was indeed angry, as is clear from 4.1. but here he is not so much angry as miserable, or bad tempered.

To be angry about the plant must be expanded somewhat as “to be angry because of what happened to the plant.” It is important not to imply that Jonah was angry at the plant itself but because the plant had withered and died.

Jonah did not reply to the question that was put to him in verse 4, but here he replies by asserting emphatically that he had every justification for being angry. Jonah’s response should be parallel to 4.4, but it may be very difficult to speak of “every right.” One may, for example, say “I’m completely justified in being angry,” or “I have a good reason to be angry,” or “my anger is completely reasonable.”

The words angry enough to die can be taken with a double meaning. One is the surface meaning, that his anger is sufficient to justify his request for death. The other meaning takes the words “even unto death” (King James Version) as an expression denoting the superlative (compare Moffatt and New English Bible, “mortally angry,” and Knox, “deadly angry”). The same expression as occurs here in Jonah is also found in a medieval letter written in Hebrew, also with the meaning “I was extremely angry.” It is difficult to do justice to both these senses in one translation, since by emphasizing the idiom expressing the superlative, the literal sense, angry enough to die, is likely to be concealed. The use of hyperbole by Jonah on this occasion is the more absurd when one takes into account the reasons for Jonah’s anger on both occasions: in verse 1, because he was humiliated by the sparing of Nineveh, and in verse 9, because he was inconvenienced by the withering of a plant.

It may be possible to combine the concepts of the intensity of anger together with Jonah’s suggestion of wanting to die (a reflection of verses 3 and 8) by translating “I am so angry that I want to die,” or “I am very, very angry and therefore prefer to die,” or “… want to die rather than live.”

Quoted with permission from Clark, David J. et al. A Handbook on the Book of Jonah. (UBS Helps for Translators). New York: UBS, 1978, 1982, 1993. For this and other handbooks for translators see here .

SIL Translator’s Notes on Jonah 4:9

4:9b

Have you any right to be angry about the plant?: Once again God scolded Jonah for his anger. This is another rhetorical question and implied that Jonah did not have the right to be angry.

4:9c

“I do,” he replied. “I am angry enough to die!”: Jonah, however, insisted that he was indeed right to be angry because the plant had withered.

angry enough to die!: This phrase can have two meanings: First, it means that Jonah was so angry that he actually preferred death to life. And secondly, it is an idiom to show that Jonah was very angry.

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