While Jehiel … were overseers assisting Conaniah and Shime-i his brother: Good News Translation indicates at the beginning of this verse that the ten new men named here were “Levites” and states explicitly that they were ten in number. This information is implicit in the text, but it may be a good idea in other languages to make it explicit. In the Hebrew text the names Azaziah, Ismachiah, Benaiah and Conaniah have long forms that are not represented in Revised Standard Version and Good News Translation. The long forms are “Azazyahu,” “Ismachyahu,” “Benayahu,” and “Conanyahu.”
The ten Levites are referred to as overseers, but they were clearly under the authority of Conaniah and Shimei as the text indicates. The Hebrew expression rendered assisting is literally “under the hand of.” New American Bible says “subject to.” The words his brother do not need to be repeated in this verse since this information has just been stated in the previous verse. In fact, Good News Translation replaces the whole expression Conaniah and Shimei his brother by the pronoun “them.” This may prove to be more natural in other languages as well.
By the appointment of Hezekiah the king and Azariah the chief officer of the house of God: This information may be expressed in a separate sentence by saying “They did this because Hezekiah … and Azariah … told them to do so” (compare Good News Translation). In the Hebrew text the names Hezekiah and Azariah also have long forms, which are “Jehizkiyahu” and “Azaryahu.” The chief officer of the house of God is another way of referring to the High Priest (see verse 10).
Quoted with permission from Omanson, Roger L. and Ellington, John E. A Handbook on 1-2 Chronicles, Volume 1. (UBS Helps for Translators). Miami: UBS, 2014. For this and other handbooks for translators see here .
