Translation commentary on Mark 9:45

Text:

After geennan ‘hell’ Textus Receptus adds eis to pur to asbeston ‘into the unquenchable fire,’ which is omitted by all modern editions of the Greek text.

Exegesis:

Most of the words in this verse have already been dealt with in v. 43.

duo podas ‘two feet,’ ‘both feet.’

chōlon (only here in Mark) ‘lame,’ ‘crippled.’

blēthēnai ‘to be cast,’ ‘to be thrown.’

Translation:

Many languages do not distinguish ‘foot’ from ‘leg,’ in speaking of a person’s lower limbs. Either term is quite acceptable, for the emphasis here is upon one’s ability to walk, not the possession of a particular part of the anatomy. The important thing is that the resulting loss would make one lame, translatable in some instances as ‘having just one foot’ or ‘having just one leg.’

Quoted with permission from Bratcher, Robert G. and Nida, Eugene A. A Handbook on the Gospel of Mark. (UBS Handbook Series). New York: UBS, 1961. For this and other handbooks for translators see here .

Translation commentary on Mark 10:28

Exegesis:

ērxato legein ‘he began to say.’ Revised Standard Version is probably justified in giving full force to archomai ‘begin’ in this verse, rather than regarding it as virtually meaningless auxiliary (cf. 1.45), as does Translator’s New Testament.

idou hēmeis ‘behold we’: the pronoun ‘we’ is probably emphatic, in contrast with the rich man who was not willing to leave anything (cf. Gould).

For aphiēmi ‘leave’ cf. 2.5, and akoloutheō ‘follow’ cf. 1.18. Gould and Taylor call attention to the use of the aorist aphēkamen ‘we left,’ describing the decisive act of renunciation, and the perfect ēkolouthēkamen ‘we have followed,’ describing the permanent role of discipleship.

Translation:

Lo in some languages is equivalent to ‘look here’ or ‘mind you.’ It is an emphatic element, designated to call special attention to what is said. It does not imply literal ‘looking.’

Left everything may require expansion to ‘left all that we had,’ in order for it to be understood in the sense of renunciation rather than merely of getting up and departing, or of inadvertently leaving things behind.

For follow see 1.17.

Quoted with permission from Bratcher, Robert G. and Nida, Eugene A. A Handbook on the Gospel of Mark. (UBS Handbook Series). New York: UBS, 1961. For this and other handbooks for translators see here .

Translation commentary on Mark 11:9

Exegesis:

hoi proagontes kai hoi akolouthountes ‘those going before and those following,’ ‘those who were in front and those who were behind (Jesus).’

proagō (cf. 6.45) ‘go before,’ ‘precede,’ ‘lead.’

akoloutheō (cf. 1.18) ‘follow’: here in a physical sense.

ōsanna eulogēmenos ho erchomenos en onomati kuriou ‘Hosanna! Blessed the one coming in the name of the Lord!’: the words are from Ps. 118.25-26.

ōsanna (11.10) represents the Aramaic hoshaʿ-naʾ, the Hebrew of Ps. 118.25 being hoshiʿah-naʾ ‘save Thou now!,’ a petition addressed to God, which the Septuagint translates sōson dē. As used in the passage here, it may be taken in two ways: (1) in its literal O.T. meaning, ‘save (us)!’ as a prayer addressed to God (cf. Gould, ‘be propitious!’); (2) as a shout of welcome and praise, ‘Hail!,’ ‘Welcome!’ in which the original meaning of the phrase is forgotten. Goodspeed, in support of this interpretation, instances modern usage of ‘God save the King!,’ or Vive le roi! It appears probable that this is the correct interpretation, particularly in light of the parallel in Matthew 21.9 ‘Hosanna to the Son of David!’ which Dalman takes to mean, “Glory (hail) to the Son of David!.”

Where modern translations (most English translations; cf. also Le Nouveau Testament. Version Synodale, Zürcher Bibel, O Novo Testamento de Nosso Senhor Jesus Cristo. Revisdo Autorizada) have simply transliterated the word, the meaning is, without a doubt, ‘Hail!,’ ‘Welcome!’ (Goodspeed has ‘God bless him!,’ and Williams, ‘Welcome Him!’).

eulogēmenos (cf. 6.41) ‘blessed’: either (1) ‘blessed is’ (American Standard Version, Revised Standard Version. Translator’s New Testament, Manson, Gould, O Novo Testamento de Nosso Senhor Jesus Cristo. Revisdo Autorizada), or (2) ‘blessed be’ (most translations and commentators). The latter is probably to be preferred: ‘may God bless him who comes….’

ho erchomenos (as an independent participle only here in Mark; cf. hoi erchomenoi 6.31) ‘he who comes’: in the historical context of the Marcan narrative the phrase applies to Jesus, with the meaning ‘he who is coming’ (not, as in v. 10, with a future connotation).

en onomati kuriou ‘in the name of the Lord’: i.e. as his representative, with his authority (cf. Gould), as vicegerent of Yahweh. For the phrase ‘in the name of’ cf. 9.38.

Translation:

Cried out has the sense of ‘shouted.’

Hosanna may be transliterated, as in the case of most translations, or translated as a shout of ‘welcome’ or an expression of intense joy at the arrival of such a person. It is almost equivalent to English ‘Hurrah!,’ but with religious connotations which are absent from the English term. In Mitla Zapotec one may say ‘great thanks’ (as an exclamation of thanksgiving) and in San Mateo del Mar Huave the closest parallel is ‘it is very wonderful now.’

For a discussion of problems related to bless see 6.41, but note that in this context the meaning must be applied to a person, not to a thing. Moreover, the syntactic problem is difficult because of either (1) a third person imperative ‘blessed be…’ or (2) a third person declarative ‘he is blessed….’ There is actually no verb in the Greek and either the imperative or declarative may be understood. In the case of a straight declarative the rendering is often much easier, e.g. ‘he is blessed’ (with the addition of ‘by God,’ in languages which may require the agent in such passive expressions) or ‘God has blessed him.’ Another possibility of a direct active form is ‘The Lord has blessed him who comes in his name.’

In this particular context the word blessed provides a number of problems of equivalence. In Inupiaqthe closest equivalent is ‘let him be praised’; the same is true of Central Mazahua and Cashibo-Cacataibo. In Tzeltal the most satisfactory form seems to be ‘very great is his goodness,’ a statement of fact – but one which by its form indicates an intense degree of acclamation and praise. In Kituba one may say ‘joy is with him who…,’ an indication of his blessed state rather than an expression of praise on the part of the worshiper.

Quoted with permission from Bratcher, Robert G. and Nida, Eugene A. A Handbook on the Gospel of Mark. (UBS Handbook Series). New York: UBS, 1961. For this and other handbooks for translators see here .

Translation commentary on Mark 12:8

Exegesis:

exebalon auton exō tou ampelōnos ‘they threw him out of the vineyard’: the words indicate that they did not bury the body but threw it out unburied, a final indignity. (If the cultural context of the language requires it, ‘cast him out’ may be read ‘cast the body out’ with no violence being done the Greek.)

Translation:

Took him is equivalent to ‘grabbed him.’

Cast him out may require a change to ‘threw his corpse out,’ for the use of the pronoun ‘him’ might imply that he was not actually dead.

Quoted with permission from Bratcher, Robert G. and Nida, Eugene A. A Handbook on the Gospel of Mark. (UBS Handbook Series). New York: UBS, 1961. For this and other handbooks for translators see here .

Translation commentary on Mark 12:41

Exegesis:

Some words in this verse have already been dealt with: for kathizō ‘sit’ cf. 9.35; katenanti ‘opposite,’ ‘in front of’ cf. 11.2; chalkos ‘copper,’ ‘money’ cf. 6.8; plousios ‘rich’ cf. 10.25.

gazophulakeion (12.43) ‘treasury’: presumably one of the thirteen contribution boxes, or receptacles, in the form of trumpets, with broad bases and narrow openings at the top, which were placed under the colonnade in the Court of the Women. It may be that the particular area, in which the thirteen boxes were placed, was known popularly as the ‘treasury.’

etheōrei pōs ‘he was watching how’: for similar constructions cf. 5.16 diēgēsanto … pōs ‘they explained … how’; 11.18; 14.1 ezētoun pōs ‘they were seeking how’; 14.11 ezētei pōs ‘he was seeking how.’

eballon polla ‘they were putting in much (money)’: Burton calls attention to the imperfect here, describing the repeated acts, and the aorist ebalon ‘they put’ in v. 44, a summary statement of the incident.

Translation:

The treasury is often translatable as ‘the place where the money was received (or ‘kept’),’ or ‘the place where the people put in the money.’

Watched the multitude putting … must in some languages be broken up into two clauses, e.g. ‘watched while the crowd of people put their money…,’ or ‘watched the many people; they were putting money….’

Rich people may often be rendered as ‘those who possess much money’ and in this context, therefore, one may translate as ‘those who had much money put in a lot of money.’

Quoted with permission from Bratcher, Robert G. and Nida, Eugene A. A Handbook on the Gospel of Mark. (UBS Handbook Series). New York: UBS, 1961. For this and other handbooks for translators see here .

Translation commentary on Mark 13:29

Exegesis:

hotan idēte tauta ginomena ‘when you see things happening’: in the context ‘these things’ refers primarily to the events described in vv. 24-27, but would include also those described in vv. 14-23.

ginōskete ‘you are to know’: probably here an imperative form (in v. 28 the identical form is clearly indicative).

eggus estin ‘it is near’: the majority of English translations have ‘he is near,’ with obvious reference to ‘the Son of man’ in v. 26 (Le Nouveau Testament. Version Synodale actually translates le Fils de l’homme est proche). Others, for example Lagrange, regard the saying as “mysterious and veiled,” in the style of v. 14, and they believe that one should not attempt to supply any definite subject, e.g. que c’est proche (cf. O Novo Testamento de Nosso Senhor Jesus Cristo. Revisdo Autorizada que est próximo; Luther has es ‘it’; Translator’s New Testament ‘it is near’).

epi thurais ‘at the door’: this figure of speech denotes immediate nearness.

Translation:

Though in English the present tense forms see and know are applicable to a future condition, in many languages this type of condition must have special tense forms applicable to such a future event, ‘when you will see…, then you will know….’ This future usage also requires the use of the future in the dependent clause, e.g. ‘that he will be near.’

At the very gates may be quite meaningless in some languages, for it has no possible relationship to a temporal contract. In fact, its use may completely distort the meaning of the passage in such a way as to cause people to think of the Son of man as standing at the gate of the corral or by the roadside. On the other hand, if the subject of ‘is near’ refers to a general event, then the meaning is even more difficult, for ‘happenings’ cannot be spoken of as being ‘at the very gates,’ unless one is to assume that all these apocalyptic happenings are to take place at the gates. Accordingly, in languages in which the metaphor ‘at the very gates’ is going to be inevitably misunderstood, one may employ ‘is come very near indeed’ (Tabasco Chontal).

Quoted with permission from Bratcher, Robert G. and Nida, Eugene A. A Handbook on the Gospel of Mark. (UBS Handbook Series). New York: UBS, 1961. For this and other handbooks for translators see here .

Translation commentary on Mark 14:24

Text:

After mou ‘my’ Textus Receptus adds to ‘the,’ which is omitted by all modern editions of the Greek text.

Before diathēkēs ‘covenant’ Textus Receptus adds kainēs ‘new,’ which is omitted by all modern editions of the Greek text.

Exegesis:

to haima mou tēs diathēkēs ‘my blood of the covenant’: the phrase is perhaps consciously modelled after Ex. 24.8 “Behold the blood of the covenant (Septuagint to haima tēs diathēkēs) which the Lord has made with you.” “The blood of the covenant” is the blood which ratifies, or seals, the covenant God made with his people.

diathēkē (only here in Mark) ‘will,’ ‘testament,’ ‘compact,’ ‘covenant’: it is agreed that the meaning of the word in New Testament is to be derived from the use and meaning of berith in the O.T., with reference to the ‘covenant’ which God made with the people of Israel. Rather than translate the Hebrew word by sunthēkē, the normal Greek word for ‘agreement,’ ‘covenant,’ the Septuagint uses diathēkē, perhaps with the purpose of avoiding the implication in sunthēkē of an agreement reached by a settlement between two parties who stand as equals; for in the O.T. God’s berith with his people is, so to speak, drawn up, proposed and executed by God alone.

to ekchunnomenon (only here in Mark) ‘the (blood) poured out’: several commentators translate the present participle ‘(the blood) which is now being poured out,’ as though in the mind of Jesus his blood were already being shed. It is better, however, to take the participle as having a future force, in accordance with Aramaic usage, ‘(the blood) which will be poured out’ (cf. The Modern Speech New Testament, Goodspeed).

huper pollōn ‘in behalf of many,’ ‘for many’ (cf. the discussion on anti pollōn in 10.45).

Translation:

There are a number of expressions used to signify covenant, some of which closely resemble the force of the Greek diathēkē, while others are simply general terms for a contract or agreement, e.g. ‘to put mouths equal,’ signifying complete assent on the part of all (Conob); ‘helping promise’ (More); ‘a thing-time-bind,’ that is to say, an arrangement agreed upon for a period of time (Vai); ‘an agreement’ (Loma (Liberia)); ‘agreement which is tied up,’ i.e. secure and binding (Northwestern Dinka); ‘a word which is left’ (Chol); ‘a broken-off word,’ based on the concept of ‘breaking off a word’ and leaving it with the person with whom an agreement has been reached (Huastec); ‘a death command,’ a special term for testament (Tetelcingo Nahuatl); ‘a promised word’ (Piro); ‘a word between’ (Eastern Krahn); and ‘promise that brings together’ (Yaka).

Perhaps a more difficult problem than finding a term for covenant is relating this expression to the preceding, namely, ‘blood,’ for the of in English cannot be reproduced by any possessive construction, as some translators have tried to do. The covenant does not possess the blood; it is only that the covenant is established or ratified by means of the blood. This relationship must be made explicit in some languages, e.g. ‘blood which establishes the promise…’ (Yaka), ‘blood which arranges…’ (Central Pame), ‘blood that makes the word between us strong’ (Eastern Krahn), and ‘blood which confirms the covenant’ (Mitla Zapotec). In Northern Grebo the entire construction is recast as ‘agreement made by shedding my blood.’

Poured out must be carefully translated to make sure that this does not refer to the pouring of blood from a glass or other type of receptacle. This is not a reference to the pouring out of animal’s blood, but the shedding of Jesus’ own blood, translated in some languages as ‘running out,’ ‘coming out,’ and ‘gushing out.’

Quoted with permission from Bratcher, Robert G. and Nida, Eugene A. A Handbook on the Gospel of Mark. (UBS Handbook Series). New York: UBS, 1961. For this and other handbooks for translators see here .

Translation commentary on Mark 14:56

Exegesis:

epseudomarturoun (cf. 10.19) ‘they gave false testimony,’ ‘they bore false witness.’

isai (14.59) ‘equal,’ ‘alike’: the adjective is in the feminine nominative plural form, agreeing with hai marturiai ‘the testimonies.’ In the context the adjective means ‘consistent,’ ‘coherent’: the accusations brought against Jesus by the witnesses were not consistent one with the other.

Translation:

Bore false witness against may be rendered as ‘spoke against him but they were lying’ or ‘they told lies about him’ (Highland Puebla Nahuatl).

Their witness did not agree might be quite simply translated as ‘they did not say the same thing’ (Huehuetla Tepehua) or idiomatically as ‘they did not mate their words’ (Tzeltal).

Quoted with permission from Bratcher, Robert G. and Nida, Eugene A. A Handbook on the Gospel of Mark. (UBS Handbook Series). New York: UBS, 1961. For this and other handbooks for translators see here .