Translation commentary on 1 Timothy 6:11

The section begins with Timothy being addressed directly with the term man of God, a term that was often used for prophets in the Old Testament (for example, 1 Sam 2.27), characterizing the prophet as one who belongs to God and who represents God. If it is used in this technical sense here, it would signal the role of Timothy as a prophet in addition to his other functions. It is possible, although less likely, that this is used not in a technical but in a general way as an appropriate address for any Christian worker or for any member of the church, for that matter. Other ways of expressing this initial phrase are “As for you, Timothy, you represent God,” or simply “Timothy, you are God’s representative (or, person).”

The first instruction to Timothy contains both negative and positive aspects. Negatively Timothy is urged to shun all this. Shun translates the present imperative of the verb “to flee,” which for some indicates that there is continuing action involved; it is not enough to flee from these things once, but to flee from them constantly, that is, over and over again. Both shun and “flee” are figurative language; what it really means is not to get involved in any way, to “avoid” (Good News Translation), to refrain from practicing. All this (Good News Translation “all these things”) refers to the evil practices and attitudes mentioned in the previous paragraph, particularly the preoccupation with material wealth, and in some languages one must translate “refrain from doing all these evil things.”

Positively Timothy is urged to aim at certain virtues. Aim at is literally “to pursue” (so New Revised Standard Version), to “strive for” (Good News Translation), “Try your best to” (Contemporary English Version). What follows are six virtues that are included in various lists of virtues in the New Testament. These six virtues can be viewed either as three pairs (righteousness-godliness, faith-love, steadfastness-gentleness) or as two groups of three, with the first three directed toward God, and the last three directed toward other people. In some languages it will be helpful to begin a new sentence here; for example, “On the contrary, you must set your heart to gain…” or “On the contrary, let your heart aim for….”

Righteousness does not refer primarily to the act of God in restoring people to a right relationship with God, but to the kind of life and conduct that God expects and requires of those who have put their trust in Jesus Christ; hence uprightness, “integrity” (Phillips), “faithful” (Contemporary English Version).

Godliness is translated elsewhere in the letter as “religion”; here it refers primarily to Christian piety, that is, to a way of life that is acceptable to God and in accord with the precepts of the Christian faith.

Faith is not the initial act of trusting in God or in Christ but is a result of that initial act of trust. It can mean “faithfulness” (Phillips; so also New English Bible “fidelity”) that is directed to God; it can also mean moving from one degree of faith to another; hence, to trust Christ more and more.

Love here focuses on the horizontal rather than the vertical dimension, that is, it is directed primarily toward other people rather than to God.

Steadfastness (Good News Translation “endurance”) is the same word that is sometimes translated “patience,” but the focus here is the ability to hold on, to persevere in the faith, not to give up, but to be always full of hope even though all the signs tend to indicate otherwise. This virtue is particularly important when there are various trials and temptations faced by the Christian community. So in certain languages it will be necessary to translate steadfastness as “the ability to endure,” or even idiomatically, for example, as “have a heart (or, liver) that endures” or “have a big heart.”

Finally, gentleness has two components of meaning; it can mean “meekness” or “humility”; but it can also mean gentleness, that is, the quality of not being harsh or cruel in dealing with others, or positively treating others in a kind and considerate manner. The word occurs only here in the New Testament, although words from the same root are used elsewhere (for example, see “meek” in Matt 5.5 and “gentle” in 11.29). A basic component of the meaning of this word is “discipline,” referring to the disciplined training for a particular task or responsibility. In many languages it will be necessary to express these virtues with verbal expressions.

An alternative translation model is the following:
• But as for you, Timothy, you are God’s representative (or, person). So you must refrain from doing all these evil things. On the contrary, you should set your heart on doing what God requires of you, living a life that is acceptable to him, trusting in Christ more and more, loving other people, always being full of hope (or, never giving up), and being gentle with other people.

Quoted with permission from Arichea, Daniel C. and Hatton, Howard A. A Handbook on Paul’s First Letter to Timothy. (UBS Handbook Series). New York: UBS, 1995. For this and other handbooks for translators see here .

SIL Translator's Notes on 1 Timothy 6:11

Section 6:11–21

Paul gave Timothy some final instructions

Paragraph 6:11–16

In this paragraph, Paul told Timothy some specific ways that he should behave. He gave him four main instructions:

(a) to “pursue…perseverance” (6:11c, 6:11e)

(b) to “fight the good fight of the faith” (6:12a)

(c) to “take hold of…eternal life” (6:12b)

(d) to “keep this commandment…until the appearance of our Lord Jesus Christ” (6:14a, 6:14c)

6:11a

But you: Paul began this verse with an emphatic pronoun you(sing) along with the Greek word that the Berean Standard Bible translates as But. He used these words to introduce a contrast. He had described those who wanted to become rich and therefore eventually wandered from the faith (6:3–10). Now he described the way that Timothy should behave (6:11–16).

O man of God: Paul called Timothy man of God. There are two ways to understand this:

(1) Paul meant that Timothy was a Christian and that he was someone who belonged to God and desired to behave as God wanted him to behave. For example, the NET Bible says:

a person dedicated to God

(NET Bible, New Living Translation (2004 Revision), Contemporary English Version)

(2) Paul was using the words man of God in a special sense to say that Timothy was like a prophet. This is what the expression man of God meant in the Old Testament. For example, Moses (Deuteronomy 33:1), Samuel (1 Samuel 9), Elijah (1 Kings 17:18) and others were called by this title.

Most English versions translate this phrase literally. If you wish to follow one of the above interpretations in your translation, it is recommended that you follow interpretation (1). Paul called Timothy man of God to highlight that he was commanding Timothy to behave in a way that showed that he belonged to God. This expression is used in 2 Timothy 3:17 as a general term for a believer.

6:11b

flee: The Greek verb that the Berean Standard Bible translates as flee literally means “to run away from.” But here Paul used it in a figurative way to mean “avoid” or “stay away from.” People “avoid” or flee from danger. In the same way, Paul wanted Timothy to avoid behaving in the ways mentioned in 6:3–10.

these things: Paul was talking about the issues that he had discussed in the previous verses: all the ways in which people might sin when they want to become rich.

6:11c

pursue righteousness, godliness: This is also a figure of speech. In some languages a verb like pursue can only be used with an animate object like a person or an animal. It is not possible to pursue something like righteousness or the other qualities in this list (6:11c–e). People use all their physical energy when they chase after someone or something. Paul meant that Timothy should use all his effort to behave in these ways.

righteousness: This is the first of six qualities that Paul told Timothy to pursue. The Greek word that the Berean Standard Bible translates as righteousness refers to doing things that God considers right.

godliness: The Greek word that the Berean Standard Bible translates as godliness refers to the way people behave when they respect God.

6:11d

love: In this verse, Paul was probably talking about love for other people rather than love for God. (Knight, page 262, says, “Where, however, Paul indicates or implies the object of love, it is most often human beings.

6:11e

perseverance: When Paul said that Timothy should pursue perseverance, he meant that Timothy should persist in trusting God and in doing what pleased God, no matter what happened.

gentleness: The Greek word that the Berean Standard Bible translates as gentleness refers to not being harsh or rough with other people. In the New Testament it usually refers to the way in which a person talks to other people. It can also include the way that a person treats other people. (The actual word which Paul uses here, praupathia, does not occur anywhere else in the New Testament. However, its synonym prautēs occurs eight times, in 1 Corinthians 4:21; 2 Corinthians 10:1; Galatians 5:23, 6:1; Ephesians 4:2; Colossians 3:12; 2 Timothy 2:25; and Titus 3:2.)

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Commentaire sur la traduction de 1 Timothée 6.11

Comment se comporter comme serviteur du Christ (6.11-16)

Il y a un changement très brusque ici, litt. « Mais toi, homme de Dieu » où Paul interpelle son fils Timothée pour presque une dernière fois. Il y a de multiples impératifs à la deuxième personne du singulier. Beaucoup de versons commencent une nouvelle section avec sous-titre : « La belle profession de foi » (Traduction œcuménique de la Bible), « Combattre le bon combat de la foi » (La Bible du Semeur), « Recommandations personnelles » (Nouvelle Français courant).

Le ton de surtout 1 Tim 6.13 est très solennel et termine par un chant de louange qui faisait partie probablement de la liturgie. En grec ces derniers versets constituent une seule phrase, mais plusieurs versions la découpent et présentent plusieurs phrases. Voir, par exemple, la Bible en français courant et la Parole de Vie.

Paul tourne encore une fois envers Timothée pour lui donner plusieurs conseils. Il commence par les mots, litt. « Mais toi homme de Dieu ». Le pronom toi est accentué. Suivi de la conjonction δέ de, on pourrait dire « Quant à toi, homme de Dieu » (Nouvelle Bible Segond) ou « Mais toi, homme de Dieu » (La Bible du Semeur, Bible en français courant, Parole de Vie). On pourrait aussi ajouter une particule comme « Ô » : « Mais (Ô) toi, (Ô) homme de Dieu… » Voir aussi 2 Tim 3.10,14 ; 4.5 ; Tite 2.1 pour des expressions similaires.

homme de Dieu est une expression rare dans le NT, mais dans l’AT elle désigne parfois des prophètes tels qu’Élie (2 Rois 1.9-10) et Élisée (2 Rois 5.8). Est-ce que Paul se considère lui-même ainsi que Timothée comme des prophètes ? On ne saurait y répondre. Plus probablement, Paul est en train de responsabiliser Timothée comme une personne consacrée à Dieu, avant de lui donner une longue liste de directifs forts et précis. Voir aussi 2 Tim 3.17.

Le verbe φεύγω pheugo, fuis est un ordre fort. L’emploi de l’impératif présent indique que Paul demande un effort constant, une idée qui sera renforcée par la mention de persévérance. La traduction « évite » (Bible en français courant, Parole de Vie) semble trop faible. Si on ne peut pas dire « fuis » ou « tourne ton dos à » on pourrait peut-être dire « de toutes tes forces évite… »

L’expression ces choses renvoie probablement à « l’amour de l’argent » en 1 Tim 6.10, mais aussi aux désirs insensés et pernicieux dont il est question en 1 Tim 6.9. Dans certaines langues, on dirait « toutes ces choses mauvaises ».

Ce conseil négatif est immédiatement suivi de conseils positifs où Timothée est appelé à rechercher un certain nombre de valeurs ou qualités : la justice, la piété, la foi, l’amour, la persévérance, la douceur. Il n’y a pas de conjonction apparente en grec, mais certains proposent de lire justice et piété ensemble, ainsi que foi et amour, et persévérance et douceur.

Le verbe ici est littéralement « poursuivre » ou « suivre », qui est, en fait, l’opposé du verbe fuir. Dans certaines langues on dira tout simplement « cherche ».

δικαιοσύνη dikaiosunê, justice dans ce contexte parle d’une manière de vivre conforme à la volonté et aux commandements de Dieu. Voir aussi 2 Tim 2.22 ; 3.16 ; 4.8 ; Tite 3.5. Certains parlent de la « droiture ». On pourrait aussi utiliser une expression verbale, « cherche à être juste » (Parole de Vie).

Pour piété, voir l’Intro, Termes clé. Bien que tous les noms cités ici soient des noms abstraits, chacun indique un comportement. Ainsi il ne semble pas s’agir de la foi (ni « la saine doctrine »), mais d’une attitude qui se traduit en actions. On pourrait aussi parler de « l’attachement à Dieu » (Bible en français courant) ou utiliser une expression verbale, par exemple, « continue à vivre en communion avec Dieu » ou même « chercher à vivre ta foi ». Comme l’appel à la justice, ce serait un appel à vivre la vie chrétienne d’une manière digne et fidèle aux yeux de tous.

Pour foi, voir 1 Tim 1.2. Ici il semble s’agir soit de « bonne doctrine », soit de « fidélité » à Dieu ou à la foi chrétienne. Certains (Arichea et Hatton) suggèrent qu’il s’agit de se fier à Jésus-Christ de plus en plus.

Pour amour, voir 1 Tim 1.5. Ceci pourrait être compris comme l’amour de Dieu, l’amour du prochain, ou les deux, mais plusieurs pensent qu’il s’agit plus de l’amour envers les autres. La Parole de Vie dit « Vis… avec amour ».

persévérance peut être compris de deux manières, soit comme la « patience » (Nouvelle Bible Segond, Bible en français courant, Parole de Vie), soit la « constance » (Bible de Jérusalem). Ce mot est aussi lié à l’amour en 2 Tim 3.10 et Tite 2.2. Un verbe apparenté figure aussi en 2 Tim 2.10,12. Le contexte indique que les épreuves demandent la persévérance de la part de tous les chrétiens, y compris Timothée.

Le mot douceur parle d’un comportement non agressif envers les autres. Dans ce contexte il peut s’agir d’une certaine humilité face aux persécutions ou souffrances. Un nom apparenté qui a essentiellement le même sens s’emploie en 2 Tim 2.25 et Tite 3.2.

Pour les quatre derniers noms, la Parole de Vie reformule en disant « Vis avec foi, amour, patience et douceur », ce qui peut servir de modèle dans certaines langues.

Source: Zogbo, Lynell & Ellingworth, Paul La première lettre à Timothée – Manuel de traduction – Commentaire linguistique et exégétique de la Bible. Alliance biblique universelle, 2021.