SIL Translator's Notes on Mark 1:10

1:10

As soon as Jesus came up out of the water, He saw…: In Greek, this verse literally says: “And immediately coming up out of the water he saw….” The phrase “and immediately” here introduces an important new event in the story. It also indicates that this event will be surprising or unexpected and that it occurred as soon as Jesus had been baptized. (Levinsohn 2003, Ellingsworth and France (page 76) agree that the phrase kai euthus (“and immediately”) indicates a new, significant or dramatic development within a story. Ellingsworth also comments that the new event may be surprising. In this context the event is clearly surprising and unexpected. France (page 76) further comments that the phrase “and immediately” connects the new event closely to Jesus’ baptism, and translations such as “as soon as…” communicate this in English.)

Some English versions do not explicitly translate this expression. Others use an expression like “just as.” If your language has a way to indicate that an event is surprising and important in the story, you should use it here. For example:

As Jesus was leaving the water, this is what happened: he saw…

1:10a

As soon as Jesus came up out of the water: Jesus had stepped down into the river in order to be baptized. The phrase came up out of the water indicates that he returned to the edge of the river and stepped onto dry land. Use a natural expression in your language to describe the action of stepping up out of a river onto the land.

1:10b

He saw the heavens breaking open: The Greek verb that the Berean Standard Bible translates as breaking open means “split apart, divided.” Most scholars interpret this as a passive verb. (The Greek verb is ambiguous. It can also be understood as a middle participle (“tear open”), which is what the Berean Standard Bible does. Renderings such as “open” (New Century Version, Contemporary English Version), “split open” (God’s Word, New Living Translation), and “opening” (Good News Bible) may reflect this understanding.) The context implies that the actor is God, but the focus here is on the action, not the actor. Jesus saw the sky being torn open, but the text does not say that he saw God tearing the sky.

In some languages it may be natural to use a passive verb in this context, as the Greek does. For example:

he saw heaven being torn open (New International Version)

The text does not mean that Jesus saw heaven being destroyed, or that God was destroying heaven. If a literal translation would give that wrong meaning, use a different expression. For example:

he saw the sky opening up

If you do this, consider using a footnote to help readers understand the connection between this verse and 15:38. Here is a suggested footnote:

The Greek says literally: “being torn open.” These are the same words that are used in 15:38 when the curtain of the Temple was torn open.

He: Most scholars agree that He refers to Jesus, not John. Although John also saw this event (see John 1:32–33), the focus here is entirely on Jesus.

the heavens: The Greek word that the Berean Standard Bible translates as heavens is also used in 1:11a. It can have two different meanings, depending on the context:

(a) the heavens, the place where God lives,

(b) the sky.

In the New Testament, God often showed supernatural signs from the sky, such as a voice, fire, or bright light. In this verse either “heavens” or “sky” would fit the context. The Holy Spirit came down like a dove and God’s voice came from heaven or from the sky. Here are some points to consider:

• If your language has a term that can mean either “heaven” or “sky,” use it in both 1:10b and 1:11a.

• If it is difficult to speak about heaven (God’s home) being torn open, you may use “the sky” in 1:10b and “heaven” in 1:11a.

• In languages that do not have a single word for heavens, you may need to use a descriptive phrase:

the place of God
-or-
the place where God lives

1:10c

and: The word and introduces the other thing that Jesus saw. He saw the sky being torn open, and he also saw the Spirit descending.

the Spirit: The phrase the Spirit refers to the Holy Spirit. To avoid confusion, you should probably use the same term as you used for “Holy Spirit” in 1:8b. See the note there. Several English versions also have “Holy Spirit.”

descending on Him like a dove: The Holy Spirit came down on Jesus like a dove. There are two ways to interpret the phrase like a dove in this context:

(1) It refers to the appearance of the Holy Spirit. He looked like a dove. For example:

and the Holy Spirit coming down on him with the form/appearance of a dove

(2) It refers to the way that the Spirit descended. He flew gently down like a dove. For example:

and the Spirit descending on him like a dove gently descends

In this context the Greek text and almost all English versions are ambiguous on the issue. For this reason, it is good to use an expression that can imply either interpretation. However, if you must choose between these interpretations, it is recommended that you follow interpretation (1). The parallel verse in Luke 3:22 specifies that the Holy Spirit had the bodily form of a dove.

on Him: Many scholars and almost all English versions understand this phrase to mean that the Holy Spirit came down and landed on Jesus. (The preposition used here is eis, which usually means “into” or “to.” The preposition epi “upon” is used in the parallels in Matthew 3:16 and Luke 3:22. Some scholars understand this verse to mean that the Holy Spirit descended and entered “into” Jesus to empower him for his ministry. However, other scholars and almost all versions understand that the Holy Spirit came down and landed “on” Jesus. The God’s Word and Contemporary English Version have “to him,” which seems closer to “on” than “into.” Since all the major versions have “on,” these differences of interpretation have not been discussed in the Notes.) Consider how people would describe a bird flying down and landing on someone in your language. The text does not specify exactly whether the dove landed on Jesus’ head or on another part of his body. If possible, you should avoid being specific about where the dove landed.

dove: The Greek word that the Berean Standard Bible translates here as dove refers to several different species of birds. In English, these birds are sometimes called “doves” and sometimes called “pigeons.” The dove described in this passage is probably similar to a common pigeon today. (1.10 In Animals in the Bible (UBS Handbook), “Dove, Pigeon”, it is suggested that the most common bird in the dove-pigeon family in the Middle East today is the Asiatic Rock Dove (also called the Rock Pigeon or Common Pigeon), Columba livia, and would be the most likely identification for yonah in Hebrew and peristera in Greek.) Doves/pigeons are medium-sized birds (30–36 centimeters long). They are usually gray or blue-gray with more color on their necks. They are found all around the world.

For Jews, doves were a symbol of something that is gentle and peaceful. Doves/pigeons that we know today are often not gentle. They can be aggressive and attack other birds. It is important to consider this here where the Holy Spirit is described like a dove.

Here are some other ways to translate this word:

• If your readers know doves/pigeons, and they are considered good birds, you should use your word for a dove/pigeon.

• If doves/pigeons are unknown, or if they are considered bad, you may want to use the general word for “bird.”

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SIL Translator's Notes on Mark 1:42

1:42

And immediately: The Greek expression that the Berean Standard Bible translates as And immediately introduces what happened when Jesus spoke to the man. As soon as Jesus spoke, the man was healed. This is the climax of the story. Introduce this climax in a natural way in your language.

the leprosy left him, and the man was cleansed: The phrase the leprosy left him refers to the same event as the man was cleansed. This repetition is another way that the author emphasized the climax of the story. Consider how to emphasize it in a natural way in your language.

In some languages it may not be possible to speak of leprosy leaving someone. If that is true in your language, use a different way to express the idea. For example:

his skin disease disappeared and he was well again
-or-
he was completely healed/cured of his leprosy

the man was cleansed: The verb was cleansed is passive. In some languages it may be more natural not to use a passive verb. For example:

He was/became clean
-or-
Jesus had cleansed him

cleansed: The Greek word that the Berean Standard Bible translates as cleansed is another form of the same word that the Berean Standard Bible translated as “Be clean!” in 1:41b. You may want to translate in a similar way here. However, in some languages it may be more natural to focus more on the healing in this part of the verse. For example, the New International Version says:

cured (New International Version)

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SIL Translator's Notes on Mark 3:5

3:5a

Jesus looked around at them with anger: The phrase Jesus looked around at them probably indicates that Jesus looked at all of the people in every part of the room. The phrase in anger describes how Jesus felt as he looked at them. He was angry because they did not pity the man with the crippled hand.

In some languages it may be natural to change the order of phrases in 3:5a. For example, the Good News Bible says:

Jesus was angry as he looked around at them

3:5b

and sorrow: There are two ways to interpret the meaning of the word that the Berean Standard Bible translates as sorrow:

(1) It means that Jesus was grieved or very sad. For example:

grieved at their hardness of heart (Revised Standard Version)

(Berean Standard Bible, Revised Standard Version, New International Version, New Jerusalem Bible, New Living Translation, NET Bible, New Century Version, King James Version, New American Standard Bible, Phillips’ New Testament in Modern English, God’s Word, Revised English Bible)

(2) It means that Jesus felt sorry for them because they were actually hurting themselves by their stubbornness. For example:

he felt sorry for them because they were so stubborn (Contemporary English Version)

(Good News Bible, Contemporary English Version)

It is recommended that you follow interpretation (1). It is followed by the majority of English versions and fits the context well.

Here are some other ways to translate this:

was very upset
-or-
felt great sorrow

hardness of heart: The Greek phrase that the Berean Standard Bible translates as hardness of heart is an idiom (New Living Translation: “hard hearts”). It means that the people were “stubborn” or “obstinate.” It refers to their unwillingness to change what they thought and believed. It does not refer literally to the heart as an organ in a person’s body. The Contemporary English Version has another way to translate this:

because they were so stubborn (Contemporary English Version)

In some languages, there may be a different idiom to refer to stubbornness. For example, the God’s Word says:

their minds were closed (God’s Word)

3:5c

Stretch out your hand: The Greek word that the Berean Standard Bible translates as Stretch out means “to extend” or “reach out.”

Here are some other ways to translate this word:

Hold out your hand. (God’s Word)
-or-
Reach out your hand. (New Living Translation, 1996 edition)

The same word is translated as reach in 1:41.

hand: The word that the Berean Standard Bible translates as hand can include part of the arm as well. See how you translated this in 3:1b.

General Comment on 3:5c

In some languages, it will be more natural to translate 3:5c as indirect speech. For example:

Jesus told the man to stretch out his hand/arm.

3:5e

it was restored: The word restored here means “healed.” The pronoun it refers to man’s hand which was made strong and well.

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SIL Translator's Notes on Mark 4:3

4:3a

Listen: In Greek, this parable begins with two words: “Listen, look!” These words indicate that Jesus wanted the people to listen carefully to the parable that follows. Many English versions translate only the word that means Listen, as the Berean Standard Bible does. They do not translate both words. (An exception to this is the King James Version, which says “Hearken, behold.”) Use whatever expression is natural in your language when someone wants people to listen carefully to a story that he is about to tell.

4:3b

farmer: The Greek word that the Berean Standard Bible translates as farmer is literally “one who sows/plants (seed).” Some English versions follow the Greek and use the more specific term “sower” (Revised Standard Version). Others simply say “a man” (Good News Bible) and allow the verb to explain his work. Use whatever term will be most natural in your language here.

went out: The Greek word that the Berean Standard Bible translates as went out indicates that the farmer went to his field. It may be more natural in your language not to translate the word out.

In some languages it may be necessary to say where the farmer went from. The farmer probably went from his home.

to sow: The Greek word that the Berean Standard Bible translates as sow refers to throwing seeds to the side and in front of the farmer. This method allowed the farmer to plant a large area quickly. In that culture, farmers did not plant grain seeds by putting them in the ground one by one.

If your readers know that this is the way the Jews planted seeds, they will more easily understand what the parable means. In languages that do not have a word for sow, you may be able to use a descriptive phrase such as:

to plant by throwing/scattering
-or-
to scatter in order to plant

• This method was the normal way for Jewish farmers to plant. It does not describe a foolish farmer. If your readers might think that this method of planting is foolish, you may want to include a footnote. For example:

The Jewish custom was to scatter seeds over ground that the farmer had plowed, or that he would plow afterwards to cover the seeds. In this way, the farmer could plant a large area quickly.

It may also be helpful to include a picture here of a farmer scattering his seeds.

seed: The Greek word that the Berean Standard Bible translates as seed here refers to many seeds. You may want to use the plural form “seeds.” If you use a plural form here, you should also use plural pronouns throughout 4:5–8 to refer to these seeds. See, for example, the note on “it” at 4:4c.

The farmer was probably planting wheat seeds or seeds of another kind of grain. If you need to say what kind of seed the farmer was planting, here are some suggestions:

• Use a general word for grain.

• Supply the name of a specific crop grown in Israel in that time, such as wheat or barley.

• If you do not have a general word for grain and do not have wheat or barley in your area, compare this to something that is commonly grown in your area. For example, if rice or millet is common, you could say:

a farmer went out to plant something like rice/millet

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SIL Translator's Notes on Mark 4:35

Section 4:35–41

Jesus commanded a storm to stop and it obeyed him

While Jesus and his disciples were going across Lake Galilee in a boat, a strong wind began to blow. The wind caused big waves on the lake. The waves were big enough to come into the boat. The boat was about to sink, but Jesus spoke to the waves and because Jesus had the authority to command them to stop, the wind and the waves stopped.

It is good to translate this section before you decide on a heading for it.

Here are some other possible headings for this section:

Jesus calmed a storm on the lake
-or-
Jesus stopped the wind and waves
-or-
A storm obeys Jesus

There are parallel passages for this section in Matthew 8:23–27 and Luke 8:22–25.

Paragraph 4:35–41

4:35a

When that evening came: The phrase that evening refers to the same day as the events in the previous section. The word evening refers to sundown or perhaps an hour or two before or after sundown. Your language may use a different verb than came or no verb at all. For example:

When the sun was going down
-or-
In the evening of that day
-or-
That evening (God’s Word)

4:35b

Let us cross: The Greek word that the Berean Standard Bible translates as Let us cross is a command in the first person plural. Jesus was urging his disciples to cross the lake with him.

Here are some other ways to translate this:

Come, let’s go over
-or-
We should go over

cross to the other side: The Greek phrase that the Berean Standard Bible translates as cross to the other side here refers to going in a boat to the other side of Lake Galilee. In some languages it may be natural to translate this as:

cross the lake
-or-
sail across the lake

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SIL Translator's Notes on Mark 5:27

5:27a

When the woman heard about Jesus: The woman heard about Jesus at some time in the past. This was the reason that she joined the crowd. She hoped that she would be able to touch Jesus. The text does not indicate when she heard about Jesus.

In some languages you may need to make explicit what she had heard about Jesus. For example:

when she heard about the things that Jesus had done (There is a textual variant (that, as Edwards says on page 164, is supported by “a small but weighty number of manuscripts”) that is close to this model. If we are to supply an object for what the woman heard, it seems that staying close to the variant would be a good choice.)
-or-
when she heard that Jesus healed people

5:27b–28

The woman’s thought in 5:28 happened before her action in 5:27b. In some languages it may be more natural to reorder 5:27b and 5:28. See the General Comment on 5:27–28 after 5:28 for an example.

5:27b

she came up through the crowd behind Him: The woman came to Jesus from behind Him because she did not want him to notice her.

and touched His cloak: The Greek verb that the Berean Standard Bible translates as touched is the main verb in 5:25–27. The text emphasizes the woman’s action of touching Jesus’ cloak. See the General Comment on 5:25–27 below about this.

cloak: The Greek word that the Berean Standard Bible translates as cloak refers to a long, loose outer garment like a coat or robe. If such a garment is not worn in your area, you may want to use a general expression. For example:

clothing
-or-
garment

Be careful not to use a term that would imply foreign or expensive clothing.

General Comment on 5:25–27

In 5:25–27, there are eight verbs. The first seven verbs are dependent forms. This indicates that the main action is “touched.” Mark emphasized the action of the woman touching Jesus’ cloak. Here is a literal translation of the verbs:

…a woman being in a flow of blood…, and having suffered much…, and having spent all that she had, and not having benefited anything, but rather having come to the worse, hearing about Jesus, coming behind in the crowd, she touched his cloak.

Consider whether there is a natural way in your language to emphasize the action of touching Jesus’ cloak.

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SIL Translator's Notes on Mark 6:17

Paragraph 6:17–20

This paragraph begins the story that explains what Herod said in 6:16 about killing John the Baptizer. The events in this story happened before the events in 6:14–16. Events like this are called background information.

The events within paragraph 6:17–20 are not all in chronological order. The exact order of all the events is not certain. However, it is clear that the events of 6:17a–b happened after the events of 6:17c. See the General Comment on 6:17–18 after 6:18b for a discussion of a possible way to reorder these verses.

6:17a

For Herod himself: The Greek conjunction that the Berean Standard Bible translates as For introduces background information for 6:16. This background information helps to explain why Herod thought that Jesus was John the Baptizer who was raised from the dead.

Here are some possible ways to introduce this background information:

For/Now this is what had previously happened, Herod himself…
-or-
Now it was this same Herod who… (New Jerusalem Bible)

Some English translations do not explicitly translate this conjunction here. Introduce this background information in a way that is natural in your language.

Herod himself: In Greek, the word himself emphasizes Herod. Try to emphasize Herod in a natural way in your language. For example:

Herod himself (Good News Bible)
-or-
It was this Herod who… (Revised English Bible)
-or-
it was this same Herod who… (New Jerusalem Bible)

had ordered that John be arrested: The Greek says literally “having sent, arrested John.” This implies that Herod sent men/soldiers to arrest John. To make this explicit you could say:

Herod gave orders to his soldiers to arrest John

6:17b

and bound and imprisoned: The phrase and imprisoned indicates that Herod had given orders to his soldiers to put John in prison. Herod himself did not personally put John in prison.

bound and imprisoned: The Greek phrase that the Berean Standard Bible translates as bound and imprisoned is literally “bound him in prison” (as in the Revised Standard Version). There are two ways to interpret this Greek phrase:

(1) The word bound is used here in its specific sense. So this phrase means that Herod had John chained or tied and put into prison. For example, the Good News Bible says:

he had him tied up and put in prison

(Berean Standard Bible, New International Version, New Revised Standard Version, Good News Bible, God’s Word)

(2) The word bound is used here in its general sense. So this phrase means that Herod had John “confined/locked/put into prison.” For example, the Contemporary English Version says:

put him in prison

(Contemporary English Version, New Century Version, New Living Translation, Revised English Bible)

It is recommended that you follow interpretation (1).

There are two ways to translate interpretation (1). You may say that John was first tied/chained and then put into prison (as in the Good News Bible). Or you may say that he was put into prison and he was tied/chained while in the prison. (The UBS Handbook (page 194) comments that the literal phrase “bound in prison” does not indicate that John was in prison, tied up. However, a number of commentators disagree and say that John was chained or tied up in the prison (Hiebert page 148, Lenski page 250, Cole page 65). It may be noted here that Paul was put in the stocks while in an inner jail cell (Acts 16:24). There is also no indication that John was untied after being put into prison.) For example, the New Jerusalem Bible says:

had him chained up in prison

imprisoned: In some languages the idea that Herod had John the Baptizer put in prison is expressed as a verb. For example:

caused him to be imprisoned

Other languages do not have a specific word for “prison.” These languages can express the idea of imprisoned as:

locked/tied in a room

6:17c

Here Mark began to give the background for what he said in 6:17a–b about Herod putting John in prison. This is not in chronological order. These events happened sometime before the events in 6:17a–b. See the General Comment on 6:17–18 at the end of 6:18b.

on account of his brother Philip’s wife Herodias: The phrase that the Berean Standard Bible translates as on account of his brother Philip’s wife Herodias in this context means “to appease Herodias,” that is, to make Herodias happy. Herod put John in prison because John had offended Herodias, and Herod wanted to show her that he was punishing John. You may need to make this explicit. For example:

for the sake of Herodias (Revised Standard Version)
-or-
as a favor to Herodias (New Living Translation)

his brother Philip’s wife Herodias: Herodias had been married to Herod’s older brother, whose name was Philip. Herodias was no longer married to Philip, so it may not be natural in your language to use the phrase Philip’s wife. You may need to say:

Herodias, who had previously been married to Herod’s older brother Philip
-or-
Herodias, who was formerly the wife of Philip, older brother of Herod
-or-
(She used to be his brother Philip’s wife.) (God’s Word)

Herodias: The word Herodias is the name of a woman. She is a new person in the story. If your language has a particular way to introduce new people into a story, you should use it here. You should write the name Herodias according to the spelling system that your language uses for a woman’s name.

6:17d

whom Herod had married: Herod had taken Philip’s wife away from him while Philip was still alive. Herod then married her.

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SIL Translator's Notes on Mark 6:49

6:49a–b

but: The Greek conjunction that the Berean Standard Bible translates as but here indicates a contrast. The contrast is between what Jesus intended to do (6:48d) and what actually happened.

they cried out: The clause they cried out is a result of 6:49c (“thinking he was a ghost”). It is also a result of 6:50a (“they all saw Him and were terrified”). See the General Comments at the end of the note on 6:50a for other ways to express these relationships.

cried out: The Greek word that the Berean Standard Bible translates as cried out is the sound someone makes when afraid. Another way to translate this word is “scream.” For example:

and they started screaming (Contemporary English Version)
-or-
they screamed in terror (New Living Translation, 1996 edition)

6:49c

thinking He was a ghost: The Greek word that the Berean Standard Bible translates as a ghost refers to a phantom. The word is often used when people see a vision or form of a dead person, but his body is not actually there. This Greek word is different from the Greek word that means “spirit.” The disciples probably thought that the spirit of a dead person was appearing to them in a form that they could see. Use the natural term in your language to describe this.

In some languages, it may be more natural to put what the disciples thought into direct speech. For example, the Good News Bible says:

“It’s a ghost!” they thought…

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