Translation commentary on Mark 4:2 – 4:3

Exegesis:

en parabolais (cf. 3.23) ‘in parables,’ ‘by means of parables.’

polla ‘many things’ (adjectival), not adverbial ‘much’ (cf. 1.45; 3.12).

en tē didachē autou (cf. 1.22) ‘in his teaching,’ i.e. ‘as he taught’: the sense of didachē here is active ‘the act of teaching’ and not passive ‘the thing taught,’ ‘doctrine.’

akouete. idou ‘listen! (impv.) look!’ (cf. 1.2). The second word simply strengthens the note of urgency and demand in the first, and need not be translated literally (cf. Revised Standard Version, Translator’s New Testament, and the majority of English translations which omit it).

ho speirōn ‘the sower,’ ‘the man who sows’ (4.14): the present participle of the verb is to be taken as an active noun.

speirō (4.4, 14, 15, 16, 18, 20, 31, 32) ‘sow’ – only in this chapter, in Mark. The infinitive speirai ‘to sow’ indicates purpose: ‘the sower went out in order to sow.’ It should be noticed that the method employed in sowing was that of scattering the seed over the soil, as the sower walked through the field, and not that of dropping each seed individually into a hole previously dug in the ground for that purpose.

Translation:

For parables see 3.23.

In his teaching may be rendered ‘as he was teaching them,’ in order to emphasize the active process, not the passive content of the teaching.

In many regions of the world this parable causes almost unbelievable difficulty because the method of sowing is not understood. For example, in a great many parts of the world the common process of sowing involves the use of a dibble stick by which a hole is made in prepared soil and in this hole a number of grains are dropped, after which the hole is carefully covered up and the soil sometimes tamped. The idea that a sower would be so utterly profligate as to throw seed broadcast is sometimes interpreted as a sure sign of incurable laziness or even of insanity. The reader then judges that for some of the seed to be lost to the birds, choked by weeds, or ruined by sprouting too soon in shallow soil is only to be expected in view of such an incredibly stupid method of sowing. On the other hand, it is impossible to change the method of sowing as spoken of in this parable, for the parable itself is not understandable except in terms of such a procedure. The only thing that one can do is to make certain that one does indicate that this was broadcast sowing ‘scattering the seed on plowed ground’ (or ‘prepared ground’), ‘to sow-scatter,’ used of upland rice (Amganad Ifugao), and ‘to plant by throwing’ (Highland Oaxaca Chontal). This is much better than implying that the sower was so utterly lacking in judgment that he would have used a dibble stick on stony ground or in a path.

Fundamentally, the translator is confronted by three types of meaning: syntactic (the meanings of grammatical constructions), lexical (the meanings of individual words and phrases), and cultural. The first two he must deal with in terms of the closest natural equivalent (the meanings of concepts within a cultural framework). The latter can only be treated in commentaries, or at best through necessary marginal notes. What he must avoid, however, is deciding upon syntactic and lexical solutions which will make cultural meanings more difficult.

It is not necessary to repeat the lexical items ‘sower’ and ‘sow.’ If this would be stylistically awkward in a receptor language, one may say only ‘a man went out to sow.’

Quoted with permission from Bratcher, Robert G. and Nida, Eugene A. A Handbook on the Gospel of Mark. (UBS Handbook Series). New York: UBS, 1961. For this and other handbooks for translators see here .

Translation commentary on Mark 5:6 – 5:7

Exegesis:

apo makrothen (8.3; 11.13; 14.54; 15.40) ‘from afar,’ ‘from a distance.’

ed ramen kai prosekunēsen auton ‘he ran and prostrated himself before him.’

trechō (15.36) ‘run.’

proskuneō (15.19) ‘do reverence,’ ‘make obeisance,’ ‘bow down to,’ ‘worship’: not in the technical Christian sense of worshiping Jesus, but in the general sense of paying him reverence (cf. 3.11 prosepipton autō ‘they fell down before him’; cf. the parallel Lk. 8.28 prosepesen autō ‘he fell down before him’) Most English translations have “knelt before him.”

ti emoi kai soi (cf. 1.24) ‘why do you bother me?’

huie tou theou tou hupsistou ‘son of the Most High God.’

hupsistos (11.10) ‘(the) Most High’: title of the God of the Jews. The word is the superlative form of the adverb hupsi ‘on high.’

horkizō se ton theon ‘I implore you by God’: the accusative ton theon ‘God’ denotes the thing (or, name) by which one swears (cf. Acts 19.13 ton Iēsoun ‘by Jesus’).

horkizō (only here in Mark) ‘put on oath’ (horkos ‘oath’), ‘cause to swear,’ ‘adjure,’ ‘entreat earnestly,’ ‘implore.’

basanisēs (6.48) ‘torment,’ ‘torture’: here probably with the idea of temporal punishment (Mt. 8.29 and Lk. 8.28, 31 interpret it of eschatological punishment).

Translation:

Worshiped is most generally rendered as ‘knelt down before’ or ‘fell down before in reverence.’

Crying with a loud voice is equivalent to ‘shouted out strong’ or ‘yelled.’

For a discussion of some of the problems in the idiom “What have you to do with me”, see 1.24. In this context Tzotzil has ‘what does it serve you to me’ and Loma (Liberia) has ‘what is your palaver on me.’

The superlative Most High cannot always be translated literally. In some instances, even though a superlative form does not exist, some relatively satisfactory equivalent may be used, e.g. ‘extremely high above’ (Kekchi). In other cases, one must substitute location, e.g. ‘high in heaven’ (Huichol), for an expression meaning ‘highest’ would refer only to physical size. In still other languages, one must substitute general size for height, as an expression of distinction, e.g. ‘really great’ (Conob).

Adjure is variously translated, e.g. ‘tell you before God’ (Copainalá Zoque), ‘ask in front of God’ (Huautla Mazatec), ‘ask you by God’ (Eastern Highland Otomi), ‘ask you in God’s presence’ (Southern Subanen), ‘I swear, calling on the name of God, requesting you’ (Toraja-Sa’dan), ‘I want your oath by God’ (Indonesian), ‘will assure me by using a curse on yourself calling on the name of God’ (Pamona), and ‘ask you; God has seen it’ (Tzotzil). The concept of adjure involves two relationships: (1) the asking of the person and (2) the witness or participation of the deity called to witness or validate the request. Such actions, though rather unfamiliar to people in our Western culture, are common enough in most societies.

Torment may be rendered as ‘cause to suffer.’

Quoted with permission from Bratcher, Robert G. and Nida, Eugene A. A Handbook on the Gospel of Mark. (UBS Handbook Series). New York: UBS, 1961. For this and other handbooks for translators see here .

Translation commentary on Mark 6:5 – 6:6

Exegesis:

dunamin (cf. 5.30; 6.2) ‘mighty work,’ ‘miracle.’

oligois arrōstois epitheis tas cheiras etherapeusen ‘(by) laying his hands on a few sick ones he healed (them).’

arrōstos (6.13; 16.18) ‘powerless,’ i.e. ‘sick,’ ‘ill.’

epitithenai tas cheiras (cf. 5.23) ‘to lay hands upon.’

therapeuō (cf. 1.34) ‘heal,’ ‘cure.’

ethaumasen (cf. 5.20) ‘he marveled,’ ‘he was surprised.’

dia tēn apistian autōn ‘on account of their unbelief’: most English translations (cf. also Le Nouveau Testament. Version Synodale, Lagrange, O Novo Testamento de Nosso Senhor Jesus Cristo. Revisdo Autorizada) have it ‘at their unbelief’ translating dia not as cause but as the object of the surprise of Jesus.

apistia (9.24; 16.14) ‘lack of belief,’ ‘lack of trust’ in Jesus (cf. faith, confidence, in Jesus, 2.5; 5.34). In this context the word describes the unwillingness of the people of Nazareth to believe that Jesus could work miracles.

kai periēgen tas kōmas kuklō didaskōn ‘and he went around among the adjacent villages teaching.’

periagō (only here in Mark) ‘go about,’ ‘make a tour.’

kōmē (6.36, 56; 8.23, 26, 27; 11.2; cf. agros 5.14) ‘village,’ ‘small town’; in general smaller than polis ‘city’ but larger than agros ‘hamlet’ – cf. especially 6.36, 56.

kuklō (cf. 3.34) ‘round about,’ ‘around’: here modifies tas kōmas ‘surrounding villages.’

Translation:

Could evidently means that though Jesus had the power to perform miracles, in Nazareth he was unable to use his power because of the lack of faith on the part of the people.

For mighty work, see 6.2.

Few is a relative word, which receives its meaning from the context. In other languages there are often equally arbitrary delimitations. For example, in Tzeltal the equivalent of few is ‘two or three,’ but this does not mean literally two or three, but as in the case of English few acquires its meaning from the context; compare ‘a few people in town’ and ‘a few people in our living room,’ obviously capable of quite different meanings.

Unbelief may be rendered as a phrase ‘they did not believe’ or ‘they did not have confidence in him.’

Villages would imply the hamlets surrounding Nazareth, e.g. ‘he went around from hamlet to hamlet, teaching the people.’

Quoted with permission from Bratcher, Robert G. and Nida, Eugene A. A Handbook on the Gospel of Mark. (UBS Handbook Series). New York: UBS, 1961. For this and other handbooks for translators see here .

Translation commentary on Mark 6:47

Text:

After ēn ‘was’ Soden, Taylor and Kilpatrick add palai ‘already,’ which is omitted by all other modern editions of the Greek text.

Exegesis:

opsias genomenēs (cf. 4.35) ‘when evening came’: it is to be presumed that nighttime is meant, in light of the ‘late hour’ (v. 35) before the feeding of the multitude. Cf. Lagrange.

en mesō tēs thalassēs ‘in the middle of the sea’: the phrase means more than ‘out on the sea’ of the Revised Standard Version.

mesos (7.31; 9.36; 14.60; cf. 3.3) ‘middle,’ ‘in the midst.’

hē thalassa (cf. 1.16) ‘the sea,’ i.e. the Lake of Galilee.

kai autos monos ‘and he (was) alone’: monos is here an adjective, ‘alone,’ ‘by himself.’

Translation:

When evening came is translatable as ‘when it got night’ or ‘when darkness had come.’

The clause the boat was out on the sea may be wrongly interpreted, since it would seem to imply that the boat was there, but not the disciples. Note the contrast in the form of the last clause which specifies Jesus as being alone on the land. Accordingly, one may translate, as required, ‘the disciples were in the boat….’

Quoted with permission from Bratcher, Robert G. and Nida, Eugene A. A Handbook on the Gospel of Mark. (UBS Handbook Series). New York: UBS, 1961. For this and other handbooks for translators see here .

Translation commentary on Mark 7:27

Exegesis:

aphes (cf. 2.5) ‘allow,’ ‘permit,’ ‘let.’

chortasthēnai (cf. 6.42) ‘be fed,’ ‘be satisfied,’ ‘be filled.’

ta tekna (cf. 2.5) ‘the children’: here figuratively for the Jews (in contrast with the Gentiles, ‘the dogs’).

kalon (cf. 4.8) ‘right,’ ‘fitting.’

tois kunariois (7.28) ‘to the (little) dogs’: the word is a diminutive and indicates a house dog, or lap dog, in contrast with the fierce dogs that roamed the streets.

It is, of course, possible that the final clause should be interpreted as a question, perhaps rhetorical, e.g. ‘It is not right, is it, to…?’

Translation:

Let the children first be fed may, in a literal translation, give rise to a wrong interpretation, i.e. ‘permit the children to eat first and then the dogs.’ The meaning is more accurately conveyed in some languages by ‘first of all, the children should eat’ or ‘first, the children should be given food.’

Though the word dogs, in its regular form would be the common term used by Jews in speaking disrespectfully of the Gentiles, Jesus may have softened the term – or perhaps, even here with an understanding smile, have taken all the harshness out of the term, by using the diminutive ending, which may have carried associations of endearment, e.g. ‘the puppies.’ In some languages there are certain parallel distinctions, e.g. in Spanish (in contrast with the regular perros ‘dogs’), there are two diminutive forms perrillos and perritos, the latter of which implies endearment.

Quoted with permission from Bratcher, Robert G. and Nida, Eugene A. A Handbook on the Gospel of Mark. (UBS Handbook Series). New York: UBS, 1961. For this and other handbooks for translators see here .

Translation commentary on Mark 8:24

Exegesis:

anablepsas (cf. 6.41) ‘looking up’ or, ‘recovering sight’: either of these meanings is possible. The former is favored by Thayer, Abbott-Smith, Arndt & Gingrich; American Standard Version, Revised Standard Version, Goodspeed, The Modern Speech New Testament, Williams, Zürcher Bibel, Taylor; the latter is preferred by Moffatt, Manson, Translator’s New Testament, Lagrange, O Novo Testamento de Nosso Senhor Jesus Cristo. Revisdo Autorizada.

blepō tous anthrōpous hoti hōs dendra horō peripatountas literally ‘I see men, for I see (them) walking around like trees.’ As the Greek text stands the statement is none too logical: clearly the meaning of the blind man’s answer is, ‘I see men, because even though the things I perceive look like trees, they are walking around,’ i.e. the fact that they were in motion told him they were men, not trees. The meaning will be more clearly brought out by a free paraphrase than by a word-for-word translation. Cf. Manson (and Williams) ‘I see men: they look to me like trees walking about’; Lagrange Je vois les hommes, car j’aperçois comme des arbres qui marchent. Black conjectures that the underlying Aramaic emphatic form of statement meant ‘I see men like trees walking,’ and the Vulgate and Syriac versions translate a text identical with this, ‘I see men like trees that are walking’ (omitting the hoti ‘because’ and horō ‘I perceive’ of the critical Greek text).

dendron (only here in Mark) ‘tree.’

peripateō (cf. 2.9) ‘walk,’ ‘walk about.’

Translation:

Looked up must not be taken in the sense of ‘looking up to heaven’ or ‘looking up at the sky.’ Either the man’s head was lowered and he looked up, or as is equally possible the Greek verb may mean ‘regained his sight’ (see above). ‘Looking up’ should not be, however, any higher than horizontal (in some translations the misunderstanding which follows, in which men are said to look like trees, has been attributed by the readers to the fact that the man looked up toward the sky, and, of course, all he could see would be trees).

Unless one is quite careful the difficult reply of the man is made more complicated by an awkward grammatical arrangement. For example, a number of renderings have meant ‘I see men walking like trees.’ Of course, trees do not walk, and the meaning of the passage is completely lost. Renderings which have attempted to convey the meaning of the original while remaining as close to the Greek as the receptor languages in question will allow, include ‘see men that are walking, they are like trees’ (Tzeltal), ‘see men like trees, they are walking’ (Copainalá Zoque), ‘I see men like they are trees; I see them as they are walking’ (Chicahuaxtla Triqui).

Quoted with permission from Bratcher, Robert G. and Nida, Eugene A. A Handbook on the Gospel of Mark. (UBS Handbook Series). New York: UBS, 1961. For this and other handbooks for translators see here .

Translation commentary on Mark 9:18

Exegesis:

hopou ean auton katalabē ‘wherever it seizes him,’ i.e. wherever the boy might be when the spirit seizes him.

hopou ean (hopou an 6.56) ‘wherever,’ ‘whatever place.’

katalambanō (only here in Mark) ‘take hold of’: with hostile intent, as here, ‘seize.’

rēssei auton kai aphrizei kai trizei tous odontas kai xērainetai ‘it throws him to the ground, and he foams at the mouth and grinds his teeth and grows rigid.’

rēssō (cf. rēgnumi 2.22) ‘throw down,’ ‘dash to the ground.’

aphrizō (9.20) ‘foam at the mouth.’

trizō (only here in the N. T.) ‘gnash,’ ‘grind,’ ‘grit.’

xērainō (cf. 3.1) ‘dry up,’ ‘wither,’ therefore (as in 3.1), ‘grow rigid,’ ‘become stiff’ (cf. Manson, Moffatt, Le Nouveau Testament. Version Synodale). This meaning of the word suits the context better than ‘waste away,’ ‘pine away’ (American Standard Version, Goodspeed, The Modern Speech New Testament, O Novo Testamento de Nosso Senhor Jesus Cristo. Revisdo Autorizada). Translator’s New Testament has ‘becomes parched.’

The other words have already been dealt with: hina ‘that’ of content, not of purpose, cf. 3.9; ekballō ‘cast out’ cf. 1.12, 34; ischuō ‘be strong,’ ‘be able’ cf. 2.17; 5.4.

Translation:

As in all expressions of demonic seizure (cf. Revised Standard Version seizes him), one must make certain of the way in which one can speak of such events in the receptor language (see 1.23). In some instances it may be necessary to speak of ‘entering into,’ ‘taking hold of him,’ or ‘being captured by.’

Dashes him down is equivalent in some languages to ‘causes him to fall down,’ especially if the demon is regarded as being within the person. However, whenever possible this strong figure should be used, but the idiom must be applicable to persons, and not exclusively to things (as has been the case in certain translations).

He may need to be changed to ‘the boy,’ since the pronominal reference may not clearly indicate the shift between the dumb spirit as the subject and the boy.

Foams may be easily translated in most languages by finding out how people describe the actions of demented persons, epileptics, or those suffering from rabies. In Southern Subanen one says literally ‘his mouth fills with bubbles.’

Becomes rigid is translatable as ‘his body becomes stiff’ (Southern Subanen) and ‘he becomes bone’ (Conob).

For cast it out see 1.34.

Were not able is translatable as ‘could not do so’ or ‘could not cast the demon out.’ In some languages one says ‘they did not have the strength to do so.’

Quoted with permission from Bratcher, Robert G. and Nida, Eugene A. A Handbook on the Gospel of Mark. (UBS Handbook Series). New York: UBS, 1961. For this and other handbooks for translators see here .

Translation commentary on Mark 9:50

Exegesis:

ean de to halas analon genētai ‘if the salt becomes saltless,’ ‘if the salt loses its saltness’: it is explained that the coarse salt from the Dead Sea would dissolve, from excessive dampness or other causes, and leave savorless salt-like crystals as a residue. On the other hand, this may be an instance of oriental hyperbole in which ‘salt losing its salt’ is equivalent to something losing its reason for existence.

en tini auto artusete; ‘how will you season it?,’ ‘with what will you restore its flavor?,’ i.e. restore its saltness, its capacity to season, its distinguishing characteristic as salt.

echete en heautois hala ‘have salt in yourselves’: the majority take echete ‘have’ as imperative; Manson, however, takes it to be indicative, ‘there is salt between you.’ A reasonable explanation of the figure is offered by Lagrange who understands it to mean affability and agreeableness in social relations.

kai eirēneuete en allēlois ‘and be at peace among yourselves,’ ‘and keep peace with one another.’

eirēneuō (only here in Mark) ‘to be at peace.’

Translation:

Good must be understood in the sense of ‘valuable,’ ‘good for something’ or ‘useful’ – not ‘good,’ in the sense of moral or beneficent.

Salt has lost its saltness is translated in Amganad Ifugao as ‘if salt has lost its salt flavor’; in Javanese it is ‘if its being-salty has disappeared.’ One could also say ‘if salt is no longer salty.’ There is, of course, a problem here in that pure sodium chloride cannot lose its saltiness, but as noted above, this passage refers evidently to a highly impure substance from which the sodium chloride could be leached out. Similar kinds of salt are found in many parts of the world, and hence the statement does not seem so “impossible” as it might to those who are acquainted only with more refined products.

How will you season it is in some languages equivalent to ‘how can you put the salt flavor (or ‘taste’) back again’; cf. Javanese ‘what shall then be done so that its flavor is made to return?’

There are two principal meanings conveyed by the word peace: (1) inward attitudes of tranquillity and contentment and (2) lack of strife between persons. The first type of meaning is expressed in such idioms as ‘a song in the body’ (Baoulé), ‘heart coolness’ (Maninka), ‘to sit down in the heart’ (South Bolivian Quechua), and ‘quietness of heart’ (Chol). The second meaning, which is the one occurring in this context, relates to the capacity for unruffled social intercourse and for sympathetic and thoughtful consideration of others (in addition, of course, to the actual absence of strife – whether on a local or national level). In this type of context idioms such as ‘quiet goodness’ (Kekchi) and ‘having your hearts feel oneness for one another’ (Tzeltal) fit quite well, for Jesus is speaking not merely of the absence of strife, but of the positive quality of social adjustment.

Quoted with permission from Bratcher, Robert G. and Nida, Eugene A. A Handbook on the Gospel of Mark. (UBS Handbook Series). New York: UBS, 1961. For this and other handbooks for translators see here .