9:5a–b

The locusts were not given power to kill them, but only to torment them for five months: The power here is the same power mentioned in 9:3b. This sentence further describes that power.

9:5a

The locusts were not given power to kill them: This clause is passive. Some languages must use an active clause. For example:

⌊God⌋ did not give to them the power to kill those people
-or-
the locusts did not receive the power to kill those people

9:5b

torment: This word refers to causing someone to feel severe pain. Other ways to translate this word are:

cause pain (New Century Version)
-or-
torture (New International Version)
-or-
make them suffer (Contemporary English Version)

General Comment on 9:5a–b

In some languages it is more natural to first describe the power these creatures did have. For example:

They were given power to torture them for five months, but not to kill them.

9:5c

torment: Translate this word the same way as in 9:5b.

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