7:28a and who has shown me favor before the king, his counselors, and all his powerful officials.

New American Bible, Revised Edition: and who let me find favor with the king, with his counselors, and with all the most influential royal officials.

Yahweh caused the king, his advisers and all his high/powerful officials to show me favor/grace.
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And by your (sing.) work/grace, the king and his counsel of elders and all the influential leaders of the king have treated me very kindly.

7:28b And because the hand of the LORD my God was upon me,

Because Yahweh, my God, had put his hand upon me ⌊to give me success⌋.
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⌊I knew that⌋ you (sing.), the God whom I worship/serve, were helping/blessing me,

7:28c I took courage and gathered the leaders of Israel to return with me.

I was encouraged to invite heads/chiefs ⌊of families⌋ from Israel to go up with me ⌊to Jerusalem⌋.”
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so that gave me courage to call/bring together ⌊clan/family⌋ leaders from the Jewish people to go/return ⌊to Jerusalem⌋ with me.”

7:28b–c (reordered)

I was strengthened in my heart/mind to ask the leaders of Israel to go with me because Yahweh, my God, was blessing me.”

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