The Hebrew in Jonah 1:3 that is translated as “found” in many English versions is translated in Mandarin Chinese as yùjiàn (遇見) — “meet” — which correctly does not indicate the conclusion of a search for something lost, but simply coming across something by chance.
sound asleep
The Hebrew that is translated as “sleep” or “sound asleep” is not the usual Hebrew word for sleep but signifies deep sleep. The Ancient Greek Septuagint translates the verb as “snored” (έρεγχε).
See also Mark 4:38.
Translation commentary on Jonah 1:16
The same expression is used here as at the beginning of verse 10, except that here the sailors’ “fear” is “fear of the Lord.” This looks like a later addition to the text, expanding the reference in the last part of the verse to acts of worship. Good News Translation takes “fear” here in the sense of “terror,” as do Knox and Jerusalem Bible (“dread”), while New English Bible, Moffatt, and others think in terms of religious awe. In verse 9 Jonah confesses that he worships Yahweh, but the combination of intense fear (as in verse 10) with worship of God (as in verse 9) is difficult to translate in such a way as to do justice to both elements. For “fear of the Lord” in the sense of “terror,” see also 1 Sam 12.18; 2 Sam 6.9; and Jer 5.22.
If instead of “fear” or “terror,” one interprets the first part of verse 16 as a reference to “awe,” one may render the clause This made the sailors so afraid of the LORD as “this made the sailors stand in awe of the Lord.” If the reference of the pronoun This must be made more explicit, the clause may be restructured so as to read “What the Lord did caused the sailors to be in awe of him.” Then the resulting clause introduced by that may be expressed as a separate sentence, “As a result, they offered a sacrifice….”
The mention of offering sacrifice might indicate that the narrator thinks in terms of such animals as the sailors might have had with them on board in preparation for a long voyage, or he may be indicating that as a result of the calming of the storm, the ship soon reached dry land, and they offered sacrifice there. Sacrifice was the normal expression of worship, and here the worshipers are foreigners, offering sacrifices to the God of Israel, an element that is omitted by Good News Translation. As frequently, Good News Translation subordinates one element in the verse to another instead of following the Hebrew pattern of coordinating the various actions and leaving the reader to supply the relationship between them.
Since the sacrifice probably took place somewhat later than the calming of the sea, it may be important to introduce a temporal factor; for example, “and as a result, they later offered a sacrifice.”
Offered a sacrifice may be expressed as “killed an animal as an act of worship to the Lord” or “… as a way of worshiping the Lord.” Sometimes the relationship between the sacrifice and worship may be explained quite precisely as “they killed an animal as a gift to the Lord.” In this context also it may be necessary to add “the Lord of Jonah.” If one uses “their Lord,” it might very well refer to some pagan deity.
The final sentence in the verse again refers to a standard element in worship, “made vows” (New English Bible). Good News Translation goes beyond the normal meaning of this expression in saying and promised to serve him (so also Winding Quest and Living Bible). The reaction of the sailors to the wonders they had experienced is not to be understood in terms of a “conversion” to Israel’s religion or the recognition that Yahweh alone is the one true God. Rudolph, page 345, points out the irony of a situation in which Jonah fails to take the initiative in any stage of the developments and has to have his confession of faith dragged out of him, and yet in spite of him the sailors are “filled with the fear of the LORD.”
In making a vow, a person would say in effect to God “If you fulfil my request, I will worship you with an offering.” Here the sailors were already saved from danger, so perhaps they are thought of as fulfilling vows made during the time of their danger.
Promised to serve him may therefore be rendered as “paid their vows to the Lord,” or “gave to the Lord what they had promised him in their vows,” or “… what they had vowed to give him.”
Quoted with permission from Clark, David J. et al. A Handbook on the Book of Jonah. (UBS Helps for Translators). New York: UBS, 1978, 1982, 1993. For this and other handbooks for translators see here .
Translation commentary on Jonah 3:1
Once again is literally as in Revised Standard Version, “a second time.” Except for this temporal phrase, 3.1 is the same as 1.1. He said, is also part of this verse, and as at the beginning of the book, it is simply a means of introducing direct speech.
The combination Once again may be difficult to express. In many languages the closest equivalent is simply “again,” for example, “again the Lord spoke to Jonah,” but in other cases the closest equivalent may be “and now twice the Lord spoke to Jonah.” As already noted in the case of 1.1, it may be important to combine the first verse with the first part of the second verse; for example, “again the Lord said to Jonah, ‘Go to Nineveh….’ ”
Quoted with permission from Clark, David J. et al. A Handbook on the Book of Jonah. (UBS Helps for Translators). New York: UBS, 1978, 1982, 1993. For this and other handbooks for translators see here .
Translation commentary on Jonah 1:6
The expression used for captain, literally “chief of the sailors,” does not occur anywhere else, but the word for “sailors” occurs also in Ezek 27.8, 27-29, where New English Bible has “helmsmen.”
The use of the verb “came upon” (New English Bible) suggests an element of chance in the encounter between the captain and Jonah. The verb for found is not the same as in verse 3 but may equally well imply that the discovery was not the result of a search for the one member of the ship’s company who was absent from the “prayer meeting,” but simply that the captain went down to fetch something he needed.
The Hebrew idiom that introduces the question here is also found in Psa 50.16, “What right have you to recite my laws?” (New English Bible). New Jerusalem Bible renders What are you doing asleep? somewhat differently, “How can you be sleeping so sound!” In any case, the participle is not to be understood as a vocative, “you sleeper” as in King James Version, Revised Standard Version. The others on board ship were all busy praying, and that was what Jonah should have been doing.
In some languages What are you doing asleep? can be understood as a relatively senseless question, for obviously Jonah was asleep. The implication is “What business have you to be falling asleep like this when there is something more urgent that you should be doing?” This meaning is sometimes communicated by a question such as “Why are you sleeping?” but this question may not carry the connotation of rebuke implied in the Hebrew text.
Here once again there is the problem of the word for “God” (compare verse 5). The implication underlying your god is that each nationality has its own particular deity. By praying to as many as possible, it might be (Maybe) that one of them (compare Revised Standard Version “the god”) would take effective action and save the ship. The verb feel sorry for us or “spare us a thought” (New English Bible) occurs only here in the Hebrew Old Testament, but it is also found in the Aramaic of Dan 6.4. Prayer would draw God’s attention to the situation, provided, of course, that the God who was responsible for the storm were addressed by name. But the last thing Jonah wanted at this point was that God’s attention should be drawn to him (compare Amos 6.10). As so often in the Old Testament, the narrator does not indicate whether the captain’s orders were carried out. The reader is left to infer that commands are obeyed, without being specifically told what happens (as in 3.9, 10 and 1 Kgs 22.27). But we may assume, in view of the following verses, that Jonah at least joined the others on deck. But there is no indication that he obeyed the order to pray; after all, Jonah’s sole purpose for being where he was, far out at sea, was to avoid God and have nothing to do with him.
In a number of languages one cannot speak of “your god,” since one cannot possess God. In such instances it may be necessary to employ some such expression as “the god whom you worship.” As in verse 5, it may also be important to introduce direct discourse at this point, for example, “Get up and pray to your god, ‘Help us!’ ”
The possibility expressed by the adverb Maybe is rendered in a number of languages by a particular mode of the verb; for example, “He may possibly feel sorry for us.” Expressions of sorrow or pity are frequently rendered by idioms; for example, “His heart may go out to us” or “We may cause pain in his heart.”
Spare our lives must frequently be expressed in terms of “not causing our deaths”; for example, “he may then not cause us to die.”
Quoted with permission from Clark, David J. et al. A Handbook on the Book of Jonah. (UBS Helps for Translators). New York: UBS, 1978, 1982, 1993. For this and other handbooks for translators see here .
Translation commentary on Jonah 4:2
Now for the second time (compare 2.1) Jonah prays to the Lord, but here the tone of the prayer is very different. This time he explains the reason for his anger at God’s merciful treatment of the people of Nineveh. The flashback employed here tells us for the first time the reason for Jonah’s attempt in chapter 1 to travel in the opposite direction instead of to Nineveh. The beginning of his prayer takes the form of a question, and the question form is retained in Good News Translation. But such rhetorical questions, which do not really expect an answer, can easily be replaced by statements, since that is essentially what they are. So, for example, New English Bible translates “This, O Lord, is what I feared when I was in my own country.”
Since in so many languages a term for “prayer” suggests “petition,” such a form would seem out of place in this context, for it is a complaint that Jonah is bringing to the Lord. Therefore it may be more appropriate to say “so Jonah said to the Lord.”
Good News Translation is rather more literal than New English Bible in saying didn’t I say (similarly Jerusalem Bible “just as I said would happen”), where New English Bible has “this is what I feared.” The Hebrew noun used here is the same as in 3.6 and covers a wide area of meaning. It need not refer to a spoken word, though that is its most usual meaning. Just as the Hebrew verb ʾamar “to say” can often mean “to think,” so here “word” can stand for “thought,” and so by implication “fear.”
Good News Translation uses home in this verse in its wider sense of “homeland” rather than “house.” Before I left home corresponds to the more literal translation of Revised Standard Version, “when I was yet in my country.”
As in other instances, the direct address LORD must be expressed in some languages as “My Lord.”
The clause before I left home may be more appropriately placed at the beginning of the direct discourse or at least immediately following the expression of direct address; for example, “before I left home, didn’t I say that this is just what you would do?”
The indirect discourse must be made direct in a number of languages; for example, “didn’t I say, ‘I know that you will change your mind’?” Because of the particular nature of the embedded direct discourse, it is necessary to alter the wording so as to represent what Jonah would have said prior to the actual events; otherwise, the direct discourse would be out of keeping with what Jonah could or would have said.
That’s why I did my best is an attempt to translate a difficult Hebrew verb that may be taken here in an adverbial sense, “at first” (so New American Bible “I fled at first”). The same Hebrew verb is translated “prevent” in King James Version or Psa 119.147, 148, but the verb “prevent” no longer has the same meaning in English as it had when that translation was made. It is unlikely, therefore, that Modern Language Bible is correct in translating this passage: “This is why I fled to Tarshish to prevent it.”
New English Bible (also New American Standard Bible) uses a verb that attempts to recognize the temporal aspect of this Hebrew word by saying “to forestall it.” This does formal justice to the verb in the original, but is not so suitable to the situation in which Jonah found himself. As normally used in English “forestall” carries with it both the idea of foreseeing someone else’s action and of taking effective action to ensure that it does not take place. The element of anticipation is certainly present in Jonah’s flight in the direction of Spain, but it is only indirectly that his flight would have meant the sparing of Nineveh, since he then would not have been able to denounce it.
If one understands That’s why I did my best to run away to Spain as being better interpreted as an expression of haste (so Revised Standard Version), it is possible to render this sentence as “That is why I ran away to Spain as fast as I could” or “That is why I left for Spain as quickly as possible.” (It is impossible in some languages to translate literally “run away,” since Jonah went by boat, not by running.) If, on the other hand, one wished to suggest the intensity with which Jonah undertook to escape to Spain, one may translate “That is why I did everything I could to go to Spain.” It is rarely possible to translate literally “I did my best,” since one must qualify “best” in terms of some particular kind of activity.
Chinese Union Version arranges the text of this verse in a more logical order than most translations by first stating the reason for Jonah’s action, and then the action itself, “I knew that you were … therefore I made haste to flee….”
The second part of the verse indicates the degree of Jonah’s bitterness against God’s decision to spare Nineveh. The influence of Joel has already been observed in connection with 3.9a, which is a close parallel to Joel 2.14. Those words in Joel are immediately preceded by a confession of faith in God’s mercy in terms very similar to those used here. Parallel with the “Who knows?” expressed by the king of Nineveh in 3.9 is the I knew of Jonah in this verse. Jonah did not need to question, as the king did, whether God was capable of changing his mind and withholding punishment. He knew that God was too kindhearted to carry out the threat that the prophet had been commissioned to deliver (3.4), and that was the reason he had been reluctant to deliver his message in the first place. Jonah quotes here the confession of faith found in Exo 34.6, but not as a ground for thankfulness, but as a ground for complaint that God could not be counted upon to be consistent in punishing those who deserved to suffer. Accordingly, to understand this passage correctly, it must be seen as a biting touch of irony, or even of scorn, against a God who was too mild to lend his support to the prophet by destroying Nineveh in accordance with the commissioned word of prophecy. New English Bible hints at the irony by enclosing the words from Exodus in quotation marks, “a god gracious and compassionate, longsuffering and ever constant.”
There are a number of passages in the Old Testament that echo the wording of Exo 34.6. The closest approximation is Psa 86.15. The formula in Jonah is practically the same as in Joel 2.13, and varies from Exodus in reversing the order of the first two adjectives, and making no mention of “truth.” This shorter form, with the same order of words as in Jonah, is also found in Neh 9.17 and Psa 145.8. The shorter form, but with the same order as in Exodus and in Psalm 86, is given in Psa 103.8. So it is evident that the confession of Israel’s faith stated here in Jonah was a familiar one during centuries of her history. Only here is it used as a ground for criticism of God’s nature. The first two adjectives, loving and merciful, are used to describe God, not only in the passages already mentioned, but in 2 Chr 30.9; Neh 9.31; Psa 111.4. These two adjectives are applied in the Old Testament solely to God, with the possible exception of Psa 112.4, where some scholars understand the last line to refer to God (for example, Revised Standard Version), and others conclude that it refers to man.
You are a loving and merciful God may be rendered as “you are a God who loves people and is kind to them” or “you as God love people and show mercy to them.”
The phrase always patient corresponds to a Hebrew expression generally rendered in earlier translations as “slow to anger.” As well as in the passages just mentioned, it is used of God in Num 14.18 and Neh 1.3. In Prov 14.29; 15.18; and 16.32 it is used to describe human beings who are not easily roused to anger, but are even-tempered and patient.
Patient may be expressed both negatively and positively; for example, “you do not become angry quickly” or “you do not punish right away” in contrast with “you very slowly become angry with people” or “you put up with people’s badness for a long time.”
The words always kind correspond to two Hebrew words that are consistently rendered in Revised Standard Version as “abounding in steadfast love.” The translation of chesed as “steadfast love” is closer to the meaning of the Hebrew than the rather colorless kind of Good News Translation. In New English Bible the normal way of expressing this phrase is “ever constant,” though in Psa 86.5 another element in the Hebrew, that of love, is brought out by speaking of the Lord as “full of true love.” As far as possible, a translation of the Hebrew word chesed should do justice to the emphasis on love and on its constancy and loyal steadfastness. It has been defined by Wolff, page 52, to denote “kindhearted actions that, by spontaneous love and the faithful meeting of responsibilities, create or establish a sense of community.”
In order to do better justice to the meaning of Hebrew chesed, one can translate in this context “people can always trust you to be good to them.”
The final section of this verse, and always ready to change your mind and not punish, is an echo of 3.10. In New English Bible this is included within quotation marks along with the words quoted from Exo 34.6. The expression is not a quotation from that part of Exodus, however, and the terminology “always willing to repent of the disaster” is far from intelligible. It borrows some of the wording of 3.10, but does it far less effectively than Good News Translation. Much the same wording as in 3.10 is found in the Hebrew of Exo 32.14, but there it refers to Israel, not Nineveh.
It may be important to specify somewhat more clearly the relationship between change your mind and not punish. Since the latter is the result of the former, one can then translate “change your mind so as not to punish” or “decide not to punish.” The final part of verse 2 may therefore be expressed as “you are always ready to decide not to punish,” or “… change your decision so as not to punish,” or “… decide differently and therefore not punish.”
Quoted with permission from Clark, David J. et al. A Handbook on the Book of Jonah. (UBS Helps for Translators). New York: UBS, 1978, 1982, 1993. For this and other handbooks for translators see here .
Translation commentary on Jonah 1:17
The relationship between the LORD’s command and the action of the large fish may be expressed as “the Lord commanded a large fish to swallow Jonah.” There is, however, a problem of temporal sequence at this point, since the swallowing of Jonah took place immediately upon his being cast into the sea, and the sacrifice performed by the sailors no doubt took place somewhat later. It may therefore be important to introduce verse 17 by an appropriate temporal transition; for example, “When Jonah was cast into the sea.”
From the point of view of the narrator, the problem with which he is faced is that of getting Jonah to his destination, now that the sea has been calmed by his being thrown into it.
So a miracle takes place to renew Jonah’s call to the Lord’s service. The verb used here with the LORD as subject occurs three more times in this book (4.6, 7, 8). It occurs in this form only in the later writings of the Old Testament. Apart from “command” as in Good News Translation, several other translations have been suggested; for example, “provided” (New Jerusalem Bible), “sent for” (Luther 1984), “appointed” (Revised Standard Version). The use of “prepared” by King James Version, following the tradition of the Vulgate, suggests that God produced one particular fish for this special occasion (compare Goldman, “had ready”). In much the same way Jerusalem Bible has “Yahweh had arranged that a great fish should be there to swallow Jonah.” So this is the first of several occasions in the book where this verb is used to suggest that God arranged events in the course of Jonah’s mission to fit in with the divine purpose, whether the events were favorable as here and in 4.6, or unfavorable as in 4.7, 8. God had already been in control of the sea and the storm, and now he is shown to be in control of the large fish.
No indication is given for the kind of fish that swallows Jonah, apart from its size. It was not a whale, which is not a fish in the first place. The word used in Matt 12.40 is the same as is used in the Septuagint here. It is usually translated “whale,” though it has a wider range of meaning, since it is also applied to sea monsters (so New English Bible) or large fish. Knox here uses the expression “sea-beast.”
Whatever the nature of this creature, it is represented as being more obedient to the Lord, both here and in 2.10, than Jonah was. The same contrast between the disobedience of man and the submission of animals is found in Isa 1.3 and Jer 8.7.
The reference to three days and nights is taken up in Matt 12.40 as a foreshadowing of the period during which Jesus remained in the tomb. Here, however, it is simply one of the ingredients of the story introduced to make the period more specific. “Three” is sometimes an indefinite low number in the Old Testament (for example, Hos 6.2). The same period of time is found in 1 Sam 30.12 and Est 4.16; in both of these passages the implication is that three days was a long period to do without food.
There is no need to see in this incident an allegory of the exile based on Jer 51.34. Nor is anything to be gained by trying to rationalize this account of an unusual incident by suggesting, as has been done, that on reaching dry land Jonah was accommodated at an inn named “The Fish.” Neither should any significance, for translational purposes, be attached to the variation between the masculine form of “fish” here and the feminine form in the next verse.
Quoted with permission from Clark, David J. et al. A Handbook on the Book of Jonah. (UBS Helps for Translators). New York: UBS, 1978, 1982, 1993. For this and other handbooks for translators see here .
Translation commentary on Jonah 3:2
The first part of verse 2 is identical with the first part of 1.2. The second part is interpreted by Good News Translation as recommissioning Jonah in essentially the same way as at the beginning of the book, namely, by proclaiming the message I have given you. But the Hebrew participle may be taken as referring (1) to the past, as in the Septuagint, or (2) to the present, as in the Vulgate, or (3) to the future, as in the Syriac. In fact, very few modern translations apart from Good News Translation—only Bible in Basic English, Jerusalem Bible (contrast Bible de Jérusalem), and Living Bible—suggest a repetition of the message already given. If this were the meaning, another form of the verb would be more probable, and since a specific message (for example, in the form met with in such prophetic outbursts as the book of Nahum) is not found at the beginning of chapter one, it is perhaps better to follow the kind of wording found in Revised Standard Version or New English Bible and to assume an indefinite tense, or one that might be rendered as “that I am giving you.”
Unlike most translations, Good News Translation avoids a literal rendering of the Hebrew (for example, Revised Standard Version “proclaim to it…”) and specifies the people of Nineveh as the recipients of God’s message. New English Bible is evidently aware of the problem but does not clarify the meaning. Two earlier translations both avoid the use of “it,” namely Moffatt, “and proclaim there what I will tell you” (so the Septuagint), and Chinese Union Version, “proclaim to its inhabitants the message I give you.”
For the rather unusual apposition Nineveh, that great city, note the discussion under 1.2.
The verb rendered proclaim suggests a formal type of announcement, the type of proclamation, for example, that might be given by an official messenger. This suggests that the message itself is important, and it may actually be necessary in some languages to redistribute some of the meaning of proclaim by indicating the nature of the message; for example, “speak to the people the important message I have given you.”
In a number of languages one does not speak of “a message being given,” and therefore it may be necessary to say “the message that I have spoken to you.” On the other hand, a more satisfactory equivalent may be simply “my words,” that is to say, the last part of verse 2 may be rendered as “announce to the people my words” or “… what I have said.”
Quoted with permission from Clark, David J. et al. A Handbook on the Book of Jonah. (UBS Helps for Translators). New York: UBS, 1978, 1982, 1993. For this and other handbooks for translators see here .
