Translation commentary on Mark 13:25

Text:

Instead of ek tou ouranou ‘from heaven’ of all modern editions of the Greek text, Textus Receptus has tou ouranou ‘of heaven.’

Exegesis:

hoi asteres (only here in Mark) ‘the stars.’

esontai … piptontes ‘shall be falling’: the verbal phrase is perhaps linear, denoting a succession of stars falling from heaven.

piptō (cf. 4.4) ‘fall.’

hai dunameis hai en tois ouranois ‘the powers which are in the heavens’: in accordance with Hebrew parallelism, these heavenly ‘powers’ may be simply the stars themselves, this second clause being synonymous with the first (as is probably the case in Isa. 34.4, whose language is reflected in this passage in Mark); or these ‘powers’ might be the evil spirits which, in Jewish thought, were supposed to rule the heavenly bodies. For the attributive phrase hai en tois ouranois ‘the ones in the heavens’ cf. a similar instance in 11.25.

saleuthēsontai (only here in Mark) ‘they shall be shaken’: i.e. they will be driven out of their normal course.

Translation:

It must be noted that the differences of exegesis (and exposition) of this passage (verses 24-25) may be quite pronounced, for though some persons believe that this description refers to extraordinary astronomical phenomena, others are certain that this description applies not to celestial bodies but to the collapse of earthly governments, which are often described in apocalyptic literature by these figures of speech. However, regardless of the ultimate exposition of the passage, the translation should preserve the wording as closely as possible, leaving this wider interpretation to commentaries.

Heaven is best translated as ‘sky,’ if the language in question distinguishes between words for ‘sky’ and ‘heaven’ (as the abode of God).

Powers in the heavens is translatable in some languages as the ‘authorities in the sky.’ One must avoid implying that God’s own authority is to be shaken by translating heavens as ‘the abode of God.’ However, ‘authorities’ (or ‘powers’) is not very meaningful even at best, since this type of expression is quite alien to the concepts of most people. In Navajo an alternative expression ‘that which holds things firm in the sky’ has been employed, but this is a phrase which would imply literal rearrangement of heavenly bodies.

Quoted with permission from Bratcher, Robert G. and Nida, Eugene A. A Handbook on the Gospel of Mark. (UBS Handbook Series). New York: UBS, 1961. For this and other handbooks for translators see here .

Translation commentary on Mark 14:20

Text:

Before trublion ‘dish’ Textus Receptus, Tischendorf, Soden, Vogels, Souter, Lagrange, and Merk omit hen ‘one’; it is included, in brackets (with some doubt as to its genuineness, therefore), by Westcott and Hort, Nestle, and Taylor; Kilpatrick includes it without brackets; Revised Standard Version also includes it, translating ‘same.’

Exegesis:

heis tōn dōdeka (cf. v. 10) ‘one of the Twelve.’

ho embaptomenos met’ emou ‘he who dips with me,’ ‘the one dipping with me’: what is said in v. 18 concerning the force of the definite article ho ‘the’ with the participle, and concerning the time involved in the designation, is applicable here as well.

embaptō (only here in Mark) ‘to dip in,’ ‘to plunge in’: here it is used with reference to the bread which was held in the hand and dipped in the bowl containing the designated sauce for the meal.

to hen trublion ‘the one bowl,’ i.e. ‘the same bowl.’

trublion (only here in Mark) ‘dish,’ ‘bowl’: placed in the center of the table, it contained the sauce into which the bread was dipped for eating.

Translation:

The twelve must be modified in two ways in some languages: (1) by the addition of a substantive, e.g. ‘disciples’ or ‘men,’ and (2) by a shift to a second person form, or identification, e.g. ‘one of you twelve disciples.’ Without the addition of ‘you,’ the clause may be interpreted as referring to another twelve persons rather than to those being addressed, since in certain languages it is possible to speak of oneself in the third person.

Dipping does not mean complete submersion of the bread, but only the dipping of it into a sauce.

One of the twelve must in some languages be ‘one of the eleven’ (Chol).

Quoted with permission from Bratcher, Robert G. and Nida, Eugene A. A Handbook on the Gospel of Mark. (UBS Handbook Series). New York: UBS, 1961. For this and other handbooks for translators see here .

Translation commentary on Mark 14:52

Text:

At the end of the verse Textus Receptus, Soden, Vogels, Merk, and Kilpatrick add ap’ autōn ‘from them,’ which is omitted by the majority of modern editions of the Greek text.

Exegesis:

katalipōn (cf. 10.7) ‘leaving,’ ‘leaving behind.’

gumnos ‘naked’: here it is an adjective, modifying the subject of the verb.

ephugen (cf. v. 50) ‘fled,’ ‘ran away.’

Translation:

Left must not be understood in the sense of ‘laying the cloth down’ as some translations imply. In Navajo the rendering is accurate and idiomatic, ‘he ran out of the cloth red,’ in which ‘red’ is a term meaning ‘naked.’

Quoted with permission from Bratcher, Robert G. and Nida, Eugene A. A Handbook on the Gospel of Mark. (UBS Handbook Series). New York: UBS, 1961. For this and other handbooks for translators see here .

Translation commentary on Mark 15:13

Exegesis:

palin ‘again’: the ordinary meaning ‘again’ seems out of place here since this is the first time, according to the narrative that the crowd shouted to Pilate. Black suggests ‘thereupon,’ while Lagrange refers to 2.13 as an example of palin used in a more general sense than ‘again’ with its implication of a repetition of an act done before. Arndt & Gingrich suggest that a previous outburst is implied in v. 11, or else (which seems more probable) that palin here carries the idea of ‘back’ – ‘they shouted back’ – as in 11.3 apostelein palin means ‘to send back’ (cf. Goodspeed).

ekraxan (cf. 3.11) ‘they shouted,’ ‘they cried out.’

staurōson (15.14, 15, 20, 24, 25, 27; 16.6) ‘you must crucify!’

Translation:

Cried out again may be translated as ‘yelled back at him’ or ‘shouted back.’

For a discussion of the form of the cross see 8.34. The verb crucify should in some way be related to execution by means of a cross. It is not enough merely to translate ‘kill him.’ However, the particular way in which Jesus was executed by being put on the cross is differently described in various languages, e.g. ‘fasten him to a spread-back-stick’ (Loma (Liberia)) and ‘nail him on a cross’ (Copainalá Zoque), and ‘nail on the cross wood’ (Mongolian). However, since Pilate would not himself nail Jesus to the cross, it is necessary in some languages to use a causative, e.g. ‘cause him to be nailed on a cross.’

Quoted with permission from Bratcher, Robert G. and Nida, Eugene A. A Handbook on the Gospel of Mark. (UBS Handbook Series). New York: UBS, 1961. For this and other handbooks for translators see here .

Translation commentary on Mark 15:45

Text:

Instead of ptōma ‘corpse’ of the modern editions of the Greek text, Textus Receptus has soma ‘body.’

Exegesis:

gnous (cf. 6.38; 8.17) ‘finding (it) out,’ ‘learning (it).’ Revised Standard Version adds that ‘he was dead’ for clarity: there are no equivalent words in the Greek text.

edōrēsato (only here in Mark) ‘he bestowed,’ ‘he presented,’ ‘he gave.’

to ptōma (cf. 6.29) ‘the corpse,’ ‘the (dead) body.’

Translation:

Learned from the centurion that … may require adjustment to direct discourse, e.g. ‘when the centurion had told him, Jesus is dead.’

Granted must not be translated in such a way as to imply that Pilate literally handed over to Joseph the body of Jesus. A more meaningful rendering is often ‘told him that he could take’ or ‘allowed him to have.’

Quoted with permission from Bratcher, Robert G. and Nida, Eugene A. A Handbook on the Gospel of Mark. (UBS Handbook Series). New York: UBS, 1961. For this and other handbooks for translators see here .

Translation commentary on Mark 1:4

Text:

Instead of egeneto Iōannēs ho baptizōn en tē erēmō kērussōn ‘John the Baptizer appeared in the wilderness preaching’ of the majority of editions of the Greek text, Textus Receptus and Soden have egeneto Iōannēs baptizōn en tē erēmō kai kērussōn ‘John was baptizing in the wilderness and preaching.’

Punctuation:

This verse stands as the conclusion of v. 1: ‘As it is written … John the Baptizer appeared….’ (cf. v. 1)

Exegesis:

ho baptizōn (6.14, 24) ‘the one baptizing’: this is a title, ‘the Baptizer,’ equal in meaning to ho baptistēs ‘the Baptist’ in 6.25; 8.28 (and in Matthew and Luke). For a discussion of the verb baptizō ‘baptize’ see v. 5.

egeneto ‘appeared’: the verb ginomai has several shades of meaning, including that of ‘come,’ ‘go,’ ‘appear’ (cf. Jn. 1.6, 2 Pet. 2.1, 1 Jn. 2.18). The phrase egeneto en tē erēmō could conceivably mean ‘was in the wilderness’ or ‘came into the wilderness’ (for this use of en see 1.16, en tē thalassē ‘into the sea’) In keeping with the O.T. passages being quoted, however, John, as a voice, appears, rather than comes, for nothing is said about his previous history (cf. Taylor). egeneto could be taken with kērussōn ‘came … preaching.’ It is more probable, however, that egeneto functions as the principal verb, while kērussōn is an independent participle which modifies ‘John.’

erēmos ‘wilderness’ (cf. v. 3): here refers to the wild uncultivated country west of the Dead Sea (cf. Taylor)

kērussōn (1.7, 14, 38, 39, 45; 3.14; 5.20; 6.12; 7.36; 13.10; 14.9; 16.15, 20) ‘announcing,’ ‘proclaiming.’ The word has an official, authoritative sense: it is not simply a shouting, as such, but the public announcement or proclamation by an authorized herald (kērux) who is, in this case, God’s own messenger.

baptisma metanoias eis aphesin hamartiōn ‘a baptism of repentance for remission of sins’: the whole phrase is the direct object of the participle kērussōn ‘preaching,’ and as such describes the content of John’s proclamation.

baptisma metanoias (cf. Lk. 3.3, Acts 13.24, 19.4 for the same phrase) ‘a baptism of repentance.’ The genitive metanoias ‘of repentance’ qualifies and defines the baptism John proclaims: the rite was characterized by repentance. Grant: “a Semitism, meaning ‘a baptism which symbolized or expressed repentance.’”

baptisma (10.38, 39; 11.30) ‘baptism’: a noun with the ending -ma ordinarily expresses the result of the action contained in the verb. In the N.T., however, baptisma is the rite itself, not the result of the practice of the rite (see v. 5 for baptizō).

metanoia (here only in Mark) ‘change of mind,’ ‘repentance.’ The word indicates more than an intellectual process: it involves a deliberate ‘turning’ (cf. O.T. shuv, and see Taylor, 167, on 1.15), involving heart and will, as well as mind. Moulton & Milligan: “a coming to one’s sense, resulting in a change of conduct.” The implication is that of turning from (apo Acts 8.22, Heb. 6.1) sin and to (eis Acts 20.21, epi Acts 26.20) God. The rite John proclaimed was qualified by metanoia ‘repentance’: as the next verse shows, the performance of the rite, by John, included the open confession of sin, by the candidate, as an expression of his repentance. Cf. the following translations: “a baptism based on repentance” (Manson); auf Grund der Busse (Zürcher Bibel).

eis aphesin hamartiōn ‘for (leading to, pointing toward) remission of sins.’

eis ‘to,’ ‘into’ may indicate, in this context, either purpose or result. Moule prefers the former: “with a view to.” What is the exact shade or significance of eis in this passage is determined not by grammar alone, but by the context as well. The English preposition for with its various shades of possible meanings, and its equivalent in other languages, is the best translation (King James Version, Revised Standard Version, The Modern Speech New Testament, Moffatt; Manson “leading to”; Le Nouveau Testament. Version Synodale pour; Zürcher Bibel zu; O Novo Testamento de Nosso Senhor Jesus Cristo. Revisdo Autorizada para).

aphesis (3.29) ‘remission,’ ‘passing over,’ ‘forgiveness’ (from aphiēmi ‘send away,’ ‘drive out’). The word corresponds to the O.T. nasaʾ ‘lift up,’ ‘carry away.’ The Biblical meaning of the word is that of the act of God whereby sin, as a debt, is canceled, or, as a transgression of the Law, is pardoned or remitted (Moulton & Milligan give examples from the papyri of this use of the word in connection with remission from debt or punishment). N. H. Smith connects the word with the rites of the Hebrew sacrificial system, “by which the taking away of sins involved in the forgiveness which follows repentance was symbolically set forth.”

hamartia (1.5; 2.5, 7, 9, 10) ‘sin’: this is the common N.T. word for sin, conceived of, fundamentally, as disobedience to the revealed will of God. The verb from which it is derived, hamartanō means “to miss the mark” (cf. O.T. chataʾ).

On the whole phrase Grant comments: “a baptism of immersion, undertaken at John’s direction and in response to his preaching, preceded by repentance … and followed by the divine forgiveness.”

Translation:

This verse may seem to be simple, but it is probably the most difficult verse in the entire Gospel of Mark, not only because of some of the difficult terms, but because of the unsuspected complication in the syntax.

For a discussion of ‘baptize’ see Mark 1.5, but in this verse there is a problem of relating the participial form of Greek baptizōn to the proper name ‘John.’ If, of course, the language in question has a regular means of designating a person who habitually or professionally does a particular type of work, such a form may be used in this context (such formations occur in a number of Bantu languages).

In order to obtain an adequate equivalent for preaching one needs to discover the way in which so-called “official pronouncements” are made within a particular society, for this is essentially the meaning of the Greek term. It is unfortunate that in English preach has acquired such a specialized meaning that it is understood almost entirely as a religious activity. This was not true of the Greek word kērussō. Accordingly, one should not attempt to import religious connotations (these will come soon enough); what is more important is the emphasis upon the authoritative character of the pronouncement. This means that one will want a term more equivalent to ‘declare,’ ‘announce,’ or ‘proclaim.’ In Tzeltal there is a fascinating kind of compound meaning ‘he explains, they hear’ (the goal of all preachers) and in Copainalá Zoque a preacher is ‘one who speaks-scatters’ (a figure based on the scattering of seed in the process of sowing).

Forgiveness is a concept, which though it exists in all languages, is expressed in quite varied ways. Perhaps the most common figures of speech involved in describing forgiveness are (1) ‘forgetting about’ (Tswa, Barrow Eskimo, Huanuco Quechua), (2) ‘to give back’ based on the idea that sin produces an indebtedness, which only the one who has been sinned against can restore (Navajo), (3) ‘erase,’ ‘wipe out,’ ‘blot out’ (Huichol, Shipibo-Conibo, Eastern Highland Otomi, Uduk), (4) ‘to lose,’ ‘cause to be lost,’ ‘to make lacking’ (Highland Totonac, Huautla Mazatec) and ‘to lose another’s sin out of one’s heart’ (Tzeltal), (5) ‘to be released’ or ‘to be freed’ (Lahu, Burmese), (6) ‘to level off’ (Chanca Quechua), (7) ‘to cast away’ (Yatzachi Zapotec), (8) ‘to pass by’ (Chol) or ‘to make pass’ (Wayuu), (9) ‘to turn one’s back on’ (Kpelle), (10) ‘to cover over’ (Chicahuaxtla Triqui), a figure of speech which is also employed in Hebrew, but which in many languages is not acceptable, because it implies ‘hiding’ or ‘concealment,’ (11) ‘to take away sins’ (Tabasco Chontal, Huichol), and (12) ‘to do away with sins’ (Toraja-Sa’dan, Javanese).

In some instances figures of speech conveying the meaning of forgiveness are highly specialized in form and cultural significance. In both the San Blas Kuna (‘to erase the bad heart’) and in Sierra de Juárez Zapotec (‘to repair the peace of heart’) the emphasis is upon the guilt felt by the sinner rather than upon the sins, certainly a perfectly valid viewpoint. In the Shilluk language forgiveness is expressed as ‘spit is returned to the ground for us by God’ or more idiomatically ‘God spit on the ground in front of us.’ This is an expression arising from the requirement that the plaintiff and the defendant, upon the conclusion of a trial and the termination of punishment or the payment of fines, spit on the ground in front of each other to signify that the case is finished, forgiveness has been accomplished, and the accusations can never come into court again – a very apt analogy to God’s forgiveness.

In Kipsigis forgiveness is expressed as ‘healing the neck,’ for since sin is spoken of as causing a mortal wound in the neck of the offender, so forgiveness is the healing of this wound.

It is generally not too difficult to find a word meaning ‘forgiveness,’ but what may be more of a problem is choosing between two or three alternative forms, which may have slightly different connotations and which may be required in different types of context. For example, in Huichol there are three expressions: (1) ‘to pass over’ (meaning essentially ‘to excuse’), (2) ‘to rub out,’ ‘sweep out,’ ‘wipe off,’ and (3) ‘to take away.’ All of these expressions are useful in particular contexts. On the other hand, one may find that some expressions may be widely used, but not fully adequate, at least in some contexts, as for example in Palau in the use of ‘to throw away,’ for which ‘to erase’ would be in most instances a better substitute. In some languages it is wise to choose the most intensive of any alternative expressions. For example, in Conob one could say ‘to erase,’ but the more adequate equivalent is a rather full, descriptive phrase, ‘to erase and make fall,’ implying that the sin has been made to disappear completely.

The difficulties encountered in discovering an adequate term for sin are not the result of the scarcity of the phenomenon, but the utterly diverse ways in which people regard it. In general the translator’s problems are of five types: (1) classifying words according to the various grades and types of transgressions, (2) distinguishing between words indicating acts and those implying guilt, (3) eliminating terms which apply almost exclusively to certain special sins or which may have ranges of meaning quite different from the Biblical expressions, (4) determining the degree of moral responsibility which is involved in the use of any one word, and (5) discovering a sufficient number of expressions, so that if possible, one may be able to parallel such Biblical distinctions as are implied in such words as sin, transgression, trespass, evil, wickedness, and iniquity (this last problem is beyond the immediate scope of this volume, but needs to be taken into consideration by any translator right from the beginning of his work).

It is quite common for languages to have several words for sins, ranging from terms which designate very mild kinds of ‘mistakes’ to words used almost exclusively of ‘horrible crimes.’ The tendency in such languages is usually to play down the extent of a person’s sins (especially in speaking of one’s own) by using as the most common term one which tends to excuse the offender. As the result such a word may mean little more than ‘error.’ For example, a word which may be said to be equivalent to English sin may actually be restricted in most contexts to the meaning of ‘adultery,’ which in some societies is the one sin which acquires the greatest social significance, but its very frequency may seem to make it more excusable. Such a term is unlikely therefore to imply much guilt. On the other hand, one does not wish to use a term for ‘sin’ which means only ‘guilt,’ even though the implication of guilt should not be missing in the expression chosen. In Ngäbere the transgression and the guilt are rather neatly linked in the phrase ‘that which makes one guilty,’ implying not only a transgression of an established norm (i.e. violation of the law and will of God) but the resultant guilt which inevitably follows.

One of the more serious problems in analyzing the meanings of words for sin is the tendency for terms to be too specific in their significance or to include areas of meaning quite outside the Biblical range. For example, in Huichol it was found that the term xuriki, which at first seemed to be quite acceptable because it included stealing, murder, and adultery, was not correct, for it also meant getting married and harvesting a cornfield. The underlying meaning was ‘destroying the value or character of something,’ and in the latter two instances xuriki referred to destroying the virginity of the bride and ruining the cornfield by gathering the ears of corn. As a result, in Huichol there are now in use two expressions, (1) meaning ‘bad action,’ used to denote the act of sin and (2) describing a ‘bad heart,’ employed to designate the sinner.

Quite frequently one finds that where there are several words for sin, some may be almost totally lacking in the connotation of moral responsibility. That is to say, people speak of sin as happening, but do not always assign a factor of choice or decision to such an act. This is overcome to some extent in Conob by designating sinners as ‘people with bad hearts’ (not just people who do bad things). The fact of decision is expressed in Loma (Liberia) by describing certain types of sin as ‘leaving the road,’ an expression which also implies a definite standard, the transgression of which is sin. This same concept of violation of standard is contained in the Navajo expression for sin: ‘that which is off to the side.’

Once a translator has found the appropriate equivalents for the lexical units of this verse, the problem has in a sense only begun, for an even more complex difficulty is involved in stating accurately the relationships between the parts. The first half of the verse, of course, presents no special problems, but the latter half involves very special difficulties. The syntactic problems of this verse are caused by two types of factors: (1) the series of process words linked by prepositions (i.e. in English, but by case endings in certain of the Greek forms), and (2) the abrupt shifts in the persons participating in these processes. In the first place, we find that in a high percentage of languages most processes, e.g. walking, running, eating, speaking, and also baptizing, repenting, forgiving, and sinning, are expressed by verb forms. In some cases these verbs may be made into noun-like words, but such noun formations may be quite uncommon in actual usage and especially in the complex kind of arrangement such as occurs in this verse. That is to say, in the series of processes involving baptism, repentance, forgiveness, and sins the predominant pattern in many languages is to treat such words as verbs. However, as verbs such words require the explicit indication of the persons who participate in these processes, and this involves the second major difficulty, the fact that there are such abrupt changes in the participants. For example, after the introductory verb of which John is the subject, it is John who does the baptizing and the people who are baptized, but the people are the subject of the repenting, God is the subject of the process of forgiving, and the people do the sinning.

There is a further problem involved in relating the four components baptism, repentance, forgiveness, and sins (these four are, of course, all the object of the preaching). The relationship between the third and fourth units is clear enough, for sins are the goal (i.e. object, in grammatical terms) of the process of the forgiving: cf. Toraja-Sa’dan ‘repentance which treads forgiveness as path.’ On the other hand, what is the relationship between the processes of baptism and repentance? The grammar books describe the second unit as a “genitive of characteristic” but that is not much help. However, if the second process is to characterize the first process, just how can this be stated clearly, when the two processes are to be treated as verb expressions, with their own subject constituents? There are probably two most satisfactory means of dealing with this problem: (1) the repenting can be described as simply preceding the baptism (in which case the character or quality is implied by the temporal sequence) e.g. ‘preached that the people should repent and be baptized’ or ‘preached that the people should be sorry on account of their sins and be baptized’ (Chicahuaxtla Triqui) and (2) the baptism can apply specifically to those who repent, e.g. ‘whosoever had changed his mind, he ought to be baptized….’ (Balinese) The same meaning is conveyed in Tzotzil, but in a different order ‘declares that he gives baptism to whoever receives his heart’ (the last expression is the Tzotzil idiom for repentance).

One further complication is involved in the relationship between the preaching and the rest of the clause, namely, that in many languages such a verb of speaking demands direct, rather than indirect discourse (in the Balinese translation, noted above, there is a shift in this direction, but not the use of the second person). That is to say, one must render this passage as, ‘John preached, You must repent and be baptized….’ If then, we put the entire second clause together, it could be rendered in the indirect form as ‘John preached that the people should repent and be baptized so that their sins would be forgiven’ (changes into the direct form would be more or less automatic). On the other hand, in languages which have no passive form of the verbs, the problems are even more complex, for the subjects of the corresponding active verbs must be introduced and the resultant translation may be roughly parallel to, ‘preached that the people should repent and he would baptize them so that God would forgive the bad deeds which they had committed.’

Quoted with permission from Bratcher, Robert G. and Nida, Eugene A. A Handbook on the Gospel of Mark. (UBS Handbook Series). New York: UBS, 1961. For this and other handbooks for translators see here .

Translation commentary on Mark 1:36 – 1:37

Exegesis:

katediōxen (only here in N.T.) ‘he followed’: the verb literally means ‘to track down,’ ‘hunt down,’ and has a hostile sense in such passages as Gen. 31.36; it may also have a good sense as in Ps. 23.6. More is indicated by the verb than the Revised Standard Version ‘followed’ there is an intentness, a determination, not present in the word ‘follow.’ Cf. Manson “tracked him down”; Swete “tracked him to his retreat”; O Novo Testamento de Nosso Senhor Jesus Cristo. Revisdo Autorizada ‘searched diligently.’

Simōn kai hoi met’ autou ‘Simon and those with him,’ i.e. the other three mentioned in v. 29.

hōti ‘that’: here recitative, introducing direct speech, and thus correctly omitted in translation.

pantes ‘all’: notice the same use of this word in 1.5, 32, and similar expressions in 1.28, 33.

Translation:

Simon and those who were with him means ‘Simon and those who were with Simon,’ presumably, Andrew, James, and John, but it may have included others. However, the word him in this phrase does not refer to Jesus, but to Simon.

Followed is a misleading word, especially when translated literally in some languages, for it might imply that the disciples got up immediately after Jesus did and followed him (keeping him in view all the time) as he went out of the town. This of course is not the case. Evidently, the disciples awoke to find that Jesus had already left, and then they went looking for him. Accordingly, Mezquital Otomi has simply ‘went looking’ and Shipibo-Conibo ‘went to seek him.’ Other languages use expressions which imply that the disciple followed his tracks. The important thing is that the translation realistically reflect what happened.

Many languages have two words corresponding to English found: (1) a word which implies that something was discovered which people were not at the time trying to find and (2) a term which indicates that the object found is the result of a planned search. The latter expression is, of course, the one desired here.

The Greek verb zēteō, translated in the Revised Standard Version as “searching,” could perhaps be better translated as “looking for you.” It may also imply that the people were ‘asking about,’ ‘inquiring for,’ etc.

Quoted with permission from Bratcher, Robert G. and Nida, Eugene A. A Handbook on the Gospel of Mark. (UBS Handbook Series). New York: UBS, 1961. For this and other handbooks for translators see here .

Translation commentary on Mark 2:24

Exegesis:

hoi Pharisaioi ‘the Pharisees’: cf. 2.16.

ide (3.34; 11.21; 13.1, 21; 15.4, 35; 16.6) ‘look!,’ ‘see!’: no longer strictly an imperative of the verb but an interjection (cf. hora ‘see’ in 1.44).

ti; ‘why…?’: again a rhetorical question (cf. 2.7): this is not a request for information, but is an accusation of wrong doing). Cf. Moffatt: “Look at what…! That is not allowed.”

ho ouk exestin ‘that which is not lawful’: i.e. reaping, which the Mosaic law prohibited on the sabbath (cf. Ex. 34.21). It is to be noticed that the disciples are not accused of stealing or plundering someone else’s field; the charge has to do with work prohibited on the sabbath.

exestin (2.26; 3.4; 6.18; 10.2; 12.14) ‘it is lawful,’ ‘it is permitted,’ ‘it is proper’ (an impersonal verb).

Translation:

Said may need to be translated as ‘asked,’ because of the interrogative form of the following.

They must be rendered in some languages more specifically as ‘your disciples.’

Not lawful is a somewhat complex idea, which in a number of languages must be translated in a more descriptive manner, e.g. ‘what the law does not allow’ (Mitla Zapotec), ‘what the law says should not be done,’ ‘what the law prohibits people from doing,’ or ‘what the law says is bad,’ if specific reference is to be made to the ‘law’ as codified rules of behavior. Rather, however, than the ‘law speaking’ (which it cannot do in some languages), one can translate ‘what people read in the law should not be done.’ On the other hand, it is more satisfactory in some instances to translate ‘what people should not do’ (Toraja-Sa’dan has simply ‘that which is not done’), without attempting to identify the codified form of the commandment, though the Greek text clearly implies a challenge to the authority of the Law.

Quoted with permission from Bratcher, Robert G. and Nida, Eugene A. A Handbook on the Gospel of Mark. (UBS Handbook Series). New York: UBS, 1961. For this and other handbooks for translators see here .