Translation commentary on Hosea 14:8

O Ephraim …: If the previous verse has been translated as a comment from the prophet, another change in perspective takes place here that needs to be reflected in the formatting of the text. But what exactly is the change? Some translations understand Ephraim as the speaker here (New Jewish Publication Society’s Tanakh, De Nieuwe Bijbelvertaling, Swahili Union Version). Others translate the text as a continuation of the LORD speaking to Ephraim (Revised Standard Version/New Revised Standard Version, New International Version, New Living Translation, English Standard Version), while again others interpret it as words spoken by the LORD about Ephraim (Good News Translation, Revised English Bible). All three positions can be defended based on the Hebrew text. The translator has to choose one option and follow it consistently. The first interpretation will be followed in the model translation below, since the other two are reflected in Revised Standard Version and Good News Translation.

Once again, the leading tribe of the northern kingdom of Israel is mentioned here, Ephraim, rather than Israel (see comments on 4.17). Good News Translation says “The people of Israel.” The Peshitta begins this verse with “And Ephraim says…,” which is followed by New Jewish Publication Society’s Tanakh and De Nieuwe Bijbelvertaling. Others who favor this reading argue that the verb “says” is implied here. This reading resolves a number of the issues that are discussed in the following paragraphs.

What have I to do with idols?: The Hebrew is literally “what to me again to idols?” which is a rhetorical question that means “I will have nothing more to do with idols” (similarly Good News Translation). Hebrew Old Testament Text Project, with a {B} decision, prefers reading the Hebrew of the first line as “O Ephraim, what have I to do with idols?” Critique Textuelle de l’Ancien Testament discusses this line further and compares it with the situation in 4.17, where Yahweh has abandoned Israel to its idols. But now we look to reconciliation between Yahweh and Israel. We know that Yahweh would not connect himself in any way with idols, although the people may have often done so by worshiping both Yahweh and the idols. Now that Yahweh and Israel are reconciled, there will be no more of this worship of both Yahweh and idols.

It is I who answer renders an emphatic expression in Hebrew, literally “I, I will answer.” The text does not say to what Yahweh (or Ephraim) will answer. It may include their prayers, their sacrifices, or other things. Good News Translation inserts “their prayers.”

And look after you: In Hebrew this clause is literally “and I will watch over him.” Revised Standard Version changes the third person pronoun “him” to you, referring to Ephraim, since Ephraim is being addressed by the LORD in its translation. De Nieuwe Bijbelvertaling says “I put my eyes on him,” meaning Ephraim looks to the LORD for help. De Nieuwe Bijbelvertaling understands this clause differently than Revised Standard Version since it has Ephraim speaking about the LORD here.

I am like an evergreen cypress: The Hebrew word for cypress is a generic term that can refer to cypress, fir, and juniper trees, which are all tall conifers. The Hebrew word for evergreen carries with it the ideas of abundance and freshness. Depending on the approach one takes for the verse, this simile may refer to the LORD’s care and protection for the people of Israel (so Revised Standard Version, Good News Translation), or alternatively (if Ephraim is considered to be the speaker) to the renewed life they have received from the LORD (so De Nieuwe Bijbelvertaling). Good News Translation‘s “I will shelter them” is not in the Hebrew text, but is an attempt to explicate the meaning of the evergreen cypress. In the last two lines of this verse the emphasis turns to the fruitfulness of the people under Yahweh’s blessings.

From me comes your fruit is literally “from me your fruit is to be found.” Does this line mean that Yahweh is the tree that provides fruit for the people (so Revised Standard Version), or does he bless them so that they themselves become fruitful, with abundant crops (so New American Bible with “Because of me you bear fruit”)? Or are both true? Most likely it means Yahweh is the direct source of their blessings, the source of the fruit they will find and enjoy, since the fruitful tree image continues in this context.

A translation model for this verse is:

• Ephraim will say, “What do I have to do with idols?
I will answer and look up to you.
I will be like a cypress tree, always green and fresh;
it is your fruit that can be found in me.”

Quoted with permission from Dorn, Louis & van Steenbergen, Gerrit. A Handbook on Hosea. (UBS Helps for Translators). Miami: UBS, 2020. For this and other handbooks for translators see here .

Translation commentary on Hosea 2:6

The conjunction Therefore introduces a change of topic from the complaint to the action Yahweh will take as a result of the evil described in the preceding verses. It is not a judgment in the normal sense, but a punishment as a means of correcting the evil. This conjunction occurs also in 2.9 and 2.14, where it again introduces the announcement of what Yahweh will do in response to the sins just mentioned. Translators should use a proper particle or conjunction that clearly marks a change of topic in the receptor language.

I will hedge up her way with thorns is literally “behold I hedging up your way with thorns.” The Hebrew word for “behold” often introduces a punishment or promise that God will implement in the near future. In this context it highlights an impending punishment. It is still possible to avert it at the last minute. For this clause Good News Translation says simply “I am going to fence her in with thorn bushes.” Good News Translation misses the imminence of the action here. Better models are “I will soon fence her in with thorns” ( NET Bible) and “I am about to….” It should be clear in translation that the pronoun I refers to the LORD, not to Hosea. Bible en français courant makes this explicit by saying “I, the Lord, I will block her path with a hedge of thorns.”

The Hebrew verb for hedge can refer to making either a fence or a hedge that will block someone from going over it, forcing someone to stay on the road. However, it can also refer to a blockage of the road. In this case the hedge is made using thorns. The Hebrew word for thorns refers to bushes with sharp thorns that cause pain if someone rubs against them. Such bushes were planted in rows and grew about 1 meter (3 feet) in height. Farmers planted them on the edges of gardens and fields to prevent animals from entering and destroying crops. The path left between such rows was the way where one could safely walk. Good News Translation renders hedge up her way with thorns as “fence her in with thorn bushes,” which may imply the idea of keeping her penned in like an animal rather than forcing her to stay on a restricted path. However, in the Hebrew text it is not entirely clear which of the two interpretations (“keeping her on the way” or “blocking her way”) is correct here. In the only other Old Testament occurrence of the Hebrew verb for hedge (Job 1.10), the meaning is clearly “to be surrounded by thorn bushes,” thus blocking the way. In the present context blocking her from going out to chase her lovers makes sense. Some translations clearly opt for blocking the way; for example, Revised English Bible has “close her road with thorn bushes,” and Die Bibel im heutigen Deutsch says “block her way with thorn bushes.” In some cultures it is quite common to block paths with thorn bushes. If so, such a translation is recommended here (so Swahili Union Version, Chewa).

Instead of her way, the Hebrew text has “your way,” speaking directly to the woman. Hebrew Old Testament Text Project recommends the Hebrew reading with a {B} decision. This is an example of Hebrew style easily shifting from third person to second person direct address, and back to third person again. However, many languages cannot do this in normal style, so Revised Standard Version, Good News Translation, and many other versions keep referring to the woman in the third person. One can, of course, understand that the speaker in the courtroom is addressing everyone, but for a moment turns to address the woman, and then turns again to address other people present. A precise and formal translation will prefer to reflect the Hebrew by saying “your way” (Traduction œcuménique de la Bible), while a more natural way of saying the same thing in the local language may be her way or something similar. In both cases a footnote to explain the issue may be helpful to the reader.

The Hebrew words for way and paths are often used in the Bible figuratively to refer to a person’s manner of living. Here these words apparently refer to the woman’s habit of chasing after her lovers, such as by going through the streets and looking for them. The extended allegorical sense in this context refers to the people of Israel going out to worship Baal.

And I will build a wall against her is parallel in meaning to the previous line. God will block the woman’s way with a wall. This line can also mean that God will surround her with a wall without a possibility to escape, as in Lam 3.7. The Hebrew word for wall refers to low walls built primarily of stones to keep animals out of fields and vineyards.

The Hebrew text for this line is literally “and I will build her wall.” Hebrew Old Testament Text Project favors the Hebrew text as written, with a {B} decision, rather than suggesting an emended text for which there is no evidence. Hebrew Old Testament Text Project understands “her wall” to be a wall that would stand in her way, to prevent her from moving the wrong way, or from moving out altogether.

So that she cannot find her paths: She will not be able to follow her intended way to her lovers; that is, Israel will not be able to worship the Baals of Canaan. The combination of the thorn hedge and the wall will force her to walk along a designated path that she did not intend to follow; that is, her way of life will be different from what she intended it to be. Alternatively, she will be locked in and unable to see to her lovers. Good News Translation omits this line, which we do not recommend. The Hebrew text expresses explicitly the result that she will not find her paths. The Hebrew word for paths is plural, indicating that she follows more than one way to chase her lovers.

A translation model for this verse is:

• Now, for that reason I, the LORD, will put thorn bushes in her way.
I will put up a wall against her,
so that she will not find her paths.

Quoted with permission from Dorn, Louis & van Steenbergen, Gerrit. A Handbook on Hosea. (UBS Helps for Translators). Miami: UBS, 2020. For this and other handbooks for translators see here .

Translation commentary on Hosea 3:1

And renders the Hebrew waw conjunction, which connects this narrative to the previous section. Most languages will not use such a conjunction. Good News Translation and many other translations omit it. New Living Translation has “Then.” Swahili Union Version has a narrative tense that is used here to mark the link with the preceding section. If such a tense exists in the receptor language, it can be used here.

The LORD said to me: See the comments on 1.2 and 1.4. The pronoun me refers to Hosea. This section differs from chapter 1 since it is written as a story told by Hosea rather than by someone else.

Go again: In the Hebrew text the adverb for again appears between the LORD said to me and Go, so it is difficult to determine whether it modifies said or Go. It may signify repetition of the action it describes, or it may signify that the action continues. Some translations agree with Revised Standard Version and Good News Translation by saying “Go again” (New English Bible; similarly Jerusalem Bible with “Go a second time”), meaning that Hosea should again take a wife as he did earlier. Others prefer the interpretation of the alternate translation given in the GNT footnote, which is “The LORD spoke to me again” (similarly New Revised Standard Version, Contemporary English Version, New American Bible). New Jewish Publication Society’s Tanakh stresses the continuity of God speaking to Hosea, as he had spoken earlier: “The LORD said to me further.” All these translations can be defended on the basis of the Hebrew text. But none of these renderings help us identify the woman. In any case, it is clear that Yahweh is “again” addressing Hosea, or that Hosea is to go “again” and love a woman (or, less likely, to “continue” to love his own wife), so translators are free to make either interpretation explicit, according to the demands of the receptor language. It is better still to leave both options implicit in order to maintain the broader scope of interpretation options.

Love a woman is in contrast with 1.2, where Hosea is told to marry a woman, not merely to love one. However, the Hebrew word for love can include not only sexual and emotional features as in courtship, but also the full range of faithful devotion that should be seen in a marriage. Marriage may be implied, whether the woman is Gomer or not. But we cannot say that the context implies that the woman is Gomer. In the Hebrew text the term for woman is introduced without the definite article, so this seems to be a woman not previously mentioned. New Jewish Publication Society’s Tanakh apparently opts for a woman other than Gomer and does not imply marriage, saying “befriend a woman.” NET Bible makes it explicit that Gomer is in view here with “show love to your wife again.” Such explicitness seems to go beyond the information offered by the text and context.

Who is beloved of a paramour: There is a textual problem here. We have here an example of how the Hebrew text, written in consonants only, can be supplied with various vowel markings so that the words can mean different things. Instead of who is beloved of a paramour, the Septuagint has “who loves evil,” which uses the same Hebrew consonants but with other vowels. However, the traditional Hebrew text followed by Revised Standard Version seems to be a better text than what the Septuagint suggests, and Hebrew Old Testament Text Project favors that text with a {B} decision, so we recommend it.

The Hebrew word translated paramour has the basic meanings of “neighbor, partner, companion” as well as “another” and even “husband” (as in Jer 3.20). New Jewish Publication Society’s Tanakh has “companion.” Hebrew Old Testament Text Project believes it means “husband” (so also Jerusalem Bible) in this context (a {B} decision). The comparison with God’s love for Israel in the second half of the verse led the Hebrew Old Testament Text Project committee to this opinion, since God’s love would be demonstrated by Hosea’s steadfast love for Gomer in spite of her unfaithfulness. This is a possible interpretation, which may be rendered as “who is beloved by her husband but is an adulteress” or “who, despite being loved by her husband, is an adulteress.” However, the parallel is still applicable if God’s love for his people relates to Hosea’s love for a woman who was loved by “another” as she was involved in adultery. No solution has proven to be the only possible correct one. For this reason we recommend that any translation is accompanied by a footnote with the alternative rendering.

And is an adulteress: In Hebrew culture a woman was called an adulteress if she was married but had sexual intercourse with a man not her husband. If she was unmarried she was called a “fornicator,” whether the man with whom she had intercourse was married or not. Since this woman is called an adulteress, she apparently is married, but the text does not identify her husband. Good News Translation combines the two clauses, who is beloved of a paramour and is an adulteress, saying “who is committing adultery with a lover.”

Die Bibel im heutigen Deutsch (1982) interprets this verse to mean that Hosea should take Gomer once more, that he is the “husband” who still loves her even though she is an adulteress. Die Bibel im heutigen Deutsch renders the first half of this verse as “The Lord commanded me: ‘Take your wife back again! You love her, although she leads the life of a prostitute.’ ” Die Bibel im heutigen Deutsch may have had good reasons for translating in this manner, but a footnote should have been added to indicate the other alternative translation.

We assume this woman is probably not Gomer, Hosea’s first wife. This “second woman” refers to the southern kingdom, Judah, who had also worshiped Canaanite gods, as the northern kingdom had done. Thus Judah would be “loved by an illegitimate lover and is an adulteress.”

Even as the LORD loves the people of Israel …: The comparison here is between Hosea’s love and Yahweh’s love, since both love someone who turns away from such love. Since the LORD is speaking, some languages will have to follow Good News Translation and use a first person pronoun for him instead. Good News Translation renders this clause as “just as I still love the people of Israel,” and Die Bibel im heutigen Deutsch (1982) is similar with “In the same way I love the Israelites.” Such translation solutions should be carried out consistently if it is required by the receptor language to use a first person pronoun.

Though they turn to other gods means they worship other gods than Yahweh and trust in them for help. No specific gods are mentioned.

And love cakes of raisins refers to a practice at sacrificial feasts. The Hebrew expression for cakes of raisins does not refer to baked cakes in the sense of sweet bread made of flour and raisins. Rather, dried, somewhat sticky raisins or figs were pressed together into a solid mass that could easily be carried as food, as on a trip through the wilderness. Die Bibel im heutigen Deutsch says “cakes pressed from raisins.” Good News Translation avoids the misconception of “cakes” by saying simply “raisins.” A better model is “lumps of pressed raisins.” Apparently such lumps of raisins were part of the sacrificial worship to the fertility gods of Canaan, and David distributed them to the people as gifts after a sacrificial feast in Jerusalem (see 2 Sam 6.18-19; 1 Chr 16.2-3). To love such lumps of raisins implies the desire to offer them in such sacrificial feasts to the gods, and perhaps to receive and eat them as well. It may be necessary to add a footnote to explain the background to this practice, as in Good News Translation. It is also possible to make the function of this practice explicit in the text, since it is unknown in most cultures; for example, Good News Translation renders this clause as “and like to take offerings of raisins to idols,” New English Bible has “and love the raisin-cakes offered to their idols,” and NET Bible says “and love to offer raisin cakes to idols.” In any case, we do not recommend following New Living Translation here, which has “and love to worship them [that is, the idols].” This translation removes a significant cultural element from the translation that clearly marks the otherness of the source culture.

A translation model for this verse is:

• The LORD again said to me, “Go, and show your love for a woman who in spite of being loved by her husband is adulterous.* Similarly, I, the LORD, love the people of Israel, although they turn to other gods and love to offer lumps of pressed raisins to idols [of these gods].”
* who in spite of being loved by her husband is adulterous; or even though she is loved by another man.

Quoted with permission from Dorn, Louis & van Steenbergen, Gerrit. A Handbook on Hosea. (UBS Helps for Translators). Miami: UBS, 2020. For this and other handbooks for translators see here .

Translation commentary on Luke 2:27 – 2:28

Exegesis:

kai ēlthen ‘and he came.’ With this clause the description of the event, already announced by kai idou ‘and behold’ in v. 25 (cf. note there), begins; kai therefore resumes the opening words of v. 25. Hence Knox translates “he now came”.

en tō pneumati ‘in the Spirit,’ i.e. “guided by the Spirit” (New English Bible), not on his own account or initiative.

eis to hieron ‘into the temple,’ i.e. the temple in Jerusalem.

hieron ‘temple’; as compared with naos ‘temple’ (1.9, 21, 22) hieron includes the whole temple with its buildings, courts, etc. and is often used when the scene of action is not the temple building itself.

kai en tō eisagagein tous goneis to paidion Iēsoun ‘and after the parents had brought in the child Jesus,’ scil. eis to hieron ‘into the temple,’ omitted in order to avoid repetition. en with following articular accusative and infinitive in the aorist tense indicates events preceding the event expressed in the main clause (cf. 9.36; 11.37; 14.1; 19.15).

eisagō ‘to bring in,’ or, ‘into.’

tou poiēsai autous kata to eithismenon tou nomou peri autou ‘in order to do concerning him according to the custom of the law.’ tou with following articular infinitive has final force and the clause expresses the purpose of their entering the temple. autous is the subject of the infinitive poiēsai, not expressed in English. peri autou ‘concerning him’ goes with poiēsai; the phrase does not mean that the child Jesus himself is to be submitted to a rite but only that what his parents do, concerns him.

to eithismenon, past participle of ethizō ‘to accustom,’ lit. ‘that which is accustomed’ i.e. ‘that which has become a custom,’ synonymous with to ethos (cf. on 1.8) ‘custom,’ ‘tradition’; to eithismenon tou nomou ‘the custom of the law’ is the custom which the law prescribes.

(V. 28) kai autos ‘and he.’ autos refers to a subject already mentioned, i.e. that of ēlthen ‘he came.’ kai is used here in a redundant way to introduce the apodosis after a subordinate clause (cf. 2.21).

edexato auto eis tas agkalas ‘he received it in his arms.’

dechomai ‘to take,’ ‘to receive.’ The use of this verb here suggests that the initiative is not with Simeon but that the child is handed over to him.

agkalē ‘bent arm,’ usually in order to receive something.

kai eulogēsen ton theon kai eipen ‘and he praised God and said.’ For eulogeō cf. on 1.64. The two verbs of this clause may be taken to refer to two different acts, or to one single act, preferably the latter, cf. The Four Gospels – a New Translation, “blessed God in these words”.

Translation:

Inspired by the Spirit he came into the temple. The activity of the Spirit has also been described as, “impelled by” (The Four Gospels – a New Translation), ‘moved by’ (Ekari), ‘on instruction of’ (Toraja-Sa’dan), ‘on instigation/command of’ (Tamil); or, changing the syntactic pattern, ‘the Holy Spirit led him into, or, caused Simeon to enter’ (Sranan Tongo, Tboli). Spirit may have to be specified, cf. ‘Holy Spirit,’ ‘Spirit of God.’ — The temple (Gr. to hieron, occurring in 2.37, 46; 4.9; 18.10; 19.45, 47; 20.1; 21.5, 37f; 22.52f; 24.53) is preferably to be distinguished in translation from the more specific ho naos (for which see on 1.9). Commonly used descriptive renderings are, ‘Holy/Sacred House,’ ‘Divine Abode,’ ‘House of God.’ In order to indicate the uniqueness of Jerusalem’s temple Balinese has to use ‘Great Temple.’ The Chinese Union Version did not choose the term for the temple of popular religion (in which also the participation of the state was centred), but a word (lit. ‘palace’) indicating the main worship hall of the Buddhists. A similar term is used in Thai to translate ho naos, and an expression built on that term is employed as rendering of to hieron, i.e. ‘environs-of the main-audience-hall’ (preferred to the existing term for a temple compound because of the strong Buddhist connotations of the latter). Some other renderings used (most of them both for hieron and naos) are, ‘God’s compound’ (Zarma), ‘big church of the Jews’ (Otomi), ‘big house on top (i.e. most important)’ (Zapotec of Villa Alta), ‘festival longhouse of God’ (Guhu-Samane), ‘sacrosanct house,’ lit. ‘house where-the-belly-gets-swollen’ (i.e. because taboo is violated) (Toraja-Sa’dan, using a term that is also applied to a Muslim mosque).

The parents brought in the child Jesus. Where ‘parents’ should preferably be possessed one may shift to, ‘the child J. was brought in by his parents’ (Indonesian languages), ‘father and mother of that child J. brought-in him’ (Kituba), or, ‘Jesus’ parents brought in the little one.’ Parents is often rendered by a combination of the words for father and mother, cf. on v. 33. — Brought in, or, ‘brought/carried enter (the temple),’ ‘came in there, carrying’; cf. also on “brought him up” in v. 22. — The child Jesus. This combination of noun and proper name is awkward in some languages; then one may have to say, ‘the young/little one called Jesus,’ or simply, ‘the little one,’ or, ‘Jesus’ (Tboli); or again, shifting to a term for descendant (cf. on 1.7), ‘their child (called Jesus).’

To do for him, or, ‘concerning him,’ ‘with him’; or, ‘to act/perform with regard to him.’ In some languages the very generic character of the clause cannot be maintained. Since it refers backwards to v. 22b, it is defensible in such a case to say ‘to present him (to the Lord).’

According to the custom of the law, ‘as was the custom prescribed by the law,’ ‘as the law had made them accustomed to do’ (Sranan Tongo); or, making the phrase the object of ‘to do,’ “what was customary under the Law” (New English Bible), ‘custom required by the law’ (Tagalog), ‘custom that started from their own commandment/law’ (Tboli). Where ‘custom’ and ‘law’ are incompatible in an expression like this, one may have to shift to, “what the Law required” (Good News Translation), ‘the prescriptions of the Law’; then the rendering may become more similar to, or coincide with, that of “according to the law” in v. 22.

(V. 28) He took him up in his arms. One or both of the pronouns may have to be specified, ‘Simeon’ and ‘the child’ respectively. To take in one’s arms (in some languages expressed by one verb), or, with a slight semantic shift ‘to take/hold-to-one’s-breast’ (Bahasa Indonesia, Javanese). Elsewhere one has to add a verb, cf. ‘he took and held-in-his-arms’ (Toraja-Sa’dan), ‘Simeon took him, held-him-to-his-breast’ (Malay).

Blessed God and said, preferably, ‘praised God, saying (or, in/with these words),’ see on 1.42 sub (2).

Quoted with permission from Reiling, J. and Swellengrebel, J.L. A Handbook on the Gospel of Luke. (UBS Handbook Series). New York: UBS, 1971. For this and other handbooks for translators see here . Make sure to also consult the Handbook on the Gospel of Mark for parallel or similar verses.

Translation commentary on Luke 3:1 – 3:2

Exegesis:

Vv. 1f consist of (a) a series of indications of time, serving to fix the events to be described in vv. 2ff in the setting of world and regional history, the latter both political and religious, and (b) the main clause egeneto rēma theou epi Iōannēn ‘the word of God came to John,’ etc.

en etei de pentekaidekatō tēs hēgemonias Tiberiou Kaisaros ‘in the fifteenth year of the reign of Tiberius Caesar.’ de is transitional and serves to introduce a new narrative.

hēgemonia ‘rule,’ here referring to the reign of the Roman emperor but in itself as general a term as the verb hēgemoneuō (used in the next phrase), cf. on 2.2.

Tiberiou Kaisaros ‘of Tiberius Caesar,’ cf. on 2.1.

tēs Ioudaias ‘of Judea,’ cf. on 1.5. Here it is used in an administrative sense, including Samaria but not Galilee, as the next phrase shows.

kai tetraarchountos … Hērōdou ‘and when Herod was tetrarch.’

tetrarcheō ‘to be tetrarch,’ i.e. originally the governor of one of the four provinces of Thessaly, later denoting the ruler of any small country or region who was not a king.

tēs Itouraias kai Trachōnitidos chōras ‘of Ituraea and Trachonitis,’ both going with chōras which admits of many translations, cf. e.g., “district” (Translator’s New Testament), “territory” (Phillips), “country” (Moffatt). Their tetrarch Philippus was Herod’s older brother, of a different mother.

epi archiereōs Hanna kai Kaïapha ‘in the time of the high priest Annas and Caiaphas.’ archiereōs, though in the singular, refers to both names mentioned, and Luke may have thought of Annas and Caiaphas as being a kind of joint high priests.

archiereus ‘high priest.’

egeneto rēma theou epi Iōannēn ‘the word of God happened, or, came to John.’ This phrase occurs frequently in the Septuagint, denoting the divine inspiration of a prophet by God and the entrusting of a divine message or commission (cf. e.g. Gen. 15.1; 1 Sam. 15.10; Jer. 1.2). It implies that the person to whom the word of God comes, comes under the power of that word, not just that the word is communicated to him.

en tē erēmō ‘in the desert’ refers to the same area as hai erēmoi in 1.80.

Translation:

The elaborate way in which Luke states the date of the events to be told has the stylistic function of marking that he now comes to the main part of his narrative. In several languages this can be imitated approximately, but it may be advisable then to divide the one long sentence in small units, introducing the main event (‘the word … came …’) by a recapitulating expression, e.g. “It was the fifteenth year of the rule of Emperor T.; Pontius P. was governor of Judea, Herod was ruler of G…. It was at that time that the word of God came…” (Good News Translation). Other languages may require an introductory word or phrase, such as, ‘To-begin-with’ (Malay; cf. also above on 1.5), ‘What will be told now is this.’ If according to receptor language usage the main event has to be mentioned early in the utterance, the sentence may have to be recast in such a way that first the emperor, next John and what happened to him, and last the secular and religious rulers are referred to (Manobo), whereas in a language as Sateré what happened to John will have to come at the very beginning.

The noun reign may have to be expressed in a clause, e.g. ‘when T. C. had been reigning/ruling, or, had been emperor’; and cf. on 1.33.

Governor, see on 2.2.

Tetrarch. The rendering to be chosen should denote an indigenous ruler that is subject to higher authority, cf. the following renderings of ‘tetrarch’ and ‘emperor’ respectively, ‘prince’—‘king-of-princes’ (cf. Balinese), ‘chief’—‘chief of greatness’ (Kituba), ‘king who has been apportioned a fief,’ i.e. feudal Lord—‘(one who is) on the throne,’ using a well known idiom that expresses sovereiGood News Bibley (Chinese Union Version); in Kekchí the distinction is indicated by a reference to areas of different size, e.g. ‘who had power in Galilee’ (etc.)—‘who had power in all the land.’ A cultural equivalent has been used in, ‘at the time of these four chiefs: Herod in the region G., Phillip in the region I….’ (Batak Toba, adapting an expression employed in several parts of Sumatra for groups of high dignitaries, which are called ‘the four chiefs/grandees,’ even if their number is not complete). Attempts at a literal rendering, often a neologism in the receptor language, usually result in a long and cumbersome phrase, in some cases even a misleading one, suggesting some such meaning as ‘chief over four parts,’ or ‘fourth ruler.’ The renderings of “tetrarch” and “governor” are the same in some languages (e.g. Kituba, Ekari, Sranan Tongo); this is acceptable, because the distinction is of no relevance here (cf. the fact that in Pilate’s case the Greek does not mention his precise rank).

Brother, see below on 6.14.

(V. 2) In the high-priesthood of A. and C., or, ‘when A. and C. were high-priests.’

The word of God came to John. Though the wording of this Hebraistic phrase should preferably be preserved, yet receptor language idiom may compel the translator to the use of more or less radical adjustments. He may have to mark the expression as a simile, e.g. ‘the word of God came, as it were, to/over John’; or to rephrase it so that the connexion between ‘word of God’ and the verb becomes less direct, e.g. by speaking of ‘the power/guidance of God’s word,’ or so that ‘the word of God’ is no longer the agent, e.g. by shifting to a rendering like, ‘John was-commissioned with God’s word’ (Javanese), or, ‘John received the word of God’; or again, he may have to treat the ultimate agent, i.e. God, as subject of the sentence, e.g. ‘God made J. the one to speak his (i.e. God’s) words,’ ‘God made-known his message to him’ (Kituba). ‘God commanded/commissioned/told John to preach.’ — For word of God cf. on 5.1. In some Bantu languages the choice is between two terms for ‘word,’ the one used in contexts of social communication in the meaning voice, ‘word (that is heard and awaits response),’ the other in that of ‘word (as power, or as expression of intention),’ ‘command,’ ‘message’; as the exegesis shows the latter term will usually best fit the present context. — Came to, has been rendered by ‘came over’ (Willibrord), ‘took possession of’ (Schonfield), ‘found’ (Nyakyusa), ‘arrived in the heart of,’ indicating that John is merely an instrument of God in receiving the word (Tzeltal), ‘arrived at/reached’ (Shona 1963, employing a verb that, when given a suffix indicating purpose or aim, is used in ritual contexts of a god, or spirit, that takes possession of a medium).

In such phrases as John the son of Zechariah the appositional phrase functions approximately as does the surname in modern western languages; in some languages it forms a closely knit linguistic unit, signalled as such by a specific term or construction.

When name and apposition do not form such a unit one should make clear that in the wilderness does not go with Zechariah, but with John, cf. ‘then God’s voice found J., the son of Z., it found him in the woods’ (Nyakyusa), .’.. to John there in the wilderness. This J. was the child of Z.’ (Manobo); cf. also, ‘at that time Z.’s son J. was in the desert (and) the word of God came down to him’ (Chinese Union Version, locative clauses in Chinese normally preceding that part they qualify) for wilderness.

Quoted with permission from Reiling, J. and Swellengrebel, J.L. A Handbook on the Gospel of Luke. (UBS Handbook Series). New York: UBS, 1971. For this and other handbooks for translators see here . Make sure to also consult the Handbook on the Gospel of Mark for parallel or similar verses.

Translation commentary on Luke 3:4

Exegesis:

hōs gegraptai ‘as it is written,’ the usual formula for the introduction of a quotation from the Old Testament. The subsequent quotation, here related to what precedes by the connective hōs ‘as,’ serves to qualify John’s ministry in a general way as the announcing of the promised salvation and has no direct bearing upon the baptism he proclaims.

en biblō logōn Ēsaiou tou prophētou ‘in the book of sayings of Isaiah the prophet.’

biblos (also 20.24) ‘book,’ in both places followed by a genitive which indicates the content of the book. As the synonymous biblion it is to be thought of as a scroll (cf. Plummer on 4.20).

phōnē boōntos ‘(the) voice of one shouting,’ the genitive boōntos makes phōnē, which is without article, definite. The phrase serves to draw the attention strongly to what follows, cf. Phillips‘ “Hark! Someone is shouting”.

boaō ‘to shout,’ ‘to cry out,’ here of solemn proclamation.

en tē erēmō ‘in the desert,’ goes with boōntos, not with what follows, as in the Hebrew text of Is. 40.3.

hetoimasate tēn hodon kuriou ‘prepare the road of the Lord.’ The underlying picture is that of preparations for an approaching visit of a king (cf. Moulton-Milligan 258): the road over which the Lord shall come must be made ready. The plural shows that the order is directed to a group but this group is not subsequently identified. The picture is that of an existing road which must be made ready.

eutheias poieite tas tribous autou ‘make his paths straight.’ The reference is to the elimination of curves, rather than to making the road smooth, as shown by the use of euthus ‘straight’ elsewhere and by the fact that in v. 5 the same word eutheias is used in contrast with skolios ‘bent,’ ‘curved,’ and distinguished from leios ‘smooth.’

eutheia (†, from masc, euthus) ‘straight.’ In v. 5 it is used as a substantive with hodon ‘way’ understood, and meaning ‘straight way.’

tribos ‘a beaten track,’ ‘path.’

Translation:

This verse, in the Greek subordinated to v. 3, may better become a new sentence, e.g. ‘This happened just as it was written in…’ (Marathi), ‘This is according to what…’ (cf. Manobo). A more radical shift of order is required in Telugu, which first quotes the prophecy, and concludes this quotation with the statement that these occurrences were predicted by Isaiah.

As it is written in … For this formula to introduce quotations from the Old Testament see above on 2.23. The pronoun it refers to the details of John’s ministry as described in v. 3, cf. “all in accordance with” (The Four Gospels – a New Translation); if necessary, one may shift to a personal reference, e.g. ‘About him it has been written in…,’ or, ‘He was like the man mentioned in….’

The book of the words of Isaiah the prophet, i.e. the book containing the words of the prophet Isaiah, or, the book recording what the prophet Isaiah has said. Idiom may necessitate some adjustments, e.g. ‘the words recorded in the book (of prophecies) of the prophet Is.’ (Chinese Union Version) or the ‘words of the prophet Is., (as) recorded/contained in his book.’ If idiom, style, or decodability require a simpler wording, the rendering may be modelled on the synonymous phrase “the book of the prophet Is.” (4.17) as done in Marathi, Balinese, or it may become, ‘in the (book of the) prophecies of (Prophet) Is.’ (cf. Malay and Bahasa Indonesia RC). Still further simplification will be necessary where passive constructions and subordination have to be avoided; then the whole clause “it is written … Isaiah” may be rendered, “as the prophet Is. had written in his book” (Good News Translation). For book see also on 4.17.

The voice of one crying in the wilderness. One (or, a person) crying has been rendered by the more specific ‘a proclaimer’ (Marathi, which also changes the phrase in a full sentence by adding a verb, ‘happened’). In Manobo culture ‘crying/shouting’ implies anger and accordingly has to be avoided. In such a case one may shift to ‘the voice of a person was widely heard.’

For prepare the way of the Lord, make his paths straight. — Prepare the way of. One of the renderings possible in Sranan Tongo is ‘clear the overgrown tracks for (lit. wake up the lines for).’ Way and paths, or ‘road(s)’ and ‘little roads,’ ‘path(s)’ and ‘by-paths/side-alleys’; or, not to overtranslate the difference, ‘passage (or, place to walk)’ and ‘ways/paths,’ or a noun and a pronominal reference, e.g. ‘prepare the way…, and make it straight.’

Lord, see above on 1.6, sub (c).

Quoted with permission from Reiling, J. and Swellengrebel, J.L. A Handbook on the Gospel of Luke. (UBS Handbook Series). New York: UBS, 1971. For this and other handbooks for translators see here . Make sure to also consult the Handbook on the Gospel of Mark for parallel or similar verses.

Translation commentary on Luke 3:15 – 3:16

Exegesis:

Main clause to the two absolute genitives of v. 15 (prosdokōntos tou laou ‘as people were in expectation,’ and dialogizomenōn pantōn ‘as all were wondering’) is the first clause of v. 16, apekrinato … Iōannēs, ‘John answered.’ The relationship of the two absolute genitives to one another depends on the interpretation of the first one, see next note.

(V. 15) prosdokōntos de tou laou ‘as people were in expectation.’ de, which has not been translated, marks the beginning of a new development. The participle prosdokōntos which has no object, is best understood in an absolute sense as e.g. in Revised Standard Version. People were “in a great state of expectation” (Phillips), because of John’s message. The clause describes the result of John’s preaching, cf. An American Translation, “as all this aroused people’s expectations”. Then laos does not refer to the people of Israel in general but to the people that came out to listen to John. For prosdokaō cf. on 1.21.

dialogizomenōn pantōn ‘as all were wondering,’ describes a further and more specific result of John’s preaching; pantes refers to the same people as laos in the preceding clause. For dialogizomai cf. on 1.29.

en tais kardiais autōn ‘in their hearts,’ or, “in their minds” (Translator’s New Testament), or, “inwardly” (Phillips).

mēpote autos eiē ho Christos ‘whether perhaps he was the Messiah.’ autos is unemphatic ‘he,’ referring back to John’s name in the preceding clause. The optative eiē has no special function. Instead of ‘the Messiah’ Revised Standard Version and several other translations have “the Christ”, a transliteration of the Greek rendering of the Hebrew word. This must be regarded as a second best rendering.

(V. 16) apekrinato legōn pasin ho Iōannēs ‘John answered saying to all,’ cf. on 1.60.

egō men hudati baptizō humas ‘As to me, I am baptising you with water.’ egō is emphatic and men suggests that a contrast is to follow. hudati ‘with water,’ instrumental dative. The present tense baptizō is habitual, ‘I practise water-baptism.’

erchetai de ho ischuroteros mou ‘but the one who is mightier than I is coming.’ de corresponds to men in the preceding clause but the clause which corresponds materially with it (‘he will baptise you with the Holy Spirit and with fire’) does not come until its subject, i.e. the mightier one, is properly identified in his relationship to John. The clause introduces the mightier one as someone who is known, though no previous reference has occurred.

ischuros ‘strong,’ ‘mighty.’

hou … autou ‘whose … of him.’ The relative pronoun at the beginning of the clause and the personal pronoun at the end both go with ton himanta tōn hupodēmatōn ‘the thong of the sandals’ and are therefore to be rendered only once. This is probably a semitism but also not unknown in Greek.

hikanos of things ‘adequate,’ ‘considerable,’ of persons ‘fit,’ ‘competent,’ here with the connotation ‘worthy for something,’ and followed by a complementing infinitive.

lusai ton himanta tōn hupodēmatōn ‘to untie the thong of the sandals.’ This was considered to be the task of a slave.

luō ‘to loose,’ ‘to untie,’ ‘to set free.’

himas ‘thong,’ or ‘strap’ on sandals.

hupodēma ‘sandal,’ “a leather sole that is fastened to the foot by means of straps”.

autos humas baptisei en pneumati hagiō ‘he will baptise you with Holy Spirit.’ autos ‘he’ is emphatic and contrasts with egō at the beginning of the verse. humas ‘you’ does, of course, not imply that this baptism will be limited to those who have previously received John’s baptism with water, just as humas in the first clause of this verse does not mean that John only baptised those to whom he talked at the moment.

en pneumati hagiō ‘with,’ rather than ‘in the Holy Spirit.’ The phrase ‘to baptise with the Holy Spirit,’ occurs only in connection with, and contrast to, John’s baptism with water (Mt. 3.11; Mk. 1.8; Lk. 3.16; Jn. 1.33; Acts 1.5; 11.16) and not as an independent expression. It is therefore best understood as an analogy to the baptism with water and to be interpreted along the same lines as that phrase.

kai puri ‘and with fire.’ This addition also in Matthew but not in Mark. There are two interpretations: (1) the fire is the fire of judgment (Klostermann, Zahn) because of the mentioning of the fire in vv. 9 and 17 both in a picture that refers to the coming judgment; (2) the fire is the fire of purification (Plummer, Lagrange). Interpretation (1) is preferable. This implies a disjunctive relationship between pneuma hagion and pur.

Translation:

It is often better not to render v. 15 as a subordinate clause, but as one separate sentence, formed by two co-ordinated clauses with or without connective, or as two such sentences.

The people, here virtually the same as ‘the crowd.’

Were in expectation, or, if the expression requires an object, ‘were expecting something,’ ‘were believing that things of importance would come to pass’ (Kituba).

All men, or, “they … all” (An American Translation), ‘everyone (amongst them),’ referring to the subject of the first clause, cf. also, ‘the multitudes,’ partly repeating ‘the multitude of people (i.e. the crowds)’ (Lü Zhenzhong).

Questioned in their hearts, or, ‘inquired in their minds’ (Dravidian languages), ‘were asking-themselves in heart of them’ (Kituba), the qualifying word or phrase being required to show that no discussion with others is meant; or again, ‘wondered (lit. guessed and doubted)’ (Chinese Union Version), ‘were-thinking’ (Marathi, Manobo), without such a qualification.

Concerning John, whether perhaps he were the Christ may have to be restructured, e.g. .’.. whether perhaps J. were the Messiah,’ or, if the verb is to be followed by direct discourse, “Is John (or, this man, or, he) perhaps the Messiah?”, “What? Might he be Christ?” (Marathi).

(V. 16) Answered. Revised Standard Version‘s rendering of Gr. apokrinomai by a form of ‘to answer’ here (and in 5.22, 31; 7.40a; 8.50; 9.49; 11.45; 13.15) is rather unidiomatic because it does not introduce a person’s reaction upon a request or statement that has been addressed to him. As a rule it is preferable in these cases to shift to another verb, e.g. ‘to speak up,’ ‘to start speaking,’ ‘to address’; or ‘to interpose’; or a combination of ‘to say/ speak to’ with such expressions as ‘on his part,’ ‘to this,’ ‘again,’ ‘then,’ ‘thereupon,’ ‘but,’ ‘however,’ as required by the context; hence here e.g. ‘But John said to them.’ Such renderings have been used by Revised Standard Version itself for similar occurrences of apokrinomai (e.g. 1.60, cf. also 13.14; 17.17, 37; 22.51), but some other translations have used ‘to answer/reply’ for nearly all occurrences even though decidedly unidiomatic in the language concerned. Their example is not to be followed.

I, or more emphatically, ‘as for me (lit. to me), I’ (Kituba, similarly Kannada), ‘I indeed’ (Marathi).

He who is mightier, etc. is to be applied to the Messiah, although his name is not explicitly mentioned; hence in the references to his person and acts in vv. 16f the use of honorifics may be required in languages like Balinese and Javanese. — Comparative forms of adjectives may not be available in the receptor language. Then it is usually possible to circumscribe the comparison by ‘he surpasses me (or, he is ahead) in might/power,’ or to use a positive-negative contrast, ‘he is (really) mighty, I am not mighty.’ For mighty, or, ‘powerful,’ cf. on “power” in 1.35.

The function of the clause the thong of whose sandals I am not worthy to untie is to give the measure of the difference in might between John and Jesus; hence, “I am not good enough even to untie his sandals” (Good News Translation), ‘mightier than I so that (or, so much mightier than I that) I am unworthy to untie-for-him….’ — Thong, or, ‘tie,’ ‘straps’; in some cases not rendered by a separate term but implied in the verb for ‘untie.’ Chuukese has to use a descriptive phrase, ‘covering-of his-foot.’ — I am not worthy to, i.e. I have not sufficient worth/value/excellence to. In Trukese, Pohnpeian, and some Indonesian languages one says, ‘it is not fitting that I ….’

With the Holy Spirit and with fire. The rendering of this phrase should be modelled on that of ‘with water,’ where necessary marking a shift from metaphor to simile by adding a clue like, ‘as it were.’ The disjunctive relationship between the two nouns may be suggested by using ‘or’ instead of ‘and’ (Kituba), or expressed more explicitly by saying, ‘some of you with the Holy Spirit, others with fire,’ cf. ‘some of you he will baptise with the H. Sp. and the rest he will baptise with fire’ (Manobo).

Quoted with permission from Reiling, J. and Swellengrebel, J.L. A Handbook on the Gospel of Luke. (UBS Handbook Series). New York: UBS, 1971. For this and other handbooks for translators see here . Make sure to also consult the Handbook on the Gospel of Mark for parallel or similar verses.

Translation commentary on Luke 3:18

Exegesis:

men oun indicates that the clause it introduces serves to summarize and bring to a close what has been described in the preceding verses, in order to form a transition to what follows, since it is a combination of the particle oun, which is retrospective, with men, which is prospective, i.e. preparing the way for a new subject to be introduced by subsequent de .

polla … kai hetera ‘many other things,’ accusative of content with parakalōn. kai is redundant in English.

heteros ‘other,’ or ‘different,’ here best understood in the former sense.

parakalōn ‘exhorting.’ The semantic problem involved here is the relationship between parakalōn and euēggelizeto ‘he preached the good news.’ The exhortations are either (1) part of John’s preaching, or (2) identical with it, or (3) different from it, preferably (1).

parakaleō ‘to exhort,’ ‘to entreat,’ ‘to comfort.’

euēggelizeto ton laon ‘he preached the good news to the people,’ cf. on 1.19. The content of the preaching is to be supplied from the context, cf. preceding note.

Translation:

Many other exhortations, or in a verbal clause, ‘he was exhorting in many other ways’ (cf. Kituba), ‘John taught the people many more things’ (Manobo), ‘J. still used many other words to exhort the people’ (Chinese Union Version). As shown in these examples the verb often requires an explicit reference to those who were exhorted, i.e. ‘the people,’ which may entail the shift to a pronominal reference with the next verb. — Other is referring here to non-specified examples of the same category; it may have to be rendered by ‘more such,’ ‘similar,’ ‘of the same kind.’ Exhortations. The verb ‘to exhort’ has been rendered ‘to point-out’ (Tae’), ‘to teach’ (Javanese, Manobo), ‘to remind-of’ (Batak Toba), ‘to stir’ (Nyakyusa), ‘to work upon the heart’ (Sranan Tongo).

He. The pronominal reference will often have to be specified, unless this has already been done in what precedes.

To preach the good news. This verbal phrase renders a Greek verb that is derived from the noun eu-aggelion ‘good news,’ ‘gospel’ (which noun, however, does not occur Luke’s Gospel); it refers to the news or message about man’s salvation by God through Jesus the Messiah and about the kingdom he is establishing, the messenger being John the Baptist (here), the Messiah (4.18), Jesus (4.43; 7.22; 8.1; 20.1), the twelve disciples (9.6), Jesus and/or the disciples (implied agents of the passive form in 16.16). In a less specific sense the verb is used in 1.19 and 2.10, where an angel is the messenger. To preach, or, ‘to tell/make-known/announce,’ ‘to cause-to-be-heard’ (Hindi). Good news.

The people, here referring to Israel, the people of God, as in 2.10; therefore, the rendering may have to differ from that in v. 15.

Quoted with permission from Reiling, J. and Swellengrebel, J.L. A Handbook on the Gospel of Luke. (UBS Handbook Series). New York: UBS, 1971. For this and other handbooks for translators see here . Make sure to also consult the Handbook on the Gospel of Mark for parallel or similar verses.