SIL Translator’s Notes on Revelation 8:12

Paragraph 8:12

8:12a

fourth: The word fourth refers to the next item after three other things. If counted, this item would be counted as number four. See how you translated this word in 4:7 or 6:7.

8:12b

a third of the sun and moon and stars were struck: The word struck figuratively refers to God causing that part to become dark. This clause is passive. Some languages must use an active clause. God probably ordered someone to strike the sun and moon and stars. For example:

a third of the sun became dark, a third of the moon was struck, a third of the stars were struck
-or-

⌊someone⌋ struck/affected the sun, ⌊someone⌋ struck/affected a third of the moon, ⌊someone⌋ struck/affected one out of every three stars
-or-

⌊God had someone⌋ strike/affect a third of the sun, a third of the moon, and a third of the stars.

a third of: Here the word third refers to one part out of three parts. See how you translated this phrase in 8:7.

8:12c

A third of the stars were darkened: Probably a third of the stars stopped shining. For the sun and moon, there are two ways to interpret this clause:

(1) It indicates that one part of three parts of the sun and one part of three parts of the moon became dark.

(2) It indicates that the sun and moon both gave one-third less light.

Translate possible in a way that allows either or both meanings. For example:

the light went out of a third of them (New Jerusalem Bible)
-or-
their light lost a third of its brightness (Good News Translation)

General Comment on 8:12b–c

The clause in 8:12c “A third of the stars were darkened” refers to what happened to the sun, moon, and stars. Some ways to indicate that are:

• Translate this clause as a new sentence that refers back to the whole previous sentence. For example:

a third of the sun, a third of the moon, and a third of the stars were struck. So a third of them became dark, (New Century Version)

• Add a word such as “each” or “all.” For example:

a third of them ⌊all⌋ became dark
-or-
one-third of ⌊each⌋ turned dark

8:12d

a third of the day was without light: This clause probably indicates that the sun did not shine for four out of twelve daylight hours. You should translate this clause without describing details, since the details were not told. For example:

A third part of the day was without light
-or-
One of three parts of the day was dark
-or-
One part of the day was dark and two parts were not dark

a third of the night as well: The phrase “was without light” is implied here but not repeated. In some languages it is more natural to repeat the phrase. For example:

a third of the night ⌊was without light⌋
-or-
a third of the night ⌊was dark⌋
-or-
the night ⌊was dark⌋ a third of the time
-or-
In the nighttime four hours didn’t have even any stars show.
-or-
at night for four hours the moon and the stars did not give light.

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SIL Translator’s Notes on Revelation 10:11

Paragraph 10:11

10:11a

they told me:
The Greek clause is literally “they said to me.” It is not clear who the pronoun they refers to. It probably refers generally to angels who told John God’s message. For example:

they said to me (New Revised Standard Version)
-or-
some voices said (Contemporary English Version)
-or-

⌊Others⌋ told me

Some English versions translate this clause as a passive because it is not clear to whom the pronoun “they” refers.

You must prophesy: The Greek clause is literally “It is necessary for you to prophesy.” God required John to write more prophecies for him.

prophesy: The word prophesy refers to speaking to people a message that God gives to him. These messages are called “prophecies” and reveal things that God wants people to know at that time. Other ways to translate this word are:

speak God’s message
-or-
proclaim God’s revelation

10:11b

about: There are several ways to interpret the Greek word that the Berean Standard Bible translates as about. The main interpretations are:

(1) It means concerning. The word refers to talking about the many peoples and nations. For example:

about (Revised Standard Version)

(2) It means against. The prophecy is about the bad things that the many peoples and nations are doing. For example:

against (New Jerusalem Bible)

(3) It means before. The prophecy is for the many peoples and nations to hear. For example:

in front of (God’s Word)

It is recommended that you follow interpretation (1).

peoples and nations: See how you translated these words in 5:9 or 7:9.

kings: This word refers to the highest ruler of a country. He usually has authority to make all decisions concerning the country. In some languages people are not familiar with kings. If that is true in your language, you may want to use a word or phrase that means leaders of countries. For example:

leaders of nations

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SIL Translator’s Notes on Revelation 12:13

Paragraph 12:13–17

12:13a

saw that: Here the word saw means “realized” (as in the Good News Translation). For example:

found himself (New Jerusalem Bible)

he had been thrown: This clause is passive. Some languages must use an active clause. For example:

⌊Michael and his angels⌋ had thrown him

This clause refers to an event that had happened earlier (12:9). Indicate that this event has already happened.

12:13b

pursued: There are two ways to interpret the Greek word that the Berean Standard Bible translates as pursued :

(1) The word means chased here. For example:

hunted for (New Century Version)

(2) The word means persecuted here. For example:

persecuted (New American Standard Bible)

It is recommended that you follow interpretation (1). The dragon chased the woman in order to harm her.

the woman who had given birth to the male child: This phrase refers to the woman of 12:1–6. For example:

the woman, the mother of the male child (New Jerusalem Bible)

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SIL Translator’s Notes on Revelation 14:9

Paragraph 14:9–11

14:9a

third: This refers to the next item after the second one. If counted, this item would be counted as number three. See how you translated this word in 4:7 or 11:14.

followed: As in 14:8a, the word followed here refers to appearing in sequence. Translate this word as you did in 14:8.

them: This pronoun refers to the first two angels.

14:9b

If anyone worships the beast: This if-clause is used to introduce a warning of what would happen when someone worships the beast. It does not indicate any doubt about whether anyone will worship the beast.

In some languages a literal translation would wrongly indicate that possibly no one would worship the beast. If that is true in your language, indicate that some people will worship the beast. For example:

As for those who worship the beast…, they, too, will drink…
-or-
This will happen to those who worship the beast…, they, too, will drink…

beast: This word refers to the first beast. See how you translated beast in 13:1 or 13:18.

its image: This word refers to the statue of the first beast. See how you translated image in 13:14.

14:9c

and receives its mark on his forehead or on his hand: See how you translated the similar words “receive a mark on their right hand or on their forehead” in 13:16. Translate these words in a similar way, but note the differences here.

its mark: The Berean Standard Bible adds the word its. This word makes it clear that the mark is the mark of the beast. For example:

the mark of the beast (Contemporary English Version)

However, in some languages following the Greek words will clearly refer to the mark of the beast. For example:

a mark (Revised Standard Version)

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SIL Translator’s Notes on Revelation 16:13

16:13a

unclean spirits: The Berean Standard Bible literally represents the Greek in this phrase. The phrase unclean spirits is a Hebrew idiom. It refers to spirits who are religiously unclean. They are impure and, therefore, unable to stand before God.

In some languages a literal translation of the phrase unclean spirits would have the correct meaning. For example:

foul spirits (Revised Standard Version)
-or-
filthy spirits

But in some languages a literal translation would not have the correct meaning. If that is true in your language, you may want to follow the Berean Standard Bible and then explain it in a footnote. An example footnote is:

Literally: “unclean spirits.” The phrase “unclean spirits” is a Hebrew idiom that refers to these spirit being impure, that is, sinful. Sinful spirits are religiously unclean and therefore unable to stand before God.

spirits: The word spirits refers to beings that people usually cannot see. Angels and demons are spirits.

frogs: The word frogs refers to small four-legged amphibians. They begin their lives in the water and then later live on land. They breathe air and eat insects.

16:13b

dragon: This word refers to a mythical creature something like a huge lizard. See how you translated this word in 12:3 or 13:11.

16:13c

false prophet: The second beast (13:11–17) is described here as the false prophet. A true prophet is a person who speaks the message that God gives to him. But a false prophet is one who speaks a message that does not come from God. Other ways to translate this are:

deceitful/lying prophet
-or-
he who says he is a prophet but teaches lies
-or-
spokesman for Satan
-or-
false prophecy say-er

See also how you translated the word prophet in 2:20 (“prophetess”) or 11:18.

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SIL Translator’s Notes on Revelation 18:6

18:6a–7a

In 18:6–7a the speaker now urged someone to punish Babylon. It is not clear to whom the voice spoke. He used four different commands. Two commands urge them to give her a punishment that is equal to her sin. Two commands urge them to give her double the punishment. The four commands together urge them to fully and completely punish Babylon.

The four commands are all addressed to more than one person or being. If you must say to whom the speaker is speaking, use a general plural word. For example:

⌊You,
(plur)⌋ give back to her….

18:6a

Give back to her as she has done to others: The Greek clause is literally “Reward her as she also rewarded (you/others).” The context indicates that Babylon had done bad things, and these people were to do bad things to her in return. Other ways to translate this clause are:

Pay her back even as she has paid (New American Standard Bible)
-or-
Do to her as she has done to others (New Living Translation (2004))
-or-
Give back to her as she has given (New International Version)

18:6b

pay her back double for what she has done: The Greek clause is literally “double the double according to her deeds.” It refers to punishing Babylon twice as much as she deserved for the evil deeds she did. Other ways to translate this clause are:

repay her double for her deeds (Revised Standard Version)
-or-
Double her penalty for all her evil deeds (New Living Translation (2004))
-or-
indeed, double the punishment for her deeds

18:6c

mix her a double portion in her own cup: This clause refers figuratively to punishing Babylon by doing twice the evil to her. It commands the people to do what she had done to others, but twice as much. For example:

in the cup which she has mixed, mix twice as much for her (New American Standard Bible)

In some languages a literal translation would not have the correct meaning. If that is true in your language, you may want to:

• Translate the literal meaning and explain its figurative meaning in a footnote. For example:

This saying refers figuratively to people punishing Babylon by doing what she had done to others, but twice as much.

• Translate the meaning without the figure of speech. For example:

Punish her in the same ways that she did bad things to others, but punish her twice as much

You may then want to indicate the literal meaning in a footnote. An example footnote is:

Literally: “in the cup which she has mixed, mix twice as much for her.”

• Explain the figurative meaning in your translation. For example:

⌊Punish her in the same ways that she did bad things to others, but⌋ give to her as if twice as much in her cup

mix her: At the time wine was often mixed with water and spices before drinking. There are several ways to interpret the Greek word that the Berean Standard Bible translates as mix :

(1) It refers to mixing two or more liquids together. For example, the Revised Standard Version says:

mix…for her

(2) It refers to pouring something into a cup. For example, the Good News Translation says:

Fill her cup

(3) It refers to giving something. For example, the God’s Word says:

Give her

It is recommended that you follow interpretation (1), because the lexicons support it.

The word mix refers here to getting the portion ready for the woman to drink. Other ways to translate this clause are:

prepare (New Century Version)
-or-
make

her: The Berean Standard Bible omits the word “for” in a natural English style. In many languages, this word must be explicit. For example, the Revised Standard Version says:

for her

a double portion: There are two ways to interpret the Greek word that the Berean Standard Bible translates as a double portion :

(1) It refers to twice as much liquid (twice as much wine and water mixed together). For example, the NET Bible says:

double the amount

(2) It refers to twice as much wine but the same amount of water. For example, the Good News Translation says:

twice as strong

It is recommended that you follow interpretation (1), because of the connection to the amount of her sins in 18:5 and “pay her back double” in 18:6b.

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SIL Translator’s Notes on Revelation 19:14

19:14a

armies: This word refers to large groups of soldiers.

These verses do not say whether the soldiers are angels (as in Matthew 26:53) or believers (as in Revelation 17:14). If possible, do not say in your translation whether the soldiers are angels or believers.

Some language must say who is in the army. If possible, refer to soldiers without naming them as people or angels. If you must name people or angels, you should refer to believers (as in Revelation 17:14). You may then want to explain the word in a footnote. An example footnote is:

The Greek words do not say here whether these armies are armies of angels or armies of believers. But 17:14 refers to an army of believers. The plural word “armies” may imply both kinds of armies.

19:14b

dressed in fine linen: Here the word fine indicates that the linen was very good quality. The word linen refers to expensive cloth made from a plant called flax. See how you translated this phrase in 18:12 or 19:8.

19:14c

follow Him: Here the phrase follow Him indicates that the armies went where the rider went.

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SIL Translator’s Notes on Revelation 21:10

21:10a

carried me away in the Spirit: In English Bibles, the titles and names of God normally begin with an uppercase (capital) letter. But ancient Greek writers used only one style of letters. So the Greek word that the Berean Standard Bible translates as Spirit can refer to either the human spirit or God’s Spirit. There are two ways to interpret it:

(1) It indicates that the Holy Spirit took John places during the events of 21:10–22:5. For example:

And in the Spirit he carried me away (Revised Standard Version)

(2) It indicates that John’s spirit (as opposed to his physical body) experienced the events of 21:10–22:5. For example:

He took me in spirit (New Jerusalem Bible)

It is recommended that you follow interpretation (1), as in 1:10, 4:2, and 17:3.

The clause implies that John’s experience in 1:10 continues but at a new location. Other ways to translate this clause following interpretation (1) are:

And the angel carried me away by the Spirit (New Century Version)
-or-
with the help of the Spirit, he took me (Contemporary English Version)

See how you translated this clause in 17:3.

a mountain great and high: The Berean Standard Bible has the describing words great and high after the mountain they describe. This copies the Greek word order. It is also an English poetic style. You may want to follow the usual word order of your language. For example:

a great, high mountain (Revised Standard Version)

21:10b–c

the holy city of Jerusalem:
The new Jerusalem is the holy city because it belongs to God and God will live there. Here the word holy indicates that the city is dedicated for God’s use. His people will live there. Nothing evil will live there. Other ways to translate this phrase are:

the City set apart ⌊for God⌋ , Jerusalem
-or-
God’s ⌊special⌋ City, Jerusalem

See how you translated a similar phrase (“the holy city, the new Jerusalem”) in 21:2.

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