And: In some languages the conjunction at the beginning of this verse may have to be translated “But,” as in New American Bible, New Jewish Publication Society’s Tanakh and New Jerusalem Bible.
Jehu drew his bow with his full strength is literally “Jehu filled his hand with his bow,” which may mean “Jehu set an arrow on his bow.” One ancient interpretation of this expression is that he drew the bow with his full strength, and this understanding is found in several versions (Revised Standard Version/New Revised Standard Version, Good News Translation). But this interpretation is not followed in New International Version, Revised English Bible, New Jerusalem Bible and New Century Version, which read “Jehu drew his bow” (similarly New Jewish Publication Society’s Tanakh). Either interpretation is acceptable.
Between the shoulders is literally “between his arms.” A more natural way of saying this in English is “between the shoulder blades” (Hobbs, New Jerusalem Bible), showing more clearly that the arrow entered from the back.
He sank in his chariot: The context shows that Joram died as a result of the arrow through his heart. But the wording here is more picturesque. Modern versions use verbs such as “slumped down” (Revised English Bible, New International Version) and “collapsed” (New American Bible, American Bible, New Jewish Publication Society’s Tanakh).
Quoted with permission from Omanson, Roger L. and Ellington, John E. A Handbook on 1-2 Kings, Volume 2. (UBS Helps for Translators). New York: UBS, 2008. For this and other handbooks for translators see here .
