We recommend that translators begin a new paragraph here since the subject matter changes. Good News Bible combines verses 5-7 in order to bring forward the information in verse 7. This will be a helpful model for some languages.
After this he fell sick and perceived that he was dying may be rendered “After this [or, After he had done all this] he became sick. Knowing [or, When he knew] that he was about to die….”
Quoted with permission from Bullard, Roger A. and Hatton, Howard A. A Handbook on 1-2 Maccabees. (UBS Helps for Translators). New York: UBS, 2011. For this and other handbooks for translators see here.

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